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320 pages, Mass Market Paperback
First published July 1, 2014
AMAZON
DNF @ 59%
The Red Bikini starts off quite interesting with Giselle and Fin's encounter. However, the execution of Giselle and Fin's story did not work for me.
1. It has too much superfluous descriptions. The prose has a one line dialogue, followed by paragraphs of monologues or narrations, and then followed by another one line dialogue with paragraphs of monologues or narrations afterward. It isn't always like this but the majority of it is and it grew very tiresome.
2. There is NO DEVELOPMENT. For the 59% that I read, the characters just push and pull, and rinse/repeat. I really expect that by 50%, there's some progression to the plot or characters in respect to the problems presented. But alas, it's one of those stories where the two main romantic characters just spend the majority of the book pushing away each other but they only get together at the end.
I prefer reading romance novels that actually spend most of the story on the actual romance, rather than not romance. When I realized that the story is just going to meander and skirt around without any romantic development, I just gave up. I especially hate reading stories with characters that do everything in their power to push each other away for silly reasons.
If the above isn't your pet peeves, then it will be a good read. Personally, it was a very slow and frustrating read.