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Bane of Widuri
Melur’s world has always been limited to the gates of Widuri, an 18th century manor in Kedah that houses seven orphaned girls. Each named after a flower, the girls are promised freedom on the night they turn 16 in the form of foster parents.
A garden full of the same seven flowers they are named after sits solemnly behind the manor, but their headmistress, Madam Dahlia, forbids them from entering. On the night before her eldest sister’s 16th birthday, Melur decides to break the rules and steal a flower from the forbidden garden as a present.
Her single action tips her world as she knows it like dominoes, bringing the darkest secrets of Widuri to light one by one.
What happens when the flowers are not what they appear to be? What if there were more like them, and no foster parents are coming to the rescue?
A garden full of the same seven flowers they are named after sits solemnly behind the manor, but their headmistress, Madam Dahlia, forbids them from entering. On the night before her eldest sister’s 16th birthday, Melur decides to break the rules and steal a flower from the forbidden garden as a present.
Her single action tips her world as she knows it like dominoes, bringing the darkest secrets of Widuri to light one by one.
What happens when the flowers are not what they appear to be? What if there were more like them, and no foster parents are coming to the rescue?
128 pages, Paperback
First published August 25, 2023
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December 19, 2023Is it fair for the author to leave herself a review?
The idea behind this book had been in my notes for years, perhaps since 2019 if I’m not mistaken. What started off as a hanahaki disease-based plot turned into an orphanage filled with dark secrets. I drew so much inspiration from Tangled and The Promised Neverland in the process of outlining this story before sending it off to the publisher.
The design of the girls’ chambers was inspired by Barbie and the 12 Dancing Princesses! I loved their room so much, so I thought I’d use the same concept for my Widuri girls. As for the manor as a whole, I can’t help but imagine something like the Haunting of Hill House/Bly Manor, but with only one floor. God bless Mike Flanagan 🫶🏼
Because this is a novella, I was limited to a certain word count and couldn’t expand the characterizations and backstories as much as I wanted to. However, I hope I did a good job portraying these characters clearly.
And because this novella is aimed at a younger audience, I couldn’t go all out with the graphic details of gore or violence which I normally would include in my writing (if the genre allows it). Hopefully its minor horror elements are prominent enough to fuel the gothic themes.
Melur and Wisteria will always have a special place in my heart. These two have carved their own space in my box of characters where the previous ones never really bothered to make themselves stand out.
Anyways, this is probably less a review and more of an observation from me, directed to me. But if you’re reading this, I hope you enjoy Bane of Widuri 🖤
The idea behind this book had been in my notes for years, perhaps since 2019 if I’m not mistaken. What started off as a hanahaki disease-based plot turned into an orphanage filled with dark secrets. I drew so much inspiration from Tangled and The Promised Neverland in the process of outlining this story before sending it off to the publisher.
The design of the girls’ chambers was inspired by Barbie and the 12 Dancing Princesses! I loved their room so much, so I thought I’d use the same concept for my Widuri girls. As for the manor as a whole, I can’t help but imagine something like the Haunting of Hill House/Bly Manor, but with only one floor. God bless Mike Flanagan 🫶🏼
Because this is a novella, I was limited to a certain word count and couldn’t expand the characterizations and backstories as much as I wanted to. However, I hope I did a good job portraying these characters clearly.
And because this novella is aimed at a younger audience, I couldn’t go all out with the graphic details of gore or violence which I normally would include in my writing (if the genre allows it). Hopefully its minor horror elements are prominent enough to fuel the gothic themes.
Melur and Wisteria will always have a special place in my heart. These two have carved their own space in my box of characters where the previous ones never really bothered to make themselves stand out.
Anyways, this is probably less a review and more of an observation from me, directed to me. But if you’re reading this, I hope you enjoy Bane of Widuri 🖤
May 7, 2024
8 orphaned girls. 7 flowers. A forbidden garden. 1 Madam. A gothic manor. Their 16th birthday.
Each girls are named after the seven flowers that bloomed in the garden they are not allowed to be in. Each girls can depart from the manor once they turned 16. With the approaching 16th birthday of Kemboja, their eldest sister, Melur the youngest wants to gift her the same flower that symbolized her sister. But when terrifying & haunting visions clouded her mind the moment she touched the flowers, the buried secrets are quickly unveiled & perhaps, getting out of the Manor is not such an ideal dream after all.
Spinning a tale from the symbolism of flowers was ingenious for how exquisite the writing is. Each flowers beared significance in powers and what they carried, Kemboja, Mawar, Cempaka, Wisteria, Azalea, Iris, Melur.
I devoured horror, i consumed them in brewing potions from gore, haunted house, posession, the psychological horror, the gothic mansion, the witches and their dark arts. When I heard a local Malaysian author brewed her own poisonous gothic horror book with the vibe of Promised Neverland x Tangled, I'm seated at the front of this show and let me tell u, this doesnt disappoint, in fact it exceeded expectations. The vibe is excellent, i love the details on the creeping ghostly mansion, the horrifying visions witnessed by Melur, the intricacy of the backstories of the Widuri Manor, the tight friendship between these orphaned sisters and that ENDING. The ending solidifed the story as a whole and get me a bit emotional by how it ends. Its a story of sisterhood, friendship, found family, sacrifices and love atop of the atrocious and dark enemies🥺.
Thank you to Bookiut for the review copy in exchange for an honest review.
Each girls are named after the seven flowers that bloomed in the garden they are not allowed to be in. Each girls can depart from the manor once they turned 16. With the approaching 16th birthday of Kemboja, their eldest sister, Melur the youngest wants to gift her the same flower that symbolized her sister. But when terrifying & haunting visions clouded her mind the moment she touched the flowers, the buried secrets are quickly unveiled & perhaps, getting out of the Manor is not such an ideal dream after all.
