I'm not sure I want to be the only 2-star review here, as I still enjoyed my time with this book. I like Darren a lot, as an author and a person (well inasmuch as I see his many social media posts). Frequently, his books' short lengths are one of the best things about them - they're focused, fun, and have a constant stream of ideas. But with this one, I found myself wishing it were longer. The first half, or even a little more, of the book familiarizes you with this world, and it needs to do that because the world is so alien to the one we live in now - we often get dystopian futures where there is ONE major weird thing about society, or where there is a general authoritarianism that permeates everything...We don't as often see worlds that have gone through centuries of change to become something we barely recognize. I'm reminded of the Zager and Evans song "in the year 2525" and the lyric "In the year 5555, Your arms hangin' limp at your sides, Your legs got nothin' to do, Some machine's doin' that for you". The people in Father's Future aren't quite immobile, but in many ways, they are.
I got pretty excited for what was going to happen when Cassique learned whatever horrible truth there was to learn and then rebelled against Father. And I had a feeling this wouldn't quite happen in the ways that I expected, but, I still wasn't very satisfied with what I got. The rebellion is very short and much of it is skipped and described as if it's after-the-fact. I would have liked to see more planning there. They come upon the truth of things very easily and the only resistance they meet is the resistance they plan to meet. I don't need the horrible truth to be extra horrible, but I would have liked to have seen more conflict and learned more about the way Father actually "thinks", what his goals are, and maybe some stories of other times people had tried to go against him. I don't mind the book ending largely in a question mark, but I do mind it seeming like it was really rushing to end on a punchline. It was a pretty good punchline, but still. So, I just wish there was more of the book, really. I think we could have had the different sort of sci-fi this is, and a more conventional sort of sci-fi with more "action", in the same book.
But, because the book IS short, I don't feel so bad about it Maybe I should be thankful it's not longer, but I wouldn't mind seeing Shan try a longer story.