Jump to ratings and reviews
Rate this book
Rate this book
James is skilled, efficient, and deadly, a hired blade navigating the shifting alliances of a deteriorating Assassin’s Guild. Then he meets Thalia, an alluring but troubled dancing girl who offers him a way out—if he’ll help her kill a powerful nobleman. With the Guild falling apart, it just might be worth the risk. But when you live, breathe, and love in a world that’s forever flirting with death, the slightest misstep can be poison.

Poison Dance is a short story of approximately 14,000 words long (54 printed pages). The ebook also includes several deleted scenes and behind-the-scenes blog posts about the writing process for this novella.


He handed her a stiletto the length of her hand and molded her fingers around the handle. Her hands were slender and her nails were delicately rounded, though her palms were calloused. The two of them stood in the cramped space between his bed and the window, holding the blade between them.

“You can wear this dagger under your sleeves. Then, when you get your chance . . .” James guided the knife toward his own throat. “Go for the neck—the blood vessels and the windpipe. You’ll have to be close for that. Quick.”

He lowered the stiletto until its tip grazed his neck just above his collarbone. Her eyes widened, and she looked to his face.

He smiled and tightened his hands around her wrist. “Never let your guard down. Never trust anyone, and never leave yourself vulnerable.”

“What if I’d surprised you just now? I could have been sent by someone to kill you.”

“You wouldn’t have.”

She arched her eyebrow. “I wouldn’t have killed you?”

“You wouldn’t have surprised me.” He continued. “You have to be aware. If someone is this close to you, holding a weapon, you need to be on your guard. I’m watching your eyes, your shoulders. I’m aware of how you’re standing, where your balance is. If you tighten your muscles to strike, I’ll feel it in your arm. You should be doing the same with me.”

Her eyes were cautious as she took in what he said. And he watched her look down, taking in his arms, the angle of his chest. Her gaze went inward and her lips fell slightly open as she tried to get a feel for his balance. Standing as close as they were, he could smell a light perfume on her skin.

Thalia seemed to remember herself. She disengaged her wrist and backed away.

“What makes a lass like you into a killer?” he asked.

She shot him an annoyed look, and the tension left the room. “I didn’t hire you to delve into my past.”

“Are you sure you want to do this? It changes you, you know, your first kill.”

A smile touched her lips, a hint of a challenge. “You’re quite determined to have me think this over. Do you regret your first kill?”

It was an interesting question, and he gave it some thought. “No,” he finally said. “I regret not having done it sooner.”

“Who was it?” She tilted her head in anticipation of a tale. “Some Red Shield?”

“My father.” He smiled when her eyes widened. “I’ll make you a deal. You can keep your secrets, and I’ll keep mine.”

“Fair enough.”


What inspired you to write Poison Dance?
James started as a side character in my YA medieval fantasy Midnight Thief, and he fascinated me. He was head of the assassins guild, but much more than a thug. He had ideals, and I wanted to know how he got them. As I explored his past, I fell in love with Thalia as well, with her sad, tragic air and will of steel. Eventually, what started out as a character sketch evolved into a short story of their romance.

86 pages, Kindle Edition

First published September 12, 2013

26 people are currently reading
2564 people want to read

About the author

Livia Blackburne

24 books1,330 followers
New York Times bestselling author Livia Blackburne wrote her first novel while researching the neuroscience of reading at the Massachusetts Institute of Technology. Since then, she’s switched to full-time writing, which also involves getting into people’s heads but without the help of a 3 Tesla MRI scanner.

She is also the author of MIDNIGHT THIEF (an Indies Introduce New Voices selection), DAUGHTER OF DUSK, and ROSEMARKED (an Amazon best book of the month and YALSA Teens Top Ten Nominee).

Visit her online at www.liviablackburne.com

Ratings & Reviews

What do you think?
Rate this book

Friends & Following

Create a free account to discover what your friends think of this book!

Community Reviews

5 stars
208 (22%)
4 stars
319 (34%)
3 stars
281 (30%)
2 stars
78 (8%)
1 star
27 (2%)
Displaying 1 - 30 of 222 reviews
Profile Image for Alyssa.
1,069 reviews856 followers
August 4, 2014
***Review posted on The Eater of Books! blog***

Poison Dance by Livia Blackburne
Publication Date: September 12, 2013
Rating: 5 stars
Source: eARC sent by the author

Summary (from Goodreads):

James is skilled, efficient, and deadly, a hired blade navigating the shifting alliances of a deteriorating Assassin’s Guild. Then he meets Thalia, an alluring but troubled dancing girl who offers him a way out—if he’ll help her kill a powerful nobleman. With the Guild falling apart, it just might be worth the risk. But when you live, breathe, and love in a world that’s forever flirting with death, the slightest misstep can be poison.

What I Liked:

You all KNOW how badly I want to read Midnight Thief, right? That's Livia's official debut, to be published by Disney-Hyperion, in early July. I've been *aching* for that book since like, May (no seriously - check my "About Me" page). So, when Livia mentioned that she would self-publishing a novella related to Midnight Thief, you know I was all over that!

James is one of the characters that we will see in Midnight Thief, and if I'm not mistaken, he plays a pretty significant role. Maybe not as a protagonist, but as a secondary character with an important role in the plot. This novella is about him, and a young woman that he meets - Thalia.

Thalia knows something that James wants to know - about the Guild, assassinations, his former leader... somehow, she knows more than she leads on. James and Thalia work together, and form an agreement. Thalia will give James information, if James uses his assassination skills to kill someone for Thalia.