Spinning a tale from the symbolism of flowers was ingenious for how exquisite the writing is. Each flowers beared significance in powers and what they carried, Kemboja, Mawar, Cempaka, Wisteria, Azalea, Iris, Melur.
I devoured horror, i consumed them in brewing potions from gore, haunted house, posession, the psychological horror, the gothic mansion, the witches and their dark arts. When I heard a local Malaysian author brewed her own poisonous gothic horror book with the vibe of Promised Neverland x Tangled, I'm seated at the front of this show and let me tell u, this doesnt disappoint, in fact it exceeded expectations. The vibe is excellent, i love the details on the creeping ghostly mansion, the horrifying visions witnessed by Melur, the intricacy of the backstories of the Widuri Manor, the tight friendship between these orphaned sisters and that ENDING. The ending solidifed the story as a whole and get me a bit emotional by how it ends. Its a story of sisterhood, friendship, found family, sacrifices and love atop of the atrocious and dark enemies🥺.
Thank you to Bookiut for the review copy in exchange for an honest review.
November 9, 2024
8 orphaned girls, each named after a beautiful flower - Kemboja, Mawar, Wisteria, Azalea, Iris and Cempaka and Melur, living together in a creepy old mansion - that's the setup for Bane of Widuri by Nadiah Zakaria, and it's not your typical fairy tale. These girls are promised freedom on their 16th birthdays, but something feels seriously off about this whole "Widuri Manor" situation.
The youngest sister, Melur, gets curious and sneaks into the forbidden garden. Big mistake! When she touches a flower, BAM! Scary visions hit her like a ton of bricks. Now she knows something terrible is happening at Widuri.
This discovery kicks off a spooky adventure as the girls try to unravel the secrets of the mansion. Think "Promised Neverland" meets "Tangled" with a dash of dark magic thrown in for good measure. Nadiah does an amazing job of building suspense, making you want to peek through your fingers but keep reading anyway.
I love it! I like the creepy cool setting. The old mansion practically oozes cobwebs and chills. You can almost hear the floorboards creak and the wind howling outside. Even with all the spooky stuff going on, the bond between the girls is heartwarming. They've got each other's backs, no matter what. Just when you think you know what's happening, the story throws you a curveball and the ride gets wild.
I particularly like Nadiah’s creativity on naming the girls. Each flower's name has a special meaning that ties into the character and the story's secrets. It's like a built-in decoder ring. The only downside is that the book is a bit on the short side. I wish there was more time to explore the characters and the story in even more detail. I devoured it in one sitting!
If you love creepy gothic stories with a touch of magic, this is definitely for you. Throw in some witches, dark secrets, and a whole lot of sisterhood, and you've got the perfect recipe for a thrilling read.
3.8 / 5 atars
The youngest sister, Melur, gets curious and sneaks into the forbidden garden. Big mistake! When she touches a flower, BAM! Scary visions hit her like a ton of bricks. Now she knows something terrible is happening at Widuri.
This discovery kicks off a spooky adventure as the girls try to unravel the secrets of the mansion. Think "Promised Neverland" meets "Tangled" with a dash of dark magic thrown in for good measure. Nadiah does an amazing job of building suspense, making you want to peek through your fingers but keep reading anyway.
I love it! I like the creepy cool setting. The old mansion practically oozes cobwebs and chills. You can almost hear the floorboards creak and the wind howling outside. Even with all the spooky stuff going on, the bond between the girls is heartwarming. They've got each other's backs, no matter what. Just when you think you know what's happening, the story throws you a curveball and the ride gets wild.
I particularly like Nadiah’s creativity on naming the girls. Each flower's name has a special meaning that ties into the character and the story's secrets. It's like a built-in decoder ring. The only downside is that the book is a bit on the short side. I wish there was more time to explore the characters and the story in even more detail. I devoured it in one sitting!
If you love creepy gothic stories with a touch of magic, this is definitely for you. Throw in some witches, dark secrets, and a whole lot of sisterhood, and you've got the perfect recipe for a thrilling read.
3.8 / 5 atars
September 4, 2023
4.5/5🌟 for this novella
📝 Have they ever wonder why Madam Dahlia never expose them to the outside of world from Widuri Manor? It just weird how their future foster parents will adopt them once they reach 16 years old without even know their face. Everything seems off since Melur finally saw a vision when she entered the forbidden garden in the manor. What actual happened here? Why the girls promised freedom on the night they turn 16?
Seven girls Seven flowers
Kemboja
Mawar
Wisteria
Azalea
Iris
Cempaka
Melur
ONE ENDING.
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literally left me speechless
the vibe, the plot twist, the storyline, the idea of their name and how widuri orphanage system works LOVE IT
i get it when author said it kinda give Tangled and 12 dancing princess vibe😍
sedih gila ya part Melur dengan Wisteria tu rasa nak mengamuk just whyyyy kesian gila both of them😭
i wish it can be more gore AHAHAHA
goosebumps when this part came "They're us."😶
📝 Have they ever wonder why Madam Dahlia never expose them to the outside of world from Widuri Manor? It just weird how their future foster parents will adopt them once they reach 16 years old without even know their face. Everything seems off since Melur finally saw a vision when she entered the forbidden garden in the manor. What actual happened here? Why the girls promised freedom on the night they turn 16?
Seven girls Seven flowers
Kemboja
Mawar
Wisteria
Azalea
Iris
Cempaka
Melur
ONE ENDING.
