Breeding the Babysitter

Forbidden Daddies

by Jade Swallow

After my bitter divorce, I never thought I’d find love again. But one look at my hot, young babysitter, Lexi, and I’m instantly falling. Not only is she caring, but she tempts me at every turn with her short skirts and pouty mouth. One rainy night, our attraction boils over and I find out that she feels the same way about me. Now, we’re having fun, unprotected times all over the house. She wants me to breed her and call me daddy. There’s nothing I want more than to marry her and put a baby in her young, fertile body. And once she’s pregnant, and filled with delicious cream, the fun times continue. This smutty, insta-love novella features a huge age gap, a dominant daddy, lots of baby-making action, milking, spanking, and fun, public times with a bump. It has absolutely no plot. If you are looking for a good, steamy time, one click to buy now.

Genres: Smut, Novella, Romance, Erotica, Contemporary Romance, Contemporary, M F Romance

66 pages, Kindle Edition

Published July 26, 2023

About the author

Jade Swallow is an author of super steamy books. She loves reading and writing filthy tales featuring all kinds of kinks. Follow her on Amazon for upcoming books.

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Reviews

[Caitlynne · Rating 1 out of 5]

I don’t even know why I read this. It’s written terribly. The tenses are everywhere. There’s issues with punctuation. At the beginning of the first chapter she says “her twenty-one year old self” and then 2 pages later she’s 18 and graduating high school? But is telling the man about “college times”?? So confusing. Nothing made sense. The sexy scenes were the same thing over and over.

Honestly 1 star because it made me laugh and kept me busy for an hour

[Izzah ꒰Duchess of Cabria ಇ ⭑✧ ᴏɴ ᴘᴀᴛʀᴇᴏɴ ✧ ⋆꒱ · Rating 2 out of 5]

Really scraping the bottom of the barrel here...

There's not much I ask from erotica. Continuity really is the bare minimum.

At one point she's graduation high school, but at another it's university.
At one point she's 18 at another she's 20(? or maybe 21?)
At one point they are standing, but then they are lying down.

Am I being too picky?

The kinks delivered at least...
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🕮⋆˚࿔✎𓂃 𝐣𝐨𝐢𝐧 𝐦𝐲 𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐦𝐮𝐧𝐢𝐭𝐲 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐦𝐨𝐫𝐞 𝐫𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰𝐬
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[CriSsStina · Rating 1 out of 5]

Extra 0.5 ⭐️ for the entertainment and the author's name 😂😂.

DNF at 58%

This is definitely some sort of experiment or something like that 🛸 because I have never seen so many mistakes in so few pages. The contradictions made me chuckle so many times. Even if you do not have an editor, some of the errors are so obvious. Some are even on the same page!! It's so easy to observe them. And fix them! The biggest ones were mentioned in so many reviews.

Anyway, no plot, pure smut (and not very good actually, the "g spot" term is used 7 times in 58 pages, ma'am, just stop with the repetition), age gap, nanny / daddy, 🍞ing, so on, so on, so on.

Also, I get the kink of being at risk of being caught while doing naughty things, but not by your 4 year old!!! Wtf was that!?? 🤡 😨

[Marmom · Rating 1 out of 5]

the wording was …weird? Issues with past and present tense. Little things like using ‘more’ instead of ‘most’. ‘Them’ instead of ‘it’ and vice versa. One sentence she’s in high school, the next she’s in college. The word juice/juicy/juices was used 21 times in a 58 page book. Seed was used 13 times. He kept calling her his “babysitter wife “. The author repeatedly called her womb her stomach. The repetition was distracting. Worst line in the book “I heard my cherry pop”. Umm, I’m not sure that’s normal, sweetie. That entire first sex scene was a goldmine of WTFery. Another gem: “get on your hands and legs”. The scene in the park at the end creeped me out.

[Jen ♥]

the title says it all 🤭

[Jessie ツ]

😊cute & wholesome tale of well…”breeding the babysitter”

[Morgan Taylor · Rating 1 out of 5]

I’m glad this was only 61 pages..I couldn’t handle much else this was honestly terrible, it was all over the place! I could’ve wrote something better and I don’t even write 😂 got this on stuff your kindle day…😳

[Andria Potter · Rating 2 out of 5]

Just not for me. 2.5 ⭐

[Brittany · Rating 1 out of 5]

I read this purely for it being free on Stuff Your Kindle Day.

