There are some things a woman should know before attempting to write a Scarlet Pimpernel pastiche, namely the difference between a Girondin and a Jacobin.
There are many more things one should know before attempting to write a novel discussing the ethics of the first French revolution. For example:
1. The lead-up to the French Revolution, such as increasingly Republican sentiment, the Frondes, the Estates General, etc.
2. How several causes célèbres of the Revolution involved abuses of nobles - for example, the Affaire Sanois.
3. What a 'cause célèbre' is.
4. How to write a single likable character.
I'm sure that Dogman really did research at least a few of these things, however, it didn't come across in her text. Her 'Notes On the French Revolution' are... well, my elementary school notes were a great deal better, more thorough, and more correct than that. No, the National Assembly was not exclusively made up of commoners; no, the August Decrees did not end feudalism!
With the final note that Lafayette wrote the first draft of the Declaration of the Rights of Man, I will move on from this, for now, and go to the characters.
The main character is... less annoying that expected, as is the portrayal of Blakeney (so far). She's still a rather irritating caricature.
The first vampire is described quite subtly and effectively , and if it wasn't being awkwardly used to support mass murder, it would be very cool.
Extra notes: the Tumblr capitalization in the intro Does Not Work. This is a attempt at a serious essay.
The character guide is actually greatly appreciated, though if a character isn't important enough to give a individual line, move their index to the back or cut them out entirely.
She references Oliver Cromwell positively, so I see we're now two for two on praising genocidal authoritarians.