---
literally left me speechless
the vibe, the plot twist, the storyline, the idea of their name and how widuri orphanage system works LOVE IT
i get it when author said it kinda give Tangled and 12 dancing princess vibe😍
sedih gila ya part Melur dengan Wisteria tu rasa nak mengamuk just whyyyy kesian gila both of them😭
i wish it can be more gore AHAHAHA
goosebumps when this part came "They're us."😶
June 7, 2024
This book makes me crave more of her writing, missed reading english books and looking more for her other works.
Excited to read Revenge of Violent Hues next. Tapi also sayang sbb nanti I run out of good books huhu.
You’re amazing, nadiah. Love the idea. Love the writing & execution. Very well done. 5 stars indeed!
Excited to read Revenge of Violent Hues next. Tapi also sayang sbb nanti I run out of good books huhu.
You’re amazing, nadiah. Love the idea. Love the writing & execution. Very well done. 5 stars indeed!
June 5, 2024
NADIAH I WANT MORE. ok thats it. Btw this book is good though😮💨😮💨
February 15, 2024
Sinister, sorrowful, dark and heart-wrenching.
I never thought this book could made me feel so much, and yet it did.
Honestly, the best way to go into this book would be going into it blindly. I didn't know what the book was about; but I trusted the beautiful cover to do justice to story, and it definitely did. Looking back at the cover filled my heart with sorrow. I just kinda wished that this book would be longer, and I would've given it 5 stars no doubt.
Bane of Widuri is a story of loss, memories and greed. Its a tale that will get you goosebumps and will leave you gobsmacked. It somewhat turned out to be what I had expected, but when everything unfolds towards the end, it became a story that is filled with sorrow and sadness.
The highlight of the book will be the flowers, and I had fun with guessing which is which.
Overall, would def recommend this book for fans of goth, thriller. It leaves a lingering feeling and the overall execution of the story was pretty fantastic. Props to the author.
Personal Ratings: 4.25🌟
I never thought this book could made me feel so much, and yet it did.
Honestly, the best way to go into this book would be going into it blindly. I didn't know what the book was about; but I trusted the beautiful cover to do justice to story, and it definitely did. Looking back at the cover filled my heart with sorrow. I just kinda wished that this book would be longer, and I would've given it 5 stars no doubt.
Bane of Widuri is a story of loss, memories and greed. Its a tale that will get you goosebumps and will leave you gobsmacked. It somewhat turned out to be what I had expected, but when everything unfolds towards the end, it became a story that is filled with sorrow and sadness.
The highlight of the book will be the flowers, and I had fun with guessing which is which.
Overall, would def recommend this book for fans of goth, thriller. It leaves a lingering feeling and the overall execution of the story was pretty fantastic. Props to the author.
Personal Ratings: 4.25🌟
March 25, 2024
my first impression - what on earth ...
August 14, 2025
Congratulations to the author on her debut with BOW. I’m your new fans now. Having read just a few pages, I’m already hooked on the author’s writing style. If anyone asks me where to find young writers in this era,I can confidently recommend this name: NADIAH ZAKARIA.
Dahlia is the headmistress of the Widuri orphanage. Strangely, the house is only have seven children, all named after seven types of flowers: Kemboja, Mawar, Wisteria, Iris, Melur, and Cempaka. They will be adopted by new parents once they turn 16. So, for 16 years, they have never left or experienced life outside of the Widuri.
Within the orphanage is a forbidden garden where no one is allowed, with or without permission. One day, Melur sneaks into the forbidden garden to pick a flower for Kemboja. Kemboja is set to leave them once she turns 16 starting the next day. From that moment, Melur gains a mysterious power when she touches the flower, she can see memories and clues connected to whatever she touches.
As Kemboja leaves through the front door, Cempaka shouts, "Don’t go, you will die!" However, her warning were ignored. They assume Cempaka was just too saddened by Kemboja’s departure. But after a strange tragedy the previous night Melur exoerience, she believes Cempaka’s words. She tries to unravel the truth behind it all.
The question is, are Cempaka’s fears real, and is what Melur experienced truly reality? If you want to find out, go read this book!
Dahlia is the headmistress of the Widuri orphanage. Strangely, the house is only have seven children, all named after seven types of flowers: Kemboja, Mawar, Wisteria, Iris, Melur, and Cempaka. They will be adopted by new parents once they turn 16. So, for 16 years, they have never left or experienced life outside of the Widuri.
Within the orphanage is a forbidden garden where no one is allowed, with or without permission. One day, Melur sneaks into the forbidden garden to pick a flower for Kemboja. Kemboja is set to leave them once she turns 16 starting the next day. From that moment, Melur gains a mysterious power when she touches the flower, she can see memories and clues connected to whatever she touches.
As Kemboja leaves through the front door, Cempaka shouts, "Don’t go, you will die!" However, her warning were ignored. They assume Cempaka was just too saddened by Kemboja’s departure. But after a strange tragedy the previous night Melur exoerience, she believes Cempaka’s words. She tries to unravel the truth behind it all.
The question is, are Cempaka’s fears real, and is what Melur experienced truly reality? If you want to find out, go read this book!
September 8, 2024
Wow, I didn’t expect to read such a breathtaking and beautiful dark fantasy story from a Malaysian author.
This is my first English novel from a Malaysian author and I feel so proud - her work is on par with International authors.
I love the story and how she incorporated Malaysian names and themes inside - it took me only 2 to 3 hours to finish the book; creepy, dark, thrilling and continuously kept me at the edge of my seat since page 1.
My only complaint was that it was too short and felt rushed towards the ending. I wished there was more world building about the past, how the parents were trapped into the deception, how the existence of these black seeds came to be etc - there is so much potential to the world that Nadiah had created.
I look forward to reading “Revenge in Violent Hues” and more stories from Kak Nadiah.
I hope her stories will be more tebal next. Ahahahaha.
