One time entertainer
I was hoping for a more stronger Gauri and Rishab Character... They were good how ever it could have been better or probably my expectations were higher.
In anticipation of building sexual attraction, relationship building became weaker. Some written patterns were getting on my nerves. The author has written an "enemy husband" on every page and sentence. In some of her previous books it was always "fake husband, devil husband ". As a readers we understand the situation in story. No need to highlight that in every sentence. Instead she could have used a Nick name.
I understand the main male protogonist is good, but you need not have to take them to that extreme good in everything. Win/fight between them should be fair and equal. In this he is better than the female main character in archery, horse race, fight and everything. Though I loved she gives back in some ways but it's not enough.