I have now read 2 of Hunter's Medieval series, By Arrangement and The Protector. As with the first, I really liked this novel. Hunter does a very good job of recreating the medieval time period and not just as window dressing as happens in so many historical romances. No, Hunter's characters are products of their times right down to their inner struggles. That is one of the reasons I have enjoyed this series, but also the reason, I suspect that many other readers don't.
Morvan Fitzwaryn, the handsome, charismatic brother of Christiana from By Arrangement, is a landless knight who operates under a chivalric code, but he is Alpha Male- bossy, presumptuous, imperious, inflexible. He is cocksure of the necessity of his taking charge of the people around him, particularly the women. I think modern women readers may be put off by him and how relatively unbending he remains even to the end of the book.
I loved him.
Anna de Leon, de facto lord of the castle and warrior princess, is a highly unusual young woman who may claim to have been driven to act in man's world, but who actually has been blessed by circumstances to have an excuse to do so. She loves the activity, the challenge, the danger and especially the freedom.
Irresistible Force, meet Immovable Object.
In the hands of many if not most authors, this set-up would culminate with a nice set-down to the Alpha Male hero in a feminist-approved, Grrl-power sort of resolution. "Spunky heroine tames Evil Rake"--That sort of thing.
That doesn't happen here. There is giving and taking to make this relationship work, but true to the time period, most of the giving is borne by Anna. (If one can pit aside our cultural indoctrination, one can see and admit that Morvan's reasoning is correct, sad as it may be for Anna.)
Anyway, I really enjoyed Morvan's story and was pleased with the heroine Hunter created for him. The heat and passion between the two starts as early as page 10and never really lets up. This is a soul mates story. Morvan and Anna are not just two characters who fall in love; The Protector's hero and heroine are destined for each other,'and Hunter sells this from 30 pages into their story.
I enjoy Hunter's writing style, particularly her effective use of repetition and symmetry. Some examples of repetition: the phrases "It is done," "I would have you stay with me," and "it sounded a lot like a command." And this long one--
"Although Anna saw nothing of Morvan for several days, she heard about him. He was the main topic of conversation for the bored courtiers.
Especially among the women.
Everyone expressed interest in his adventures, and relief that he survived the plague.
Especially the women.
They all seemed very happy to have him with them again.
Especially the women.
Aye, any number of ladies were very excited that Morvan Fitzwaryn was back at court."
Hunter uses repetition throughout the book and makes both the narration and especially the dialogue seem natural and cohesive.
I appreciate that effort.
Definitely a 4.5