This is my first English novel from a Malaysian author and I feel so proud - her work is on par with International authors.
I love the story and how she incorporated Malaysian names and themes inside - it took me only 2 to 3 hours to finish the book; creepy, dark, thrilling and continuously kept me at the edge of my seat since page 1.
My only complaint was that it was too short and felt rushed towards the ending. I wished there was more world building about the past, how the parents were trapped into the deception, how the existence of these black seeds came to be etc - there is so much potential to the world that Nadiah had created.
I look forward to reading “Revenge in Violent Hues” and more stories from Kak Nadiah.
I hope her stories will be more tebal next. Ahahahaha.
June 7, 2024
"Don't leave. Don't go to the gates. You'll..."
✫ HELLO?? @nadiahzkr IM PUTTING YOU IN JAIL 🔫🔫 DONT WORRY IT WILL BE FILLED WITH FLOWERS ESPECIALLY DAHLIAS ☝🏼
✫ I love it! love it love it love it. i love it so much it's insane how instead of sleeping, i'm lying on my bed typing this review aggressively ‼️
✫ How did a novella manage to not only gave me a borderline heart attack, it also involved NINE characters and FIVE of them received characters development?? The talent you have Nadiah 🫵🏼
✫ The first few bits of this story reminded me of The Promised Neverland and I got a wee bit excited to know how this story would differ. Let me tell you - it's very different. I loved that!
✫ Then the story picked up some Rapunzel type beat - I know these two didn't add up but trust me on this, in fact trust Nadiah on this ‼️
✫ It's just so unique, I craved for more. A world building so nicely explained, plot so well thought, words so beautifully written. YA characters being very YA-coded which suited their age especially on their actions & decisions making.
✨ All in all, I will never shut up about this book. YOU 👏🏻 HAVE 👏🏻 TO 👏🏻 READ 👏🏻 IT 👏🏻 If not, you're absolutely missing out 💀
BOW = Gothic + Rapunzel x7 WITHOUT a man to save em + The Promised Neverland + House of Hollow
My rating: 4.5⭐️
✫ HELLO?? @nadiahzkr IM PUTTING YOU IN JAIL 🔫🔫 DONT WORRY IT WILL BE FILLED WITH FLOWERS ESPECIALLY DAHLIAS ☝🏼
✫ I love it! love it love it love it. i love it so much it's insane how instead of sleeping, i'm lying on my bed typing this review aggressively ‼️
✫ How did a novella manage to not only gave me a borderline heart attack, it also involved NINE characters and FIVE of them received characters development?? The talent you have Nadiah 🫵🏼
✫ The first few bits of this story reminded me of The Promised Neverland and I got a wee bit excited to know how this story would differ. Let me tell you - it's very different. I loved that!
✫ Then the story picked up some Rapunzel type beat - I know these two didn't add up but trust me on this, in fact trust Nadiah on this ‼️
✫ It's just so unique, I craved for more. A world building so nicely explained, plot so well thought, words so beautifully written. YA characters being very YA-coded which suited their age especially on their actions & decisions making.
✨ All in all, I will never shut up about this book. YOU 👏🏻 HAVE 👏🏻 TO 👏🏻 READ 👏🏻 IT 👏🏻 If not, you're absolutely missing out 💀
BOW = Gothic + Rapunzel x7 WITHOUT a man to save em + The Promised Neverland + House of Hollow
My rating: 4.5⭐️
March 17, 2024
when someone asks me for a name whose writing shows as if they’re meant to be a writer, nadiah zakaria is top 3 on my list.
bro you can even read this if you’re not an avid reader because the flow is SO smooth and it’s a fast-paced story.
inspired by the 12 dancing princesses, Bane of Widuri follows 7 orphaned girls — melur, cempaka, iris, azalea, wisteria, mawar, and kemboja. they live in a secluded manor under the care of madam dahlia, each are promised to leave with foster parents once they turn 16.
for a novella (short novel), everything about this book is just nice (i DO NOT mean this as just mediocre) - in which the length, pacing, story-telling, are all perfectly written and arranged. there’s NEVER a dull moment, you enjoy every word Nadiah writes.
if you’ve been following the author for a while, you might’ve also guessed that OFCOURSE this will be a gore one (gore for me but according to nadiah, it’s quote unquote the least gore she could do 😀😀😀). but you can still read this if you’re a scaredy cat (and please lmk how it goes for you 😼)!
i honestly don’t wanna spoil too much of the story, but i’m not kidding for the 5 ⭐️. you SHOULD read this book fr.
thank you so much Bookiut for sending this to me, and sincere apologies for the super late review!!! 🥹🤍🙏🏻
bro you can even read this if you’re not an avid reader because the flow is SO smooth and it’s a fast-paced story.
inspired by the 12 dancing princesses, Bane of Widuri follows 7 orphaned girls — melur, cempaka, iris, azalea, wisteria, mawar, and kemboja. they live in a secluded manor under the care of madam dahlia, each are promised to leave with foster parents once they turn 16.
for a novella (short novel), everything about this book is just nice (i DO NOT mean this as just mediocre) - in which the length, pacing, story-telling, are all perfectly written and arranged. there’s NEVER a dull moment, you enjoy every word Nadiah writes.
if you’ve been following the author for a while, you might’ve also guessed that OFCOURSE this will be a gore one (gore for me but according to nadiah, it’s quote unquote the least gore she could do 😀😀😀). but you can still read this if you’re a scaredy cat (and please lmk how it goes for you 😼)!
i honestly don’t wanna spoil too much of the story, but i’m not kidding for the 5 ⭐️. you SHOULD read this book fr.
thank you so much Bookiut for sending this to me, and sincere apologies for the super late review!!! 🥹🤍🙏🏻
February 17, 2024
》Being murdered and turned into a flower never quite sit well, it was like a fairy tale.
