I enjoyed reading this story, however, this book desperately needs an editor.
The writing is fragmented, jumbled, and switches past tense and present tense up very often. There are also words used that are completely incorrect for the context. Characters and scenarios are introduced, and then suddenly described in great detail much later, often in the middle of something else. Many sentences even contradict themselves. This does seem to improve as the book goes on.
Many characters are not even introduced and are simply referred to as white tiger warrior or the like, even when there are many of them. It was often confusing as to which exact character the author meant at that moment.
Despite all of that, I enjoyed the tale. Overall the premise of the story is sound, if a bit simplistic.
I must urge the author to hire a professional editor and turn this tale into something that will delight readers.