Blood Lines

NCIS #3

by Mel Odom

Commander Will Coburn's NCIS team is investigating the carjacking and assault of a young Marine and his wife. All evidence points to Bobby Lee Gant, son of the notorious criminal and suspected international drug smuggler Victor Gant. When NCIS agent Shel McHenry is wounded during a botched arrest, the team rallies around him even as Victor threatens retribution.

Meanwhile, in west Texas, Shel's father, Tyrel McHenry, struggles with his own demons as buried secrets from a war long since fought come to light. The path he chooses will change his—and Shel's—life forever.

Genres: Christian, Fiction, Christian Fiction, Mystery, Thriller, Suspense, Contemporary

432 pages, Paperback

First published August 1, 2008

About the author

Librarian Note: There is more than one author in the Goodreads database with this name.

aka Jordan Gray

Mel Odom is a bestselling writer for hire for Wizards of the Coast's Forgotten Realms, Gold Eagle's Mack Bolan, and Pocket's Buffy the Vampire Slayer and Angel book lines. His debut SF novel Lethal Interface made the Locus recommended list . The Rover was an Alyx Award winner. He has also written a scientific adventure of the high seas set in the 19th century entitled Hunters of the Dark Sea. He lives in Oklahoma.

Reviews

[CS · Rating 2 out of 5]

Disclaimer: I have been reading and reviewing for over a decade, and in that time, I have grown and changed a lot. My views in the following review reflect the person I was when I wrote them and may not reflect who I am today - for better or for worse. While I would love to be able to reread and update my reviews to reflect who I am today, I think my time is better dedicated elsewhere. If you choose to read this review, please bear in mind this attitude.

"Tell him for me that if he don't believe in God now, he should start real soon"
The third NCIS book by Mel Odom was a must have for me, particularly after the last two wonderful books.

Shel has always had a tough relationship with his aloof father. But things are about to get much worse when Shel kills Bobby Lee, the son of Victor Gant, a former Vietnam soldier and leader of a drug-slinging gang, the Purple Royals. Now, the NCIS team must gather enough evidence to keep Shel from Victor's vengeance and put Victor away for good. Meanwhile, Shel is about to learn what his father, Tyrel, has been keeping from him and how it relates to Victor

What I Liked:
This is a different story than the previous two entries. It is a far more personal book, which is surprising as the last two were very personal as well (the first dealing with Will and his relationship to his wife and kids and the second dealing with Nita's family drama). In this book, however, there is no mystery to who the killer is. The mystery is instead: what is Tyrel hiding that makes Victor threaten him? Will Shel and his father reunite? And will Victor Gant get his vengeance? A very interesting twist and definitely keeps the reader from being bored with the same procedural/whodunnit.
I liked how Odom set much of the story in Texas and got away from the East Coast. I love the East Coast and all, but it's always nice for our NCIS team to get away and investigate other areas of the country.
Also, I enjoyed the flashbacks, how the viewpoint switched to the past for the appropriate sections. That was much more effective than a long, boring story that Tyrel tells his son (or that McGowen tells Maggie and Remy). In fact, the whole scene: Tyrel telling Shel, McGowen telling Maggie and Remy, and the switching to the past was a well done move, balancing between how the characters are behaving present day while still getting the action and visceral pain of the past. A smart move on Odom's part.
My favorite character was by far Victor Gant. Although he is terrible at actually causing harm to anyone in this book (and he was so good in Vietnam??), he is an interesting character. I liked his Vietnam history, his affinity to his son, and his stubbornness. I found myself eagerly anticipating his sections and was rooting for HIM at the end, oddly enough.
Also, the father-son reuniting scene at the end was very touching.