》Saka but make it gothic and fantasy. Witch and black magic (sihir and dukun).
》Widuri’s orphan manor’s system is when the girls turned 16, they will be adapted by new parents, promised with freedom. But if they goes to the gates, the girls died. Why and what did they did to them? The garden’s flowers contain memories and lives of the flowers’ bearer’s of the name, only Melur can vision the memories when she touched it yet the vision disappeared when the flowers dies,meaning the bearer also died. Something is terribly wrong and they need to find out if their friend actually made it out of there or not before another person gets out. They have 3 days left before another sister leaves.
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》I love the world building, it’s so magical and flowery (if that’s even a word haha) but the author really did well enliving the cover and theme of this book. Every single words that I read make me flip to the cover because it making sense why the cover. Perfect for someone who wants to try fantasy genre but started with local, since it’s closer to our heart.
》I am gradually falling in love with her writing, it’s graceful and descriptive. The ending of every chapter is on tether hooks, definitely make this a page-turner book, the world building is easy to captive and stunning, let’s not forget each chapter also short.
》It’s wondrous how the author crafted each characters’ trait in conjunction with their flowery name, their sisterhood bond is beautiful and warming. This can be read by general, either you love reading or not this will get you into reading, if you’re not into fantasy, this will make you love fantasy. I got this whole feeling shortly after reach even a few early pages, imagine my whole feelings along this book.
》What make me curious simultaneously concern take over me is the plot spiced with thrill and mystery, it’s not a be left in the dark blanketed in sillhoute kind of mystery because author slowly and mysteriously bewitched us with a hook and then reveal what she wants us to know, not what we have to know haha. So it’s a tarik tali trick the author plays with us 😏.
》I like it when author described feelings with poetic style, and every single revelation makes me goes “oohh” all the time, author crafted such an amazing and whimsical premises, she turned something we would read in a battered storybook in the children’s section of our extensive library into something nightmares and worse.
》Each flowers contained memories, lives and possessed powers. It’s hard not to review without spoiler, but the synopsis already clear what the theme of this book, you just have to read it to blow your mind. Unexpected plot and ending, impeccably ended. I also knew this has numerous retelling but I spot dracula + beauty and beast vibe.
》Saka but make it gothic and fantasy. Witch and black magic (sihir and dukun).
》Widuri’s orphan manor’s system is when the girls turned 16, they will be adapted by new parents, promised with freedom. But if they goes to the gates, the girls died. Why and what did they did to them? The garden’s flowers contain memories and lives of the flowers’ bearer’s of the name, only Melur can vision the memories when she touched it yet the vision disappeared when the flowers dies,meaning the bearer also died. Something is terribly wrong and they need to find out if their friend actually made it out of there or not before another person gets out. They have 3 days left before another sister leaves.
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》I love the world building, it’s so magical and flowery (if that’s even a word haha) but the author really did well enliving the cover and theme of this book. Every single words that I read make me flip to the cover because it making sense why the cover. Perfect for someone who wants to try fantasy genre but started with local, since it’s closer to our heart.
》I am gradually falling in love with her writing, it’s graceful and descriptive. The ending of every chapter is on tether hooks, definitely make this a page-turner book, the world building is easy to captive and stunning, let’s not forget each chapter also short.
》It’s wondrous how the author crafted each characters’ trait in conjunction with their flowery name, their sisterhood bond is beautiful and warming. This can be read by general, either you love reading or not this will get you into reading, if you’re not into fantasy, this will make you love fantasy. I got this whole feeling shortly after reach even a few early pages, imagine my whole feelings along this book.
》What make me curious simultaneously concern take over me is the plot spiced with thrill and mystery, it’s not a be left in the dark blanketed in sillhoute kind of mystery because author slowly and mysteriously bewitched us with a hook and then reveal what she wants us to know, not what we have to know haha. So it’s a tarik tali trick the author plays with us 😏.
》I like it when author described feelings with poetic style, and every single revelation makes me goes “oohh” all the time, author crafted such an amazing and whimsical premises, she turned something we would read in a battered storybook in the children’s section of our extensive library into something nightmares and worse.
》Each flowers contained memories, lives and possessed powers. It’s hard not to review without spoiler, but the synopsis already clear what the theme of this book, you just have to read it to blow your mind. Unexpected plot and ending, impeccably ended. I also knew this has numerous retelling but I spot dracula + beauty and beast vibe.
August 8, 2024
I absolutely CANNOT believe none of you told me this book is a Tangled retelling?!!??!!!??? HELLO!!?? I’m like the biggest Tangled fan ever?!!!
Good God this book was such a wild ride! I started this book blindly while halfway on train with no expectations and finished it in one sitting just in time for my stop. I wasn’t expecting to cry at the end but I did 😭 There were just so many character dynamics that I absolutely love but most importantly the sisterhood between all the 7 Widuri girls. They were sweet, humorous and their bond was felt within every page turn, making me more and more attached to them.
Their sisterly spirit of protecting each other through highs and lows and the bullet they’re willing to take for each other was so powerful and it really moved me to tears.
The twist and turns of the plot really got me on my toes and I adore Nadiah’s detailed writing of their expressions, which instantly can make any reader feel the way these characters feel.
All in all, this was such an amazing read, and I am looking forward to reading more of Nadiah’s work! Brb, ordering Revenge in Violent Hues now byeeeeeee
Good God this book was such a wild ride! I started this book blindly while halfway on train with no expectations and finished it in one sitting just in time for my stop. I wasn’t expecting to cry at the end but I did 😭 There were just so many character dynamics that I absolutely love but most importantly the sisterhood between all the 7 Widuri girls. They were sweet, humorous and their bond was felt within every page turn, making me more and more attached to them.
