Midnight Shadow had a great start to it. For the first part of the book, I couldn't stop turning the pages, and I was completely drawn to the story. I liked how so many unexpected things happened, and at various points throughout the book, I wasn't quite sure what would happen next. Definitely a surprise. The writing is nice and simple, a lot lighter than your usual medieval romance, and I liked that. It made it easier for me to follow the story and enjoy it - I'm not a great connoisseur of medieval language and culture.
So, the plot was great. A female Robin Hood fighting against a handsome evil Lord's tyranny, avenging her friends and bringing justice to the people. Who wouldn't want to at least give that a try? The pace was fine; I never really felt like the story dragged, though it sometimes did feel a bit repetitive. The writing was good, and the setting engaging enough.
The romance, however, is where the whole thing just collapsed. It... was... terrible! The reason? ...The characters.
Oh my God, this novel has the worst types of Hero and heroine you can find in a story! There was so much wrong with the romance and the characters, I don't even know where to begin.
Let's start with Bria:
Bria is the very annoying kind of heroine that thinks: 'Hit me, but please don't leave me', and also 'I hate your guts, but whatever you do, don't stop touching me'. Mix these two things together, and you definitely have the worst type of heroine. Terran was supposedly her enemy, the one responsible for her friends' deaths, and here she is pining over him and feeling all giddy every time he's near. She was so fickle and I just couldn't see how this woman could become the Midnight Shadow. I would've much preferred to see a stronger heroine in this role.
Terran: For starters, he is always in a rage. If he's not in a rage, he's lusting after the heroine, and also in a rage. There are a few moments when you see different facets to him, but they are so brief and he switches from one emotion to the next so quickly, that I was beginning to think he was bipolar. He was also so selfish and stupid, not to mention incredibly jealous and possessive in a very annoying kind of way. He had no redeeming qualities that I could see. He was a prick.
Honestly, I don't think the author gave much thought to the development of the characters. They were all over the place, and that resulted in a very inconsistent, unrealistic, flawed and floppy 'romance'.