I have enjoyed this series immensely.
I wonder if this is the final book to the series. It doest say that in the description, like most authors would do but the wording in the book definitely seems like it’s implying that and there’s an outtake from a new series that’s supposed to be a spin-off from this one—great, great grandson of Lux, along with Anna, who’s bored with the aging Lux, and they want to head out and find new aliens and have their ow adventures. When I looked at it, the book “Outlier” was released in I think January 2022. It was supposed to be a series but there is only one book. So I don’t think I’ll read that unless there will be more to follow and in a timely manner.
I enjoy Mr Pence style of writing. He’s very creative and certainly good at creating a world in which to place his characters. The characters are a joy and have come a long way from Lux’s basement bedroom/game room where Anna came to be sentient and a true friend to Lux and Prissy. She really is the reason the characters have been able to do so much and save worlds and species throughout space. She’s pretty incredible.
At the end of the book, Mr Pence self evaluates, and in his own words, acknowledges his editing errors but asks us to not let those stop us from writing a review. I try very hard to leave reviews because the authors appreciate them and I think it helps in some algorithm onAmazon (that’s a guess. Thinking it might be like TikTok or something lol) Plus, as a consumer, I appreciate reviews that people make to give us an unbiased opinion. Anyway, I appreciate his writing and storytelling despite those errors and his wonky sentences that show up sometimes. Be forewarned, there are quite a few editing sna-foo’s but again, it’s worth the read.
I would suggest to the author that he find some trusted readers who could act as AR (Advanced Readers) or BR’s (Beta Readers). Good bR’s will catch those misspelled, duplicate or missing words and some will be able to catch the wonky sentences and help you to fix them. Giving them access chapter by chapter is a better choice if you’re one of those writers that is writing clear up to the release date. This way, at least most of the book would have been somewhat edited with corrections before release. If you found a person really good at spotting those Salk errors but also really good at enhancing your sentences, then bring them in as an AR and they can help you from the beginning. You just have to be sure to give the time to do their magic too. It can be a great experience for both people.
In a situation like this, where the book is already released then I usually still do edits while I’m reading a book, (I can’t help it!😉) sending corrections, options through the kindle Notes section that will email them to the writer. My kindle is broken, thus I’m using my iPhone which the kindle app does not allow access to that portion for some reason. So I simply placed my comments in the highlighted Notes section of the book. I’m guessing the author has access to those so I’m hoping they will help with some options, if he wants them. Then he can delete those notes. If not, I could probably send them to an email.
Just an offer.
I’m hoping our storyline is not an end but it feels like it is.