Their sisterly spirit of protecting each other through highs and lows and the bullet they’re willing to take for each other was so powerful and it really moved me to tears.
The twist and turns of the plot really got me on my toes and I adore Nadiah’s detailed writing of their expressions, which instantly can make any reader feel the way these characters feel.
All in all, this was such an amazing read, and I am looking forward to reading more of Nadiah’s work! Brb, ordering Revenge in Violent Hues now byeeeeeee
January 7, 2024
This story follows Melur as she and her friends uncover the mystery of their orphanage. Starting off strong, the mansion has that Addams Family vibe Gothic horror to it.
7 girls. 2 mysterious guardians. 1 mystery.
Why are they there?
What are the flowers for?
What happens to the girls who left?
What does it means to get 'adopted'?
This short book is well-paced with good suspense. The ending is heartbreaking although somewhat positive.
1-star minus for I still think the writing need to improve a bit. Some bits at the end feels it came out of nowhere without proper set-up.
7 girls. 2 mysterious guardians. 1 mystery.
Why are they there?
What are the flowers for?
What happens to the girls who left?
What does it means to get 'adopted'?
This short book is well-paced with good suspense. The ending is heartbreaking although somewhat positive.
1-star minus for I still think the writing need to improve a bit. Some bits at the end feels it came out of nowhere without proper set-up.
January 1, 2024
I do not like horror. I avoid horror at all cost. I regret reading this book because it is an EFECTIVE horror novella. It's like watching a horror movie on BOO channel & then you go to bed alone. You have been warned. Congrats, Miss Writer.
June 8, 2024
8 orphaned girls have lived together in a manor their whole lives. They are promised foster parents and a chance to start new lives on their 16th birthday.
Melur gets a vision when she touches the elusive flowers in the garden, and senses something is wrong.
I don't want to give too much away, because it is a short story after all.
Read if you love:
- gothic manors
- stories centred on black magic and witches
- dark academia
- horror
I understand that Nadiah was constrained in including more gory details and plot development, but this was a stellar effort for 128 pages. I'm a sucker for a horror book, and I certainly wasn't expecting the book to turn that dark in the second half. I'm happy that I purchased this, and I'm certain this won't be my last read by the author.
Melur gets a vision when she touches the elusive flowers in the garden, and senses something is wrong.
I don't want to give too much away, because it is a short story after all.
Read if you love:
- gothic manors
- stories centred on black magic and witches
- dark academia
- horror
I understand that Nadiah was constrained in including more gory details and plot development, but this was a stellar effort for 128 pages. I'm a sucker for a horror book, and I certainly wasn't expecting the book to turn that dark in the second half. I'm happy that I purchased this, and I'm certain this won't be my last read by the author.
May 9, 2025
First of all, I LOVE THE BOOK COVER 🥰 SO MUCH. I don’t know maybe because it has pattern that kind of 3D(?) I guess so (I don’t know how to explain lol).
And for the plot, I thought they are just hallucinating all this time. BUT, IT’S NOT! They are not hallucinating, everybody. Their concerns are reality. Thus, I respect the author’s idea. Take all my thumbs up! 😆
For a YA fiction book, I never expect the plot would become like this. Nice one, Nadiah! It opened my mind and ‘treat’ my reading slump. Good job!
love,
waceed.
And for the plot, I thought they are just hallucinating all this time. BUT, IT’S NOT! They are not hallucinating, everybody. Their concerns are reality. Thus, I respect the author’s idea. Take all my thumbs up! 😆
For a YA fiction book, I never expect the plot would become like this. Nice one, Nadiah! It opened my mind and ‘treat’ my reading slump. Good job!
love,
waceed.
November 26, 2024
bestnyaaaaa 😭😭🫶🏻
January 25, 2026
A pretty dark, mystery thriller that follows 8 orphaned girls (though Melur is the POV character) set in an old mansion, set in Malaysia. That said, it doesn't read or feel like it would set in Malaysia despite the 8 girls, all named after flowers in the Malay language. Neither does it feel very gothic, even though it has a lot world gothic-issh elements within its worldbuilding.
Once the world and characters are introduced, the story unravels in a quick successions which it a major strength of the story and Nadiah Zakaria's writing because it doesn't need to slow down and let the story breath in, it needs to chug along and maintain the tension that writer has crafted from the initial bombshell she introduced.
Writing wise, the prose were functional and it's what kept the tension and the mystery up and remained intact. There are some point where I find the writer tries to be lyrical or slightly poetic with her prose, especially during the characters interaction between one another and it wasn't bad but it's not needed at all in my opinion.
A good piece of horror-issh mystery thriller that does tug the heart. Nothing grand but it doesn't have to be. It does try to add elements from gothic to urban fantasy to straight up horror but the mish-mash of elements where just there for the sake of just having those elements. The ending however, was amazing.
Once the world and characters are introduced, the story unravels in a quick successions which it a major strength of the story and Nadiah Zakaria's writing because it doesn't need to slow down and let the story breath in, it needs to chug along and maintain the tension that writer has crafted from the initial bombshell she introduced.
Writing wise, the prose were functional and it's what kept the tension and the mystery up and remained intact. There are some point where I find the writer tries to be lyrical or slightly poetic with her prose, especially during the characters interaction between one another and it wasn't bad but it's not needed at all in my opinion.
A good piece of horror-issh mystery thriller that does tug the heart. Nothing grand but it doesn't have to be. It does try to add elements from gothic to urban fantasy to straight up horror but the mish-mash of elements where just there for the sake of just having those elements. The ending however, was amazing.
