Plot
What's the trouble with Marty Wheeler, the Brentwood attorney? Well, actually, the title is deceiving. He has many troubles. Where to begin? He's having sex with the wife of his client. He takes on a pesky new secretary who's in college, is intelligent, attractive, and the daughter of the woman he used to date. There's a bunch of letters being sent to people stirring up trouble, including a previous suspicious death and the subsequent inheritance.
Oh, the web strands are intricate and wind through the stories and side stories. There is a lot going on here. Keep up because this moves fast...well, sort of. The real mystery doesn't start to pick up speed until about a quarter of the way through. There's a lot of build-up and character introduction.
Characters
Blondie - Blonde, smokes, blue eyes, married
Marty Wheeler - attorney, drives a Dodge Challenger, 40, graduated Duquesne University, has a heard, smokes and like cigars
Vanessa martin - Marty's ex girlfriend, has a daughter, green eyes, red hair
Douglas Hughes - Blondie's husband, played football at Pittsburgh U and the NFL
Ollie Yates - 19, attends Duquesne, wears glasses, uses allergy inhaler, Dad runs a gas station
Ballie Martin - Vanessa's daughter, 21, redhead
Edward Taggert - 63, police chief, a bit overweight
There are a few other characters thrown in. The clerks down at the courthouse, another attorney who was an old fling of Marty's. Stephanie Orr. Louie.
All very well presented. I did get a kick out of Bailey's sticking her nose into everything. She had a good role in this.
There is a bit of character development, but the ending really threw everything into the mixer. I would have liked to have seen a little more foreshadowing on the true nature of some of the characters. Some of the revelations at the end were a complete surprise.
Dialogue
Everyone had distinctive voices. I had no issues with identifying who spoke if there were no tag lines.
Writing
The book is divided into titled Parts. A bit of vulgarity in a few F-bombs dropped here and there but nothing major.
The POV is 1st person from Marty in many chapters and 3rd person POV from other characters in other chapters.
Short chapters...and here's where I have a little issue. A lot of the chapters ended in what I thought was the middle of a scene. The next chapter may pick up directly after the last line or thought, but many skipped ahead to later in the day, a day later, or another future time. Sometimes logical follow-up information is given.
The book is written as if Marty is telling the story directly to the reader. I don't have a problem with it other than there's a bit of tense mix-ups even within the same sentence sometimes. It's a bit disconcerting.
We don't learn Marty's name until the third part of the introductory section.
A misspelling - droll should be drool. an instance of a missing quotation mark.
There are a few repeated phrases such as descriptions of people and the "glass houses" phrase.
There were side stories to this book that, while interesting, I wanted more information and/or relevance. For instance, there's a big scene with Ollie being attracted to Bailey at the beginning. Throughout, the two get together, date, maybe kiss, maybe but probably don't have sex. While I like the developing relationship, I didn't get enough of it. There's one scene where Ollie and Bailey are talking to each other and it's mentioned that Bailey slapped Ollie on the last date. What? What happened? That's never explained. Both come to Marty for advice, but it's never shown what he says.
Another side story deals with Russell Finch, who's a well-known author with a new book published. Everyone 's raving about him, but he has no relevance to the story other than being the fascination of Bailey and Stephanie. Recently, I heard the phrase Chekov's Gun. The concept is, if you put a gun in the story, it better be fired later. If it doesn't have importance, people will be disappointed. Why bring it in to do nothing with it? That's what I felt about this Finch person. You don't ever see him, and he and his book play no importance to the overall plot.
Let's talk about these mysterious letters that stir up problems and become the main thrust for the story. The first one is sent to a a retired woman and contains something that accuses the husband of cheating. We never discover what it says...and it doesn't seem to have any relevance to the other letters which do have importance.
These letters deal with the Bradford family. Wife dies in an accident that may be suspicious. There's confusion among the characters about the wills and the inheritance, and the whole thing gets intricate and intriguing.
One issue I have is that Marty gets pretty uptight about these letters at the start even though he's not directly involved, yet. He really overreacts and I didn't see why.
At the end, Taggert, like a stereotypical P.I., brings all of the players together in one room—in a library for some unknown reason—to lay out the case. I'm not going to play spoiler, but, as mentioned before, there are a lot of revelations and major surprises and family connections previously unknown. I like surprises, but these came like a shotgun blast. I think there might have been some clues, hints, or foreshadowing thrown in earlier.
And, Chase played unfair with the reader by not answering one major question. I don't mind finding out who killed who and what shenanigans get thrown into the spotlight, but I'm waiting for the BIG reveal...and Chase doesn't come through.
There's a lot of humor here, light-hearted action and chapters, and I sort of ended up liking Marty despite his faults. I'm torn between two ranks because I have to play fair with some of the issues here. I did enjoy the book, for the most part.
In some martial arts belt systems, there is a Low and a High rank for each color. There might be different names for these such as Recommended and Decided, and there are reasons for two "ranks" within a rank.
I didn't want to work with that type of system here in ranking the books because I thought it might be too complicated for me. But the trouble is, if I give the book a definite rank, it may not be completely justified because of some of the issues, like I've mentioned. So, while I'll give this a Purple Belt, think of it as the lower part of that rank. This book is good and it's part of a series. I wouldn't refuse another story, but there are some issues to work through.