Both characters are so complex! You wouldn't think that a novella could convey so much about two characters, in such a short length, but Livia does this brilliantly! James is torn between duty and love, and Thalia... she's just broken. A difficult past filled with loss and death, a miserable future filled with pigs for men and slobs for employers - Thalia is so complicated. Her need for James to kill the person is twisted and tragic.

I admire Thalia's bravery and courage. Thalia is headstrong and independent, but she is also very clever and strategic. She knows when to act demure, and when to show her claws. In this regard, she and James are very well matched. James is extremely observant, strong, and analytically minded.

The progression of their relationship is slow and beautiful. I love how Livia times everything perfectly. The relationship grows - it doesn't feel rushed and insta-love-y, or dragged out and boring. James and Thalia are a great couple! And there is no love triangle - thank goodness!

The plot of this novella is actually rather complex, instead of a straightforward one, which most novellas feature. So many things are going on - with James, the Guild, Thalia, her mark, her training, the trade business... Livia weaves a complex world into a short space, and somehow, manages to capture the world in a simple and intricate manner.

The ending. The ending is bittersweet. I totally saw the ending coming - it's the way the story is set up. From the beginning, I knew for sure that one thing would happen, and it did. The thing is, as bittersweet as that event is, this novella really couldn't end any other way. Read this book, and you'll know what I mean!

What I Did Not Like:

There wasn't much that I didn't like - maybe that I NEED Midnight Thief even more than before?! Yes. That.

Would I Recommend It:

Totally! As with most novellas, it's not necessary to read this novella before or after reading Midnight Thief (not that I would currently know about AFTER). But we get some great insight on James (and Thalia), so why not? It's priced very cheaply, and totally worth your dollar!

Rating:

5 stars. I can't wait to read more from this author! But you already knew that. Please give me an ARC, Disney!
Profile Image for Livia Blackburne.
Author 24 books1,330 followers
Read
August 11, 2014
ETA: I've been getting a lot of questions about preferred reading order for Midnight Thief vs. Poison Dance. You can see my official recommendation here. http://liviablackburne.com/2014/07/po...

I originally conceived of James as a supporting character in my novel Midnight Thief, and I quickly fell in love with him. As the enigmatic leader of the Assassins Guild, James was cool, competent and intriguing. He was the type of character who invited questions. How had he come to power at such a young age? What was behind his hatred of the nobility? Had he loved before? Was he even capable of love? I wanted to tell his story, and here's the result.
Profile Image for Dear Faye.
493 reviews2,124 followers
December 11, 2013
Get a chance to win up to $100 in Amazon giftcards here! You can also buy the book for $0.99!

I was first approached by this author after I added The Midnight Thief to my To-Read list on Goodreads. The summary hypnotized me from the get-go. Assassins in a medieval-like fantasy backdrop has been one of my favorite settings in fiction. There's just something really intriguing about it because I always associate this kind of set-up with politics and conspiracies, internal or outside of the assassins' grasps. A chance to have a sneak-peek into The Midnight Thief's world was something I would never pass up, so I read this one in a jiffy and immediately found myself deeply engrossed in this short story.

The first thing I noticed about the book was the writing. Even thought there weren't many description of the surroundings, the prose and the words used in the dialogue made it easy for me to immerse myself and imagine what the scenes looked like. I sincerely believe it is the dialogue that makes the atmosphere of the book, and I think it's what really made this novella stand out - the conversations between the characters just jump out and take you there with them, at that place and at that moment. I've read so many books set in a similar setting, but more often than not, they don't give a medieval vibe at all because the words used as well as the sentence structures give the place a modern feel. It's like having a book set in a European city... unless you're going to do something to set the atmosphere, it's going to feel like any other city. What's the point of putting it elsewhere if you can't establish that, right?
“And you’re an assassin,” she said.

He took his time answering. It was no secret that he was a member of the Guild, but it wasn’t something usually announced on first meeting. “I may be.”

“I would retain your services.” Her tone was serious. She believed herself earnest, at least.

He gave a low chuckle. “Many think they would. But few have the coin, and even fewer truly have the stomach for it.”

“I have enough coin.”

“And how does a dancing lass come across so much money?” He dropped his eyes to her shapeless dress. “Unless your trade is not purely dancing.”

She flushed now, her nervousness replaced with anger. “My business is my own. Will you take my coin or not?”

It raised his opinion of her, that she didn’t meekly accept his insult. Nevertheless, he couldn’t help her. “It doesn’t work that way. I take orders from my guildleader.”

“But do you have to? I could pay you well.”

“I don’t need the trouble.”

The sounds of conversation in the dining room had died down, and James heard a talesinger’s theatrical voice projecting over the crowd. He turned to leave, and she took his arm. “You have a job tomorrow, don’t you?”

That stopped him. To know that he was in the Assassins Guild was one thing, but to know what he was doing the next day . . . “What of it?”

“If there’s anything in your quarters you’d rather keep hidden, move it somewhere else before you leave. And you may want to return early.”
He studied her face for any signs of deception. “I’ll keep that in mind.”

“And one more thing,” she said before he could turn away again.

“What?”

“The rumors are right. Your guildleader is dead.”

I don't know about you, folks. It's a simple conversation between two people, but the magical, medieval feeling is still there, and you feel it from the words themselves. Is it just me? I don't know. But if there's one thing I am truly certain of, it's that I am so excited for The Midnight Thief to come out come 2014, especially with prose and writing that let you into their world effortlessly.