What I Did Not Like:
The first thing I noticed about this book that makes it so much different than its predecessors is that it is incredibly slow! In the past two books, the key incident happens early on and avalanches, the suspense and intrigue building on each page. But in Bloodlines, I felt that things drug on forever. A lot of time is spent on hinting at things, dragging it out so that it stops being interesting and just becomes frustrating. For example, it takes Tyrel an eternity to divulge this big secret that he's been holding for 40 years (basically the entire book, as he only drops bread crumbs about it throughout, which is terribly annoying). By the time he does reveal it, I couldn't help but think, "And this is what I spent 100+ pages waiting for???" Now don't get me wrong, I enjoy suspense, but this whole plot point to me was much less about suspense and more about dragging it out, and that drove me nuts. I can't tell you how many times I wanted to yell, "Just tell me already what the big deal is! Enough of this drippy melodrama!"
But the whole book is melodrama, really. I feel everyone acts so dramatic about things that just don't feel that way to me. Shel mopes and gropes about his daddy (what adult male not living at home calls his father "daddy" anyway?) being aloof with him throughout the whole book. I swear each time his viewpoint appears, at least one page has to deal with recounting how isolated he feels from his father, how much like his dad he is, and agonizing over Victor Grant's threat about his "daddy" (even in the middle of an action sequence!!). Don isn't much better. He wangsts about how little like his dad he is, how stubborn Tyrel and Shel are, how his daddy was mean to him, and if it is possible to lie (what the hell?? Aren't we breaking some commandments here??) about his father's involvement in Dennis' murder. And then Tyrel still wangsts about the crimes he committed in the past, suddenly wallowing his sorrows in alcohol, throwing a big pity party because he's a crappy father, husband, and grandfather. You know, I like conflict. And family conflict can be done well. But it seems whenever these guys are shown, they have to spend all this time recounting their sorrows and whining about them. Let's grow up, guys. Let's stop being PMSing women and be men. I know this is a tough situation, that some bad stuff happened, but isn't this supposed to be about getting a bad guy, not "Days of Our Lives" or "Dallas" or something? Wangst on your own time! We got a killer out on the loose!
What makes it REALLY bad is when we finally learn the story of what happens in Vietnam (summary for those who don't want it spoiled: it was pathetic).


A drunk Tyrel let Victor drag him out into the jungle so that Victor could get his drugs, which he was handling at the time. Tyrel sees what he believes is "Charlie" and shoots...only to find out it was Dennis instead. Later we find out that Dennis was trying to bust Victor's drug op and was killed by Victor, not Tyrel.
What upsets me is that a man spends FORTY years anguishing over a friendly fire casualty that we end up learning he didn't do ANYWAY. What a friggin' WASTE of reader involvement and time! He pushes away his wife (and how the heck did she spend half that time with the beast?), his kids, his friends, all because he thinks he accidentally shot someone--and someone he really didn't know that great (it never sounded like Dennis was a high school friend or anything). Now, I do understand that the military is different, that lying destroys a person, that seeing someone die is horrible (though I've never experienced it), and that fear of repercussions is a good motivation, but I found it overdrawn and pathetic. Why did Odom have this big build up, all this wangst and drama, which lead me, as the reader, to believe that Tyrel acted out of malice, anger, hatred, greed, whatever, and then heap Tyrel with this accidental murder that he ends up being vindicated of anyway? All it does is make me very mad; mad I invested so much and then be told that it was all a lie! Instead of drawing me closer to Tyrel, it does the complete opposite.

