I seem to be the odd one out here. So far, everyone has rated The Consultant pretty highly.
One of my least favourite things to do is to give a book a bad review, especially when it comes to a Goodreads Giveaway as I’m always grateful to receive a free copy of a novel. It’s unfortunate, but it got to the point where my mother told me that she couldn’t wait for me to finish the book. It wasn’t because she wanted to read the novel, it was because she wanted my frustrated complaints to stop.
In all honesty, this novel took me a lot longer to read than it should have, and I blame that on the notes I was taking. I ended up stopping every couple of pages to write down something that I didn’t like or something that I felt didn’t fit the story. And by the end of the book, I had 10 pages of notes, but I'll try to keep this review short.
Something that really bothered me was inconsistencies in character choices. One big one was when Ian agreed to do the RIA auditing job, and this was after being told that the client only pays by cash or by transferring money into a foreign bank account. This is a BIG red flag for someone who works in the financial industry.
There is this thing my family says when we come across something in a storyline that is completely illogical. We scrunch up our faces staring at the TV or book trying to figure out why the writer wanted that particular thing to happen. After some thought, with no logical answer, we throw our hands up in the air and say “moves the story forward”. Saying this doesn't make the problem better, but it helps us move past the ridiculousness of it. This is exactly what I did when Ian’s decided to take an obviously seedy job.
Another major thing that bothered me in The Consultant was the relationship between Ian and Kyla. Their relationship felt forced and they fall in love almost immediately. Now, I'm not saying that love at first sight doesn’t exist, but I see so many problems with their “budding” relationship.
Ian met Kyla on a train, and when they parted, he said he would call her. But he didn't. It was weeks later when he next spoke to her after randomly running into her at a coffee shop. When they left the coffee shop, she brought this complete stranger home for an entire weekend.
At the end of their weekend together, they decided to spend the next weekend with each other, but Ian doesn't show.
Kyla is shocked and thinks that it is out of character for Ian to bail and not show up. That was the point when I cried out in disbelief and thought, “Is this girl stupid? I thought she was a profiler?” So far in their relationship, Ian has only shown her this side of himself. That is the extent of their relationship before Ian stands her up, and yet somehow she doesn’t understand why he has randomly disappeared without a word.
There was one scene in the Consultant that I quite enjoyed. It was a flashback telling us the events that pushed Ian to move away from Glasgow shortly after finishing his degree. This scene was exciting.
I wish the characters were a little more consistent in their speech patterns, I found the language didn't always fit the characters. I also found I couldn’t get into the story because there was too much of ‘this is what the character is doing and this is where he is going’ instead of making us feel like we are experiencing these events with the characters. So, more telling than showing. I’m sorry to say that I didn’t enjoy The Consultant.
Edit: After this review was posted, the author wrote a scathing blog post about me titled "The Banality of Artistic Critique"...he seems nice...