There are so many things wrong with this book:
- It needs an editor. Period.
- So many inconsistencies, namely the FMC's age, but that can be because there is no plot
- The guy is a billionaire, but how? what does he do? etc
- We are told NOTHING about the babysitter/wife outside the bedroom
- ZERO plot
- The author has to be a virgin.
- The author has ZERO knowledge of anatomy and mechanics of spicy stuff
- I really think the author is male that has never been with a woman.

Don't waste your time with this book. Even the spicy stuff is unsatisfying and cringe worthy.

[Dallas · Rating 1 out of 5]

The number of words and phrases in this book that disturbed me was astounding. The worst 58 pages I think I could ever endure.

[Alison is probably reading smut · Rating 5 out of 5]

I may have found a new kink that I didn't even know I had LMAO. Is it bad I liked this story as much as I did? The whole book was nothing but spice, which is exactly what I needed I guess. Quick and easy read with just a little cringe.

[BelleLovesRomance · Rating 3 out of 5]

⭐️ 3/5 🌶️ 4/5

This was one of those reads that had me cringing and rolling my eyes... but also fanning myself and refusing to put it down. The writing style felt a bit immature and overly silly at times, and the pacing was all over the place—super jumpy with very little buildup. It gave strong “tell not show” energy, which made it hard to fully connect with the characters or their relationship. 😬

That said, I stuck with it because hello, hot rich single Daddy + sexy young babysitter + Daddy kink? Yeah, I wasn’t walking away from that. The spice was definitely there—explicit, intense, and dripping with every trope you can think of: age gap, insta-love, breeding, found family, and even lactation/ANR. It’s a short ride, but one hell of a filthy one. 🥵

If you’re in the mood for something smutty and fast with zero subtlety and a whole lotta heat, this might hit the spot... just don’t go in expecting smooth storytelling or depth. 💀

🤰🏼 MF contemporary romance
🤰🏼 Rich single dad employer x babysitter
🤰🏼 Age gap (24 years)
🤰🏼 Daddy kink
🤰🏼 Virgin FMC
🤰🏼 Insta-love
🤰🏼 Lactation kink
🤰🏼 Breeding kink (with pregnancies and babies)
🤰🏼 Public and semi-public sneaky sexual acts 🔥
🤰🏼 Mild degradation
🤰🏼 Low-angst, sweet, steamy
🤰🏼 HEA
🤰🏼 Epilogue

[vixen ‹𝟹 reads · Rating 3 out of 5]

3 ⭐️

✞ 𝚝𝚛𝚘𝚙𝚎𝚜 ✞
• age gap • boss/employee • babysitter • silver fox • single dad • billionaire • 21 & 45 • divorced MMC •

✞ 𝚜𝚙𝚒𝚌𝚎𝚜 ✞
• lactation ink • breading ink • daddy ink • instalust • fast burn • saving her first • dirty talk • snuggles • sneaky thrills • seed stuffing •

✞ 𝚝𝚑𝚒𝚗𝚐𝚜 𝚝𝚘 𝚗𝚘𝚝𝚎 ✞
• stuff your kindle day •

𝐭𝐲𝐩𝐞: novella
𝐠𝐞𝐧𝐫𝐞: erotica romance
𝐜𝐨𝐮𝐩𝐥𝐞: Lexi & Mark

[Karjaes.books · Rating 1 out of 5]

I had to DNF it at 70%. I really tried I kept reading little chapters taking long breaks the book is less than 70 pages and I couldn’t even get through it. I’m sorry and the amount of times I read fertile womb is crazy.

[dais · Rating 3 out of 5]

Lord forgive me for the filth I just read.