Related to the last two is how little time is spent on actually doing anything. There is no reason or rhyme for why much of what happens happens. It's like Will and his team are tripping through this without any idea how to proceed. Do they put out warrants for this guy's arrest? Try to hunt him down? Try to tap phone lines or whatever you do to find a criminal? No. And when Victor threatens Shel's family, they stand around like idiots, not sure why Shel is leaving and making a big deal about it. Look, guys, Shel said Victor threatened his family. Wouldn't that be enough for him to want to leave? Don't make a bigger deal out of this than it is. It's almost as if they had so little to analyze, that they decided to over-analyze this trivial action. Lame.
And about the team...or should I say, lack thereof. This book doesn't involve all the members working as a unit...not at least until the last half. No, it's about Shel. The other members are thrown about whenever they are needed. Now, I'm not saying that Odom should have forced people where they don't belong. But don't write a book called "NCIS" when it deals with only one team member. At least make an attempt to integrate the whole team. Don't have them fade into the background of non-existence.
Nit Pick Section
1.A five month pregnant woman does not just barely show her pregnancy, particularly if she is thin. I have a thin, tall friend that is four months pregnant and you can see she has a belly.
2.Don going NCIS based on cop/western TV shows doesn't work in the real world. TV is NOT reality, and the things they do on it are often done for suspense, not because it actually works.
3.It is amazing how a short stint in a war forty years ago remains with a rancher enough that he can outwit men half his age. And this line, "since the place is his and he knows every inch of it, he might have killed them all." Number one, what is with Shel's immense pride as his father's ability to kill NOW (Tyrel is a fugitive, even if Gant's team are the bad guys)? And I don't care how well he knows the farm. If I get up at night, I will still run into walls and I've lived in this house for almost 11 years!
4.How does a 70+ year old man able to hold his own against a young Marine? The fist fight between Tyrel and Shel just got to be ludicrous after a while.
5.Why does Odom bother including Max when the poor dog is always being told to stand in a corner out of the fight?
6.Isn't Shel the least bit concerned about the SUV rental being destroyed? I wouldn't be surprised if the rental company never lets him rent from them again.
7.How many times does Don have to act surprised that his father might have murdered someone? We got it the first ten times, thank you, Mr. Brilliant!
8.When did Tyrel create this supposed "new identity" he would take up?
9.Another issue I find funny in a way it was not meant to be was how Remy and Shel singlehandedly can kill 5 out of 10 guys on motorcycles and come out unscathed. Who needs Superman? These guys are the Terminator! Seriously, no injuries, no near misses? What's up with that?
10.Let's just call it like we see it: Tyrel is a Marty Stu. He has committed a supposed wrong, but really, it wasn't his fault. He fights as well as a man half his age and can kill three people in the dark, one of whom he shot while bareback riding a horse out of a barn. He is grumpy and aloof, to protect people.
11.Halfway through the book, the whole FBI drug case drops off the face of the planet.
12.Section breaks, particularly at the beginning, are really strange. Typically, at a new point of view or chapter, there is a three to four line setting: Location, State, Time. Well, in the beginning, you could easily find one of those and a few pages later see only a change in time (like 5 minutes) and no change in scenery or point of view. It was confusing and distracting.
13.I have a hard time believing Vietnam would ever let armed Americans into their country especially for something as trivial as retrieving the body of a forty year old soldier.
14.Sort of brought up earlier, Don being gung-ho about lying about his dad killing Dennis. Aren't you a pastor???

Overall:
In order to fully enjoy this book, I'll summarize the first part so you can skip the wangst and move on to the second part (starting about page 252): Shel kills Bobby Lee Gant, Victor Gant's son. Victor Gant gets mad and seeks revenge. He finds out Shel is the son of Tyrel McHenry. He threatens Tyrel. Shel goes back to confront Tyrel, see if Victor's claims are true.
There! Now, you can get to the rest of it. Not that there is really much redeeming in the second half anyway...
At first, I felt really disheartened at Blood Evidence, with Nita's wangsting, but was won back at the touching reunion she had with her mom. I am sorry to say, that this book has no redeeming scene, no winning, emotional faceoff that keeps this book out of the gutter. All I see are a family blowing a forty year old incident--which turns out to be as pathetic and disappointing as the rest of this book--out of proportion. The team investigation is almost nonexistent, the action blasé, the plot plodding, and one of the primary characters a Marty Stu. I shudder at doing this, but I feel I must: two out of five.

[Tamara Tilley · Rating 5 out of 5]

BLOOD LINES by Mel Odom, I am sad to say, is the last in the NCIS series. What a shame! His NCIS series has been so entertaining I hate to see it end. Though this series veers from the action/romance genre that I prefer, it didn’t deter me from wanting to continue the series.

In BLOOD LINES, NCIS agent Shel (Shelton) McHenry finds himself embroiled with Victor Gant, a drug lord who is seeking revenge, Shel being the target. Shel –being the proactive Marine type–goes after Victor when Victor levels threats against Shel’s family. Shel has to come to terms with the strained relationship he has with his father, Tyrel McHenry, and finds out along the way, a secret his father has kept from him for over forty years.

Could Victor Gant have really known his father? And is what Victor Gant’s saying about Shel’s father true? If so, it could change Tyrel, Shel, and his entire family forever.

BLOOD LINES is filled with action and emotion. The Christian influence in this book is very low key. Shel’s brother, Don, is a preacher and tries to reach out to both his father, who’s closed himself off from his sons, and Shel with his stubborn streak and unbending attitude. Though we know Shel from the previous books as the hardcore, loner Marine, BLOOD LINES reveals the emotionally hurt youth behind the man. We see his vulnerabilities, and the reason for his arms-length attitude that keeps people from seeing the real man behind the machine.

