Dragon Empire is the first volume of the series. Showing a glowing aptitude that the young author has, the series will most definitely be a promising masterpiece. Featuring a flashy appearance of wizards and dragons, this epic fantasy novel greatly shows off a large cast of characters, combat sequences, discoveries, supernatural powers and suspense. Having a strong plot and an meticulously planned out map of events, the author takes you into a journey into the world of Dragon Empire that will keep you on your toes wherever you go.
The Dragon Empire II coming soon, be sure to read the first volume to not miss out the thrill of the next epic novel!
Shahid Junior Aziz was born in Almaty Kazakhstan, 1995. His place of residence is Pakistan.
He was multi-system educated throughout the years as he and his family traveled a lot. He speaks English, Russian, Japanese and Urdu.
He started taking interest in writing at the age of 13-14 in the form of written roleplay, and took on the challenge of writing a book at the age of 15. He finished the book when he was 16.
I enjoyed reading this story, however, this book desperately needs an editor.
The writing is fragmented, jumbled, and switches past tense and present tense up very often. There are also words used that are completely incorrect for the context. Characters and scenarios are introduced, and then suddenly described in great detail much later, often in the middle of something else. Many sentences even contradict themselves. This does seem to improve as the book goes on.
Many characters are not even introduced and are simply referred to as white tiger warrior or the like, even when there are many of them. It was often confusing as to which exact character the author meant at that moment.
Despite all of that, I enjoyed the tale. Overall the premise of the story is sound, if a bit simplistic.
I must urge the author to hire a professional editor and turn this tale into something that will delight readers.