October 4, 2023
Very good story. Loved how it had a back story for how they were named. I did get confused between the English and BM names of the flowers. BM is not my first language. Would love to read this as a longer story.
January 31, 2026
7 orang kanak-kanak menjadi penghuni Rumah Widuri. Ketujuh-tujuh anak gadis ini mempunyai nama bunga yang turut menghiasi taman di bahagian belakang Rumah Widuri yang juga merupakan tempat larangan bagi mereka. Melur yang menginginkan sekuntum bunga sebagai hadiah ulang tahun Kemboja, nekad memecah masuk ke taman itu. Dan, itu bakal menjadi titik mula pecahnya sebuah rahsia yang tersimpan.
Kasihan dengan nasib anak-anak penghuni Rumah Widuri. Menginginkan sebuah keluarga bahagia namun menjadi korban ketamakan manusia yang tidak pernah kenal erti puas. Yang sentiasa dahagakan kekuasaan hingga sanggup mengorbankan apa sahaja.
Ada beberapa perkara yang SH rasa tidak perlu dimasukkan ke dalam cerita apatah lagi diceritakan hanya sepintas lalu. Kerana ia tidak memberi kesan atau menyumbang apa-apa kepada jalan cerita.
Ada orang yang selalu memandang enteng pada nama. Kata mereka apa ada dengan nama. Padahal nama itulah identiti seseorang manusia. Sebab itu SH suka apabila penulis mengaitkan nama dengan kelebihan yang ada pada setiap anak-anak Rumah Widuri.
Kasihan dengan nasib anak-anak penghuni Rumah Widuri. Menginginkan sebuah keluarga bahagia namun menjadi korban ketamakan manusia yang tidak pernah kenal erti puas. Yang sentiasa dahagakan kekuasaan hingga sanggup mengorbankan apa sahaja.
Ada beberapa perkara yang SH rasa tidak perlu dimasukkan ke dalam cerita apatah lagi diceritakan hanya sepintas lalu. Kerana ia tidak memberi kesan atau menyumbang apa-apa kepada jalan cerita.
Ada orang yang selalu memandang enteng pada nama. Kata mereka apa ada dengan nama. Padahal nama itulah identiti seseorang manusia. Sebab itu SH suka apabila penulis mengaitkan nama dengan kelebihan yang ada pada setiap anak-anak Rumah Widuri.
November 8, 2023
Really exceeded my expectation!
March 24, 2024
Did I bought this book because of the cover? YES!!! But no worries, because I've been wanting to read this book for soooo long since I heard A LOT of good reviews about it. As soon I finished reading this book, I just wanna turn back to page one and read it all over again. IT WAS SO GOOD AND BEYOND MY EXPECTATIONS. I've read this book in one sitting because I was so immersed with the storyline that I couldn't stop reading it.😍🔥
I love everything about this book. The cover that was so stunning that I couldn't takes my eyes on it. The characters that was named after flowers? OMG that was so creative! The storyline? It was so good and mind-blowing.🤯 I just didn't expect this book would be quite dark. I even got a goosebumps right after I reading it halfway. The scene in chapter 5 got my jaw dropped. Seriously.
Another thing that I like about this book is the bond and relationship between Melur and Wisteria. It was beautiful yet touching at the same time. 🥺
Overall, BOW is such an underrated book that you SHOULD read. If you don't know what book to read, just pick up this book! It's short, compact, but full with dark and magic. Since it's a novella, this book really suitable for beginners. I'm pretty sure you're gonna like it as I do! ❤️
5/5 ⭐
I love everything about this book. The cover that was so stunning that I couldn't takes my eyes on it. The characters that was named after flowers? OMG that was so creative! The storyline? It was so good and mind-blowing.🤯 I just didn't expect this book would be quite dark. I even got a goosebumps right after I reading it halfway. The scene in chapter 5 got my jaw dropped. Seriously.
Another thing that I like about this book is the bond and relationship between Melur and Wisteria. It was beautiful yet touching at the same time. 🥺
Overall, BOW is such an underrated book that you SHOULD read. If you don't know what book to read, just pick up this book! It's short, compact, but full with dark and magic. Since it's a novella, this book really suitable for beginners. I'm pretty sure you're gonna like it as I do! ❤️
5/5 ⭐
August 25, 2024
gothic horror vibes i am SAT
May 3, 2024
a book that stayed true to its gothic theme but in Malaysian setting! The ending made me scream in frustration and sadness :)
June 14, 2024
I cannot believe I finished this in one sitting! I always had second or third thoughts when it comes to reading fantasy, I deliberately avoided it because I believe I would not enjoy myself. Idk why I had that thought. Maybe because I never once in my life read one. But at last, a breakthrough, and thanks to Bane of Widuri by Nadiah, I can now at least have the courage to venture into fantasy books as long as it has gothic vibes in it without much romance.
BOW is a gothic novella revolves around seven orphan girls named after flowers (I love this idea tbh) who live in a secluded manor all their lives, not knowing what the outside world looks like. They were promised to leave the manor, adopted at sixteen, in which it occurs to me, how the heck all of them managed to get adopted all in a year, and what's more puzzling is that they have never seen their adopted parents. Haaa something fishy ye di situ. Fishy, peculiar but ✨INTERESTING✨!
One event after another encountered by the girls to eventually they had their price to pay but I pity Melur and Wisteria the most! 😭😭😭😭 Melur must be miserable and regretful weh! Kesian dia! Sampai hati author buat dia cenggitu! 💔💔💔 You have gotta read this!
A plot twist in the end, with a vibe of Malay folklore, which to me that is the sole reason why I pick this book up, finished it in one sitting and want it MORE! I would say this is a breakthrough at last for someone who had never like or dislike fantasy novels. Now I know my rhythm! Brb, gonna purchase Nadiah's second baby - Revenge in Violent Hues! Easy 5/5 read.
