I just don't know where to start on this one, about half way through I wanted to throw my hands up and bitch slap the heroine. Hope, hope my ass. Talk about a good character that just went downhill fast, and become more and more stupid. Seriously, I thought I had found a wonderful gem of a book, I've heard rave reviews of Dodd's historical romances, but I haven't read any yet. But I figured writing historicals has got to be more difficult, so the contemporaries must be good too. Don't you believe it!!
When the book first started, and all the way to about halfway, I really liked Hope. She was sweet, and the 'milk of human kindness,' I found that phrase a little overused, but it fit. She was kind to everyone who deserved it and had a quick sense of humor about herself, everything was going so well! But then we get a shady character come into the phone service office and he wants her to be his accounting partner, but she can't look at his accounting, and oh, by the way, just sign this financial form you have no clue about, kay? Riiight - because we all want to help our fellow man. This way, when you get arrested for embezzlement you can just tell the nice police officers that yes, those are my signatures on legal documents, but I was only helping a down-on-his-luck gentleman that I had just met because he gave me $500 a month. So ridiculous. And it just got worse from there. I really began to question her sanity. She keeps going on and on about her morals and that she's a preacher's daughter, but sleeps with Zach after knowing him less than a week, and the night she is attacked for her bookbag. I read one person's review how they couldn't believe she could loose her virginity in one night, and it be good, and want to have hot wild sex almost immediately after. Well, speaking from experience, it doesn't always have to hurt the first time, it makes me wonder how the rest of you lost yours, because mine was fantastic! And round two was not out of the question! But the way it's described in this book, no freaking way. First, Hope is shy and downright prude about Zach even seeing her body to jumping him and wanting it soo rough to make her forget her problems? Shy and sweet virginal Hope who doesn't know how to kiss very well and in the same night is biting and pulling at Zach for it to be harder? Some preacher's daughter.
As for Zach. I really did like him a lot in this book, at least until the end, with the stupid 'Given's Gang with instruments' who walk into a well-known mobster's den to get Hope out (yeah, she's that stupid to get kidnapped by the local kingpin), but this I blame on the author, because no self-respecting, high-powered, eat-your-company-for-breakfast mogul is going to do something so completely idiotic. No, in truth, he'd call a guy. Or a tactical force, or something. He wouldn't meet well-known mobsters with a band of misfits carrying instrument cases with actual instruments in them. This is when I lost all respect for him. I did like him when he went to see Hope in jail, and basically told her to go to hell, that was awesome! She totally deserved it! Even if he had been lying to her about his identity, she deserved a set down of epic proportions for being TSTL. Another reviewer compared him to Richard Gere's character in Pretty Woman, and I'm gonna have to agree, it was eerily similar in some parts, but I dug Edward, so I didn't mind too much. Only difference is Zach's Vivian had no brains.
The secondary characters are great though. I especially loved Nancy, I seem to be developing a crush on all things Russian, and she's no exception, she was a hoot! Also love Zach's Aunt Cecily, Ma Monahan and Zach's secretaries. By the end of the book, Hope's foster brother from her childhood is found, but not a lot is said about him, and I don't know if he has a happy ending, or will get his own book, but I am curious to see what happens to him.
As for the rating, I gave this author 3 stars instead of just 2 for several reasons. First, I really did enjoy the first half of the book, I just feel the plot fell apart and Dodd had to do some zany stuff to make it to the end, and it didn't work. It wasn't funny or interesting or fitting, just plain dumb. I did enjoy the intimiate scenes, right up until the 'do me hard baby' one, but the first time they really make out was just as hot as when they have sex for the first time. The style is good, I really liked it, just the storyline was crap, so she can do it, but as for whether she can keep it together through a whole book, well, I'll have to read some more of her stuff to see. If you've read her historicals and loved them I can't offer any advice as to whether to try these or not, but I'd say find another one to try. If you've never read Dodd period, definitely try another one, as this one will not win you over.