As for the story itself, it's short, but it packs a lot of punch, so I'm not going to spoil it for you. There's a lot of characterization, a lot of intrigues, a lot of dark forces in the background, jam-packed in a measly 57 pages (yes, I was desperately wishing it was longer). The Midnight Thief can't come soon enough!
Profile Image for Emily Anne.
252 reviews251 followers
November 4, 2013
Wow! Poison Dance was an amazing novella that left me salivating for Midnight Thief. The story is one you don't want to miss!

For those of you just hearing about this novella, Poison Dance is a novella surrounding James, a supporting character in the upcoming Midnight Thief. Also note, the novel Midnight Thief will be published by Disney-Hyperion in Summer 2014, so you can read this novella now to excite you about the release and get a early look into the world Livia Blackburne has created.

High Fantasy is my absolute favorite genre, earning itself the position after I devoured Tamora Pierce and Jessica Day George's many series, so needless to say, I had high expectations. Thankfully, my flying hopes were met. James's story was powerful, intriguing, and a great introduction to this new world.

Within the mere 54 pages, I actually felt like I connected to James, Thalia, and the rest of the cast. James had this cool and fascinating demeanor... I immediately wanted to know his story and secrets! Thalia was a very well written character, with her air of confidence and determination to murder a certain nobleman.

There is never a dull moment. Within the Assassin's Guild, many things are happening. Thalia is plotting a murder, James is teaching her, and there is a new leader that may just make James' and his friends lives more complicated.

You would think a novella, being a good but shorter than a 350 page book, wouldn't leave much of an impact on you. Wrong. By the end of Poison Dance, I definitely was filled with emotion, and I will report that the author ends James's story with a bang.

Overall, the superb world building, characters, amazing ending, dialogue, and writing in Poison Dance makes this novella a satisfying read. I know that myself and many others are anxiously awaiting Midnight Thief. Who wouldn't be counting the days 'till Midnight Thief after reading Poison Dance?

4.5/5 Stars (rounded up to five!)

*Received for free in exchange for a 100% honest review*
Profile Image for Mogsy.
2,265 reviews2,777 followers
December 23, 2013
4 of 5 stars at The BiblioSanctum http://bibliosanctum.blogspot.com/201...

When I first saw the intriguing description for the upcoming book Midnight Thief, I just knew I had to check it out. But with a release date of summer 2014, it was going to be quite the wait. So it was a pleasant surprise when I was contacted by the author and asked if I would like to read and review the book's prequel novella, Poison Dance. Needless to say, I eagerly accepted; I hadn't even known there was a prequel, and thought it would be an excellent opportunity to catch an early glimpse of the world and get a taste of the writing style.

Now that I've read it, I'm just as excited if not more for the first book of the series. Livia Blackburne first described Poison Dance to me as "darker, and heavier on the romance" than Midnight Thief, and probably leans more towards adult fantasy than young adult. She's absolutely spot on, as those are all things I picked up from this novella. It stars James, a skilled assassin who is approached one night by Thalia, a dancing girl who offers him a job to kill a powerful nobleman. And if he won't take it, she is determined to go through with it all the same, with or without his help.

I'm typically very picky about my short stories and novellas; characters always come first in my reading, so I find the fewer pages there are in a story, the more challenging it is to make me grow attached to or form a connection with the protagonist. However, Poison Dance impressed me immediately, painting a clear picture of who James is in a very short period of time. I also found out later that he will only be a supporting character in Midnight Thief, but that just makes me think: how much more awesome will the characterization in that book be, if even someone in the supporting cast like James gets this much thought into his back story? Livia Blackburne obviously puts a lot of care and effort into her world and characters, and if what I saw in Poison Dance is any indication, I'm sure it's going to pay off.

This novella sets the tone nicely, and gives a good general background for the world in which the series will take place. I didn't expect too much world building, but what is there definitely piques my interest. If Poison Dance is meant to build up my enthusiasm and fuel my eagerness for Midnight Thief, then its mission was most certainly accomplished.
Profile Image for Minni Mouse.
883 reviews1,086 followers
May 20, 2017
I wanted to start a light and Young Adultey new series, and this one did the trick just fine. It's hard to rate short stories but this one was entertaining enough. In eighty-six pages, we got a decent go at a medieval-like setting for assassin guilds, quests for revenge, blink-or-you'll-miss-it romance, and brief intrigue. It's almost like reading about the male version of Celaena from The Assassin's Blade.

In other news, look at that girl on the cover. Doesn't she have the nose of Natalie Dormer and the lips/cheekbones of Scarlett Johansson?

THE STORY
James, Bacchus, and Rand are the three Backstreet Boys from the local assassin's guild, which is newly run by Gerred. Thalia is the Natalie Dormer lookalike who dances at the local pub they all frequent; she seeks James's help with teaching her how to assassinate someone wicked. Ah. The good ol' revenge angle.

THE VERDICT
Anyone ever read Midnight Thief before? Based off the prequel novella, I have a optimistic hopes for it. I hope James is still the main character in that book because it would be nice to read about a male main character in a young adult fantasy book for a change.

[Two minutes later] Never mind. Just read the first line of Midnight Thief and it doesn't look like it's about James. Oh, well.
Profile Image for Jessica ❁ ➳ Silverbow ➳ ❁ .
1,293 reviews9,002 followers
October 24, 2015
This novella is pretty excellent, but it's also incredibly misleading.

1. It's written as NA, and therefore has a much more mature feel than the book itself, which is firmly YA, and has even been described more than once, as feeling almost middle grade.

2. The entire purpose of this prequel is to give you background information on a central character from the book, but once you've read the book, the novella was pointless, b/c it absolutely did NOT accomplish what it intended (which in my opinion was to attempt to make a sympathetic character out of someone who is simply reprehensible).