💦Age Gap
💦Nanny/Single Dad
💦Breeding
💦Lactating Kink
💦Public Play
💦Pure Smutty Filth
💦Daddy Kink

[Amanda · Rating 3 out of 5]

Don’t mind me just catching up on some light reading

[Mili Teveez · Rating 1 out of 5]

para que leí esto diooos

[MaKeedah · Rating 1 out of 5]

This is a Wattpad short

There is no plot. Not the plot is weak or forgotten halfway through. There is no story. It reads like a collection of journal entries but the only thing they did each day was have sx.
Also it reads like daddy/daughter and have me the ick

[The Book Palace · Rating 2 out of 5]

the writing. oh boy... it was so inconsistent, usually reading these novellas i dont really care since it's just for a smutty good time but when you said the heroine is 21 but the next page saying she just turned 18 and finishing high school? Or the fact that she "put her mug in the dishwasher" then the next sentence, she puts her mug aside on the coffee table? 🤣 i can't. there were more craziness like this

-taboo novella
-trope: nanny/single dad, age gap of 27 (18 heroine/45 hero), hot billionaire pepper hero
-kink: daddy, breeding, lactating, lots of fluids, public, spanking, degradation/praise

[Holly · Rating 1 out of 5]

This book is great if you’re looking for one that is a whistle stop tour of a relationship and is straightforward. This novella is exactly what it sounds like on the content warning page – an age gap romance with a heap of kinks. It’s over the top and a quick read (took me 30mins) and whilst I’m no stranger to books that favour smut over plot this wasn’t worth the time it took to read, and I should have paid attention to the mention of potential typos and grammatical errors in the content warning page as another reason to skip it. Could be one for you but it was not one for me.

[Lady Raven Books · Rating 1 out of 5]

DNF

I couldn’t finish this. Within the first chapter she says she is 21. Then she’s in high school and 18. It opens with him asking her if she’s the babysitter to her doing it for months. This is confusing. Got this for free during the 2400 free books. Glad I spent no money for it. Don’t waste your time.

[Carmens.library · Rating 3 out of 5]

I was reaching a reading slump and found this! 😊

[LK · Rating 3 out of 5]

b a s i c s :
short n spicy dual pov
could use some editing but was still hot. would reread

e n d e a r m e n t s :
♥︎ baby girl
♡ Daddy

s h e l v e s :
age gap (45H/18h)
alpha
instalust
nanny
single dads
single parent
virgin h

k i n k s :
breeding
cervix / womb talk
daddy
dick on clit
in public
>dressing room
>on a park bench while their kids play 💀😂
milk
pussy humping
tss

e n d i n g :
HEA w 3 babies

p l o t :
There are some annoying inconsistencies.
Lexi starts off by saying she’s 21 years old but then she says she just turned 18 and is going to graduate high school this year.

Then Mark is all like “what are your plans for the future? If you want to go to college I’ll pay for it.” Then he starts talking about the time he’s spend w Lexi just talking and eating cookies with her telling him stories about college life. What????

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But besiiiiiiiides that. The spice was hot. Lexi and Mark have the hots for each other immediately. They start to fuck and never stop and Mark is like hey let’s get married AND pregnant. And they do. The end.

h o t c l i p s:
“Don’t close your legs,” he commanded. “I want to see your beautiful, glistening pussy when I undress. Daddy likes to see where his cock is going to be.”

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I let him have his way with my body, to touch and own every inch of my skin. His hands played with my breasts, pinching my nipple, squeezing and bouncing my boobs.

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His hips thrust harder. I heard my cherry pop and then, I was filled to bursting. Mark was seated balls deep in my cunt. My channel quivered around his big daddy cock. The short moment of pain was overcome by the sensation of him filling me, of his big hands all over my tits, my hips, gripping my thighs, squeezing my ass, making me feel like a woman. His woman.

The stretch was still uncomfortable, but it felt so warm and right to be filled,

[Caitlin · Rating 2 out of 5]

I don't even need to do a quick and quippy synopsis. The title is exactly what it's about.

This was my pick of the month to satisfy my smut curiosity. And babes... at least it got the smut *mostly* right? On a spiciness scale, I'd give it 🌶🌶🌶, but if I could do half a pepper and give it 2.5, I would. The only reason it's not higher is because of the lack of continuity. Details were lacking in consistency, which left me as a reader going "wait... she's where, and he's doing what now?"