A great read. A wonderful series.

[Lisa · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was my favorite of the series. I like the story, and I felt I knew the characters better. It kept me engaged; I wanted to know what would happen next. I hope this is not the last in the series. I still want to know Remy's history.

[Karen Ford · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is the third of a trilogy dealing with an NCIS unit stationed at the Marine base in North Carolina. This story mostly featured Shel McHenry, the Marine attached to the unit, who is forced to kill a suspect in self defense in Charlotte. The suspect was wanted on connection with a carjacking in which a young Marine was killed. After the shootout in a tattoo parlor, the suspect's father, the head of a drug dealing motorcycle gang, vows revenge on McHenry.

After reading the first two books, I already knew the characters and easily fell deep into the story. It also takes a look at McHenry's family, with his widowed father having a Vietnam connection with the gang leader. The Marine's brother is a preacher in Texas, with religion playing a large part in the story. Some readers may be turned off a bit with the frequent references to God, but the story does a good job on its own.

The entire trilogy is recommended.

[Patricia · Rating 4 out of 5]

Rating 3.5, rounded up. Mel Odom writes well. I have read other books that he has written and he does weave a good story. I have enjoyed this book and this series. I am not as into names and descriptions of weaponry (all three books) or play-by-play autopsies (first two books but especially book 2). Once in a while in all three books, things just happen too conveniently, or without explanation. He does keep a good pace in the stories that keeps me reading. I am disappointed that Odom did not follow up with stories about the rest of the team, particularly Remy. I had the most questions about his background that were never answered. However, since this book was written in something like 2009, I doubt Odom plans to round this series out with anything else.

[Melita Sheppard · Rating 4 out of 5]

This book is the third in the series. Shel, the marine and will, the SEAL go to arrest someone. In a tattoo parlour. All goes belly up and shel is badly injured.
Seems the father of the boy they went to arrest was know to ashes father in Vietnam during the war.

Shels father has never spoken of those days, and the team end up working the case together.
I quite enjoyed the story, but I did think it was a bit over the rop to believe a heavily pregnant pathologist team member happily trotted alongside trained military men in the jungle heat and nothing was said of her when they came under fire.
Apart from that it’s a good easy read.

[Dianne Sidebottom · Rating 5 out of 5]

I'm a NCIS fan and have the series dvd's. I also seen the cover pages of this series by Mel Odom and put them on my TRB. Now I had the opportunity on ebook from the library. An episode on tv takes 42 minutes but reading this book took a little longer with life happening. At least you can return to the page when you stop each time. Interesting cold case story and I do like the team bringing different skills to investigate. I liked Joe's character and not sure what it was that appealed.. maybe as a dad to his daughter.. a longing that I missed out. 10 years old now but I think still worth the read if you are a fan!!

[Fredrick J Krause · Rating 4 out of 5]

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[Geraldine Rubin · Rating 5 out of 5]

Good

Book. The characters were will developed. The story kept you turning the pages. I have the first two books on cds. Hoping this book also goes into a CD so I can have the complete series on audio cd. I will be reading more from this author. Clean book

[Terry · Rating 4 out of 5]

Good read

Gets kind of complicated and sort of track occassionally but still a good read. Been there, done that, still have a nightmare or two, but like Tyrel, too onery to give up.

[Heather · Rating 4 out of 5]

I really liked this book and would like to find more by this offer.

[Rima · Rating 5 out of 5]

Best yet

The story held my interest. Allowed a greater build up of the characters and now I want more. I hope there will be more coming

[Dani · Rating 4 out of 5]

Last in the series. Good story and suspenseful storyline. Good ending to the series.

[Kara · Rating 5 out of 5]

Really enjoyed this series! Frankly, I wish there were more of them!

[Donna · Rating 4 out of 5]

Good story line. Loved the characters. All in all a great read.

[Elizabeth Dube · Rating 5 out of 5]

excellent

The series especially this book kept me riveted and I couldn’t hardly put it down! Well written and I use the word redemption to describe all three books!

[Adele · Rating 3 out of 5]

The ending ended in like 2 chapters with such a big build up. Ugh.