The whole thing feels like a set-up.

It's hard to believe that this is even written by the same person. My biggest complaint from the book was that the MC see things as black and white while being, herself, a criminal, and yet, this is nothing but one giant excuse for another character's amoral behavior.

I don't ask for much, but I do ask for consistency.
Profile Image for Kira Simion.
918 reviews143 followers
November 13, 2016
11-13-16

Thank you Aneta for telling me about this free offer! I love free things, especially books!

The blurb sounds pretty wicked (in a good way) and I can't wait to give it a try.

Edit: 4.5 stars!

Once again I am proven wrong! This novella was action packed, sad, and makes me want to read Midnight Thief even more. I never felt that short stories would be as good as long ones because they miss details (not like not needed ones, but more adventure and excitement and a climax that has been built up).

I enjoyed the characters, the plot, the idea, and the buildup and hope to read more by this author.

My only complaint (besides from small editing errors that don't matter much since they didn't take away from the story to me) is that I wish there was more. There are ways to make someone's loss sadder. Remind them of it, make them see it every so often, use it to fuel their goals.
Profile Image for mich.
661 reviews222 followers
September 2, 2016
A story about an assassin written by an author who has a PhD in neuroscience from MIT?

Is it just me or does that sound like the coolest thing ever?! I mean, it’s not like I expected the whole neuroscience thing to come into play at any point in the book (and let’s face it, my brain is allergic to science so it’s not like I’d understand it anyway if it did), but still, I just think it’s cool.

Poison Dance is actually just a sort of tie-in novella to the author’s debut book, Midnight Thief, in which we are given a brief introduction to that book’s world through the eyes of an assassin named James and a dancing girl, Thalia.

The writing is decent but it did take me awhile to warm up to the story. And because it was so short, as soon as I began to really get engaged, the damn thing was already over. But I suppose it served its purpose in making me interested in reading Midnight Thief which comes out in July. I’ll let you know how it goes.

(btw, this novella is free on Amazon right now)
Profile Image for Kirsty (Amethyst Bookwyrm).
627 reviews84 followers
April 7, 2014
This and my other reviews can be found at http://amethystbookwyrm.blogspot.co.uk/

Thanks to Livia Blackburne for giving me this book to review.

James is one of the best in the assassin’s guild but with the new leader feeling threatened and out to get him, he just wants to find a way out. He finds an opportunity in a troubled dancing girl Thalia who will aid him in exchange for him helping her kill a noble man. With the guild falling apart, will James be able to help Thalia and escape before it is too late.

Poison Dance is a very good prequel novella to Midnight Thief as it gives a great introduction to the people and the fantasy world. This novella has a fast-paced which has an interesting and strong plot which drags you into the story, which is surprising for a short story.

I really liked James as he has learned how to survive and is strong but does not show-off and he keeps his feelings close to his chest. I also liked Thalia as she does not back down and will do anything to kill anyone who hurts her loved ones, but is still vulnerable and wants to be protected.

I did not see the ending coming and this novella makes it hard to wait to read Midnight Thief to see what part James will play in it. I would recommend Poison Dance to fans of the Throne of Glass novellas or those interested in reading Midnight Thief.
Profile Image for Tammy.
1,069 reviews178 followers
February 14, 2014
The nitty-gritty: A short but powerful introduction to Midnight Thief, with a compelling and very focused story that made me ache for more of this world.

He handed her a stiletto the length of her hand and molded her fingers around the handle. Her hands were slender and her nails were delicately rounded, though her palms were calloused. The two of them stood in the cramped space between his bed and the window, holding the blade between them.

Poison Dance is a prequel novella to Blackburne’s upcoming Midnight Thief, which will be released in July by Disney Hyperion. I was thrilled when Livia contacted me and asked if I would review it, and I’m happy to say it exceeded my expectations. Not only does the author quickly suck us into her world (and at eighty-six pages, that’s a difficult feat to pull off), but she has written a short story that has so many elements that you will walk away thinking you’ve just read a full-fledged novel. Saying I’m salivating to read Midnight Thief is no exaggeration. I can’t believe July is so far away!

Obviously I don’t want to give any spoilers for this story, but I will attempt to briefly give you a synopsis. The story revolves around two main characters. James is a hired assassin and a member of the Assassin’s Guild. Thalia is a “dancing girl” who performs at a local tavern. One night after her performance, she corners James and asks him to help her kill a rich nobleman, and offers him a way out of his dangerous life as an assassin in return. James agrees to help her, and the ensuing story explains what happens as James and Thalia prepare for this perilous mission.

What I loved about Poison Dance was the emotional depth that Blackburne was able to achieve in such a short piece of work. She immediately puts her characters in danger and gives them a near-impossible task to complete, which pulls the reader into the story and keeps us there until the end. It didn’t take long to read this novella, but the emotional impact stayed with me for a long time.

Both James and Thalia are strong, independent people with tragic pasts, and I immediately connected with them. Their time together is agonizingly brief, but they make the most of that time. And despite its length, the author still manages to flesh out the secondary characters really well, and I thought each one added something important to the story.

Poison Dance didn’t have any overt fantasy elements to it (except for the poison of the title, which is not a real type of poison), although I think Midnight Thief is categorized as fantasy. But the world-building suggests a time and place that could be magical, so I’ll be interested to see how it’s developed in a longer piece.

This short glimpse into Livia Blackburne’s world is so tantalizing, you’ll probably be as anxious to read Midnight Thief as I am. Don’t hesitate. Grab your copy today and see what I’m talking about. If the author can create such a vivid world in only eighty-six pages, imagine what she can do with three hundred and sixty-eight. Highly recommended!