As per usual, you don't read this for quality. In the trigger section, it even highlighted how typos were present (cute that you highlighted that as a trigger tbh). The details in the story seemed to change as the author got new ideas. Proofreading, kids. It's this whole big thing, and it's amazing.

Pros: Nailed the kinks (pun intended), and the author's name made me giggle.

Cons: See above.

[Jay Daily Reads · Rating 2 out of 5]

Despite the messy writing, this novella definitely delivers on what it promises — it’s unapologetically an age gap pregnancy erotica. It leans hard into its niche with plenty of “daddy,” breeding, and taboo fantasy themes, so if that’s what you’re looking for, you’ll find exactly that.

That said, the writing itself really struggled. The tenses jumped all over the place, punctuation was inconsistent, and the character’s age kept changing — she’s 21 at one point, 18 the next, and somehow also talking about college? The timeline made no sense, and the scenes often contradicted themselves. The spicy moments, while on theme, became repetitive after a while.

I’ll give it credit for knowing its audience and sticking to its niche. Continuity would’ve gone a long way in making it more enjoyable — but if all you’re here for is the specific kink content, it does exactly what it says it will.

[Kiley · Rating 2 out of 5]

Breeding the Babysitter, part of the Forbidden Daddies series, was about 45-year-old Mark Adams and 18-year-old Lexi, a senior in high school.

A year after Mark's divorce, he hired Lexi to be the babysitter for his 4-year-old son, Leo. She fell in love with both at first sight. Mark fell in love as well, but it took several months before either of them said or did anything about it.

This was a short, simple novella with no angst, no drama, and a lot of spiciness. There wasn't any emotional rollercoaster, and there was no push/pull between the two main characters. Everything just moved smoothly along like a well-oiled machine, and was over almost before it began. This made for a very boring, very underwhelming story that only earned a two-star rating. It just needed more oomph.

[Nelitmillan · Rating 4 out of 5]

Reseña

La verdad el libro me pareció muy bueno cortico extremadamente picante me encanta estos libros que tiene este cantidades elevada pero no tampoco tiene una trama algo llamativa pero sin duda es un libro que se disfruta
Me gustan los libros de este juego de roles cuando lo llaman papá soy fan de estos libros.
Relación que tiene estos dos protagonistas se me hicieron a la de tierno y a la vez muy explosivo como dije no es un libro que tenga una trama tan llamativa qué te va a dejar un conocimiento o algo por el estilo pero si te gusta este tipo de libro si usted seguramente se va a disfrutar.

[Gayle · Rating 3 out of 5]

I got this in the Stuff you Kindle sales and I was reading the blurb and was just like okay,,,, kinda funky let's try it-
I need to know what I actually read.
Cause this is so all over the place- i feel like im in a crazy 2018 Wattpad story. My first issue was that age. "Going on 21" *proceeds to say she is 18* The writing was way to fast pased that it didn't make any sense in most places.
I will say the spice was pretty okay though. Except the foot. That was... That was bad. Kinda got a little freaked out by that.
There were some kinda wholesome spots that were well written.
Overall though this book was just,, kinda a mess.

[Onyx Night · Rating 3 out of 5]

The smut was 8/10 and fast paced. There was definitely no waiting. But I was left hungry to any character build or emotional attachment to the characters.
It starts out slower (even though still fast) and the final few 'chapters' felt like I was fast forwarding WAY too fast and left me hungry to more details and more time with the characters.
I would read it again just for the smut content, but story line is definitely lacking and not super well edited with many errors.
A GREAT book for a quick read though!

[Brandan WH · Rating 3 out of 5]

Older daddy and his young nanny

You first need to be prepared for a lot of inconsistencies in the book. The author warns of that in the prologue. There are changes in her age within the first chapter and even confusion (?) on what year she is in school. Suffice it to say, she’s of legal age with “daddy” fetish. He’s definitely of age with a breeding, not nanny kink. They’re perfect together!
Some of the sentences/scenes are laughable but it’s still a sexy book. This isn’t my kink but the author definitely knows how to write a hot scene.