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352 pages, Hardcover
First published April 17, 2008
When writing this Percy Jackson reminiscent (e.g., The Lightning Thief) juvenile supernatural action-adventure story, what were the odds major minor character Alexander Hamilton would become the hottest ticket on the planet due to Lin Manuel Miranda's Broadway show for the ages? Spoilers, Hamilton shares the stage with an Olympus of New York historical royalty who provide a backdrop against which our young heroes / reader stand-ins operate. All the basic elements are here: shortcut worldbuilding using preestablished characters (famous New Yorkers), Wall Street bankers as the bad guys (although there are a lot of antagonists), a chosen one (Rory), a damsel in distress (his sister), and a long series of tunnels and hallways with traps that must be overcome. The story feels both inventive and familiar. At 352 dense pages, it also feels a little much given the story it tells.
The writing crams in a lot of ground in a given chapter and more than once you wonder why Mebus didn't leave it at the cliffhanger and then pick up next chapter. Some scale issues annoy particularly with Fritz - the warrior cockroach (Thewestchestarian is not making that up) - who contributes to conversations with full-sized humans from the back of either a rat or mouse. How did they hear him from 3 inches from the ground? How did he manage not to get stepped on? Speaking of conversations, scenes, where the titular deities kick around decisions, involve so many speakers (Lincoln, Hamilton, Stuyvesant, Burr, Hex, etc.) it is hard to keep track of who said what. There's also a frequent "book-y" feel to the proceedings at times such as when 4 people float through a series of tunnels on a dead alligator (as one does).
In short, a decent, thick, story for the tween / teen male demo.