Big thanks to the author for supplying a review copy.

This review originally appeared on Books, Bones & Buffy.
Profile Image for Anya.
763 reviews181 followers
January 12, 2014
Poison Dance by Livia Blackburne is a prequel novella to her upcoming novel Midnight Thief. It tells the story of a certain Assassin’s Guild member that I’m hoping we come to know in Midnight Thief and convinces me further that I need Midnight Thief IMMEDIATELY. Poison Dance manages to pack world-building, character development, feels, and “OMG what just happened??” all into one little novella; I’m impressed! Also I don’t normally read novellas, so hopefully that tells you something >.>.
Note: I received Poison Dance from the author in exchange for an honest review.

On Starships and Dragonwings Button

Poison Dance by Livia Blackburne (Midnight Thief #0.5)
Published by Author on Sept. 24th, 2013
Genres: Fantasy, YA
Length: 86 pages
How I got my copy: Author

James is skilled, efficient, and deadly, a hired blade navigating the shifting alliances of a deteriorating Assassin’s Guild. Then he meets Thalia, an alluring but troubled dancing girl who offers him a way out—if he’ll help her kill a powerful nobleman. With the Guild falling apart, it just might be worth the risk. But when you live, breathe, and love in a world that’s forever flirting with death, the slightest misstep can be poison.
Strengths:
I generally avoid novellas because I crave a nice full plot. However, Poison Dance did not disappoint me, since it was able to pack in an awesome plot.
James! Gah, there better be plenty of James in Midnight Thief is all I’m saying.
The writing of Poison Dance is quite high quality. It’s actually small/indie published (depending on your definitions), but I didn’t find a single typo or awkward phrase, so I doubt you would have even realized if I hadn’t told you ;-).
I’m so excited to go into Midnight Thief with a little bit more of the backstory of what I’m guessing is a secondary character. From Midnight Thief’s description, James is around but isn’t an MC, but I’m going to be reading his appearances in a whole new light knowing what I know now about him *pets*.
Weaknesses:
The romance of Poison Dance felt a little bit rushed to me, but it is a novella. There is the mention that several weeks go by, so it’s not really as rushed as it feels to the reader. It is also a pretty darn complicated romance due to everything that is going on in Thalia’s life, so I’m not 100% sure exactly what happened with James and Thalia (it fades to black, hehe), but… it’s complicated. This leads into my next point…
More please? This is what novellas always do to me! I always wish that they could be stretched into longer stories so that I can find out more about what is going on in everyone’s heads. Basically, I need Midnight Thief please. *puppy eyes*
Summary:
Poison Dance was an excellent introduction to Blackburne’s writing and the world of Midnight Thief. Previously I was interested (assassins!), but Midnight Thief was one of many fantasies on the list. Now, Midnight Thief is one of my top priorities for summer books and I’m quite sure I will devour it in a day or two. Go read Poison Dance, you’ll thank me ;-).
Profile Image for Aneta Bak.
433 reviews124 followers
December 31, 2013
"The rumors are right. Your guildleader is dead."

Poison Dance is the prequel to Midnight Thief. It's about James, a young and skillful assassin. When he hears news that his Guildleader is dead, he knows that the Assassins Guild is falling apart. And when a mysterious dancer named Thalia asks for his help, he has to decide whether to fight and become the new leader, or flee away from the possible danger.

This novella was way better than I expected. I absolutely love characters like James! He's hot, smart and he can fight. He is a natural born leader, with his loyal friends following his every move. Even though hes an assassin, he isn't heartless like you'd expect a killer to be. And lets not forget Thalia, not only is she a beautiful dancer, but shes also dangerous and mysterious! I honestly fell in love with the characters in a heartbeat!

I am actually pretty sad that the main story isn't in James point of view, but if the actual book is as good as this novella then its definitely a book worth reading! If you're a fan of Throne of Glass or Grave Mercy, this is a book and novella you definitely have to read!

I better see lots of James in the actual book! Or else!

Happy Reading!
Profile Image for Aneirys.
78 reviews52 followers
January 22, 2014
Poison Dance, a the prequel to the highly anticipated book Midnight Thief, is a short story about an assassin who tries to help out a dancer get her won revenge.

"If you can't rely on strength, you rely on stealth. Surprise is your strongest asset, so make sure the first time kills."


It's my first time reading a book set in a medieval era and based on an assassin. And I'm very disappointment that it was so short. The story achieved to reach my interest with mysterious characters, some funny plot lines and a crazy ending.

"Risk is everywhere. Only the nobles have the luxury of a long easy life. Justice, vengeance, the ability to carve out your own fate instead of being herded like an animal. Sometimes it's worth dying for."


It really left me wanting for more, which increase my desire to have Midnight Thief in my hands.
Profile Image for Rashika (is tired).
976 reviews712 followers
December 16, 2013
*This mini review has also been posted on Tangled in Pages

This novella is good. Great in fact. The problem is that I feel no connection. I felt detached the whole time I read this. There was no connection between me and the characters, hell that ending didn’t do anything for me either.

Which is why I am confused. The atmosphere is dark. The world building incredible. But the characters. I can see them for the strong people they are but there is no connection there. I can admire them and appreciate them but I cannot seem to forge a connection, to feel what they feel, to understand them.

The plot, the story, everything is perfect but the lack of connection kind of just ruins for me. What could have been an incredible novella turns bland and I wasn’t able to enjoy it as much as I could have otherwise.

