Raw Desire

Raw #1

by P.J. Chase

Julie King has a thing for bad boys. So when a hunky MMA fighter takes an interest in her, she falls for him hard. But has she gotten in over her head? Note: This is a prequel short story. Also check out the full length novel follow up "Raw Passion" and "Going Long 4 Book Boxed Set."

Genres: Fighters, Romance, Short Stories, Contemporary Romance

17 pages, Kindle Edition

First published December 7, 2013

About the author

Hi there. I'm sports romance writer PJ Chase. I write underdog love stories about my favorite sports--football, baseball, hockey, and MMA.

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Reviews

[Deborah · Rating 1 out of 5]

I know this was a short story a prequel to Raw Passion but I struggled since I found it difficult to find anything likeable about the two main characters. Trent, ok we're not really supposed to like him but Julie didn't come off as any better, shallow and a bit of a gold digger, I even read the sample of Raw Passion hoping I could find something there but although I liked Colin I still struggled with Julie so I'll give it a miss.

[Kelly/yllektra · Rating 2 out of 5]

I think this could have been better if it were a longer book. It deducted a lot the way it kind of presented everything so fast.

I also thought the repetition of names was distracting, or maybe it was my copy - granted it must have been long on my pc but it was weird.

On the other hand, the characters and plot were nice and you cared what happened to them.

[Lizzie · Rating 1 out of 5]

Stupid stupid stupid If the author had issues she needed to air out, she should have gone to church. This was a waste of time space and effort on my part. Tell me a story, not your ridiculous confessional. Doesnt even desere one star.

[Katie · Rating 1 out of 5]

short read. didn't enjoy it.

[Lisa Gemmell · Rating 1 out of 5]

disappointment

[Laquever Fryar · Rating 2 out of 5]

Boring

this book was boring I had to fight from going to sleep the cover was more interesting then the book ....

[Raine · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was a short read, probably a prequel to the actual story where she ends up with someone else in the next book(?).

[Azra tariq · Rating 3 out of 5]

Ok