[Wendi · Rating 4 out of 5]

Perfect for : Personal reading, Adventure/Suspense fans, Fans of NCIS and CSI should really enjoy this book

In a nutshell: This is a great book for action and suspense fans. The story will keep your interest from start to finish. This is the last book in the NCIS series (dare we hope for another similar series?). The main character is Shel McHenry, who is investigating a carjacking and assault. He becomes the target of Victor Gant, a hardened criminal, when an arrest goes bad and Victor's son is killed. Throughout the story, Shel discovers that there are some skeleton's in the family closet, and his relationship with his father may never be the same! While it is listed as Fiction/Christian/General, the Christian values are not preached or forced on the reader, rather they are very subtle and help to support the storyline. Loved it!

Extended Review:
Characters: I did not want this story to end. The characters come to life, and Shel and his father develop very nicely through the course of the book. I thought Tyrel was very rough around the edges and strange for a father, but it made the story that much better! My only pet peeve is that I don't know too many adults who still call their parents Mommy or Daddy - it's either Mom or Dad, so occasionally it bothered me that Shel called is father Daddy pretty consistently, but hey - ultimately it added to the charm of the family.

Story-Line: Fast-paced with a few twists at key moments. I found myself holding my breath in a few places.

Readability: The 62 chapters (don't let that scare you!) and epilogue help to create an easy transition between scenes in the book. The book was easy to read, and the author did a good job of explaining technical things throughout the book.

Overall: A great book to keep your attention - I loved the change of pace and the resolution of the story!

[Laura-Lynne Smith · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was not a bad ending to this trilogy & over all I'm glad I finished it. The story was focused on Shel & his family this time and many of the other family story lines were not finished up well.

Musings from the middle of the book:

2 things so far:
1: why do two grown men still refer to their father as "daddy"? I find that just a little strange...if it was a female character maybe but I'm just not buying it especially when they're not all that close.
2: why introduce and give a lit of detail about a bit character if you're just going to off them a couple pages later? Not cool Mel, not cool.
It's still an okay book & since it's the third in a trilogy I feel like I need to finish this book already.

*turns out the character didn't die but didn't reappear in the story. They were just referred to.

[IrenesBookReviews · Rating 4 out of 5]

Do you enjoy the NCIS TV shows? If you do, you will really enjoy this book. If you have never seen the show you will still really like this action packed story. It is book three in Mel Odom’s NCIS series.

The characters in the story are believable and the story line is engaging.
I found this book hard to put down and easy to recommend to anyone looking for a book filled with intrigue.

The story takes place in North Carolina and Texas. It follows Commander Will Coburn and his investigating team as they try to narrow down the suspects in a carjacking and assult.

This book is worth picking up and reading, you will enjoy the adventure!

I was given this book by christianreveiwofbooks.com to review.

[Kelly Bailey]

Saw this book in the "New Section" in the library and found the blurb interesting. Mel Odom is a new to me author and was excited. However, not cool that I just saw this is the last of a series. So far, it hasn't been a big issue for me to pick up with this book.
I am enjoying the book and for some reason I like Shel. The anger part would be hard to handle in a close relationship. (I am a girl and often look at the book's male characters and wonder what they would be like as boyfriends or guy friends.). Looking forward to see how it plays out. (3/6/16)

[Mark · Rating 5 out of 5]

Awesome ending to this series. Loved everything about them, and am glad I read them a second time.
This one may be the best of the three, and centered more on one of my favorites on the team: Shelton.

[Bree · Rating 4 out of 5]

Great book. I did enjoy this even tho it didn't have any romance in the story. Shel, a NCIS officer investigates a carjacking. They have finally found suspect bobby lee grant. In being in bobby shel has to shot him dead. Bobby father, victor a notorious criminal is out for shel blood.

[Eva · Rating 4 out of 5]

My favorite of the NCIS series so far...

[Annie · Rating 5 out of 5]

Good Book

[Cindy · Rating 4 out of 5]

Great conclusion to the series. I loved these books.

[Sharon · Rating 3 out of 5]

I'd like to see more from this author in the NCIS series. I feel like there is so much more to discover about some of the characters.

[Charlotte · Rating 4 out of 5]

I liked how Shel's father was cleared at the end and how he escaped the ambush at his house.

[Nicole · Rating 4 out of 5]

I enjoyed the series, and this one was just as good as the first two. Loved the action/adventure for a Christian point of veiw. LOVED THE DOG!

[Quin · Rating 5 out of 5]

Hands down, page turner!