In spite of this, I await the release of Midnight Thief and hope to get to see more of James.
Profile Image for Jenny.
472 reviews110 followers
February 8, 2014
Poison Dance is a very brief introduction to the beginnings of a war between a guild of assassins and a group of noblemen who use their station to get away with all manner of misdeeds, giving us an all-too quick glimpse of something we can’t wait to know more about. Reading this novella is like looking through a telescopic lens at a fixed point – our view is narrowed to a specific moment time and place, but we know that just beyond the periphery lies a much larger word full of shadows and villainy, just waiting for the light of the upcoming Midnight Thief to shine upon them and reveal them to our gaze...

Full review available at: http://supernaturalsnark.blogspot.com...
Profile Image for Jana (Nikki).
290 reviews
December 12, 2013
This review can also be found at my blog, There were books involved...

-----------------------------

When I recently heard about Midnight Thief , I was immediately super excited. I've been in the mood for more YA fantasy, and this new series sounds like exactly what I love: thieves and assassins and knights and capers! It sounds give-it-to-me-now fantastic. So when Livia Blackburne emailed me, saying she saw that I'd added Midnight Thief to my Goodreads shelf and would I like to read the prequel novella? I jumped at the chance.

And my excitement was not let down in the slightest. James and Thalia's story is thoroughly engrossing and completely un-put-down-able, and I loved every minute of it.

James is a member of the Assassin's Guild, meaning... you guessed it! He's an assassin. He is not someone you'd expect to be the hero. He kills and beats people up for a living, and yet he's got this underlying code of morals and decency that makes him a fascinating character to read about. (I definitely see a new favorite anti-hero in the making, guys, and I am so excited.) When Thalia comes to James asking him for help assassinating a powerful nobleman, she won't say exactly why, and she remains a pretty mysterious and veiled character until the very end. But as she and James get to know one another, and she reveals her strength in the face of an incredibly dark situation, I really came to admire her ferocity and determination.

I have to admit, though, going into this novella I was a little wary. It takes a lot of skill to fully introduce a new world and brand-new characters in a novella this short. Eighty-some pages is not a lot of time to establish much of anything.

But apparently, that's all Livia Blackburne needs.

I absolutely loved how Blackburne was able to to intertwine really fantastic worldbuilding, plus real character development, in such a short amount of time. James and Thalia were made vivid and intriguing after just a few pages, even though it did take the whole book to learn specific details. You're thrust right into this world of assassins and intrigue; but it's done in a way that, though you're jumping into the deep end, you never feel like you're drowning in new terminology or confusing details. It's never awkward, and it all just seems to flow organically, the worldbuilding and the character development and the plot... Which is something my favorite fantasy books all have in common. My hat's off to Blackburne for pulling that off in a novella.

Another thing I liked about Poison Dance is that it sort of walks the line between YA- and adult-fantasy -- appropriately so, because James and Thalia are slightly older than the normal teen/YA range, and the plot is darker than YA books tend to be. So don't go into this book thinking, Oh, a cute little prequel novella to a cool new fantasy series! Romance! Rainbows and unicorns! ...There are very few rainbows, and not a unicorn in sight. Which isn't a bad thing, but still something to remember. What's really important, I think, is that this is pertinent backstory for James, who I'm assuming will be a major character in Midnight Thief.

 

In conclusion...

I highly recommend checking out the Goodreads page for Midnight Thief . If it sounds like your kind of thing (and let's be honest, who doesn't think that sounds awesome?), you absolutely positively have to read Poison Dance. It's a fantastic (if somewhat dark) introduction to the world, some of the characters, and especially to Blackburne's talent for worldbuilding and character-development. I can honestly say that, though I've read quite a few prequel novellas, none have ever gotten me this excited for the book.

--

There were books involved...
Profile Image for Angel.
61 reviews9 followers
December 18, 2013
(This review can also be found on my blog -Spare Reads-)

Poison Dance is the first self published work by Livia Blackburne. This novella serves as a prequel to Blackburne's upcoming novel Midnight Thief, which has been scheduled to release in July 8th 2014 (publisher: Disney-Htperion). I must thank Livia for giving me such a wonderful opportunity to read her work. It has been an absolute joy and I was thoroughly intrigued. I know many of you are skeptical towards self published novels, but Poison Dance is certainly something worth checking out.

Despite its length, Poison Dance tells a heartfelt tale infused with everything you could possibly be wishing for. Vengeance, romance, action, you name it! Although not every element is carried to the same extent as the other, you will for sure enjoy this short and utterly gripping read. James, an experienced assassin, always calm and a little restrained, was approached with an interesting request by a girl named Thalia. She offered him possibilities of a new life but at the mean time sought his assistance to take someone else's. He helped her. They grew closer as their goals grew nearer, but since the beginning, no true happiness was ever feasible for both of them. You anxiously awaits the final showdown, and inevitably a tragic it was.

The story left me feeling a little bit hollow afterwards. It wasn't at all tear-jerking, but there were several occasions when I just felt totally helpless and the only thing I could do was watching James and Thalia make the wrong decisions, witnessing the plot going towards a darker end. I was very much invested in the story and I liked both of the main characters. The plot was pretty straightforward and I enjoy Blackburne's narrating style a lot. With much fewer words, she is able to depict personalities extremely well. I think that is the reason why I was so drawn into Posion Dance regardless of it being short and simple.

I also think that some part of me just really digs assassins and romance that could not be said out loud. It is easy to see Thalia's and James' feelings towards each other. The affection shown through their actions, but not once did they ever admit love (or able to admit love). They simply missed their chances and the story moved on like waves crashing and disappearing on land. Heartbreaking.