BOW is a gothic novella revolves around seven orphan girls named after flowers (I love this idea tbh) who live in a secluded manor all their lives, not knowing what the outside world looks like. They were promised to leave the manor, adopted at sixteen, in which it occurs to me, how the heck all of them managed to get adopted all in a year, and what's more puzzling is that they have never seen their adopted parents. Haaa something fishy ye di situ. Fishy, peculiar but ✨INTERESTING✨!
One event after another encountered by the girls to eventually they had their price to pay but I pity Melur and Wisteria the most! 😭😭😭😭 Melur must be miserable and regretful weh! Kesian dia! Sampai hati author buat dia cenggitu! 💔💔💔 You have gotta read this!
A plot twist in the end, with a vibe of Malay folklore, which to me that is the sole reason why I pick this book up, finished it in one sitting and want it MORE! I would say this is a breakthrough at last for someone who had never like or dislike fantasy novels. Now I know my rhythm! Brb, gonna purchase Nadiah's second baby - Revenge in Violent Hues! Easy 5/5 read.
June 6, 2025
Bane of Widuri by @nadiahzkr —a novella of just 120 pages, yet it refuses to leave my mind. I know this story will haunt me for a long time.
The plot begins with seven sixteen-year-old orphan girls living in Widuri Manor, an orphanage shrouded in secrecy. They have never left its grounds, their existence unknown to the outside world. Tradition dictates that once they turn sixteen, they will be adopted and step beyond the manor’s walls for the first time. However, when the eldest among them leaves, Melur stumbles upon something unsettling—an anomaly that sparks doubt. What lies hidden beneath the grand facade of Widuri Manor? And what secrets does the forbidden garden hold?
From the very first page, this book is gripping. The mystery is woven so well that it pulls readers in, leaving us desperate for answers. Nadiah Zakaria’s writing is simple yet immersive, making the story easy to devour in one sitting. Though I don’t typically reach for mystery novels, Bane of Widuri completely captivated me. This book has made me eager to read more of Nadiah’s works. A solid 5-star read ✨✨ Good thing I grabbed her Revenge in Violent Hues as well during the KLAB & I got her to personally sign my books as well! 😆
The plot begins with seven sixteen-year-old orphan girls living in Widuri Manor, an orphanage shrouded in secrecy. They have never left its grounds, their existence unknown to the outside world. Tradition dictates that once they turn sixteen, they will be adopted and step beyond the manor’s walls for the first time. However, when the eldest among them leaves, Melur stumbles upon something unsettling—an anomaly that sparks doubt. What lies hidden beneath the grand facade of Widuri Manor? And what secrets does the forbidden garden hold?
From the very first page, this book is gripping. The mystery is woven so well that it pulls readers in, leaving us desperate for answers. Nadiah Zakaria’s writing is simple yet immersive, making the story easy to devour in one sitting. Though I don’t typically reach for mystery novels, Bane of Widuri completely captivated me. This book has made me eager to read more of Nadiah’s works. A solid 5-star read ✨✨ Good thing I grabbed her Revenge in Violent Hues as well during the KLAB & I got her to personally sign my books as well! 😆
August 19, 2024
4.75⭐️
My, my, my…I was mesmerized by the rich, gothic tapestry woven within these pages. The hauntingly beautiful atmosphere is perfect for a fall read. I devoured the book in a single breathless sitting, and the seven girls have lingered in my thoughts ever since. Though just 125 pages long, the author breathes life into these characters with such vividness that they feel profoundly real.
The depth of their backstories, the poignant revelations, and the pulse-pounding moments have etched themselves into my heart. I yearn for more—a chance to once again embrace their presence, to feel their sorrows and dreams. This story has left an indelible mark on my soul, and I long to revisit the world and the lives of those unforgettable girls.
My, my, my…I was mesmerized by the rich, gothic tapestry woven within these pages. The hauntingly beautiful atmosphere is perfect for a fall read. I devoured the book in a single breathless sitting, and the seven girls have lingered in my thoughts ever since. Though just 125 pages long, the author breathes life into these characters with such vividness that they feel profoundly real.
The depth of their backstories, the poignant revelations, and the pulse-pounding moments have etched themselves into my heart. I yearn for more—a chance to once again embrace their presence, to feel their sorrows and dreams. This story has left an indelible mark on my soul, and I long to revisit the world and the lives of those unforgettable girls.
May 27, 2024
What in the world of The Promised Neverland and Tangled is this?!!
Lurvvvv! It was graphic and horrific and exceeded my expectation. Quite immersive for a novella. The moment I read the blurb, I know I was going to enjoy it as it has a promise neverland vibe and to add in with hanakotoba is genius!
The lack of another star is just that I was struggling with the writing a bit as it was written in 3rd person POV (which already not my cup of tea) and plus with chapters that isn’t one pov focused. Then, another reason is Im not a fan of the ending. But the ending isn’t bad, it was understandable, they are 16y/o.
So overall it was a great read and Im happy it was my first pick from my Pbakl24! Can’t wait to read more from our local authors😍
Lurvvvv! It was graphic and horrific and exceeded my expectation. Quite immersive for a novella. The moment I read the blurb, I know I was going to enjoy it as it has a promise neverland vibe and to add in with hanakotoba is genius!
The lack of another star is just that I was struggling with the writing a bit as it was written in 3rd person POV (which already not my cup of tea) and plus with chapters that isn’t one pov focused. Then, another reason is Im not a fan of the ending. But the ending isn’t bad, it was understandable, they are 16y/o.
So overall it was a great read and Im happy it was my first pick from my Pbakl24! Can’t wait to read more from our local authors😍
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