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160 pages, Hardcover
Published July 31, 2023
Ethan's internal monologue is well worth reading, though it takes an effort to cope with a world that is practically invisible. Parents hardly exist. Bullies are merely smashes in the face. Teachers are shadowy presences in the blank spaces of the school. Hospital staff are little more than hands fixing IV lines. Only Alex is presented as a real person, and of course, that is exactly how Ethan's world is. It's a hard world to live in - for the reader, as much as for Ethan.
I appreciate Obsydian's vocabulary, even if some of the words do seem to come from the bottom of the wardrobe. They sometimes don't work at all: Ethan's eyes 'oscillating' between his parents brings an inappropriately comic picture to my mind. Maybe that's just my mind.
The writing does tend to get in the way of the book, though, and I mention two problems: 1. Far too many abstract nouns. 2. Adjectives everywhere, killing off their nouns.
What can be seen, hiding like Ethan, behind the words is well worth reaching for.