Overall, I enjoyed this quick read of Poison Dance. I'm looking forward to see Livia Blackburne's Midnight Thief where a female heroine will be featured in the same background setting. I suspect I will miss James and Thalia deeply.
Profile Image for David.
66 reviews5 followers
April 14, 2014
The only bad thing about this novella is the cover: in the story, James is dark and rugged, a cold and ruthless assassin, who is yet capable of depth and feeling - much different than the eager, blonde, high school water polo player pictured on the cover.

The cover aside, this is something I've been longing to see: a well-written, no fluff, fantasy story set in an older time period, starring roguish characters fighting against a corrupt nobility. There are too many George R.R. Martin imitators on the market right now, too many Hunger Games wannabes, and too many horrible, masochistic YA romances, contemporary or paranormal as they may be. I have been aching for a fantasy story that was well written enough to feel realistic without going overboard with the gore and horror and freakyness you might find in Game of Thrones or its many imitators. Here is a novella that made me excited for what the author will do in the full-length to be released later this year.

Livia Blackburne's style is elegant and economical. No frills, but none are necessary, especially since we are seeing things from the third-person limited perspective of the young assassin James. The prose pitches you headlong into a narrative that I felt hard-pressed not to finish in one session (and which I would have, if my lunch break had not ended!). The pacing is strong, with the action consistently rising in intensity, with a beautiful climax at the end. We have forgotten what good writing can do to us - it means much more than the romance or the plot itself ever could. Good writing makes us care, because it makes us see into the small details that matter.

We smell the blood James has stained himself with, again and again. We see how James notes more and more of Thalia's beauty every time she dances, without even making it explicit to himself. We feel the mounting hatred he has for the pettiness of the people around him, and the injustices of the nobility, but all so beautifully subdued (just like his character) and written into his actions, never ever once told to us explicitly. This is the effect of good writing - conjuring something inside us that we only realize after the fact.

That is precisely why we are always told to show and not tell. Because in the showing, when it is done well, is where the magic happens.

Really looking forward to Ms. Blackburne's debut.
Profile Image for Elisabeth Wheatley.
Author 34 books4,590 followers
March 1, 2014
As soon as I read the premise of this book, I knew I had to have it. I have a certain fondness of novellas, a soft spot for assassins, and an infatuation with high fantasy. I downloaded this and read it within a few days. When I got to the end, I probably should have cried or been upset or something, but I couldn’t because it left me…stunned and just a little bit numb.

The plot:

There wasn’t a whole lot of world building, just enough so we understand what’s happening and the implications of certain people doing certain things, etc. The story moves along quickly, without any “drag weight” and it ended far sooner than I would have liked. I do hope the author doesn’t villainize James too much in her first full-length novel coming out later this year just because I’ve started to think of James as one of “my babies” (a hypothetical collective of fictional characters who I take a special interest in and wish I could protect).

The characters:

The whole book with the exception of a single chapter and the epilogue is told from James’ perspective. The author did a splendid job of making him…I want to say “adorable,” but that’s not the right word. Perhaps “lovable” is, though she still did not let us forget that he is a killer for hire who is very good at his job and has a plan to off just about everyone. Thalia was definitely a match for James and they were beautiful together in a broken, damaged way.

Normally, I would go into a little more detail on the rest of the character cast, but since this is a novella, I’ll just skim over it. The bad people are definitely bad and it is just a little shameful for me to admit how triumphant I felt when I read the epilogue.

This story broke my heart, but did so wonderfully. If anyone loves a good fantasy and a tale about love, intrigue, and revenge, they should definitely give this a shot.
Profile Image for Rachel.
496 reviews52 followers
December 3, 2013
4.5 out of 5 stars

So, assassins are cool, right? Well, when I first read about Livia Blackburne's upcoming release, Midnight Thief--which is about assassins--I knew I wanted to read it. Lo and behold, Livia has written a short prequel novella to help tide us over, since Midnight Thief isn't out until July (!!!). This novella, awesomely named Poison Dance, more than just tides you over, though. Upon finishing I NEEDED Midnight Thief and I needed to see James and how he turned out.

You wouldn't think that 54 pages is enough to really flesh out a character, let alone two, but that's exactly what happens. Both James and Thalia are interesting characters that draw you into the story easily and completely. Honestly I'm afraid I'm only going to want to see James when I read Midnight Thief now!

Also despite the short length, there's quite a lot of action and more than enough to keep you reading this novella in one quick sitting. The plot rushes along and I was actually surprised when it ended, not remembering the actual length and seeing that the file had over 80 pages. But, that left space for a Midnight Thief excerpt, which did not disappoint.

Poison Dance is a novella that not only whets your appetite for its companion, but it stands alone as a great read. Between engaging characters and a fast-paced plot, you're sure to be entertained and immediately wish for more.

You can find this review and many more fun things on my blog: Paper Cuts.
Profile Image for Krystle.
1,039 reviews322 followers
December 28, 2013
I haven’t reviewed a novella in quite a while so it’s nice to get back into the swing of things. The author was really nice in giving me a chance to review this too. Hehe. So, since this work is of a shorter length, my review, also, will be of a shorter length.

Poison Dance was a great introduction to the author’s debut novel that will release later next year, Midnight Thief . Her writing is very strong, giving us character insight, description, and plot build up without wasted space of filler and fluff. I just read through this thing in a fast breeze.

