Wow, am I disappointed. I had this on my Really Excited For shelf, and for the life of me I don't know why. It took me a week and a half to read this, it only had 228 pages! I could have read it in a day or two, if it hadn't been so boring, and it wasn't the only book I had with me over a weekend away from home. =/
I didn't like the story, I didn't like the characters. I don't think I like books in museums, despite the magical qualities they can possess. The story takes place in an unidentified foreign city (London?) in an unidentified era, which really kept throwing me off. I just assumed while reading it took place in older, maybe Victorian times, and then something like headphones or a phone would briefly be mentioned and it would throw me off completely. But then no mention of computers or a cataloging system for the swords? You need a concrete era for your story!
Ophelia was an unlikable character. I didn't like her cold scientific side, always having to calculate everything. I like my magical realism book characters to believe in a little bit of magic. Maybe that's a me thing. Alice was awkwardly groomed to be the sacrifice, but where was the story behind that? Just to give Ophelia a reason to continue helping the Boy? He was an alright character, he had a backstory, but I wasn't interested or emotionally invested in it at all. Losing a finger to be protected by an owl charm? -_- The "story within a story" concept could have been executed better, I found the breaks between Ophelia and the Boy hard to understand, and sometimes hard to discern between the two.
It was sad that the family has lost the mother, and she came in halfway through to start feeding Ophelia advice from beyond the grave, which was odd. Along with the constant counting of exactly how long her mother had been gone, which added nothing to the story. And the emotional scene between Ophelia and her father about missing their mother seemed out of nowhere, with no lead up to it except for "dad has thrown himself into his work and doesn't talk about mom," which I understand would be difficult, but didn't seem like a story plot point besides him always writing off Ophelia and what she had to say about what was going on. But that seems to be the norm for stories like this.
It was glaring obviously that the caretaker was the Snow Queen, but maybe because this is a middle grade novel? I don't know. The Boy just disappearing in the end!? And the family goes back to where they came from and everything is fine again? I don't know.
I feel like there were a lot of things going on for a book so short, and they weren't dealt with or handled properly. Too many story lines, too many things going on with characters that didn't need to be told. I wasn't satisfied at all. Everything about this rubbed me the wrong way, and I really struggled to finish it. I'm hoping the next book I read by Karen Foxlee I'll like a lot better.
FAVOURITE QUOTES
"She said it very pleasantly, as though she were talking about marshmallows or afternoon tea."
"Ophelia didn't consider herself brave, but she was very curious. She was exactly the kind of girl who couldn't walk past a golden keyhole without looking inside."
"They can see the future in puddles and in dewdrops and sometimes even in shiny spoons."
"Anything is possible if you have a plan."
"Our stories make us strong."
"...before educating you in the ways of misery."
"She had expected magic to be simple and tidy, with people disappearing in puffs of smoke - not slowly, by degrees, in a lonely, aching way."
"She ran back up the stairs like someone about to miss a bus."
"The problem with magic was that it made her feel very alone."
"The voice was very deep and very low, and it reminded her of velvet and rolling waves."
"Something magical, from her sad place of frost and snow."