The biggest problem... Darcy is a Mary-Sue. She has little personality but is the subject of the affections of not one, not two, but four handsome, werewolf princes who all want her as their mate. Not individually, but to share. Does this cause any tension or any jealousy amongst the men? Of course not.
She is trained in weapons throughout her life by a legendary wizard character who masquerades as her father’s horse master. Couldn’t someone like this be off doing more important things you ask? Well, probably. The question is never brought up, but if it were I’m sure Nordred would have to explain just how much more important Darcy is than everyone else in the world, just like her simps…, I mean ‘mates’ do all the damn time. Frankly I’m surprised that she even needs training. By the time she actually has to use it she’s already gained powers beyond everyone else’s ability anyway.
You know how to tell a good character from the bad ones in this book? All the good characters instantly love her and all the bad ones instantly hate her. Nothing is earnt with Darcy, everything is given including respect. The princes want her because you know ‘fated mates’, any obstacle she encounters she overcomes with ease, anything anyone else can do she can do better. She never loses, has to go back to the drawing board, learn from mistakes or question herself in anyway. She basically winds up at the end of the book the same person she was at the beginning but with her god given powers unlocked.
I think the reason for all of this is that she has no motivation of her own, no goals or objectives, no higher purpose to strive for. Destiny calls on her, quite literally, from ‘The Maiden’ herself and Nordred telling her she will be queen one day, and other than being surprised she has no other reaction, no doubts, no fears, nothing approximating a normal reaction. I mean, she is being told she will quite literally be the queen of an entire country which she has lived in for less than a month and knows nothing about and she’s basically fine with it.
We are constantly told things about Darcy rather than shown them, mainly by her ‘mates’, who when they do venture to provide some explanation it’s a weak one.
Darcy: “So what should a warg mate be like?”
Axe, I think: “She should be fierce and strong. And taking down that stag all by yourself qualifies you there” – She shot it with a bow and arrow, big whoop!
To try and actually give Darcy some character this book is filled with constant jabs at men for their oppression of women and they are made so often and so on the nose that you can tell that the author is trying to make some sort of statement here. But the problem for me is this is a fantasy world that the author has created, it doesn’t have to be this way. I get it is based off medieval society but its hard to say that men as a whole had it better than women. Life in the past was pretty shit for everyone apart from the few people who happened to be of the ruling class. But the book doesn’t specifically refer to them, no, its ‘men’ as a whole. And this is such a hypocritical point to make given Gael’s story and that they come by a village where all the men are dead having tried to defend it from Reavers, their sacrifice allowing them to save some of the women and children. But no, we are constantly reminded that men are the real problem. And it doesn’t make for a strong female character to have her complain about it so frequently.
Nothing is aided by the side characters either. The bad guys are such generic bad guys with absolutely no depth (that is expressed in this book at least). The issue here is that the hero is a reflection of the villain they overcome and these ones don’t do anything that makes either you as the reader or Darcy question whether or not it is the right thing to overthrow them. No bad guy causes her to lose, challenges her, makes her question herself, or grow, resulting in Darcy's victories having little to no personal significance.
The wolf princes aren’t much better. They do have some character of their own, although initially it was hard to distinguish between them. A romantic interest is supposed to be the part of the heroin they didn’t know they needed, the part that challenges them, shows them things about themself that they didn’t even know. Despite there being four of them, none of them do this, other than sexually. The reason they want to be with her over every other woman isn’t because of any trait she possesses but because of the fated mate trope. Like the book does us, rather than showing Darcy things about herself, they tell her. Constantly. Their affection for her, and her for them for that matter, is purely inspired by attraction. If you imagined that they took a drug that made them madly attracted to each other, the effect is the same. Their romance comes across totally superficial. I’m not convinced how much they actually cared for Darcy either, because all they seemed to care about initially and throughout was possessing her. Here’s a pretty funny quote that sums it up.
Darcy: “what do you know of a human woman’s needs?”
Dane, I think: “We’ll need to learn more about that once we get on the road”. This isn’t even taken out of context.
Nordred her mentor is another cardboard cutout character. He acts like a wise old mentor but offers little in the way of anything approximating wisdom. There is one funny scene when Darcy is challenged by one of the queens handmaids, or whatever, and while everyone is questioning whether Darcy actually has to fight her Nordred just appears and is like ‘She’ll do it!’. That made me laugh. The ‘No’ in Nordred is for no fucks given!
Logical consistency is another weak point. If Strelae is such a nice place for women to live, why do any women live in Grania? If the wolf-shifters are so powerful, how did Grania ever establish itself? Why does Darcy, who is very pro-women say “made him rethink treating me like some wench”? Why has her father never tried to sell her off, or marry her to someone for his benefit before?
At the beginning, why does Darcy never consider consequences to being insubordinate to her fiances'? This could affect the treaty the princes make with the duke, which is especially important since the priests tell us later Strelan iron could be used to protect people. Some martyr-like noble purpose could be derived from this on Darcy's part, but it's not. None of these questions have clear answers.
Honestly, I could continue, I have pages of notes and a thousand quotes from the book which are totally contradictory to what we know about the character and the narrative, but this is already too long. I feel like this book did get slightly better as it went on but not much. Given the glacially slow pacing, weak romance, lack of action, and poor characters, the only reason to read on is for the sexual tension but its not worth it. At the end of the day I ask, was this a story that meant anything, that needed telling? Frankly, it wasn’t.
I don't mean for this to read as harshly as it probably does. I wish I could give it more than one star, but I just can’t. The average rating of this book is 4.55, putting it in the region of the hunger games, or Harry potter, or ASoIaF books, above in most cases, and it is nowhere near that standard.