Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for the eARC! All opinions are my own.
This was a… time. I was intrigued with the plot of the book (okay, and the cover, absolutely gorgeous!). A strange message left behind the alleyway of Gwendolyn's workplace? A mystery that needed to be solved with her enemy of sorts? Sounds fun to me, especially with autumn (or fall, whichever you prefer) coming in soon! I, unfortunately, did not get the witchy vibes that I wanted. I got something else entirely.
I had a few issues with this book, but one of the big ones being Graham, the MMC. Graham is very much an alpha male character. Some of his behavior in the book was toxic and a little concerning to read about, such as telling Gwen she can't go certain places, making himself a copy of Gwen's key without her permission, and not taking her home when she specifically requested him to do so. I found this a bit concerning to read about and almost DNF'd the book, to be honest.
Another issue I want to highlight is (slight spoilers ahead) at around 10%, the author goes into heavy detail about how Gwendolyn (age 10), the protagonist, and Graham (age 15) meet. Gwen discloses that she had a crush on Graham, which isn’t out there for a 10 year old to have a crush on a teenager (it makes her a little fleshed out; one of her more humane moments). There's an incident with her stepping on a sea urchin and Graham, the lifeguard at the time, helped her out and her called her by a nickname. Three years pass and then Gwen (13) meets Graham again (18) at a restaurant. He acknowledges her by calling her the nickname again, letting us, the readers, know that he hasn't forgotten about her, despite her being only 13. Gwendolyn acknowledges that she has changed (because you obviously change from being a preteen to a teen), and she said previously after that incident that he hasn't acknowledged her in any way after the sea urchin incident. I found this scene a little uncomfortable once I read it again (it flew over my head the first time), but it showed me Graham in a different light.
I read on because I was curious to see who was behind the mystery, but I couldn't stand either of the main characters by the 60% mark and had to push myself through it. It was hard to get with the alpha male vibes that Graham was bringing to the table and Gwendolyn wasn't much better. It was difficult to get through, mostly because I wanted more mystery and witchy vibes. Like, I honestly wished Gwendolyn or Graham was a witch or something to play up the atmosphere. Set in Salem, I was expecting something more in line with the occult or modern witchcraft. Something to bring those vibes in.
I will end on a positive note to say that when the book was focused on the mystery and the witchcraft, it was really good. It held my attention, but those moments were far and few in between. This book has the foundation of a good plot, but it felt lost to me with the aimless side quests and the heavy alpha presence. The author definitely knows how to write mystery and suspense, I just wish it was more focused on that.