I love how she crafted all the characters she introduced, they were very distinct and all had their own voices. Even the basic foundations she set for the assassin’s guild was pretty neat. We could see all the tension between members, hierarchy, and mechanics of how it’s run. The romance was brief and touched upon but it wasn’t a distraction and I didn’t mind it at all. It has a bit of a more mature touch to it but nothing risqué, so I’m sure it makes good reading material for everyone.

That ending though was entirely unexpected! I was thrown for a loop but it makes for an excellent set up for the novel and helps to whet your appetite for Midnight Thief. I, for one, can’t wait for it! If this novella is indication, the novel is gonna be fabulous!
Profile Image for Pili.
1,216 reviews229 followers
August 15, 2014
Poison Dance is a prequel novella, and it's about James and the Assassin's Guild. It's a bit difficult to say if you ought to read it before or after The Midnight Thief, but I read it after and it worked pretty well.

James is a young assassin in the Guild in this novella and it gives us a bit more of insight into his character and how he became the man that we meet in Midnight Thief. Things are unstable in the Guild and the seeds of the organization as it is on Midnight Thief are all in here.

The tone and narrative voice is quite different between Poison Dance and Midnight Thief. Here it is darker and a bit more adult, cause James is older and in a darker path already that Kyra is. He's a killer already, but he isn't overtly ambitious and is only trying to carve a life for himself and his friends.

Somehow even if this made me understand James a bit better and even relate to the heartbreak and betrayal and anger that drove him to where he ends up, but I guess because I already disliked him enough I didn't get to feel too much sympathy for him.

It was quite interesting to see the events to led to James being who he is in Midnight Thief and read about the events only hinted at in there, but a word of warning... if you don't like this one too much, don't discount Midnight Thief on account of this one, they're different enough. 3.5 to this one.
Profile Image for Teresa Mary Rose.
1,296 reviews343 followers
July 19, 2014
More Reviews Here: Readers Live A Thousand Lives

This was a super quick read and one I really enjoyed. It is the perfect set up for the upcoming Midnight Thief series. It introduces the reader to the world and sets up all the danger and intrigue that is to come. I was excited for this series to begin with, but now I really cannot wait to get my hands on the first full length novel. This seems like exactly my kind of series.

James and Thalia were interesting characters and they worked well together. Neither has had an easy life. When Thalia offers James a way out, he takes it and the two form an interesting relationship. Thalia has her own mission and nothing will deter her from it. I enjoyed watching these two work together and grow closer. The ending honestly took me by complete surprise and I never in a million years expected the story to go the way it did.

Poison Dance succeeded in setting up the world for Midnight Thief and I cannot wait to see more of that world. Clearly there is lots of danger and intrigue and I am really looking forward to seeing how the events in this novella shape the events to come. All in all a great novella.
Profile Image for thevintagechronicles.
906 reviews6 followers
January 2, 2014
I was kindly sent this eBook novella by the author in exchange for an honest review. many thanks L.B.!

this didn't let me down at all! I loved it! this is the first time I've read a prequel novella before I'd read at least the first book in the series, and I was a little nervous about how I'd feel about it. I was able to fall right into the world, the characters were immediately engaging and lovable.

my copy also featured a first chapter preview of midnight thief, which was amazing as well! I seriously can't wait to read more about James and the other characters in what seems like is gonna be one crazy ride!

I love fantasy stories about assassins and adventure, and this gave me the same feelings I got from one of my most favorite series ever, throne of glass, so needless to say, I highly recommend it so far, and I'll be eagerly holding my breath until the day I can get my hands on midnight thief!

you all should read this one! I have a feeling its gonna be the next best thing in this genre! loved it!
Profile Image for Christina (A Reader of Fictions).
4,574 reviews1,756 followers
June 30, 2014
As you probably know, I’m not much for novellas, but I will read them if I can get them for free one way or another. In this case, I was actually offered a review copy ages ago but I was indecisive until it was too late to respond. Then I was getting ready to start Midnight Thief and my brain was all “what about that thing?” so I went to look it up on Amazon. Lo and behold, it was available for free, so away I went. All told, Poison Dance is very much a novella and not super heavy on the plot, but it was intriguing enough that I’m pretty excited for Midnight Thief now.

Read the full review at A Reader of Fictions.
Profile Image for Jilly.
1,838 reviews6,685 followers
January 3, 2015
I'm never sure if it is a good idea to read a prequel before the actual book. In some ways, you might get a glimpse in to the world and the characters lives before the story happens, but in other ways, it can just mess up the actual main book for you. Such is the case with this one. I liked this story, and I liked the character of James. He is a person that I was sympathetic to and wanted to do well.

This is a slight problem when coming in to the main book, Midnight Thief, because I have many assumptions about James. And, you know what they say about the word "assume". Enough said.

Profile Image for Jessalyn King.
1,110 reviews22 followers
February 21, 2014
This was good. Reminded me a bit of the lowlife in the Tamora Pierce world. I thought she did a decent job of writing a male character, although what do I know. At least he didn't necessarily sound like me (see my complaints from Beautiful Creatures series). Looking forward to the full-length books.
Profile Image for La La.
1,118 reviews156 followers
July 18, 2014
I rated this three stars, but it is more like 2 1/2. The writing was too plain in descriptors and dialogue. To me it read like and un-fleshed out draft. I just don't know. The first chapter of Midnight Thief was included with this prequel novella, and it didn't grab me either, so as it stands right now I won't be reading Midnight Thief any time soon, if at all.
Profile Image for Anna.
30 reviews39 followers
March 7, 2016
This is a great short story! I can't wait for Midnight Thief to come out. I'm so glad I read this, it was amazing!
Displaying 1 - 30 of 222 reviews

Can't find what you're looking for?

Get help and learn more about the design.