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A Medieval Fairy Tale #3
The Noble Servant: A YA Fairytale Retelling
New York Times bestselling author Melanie Dickerson beautifully re-imagines “The Goose Girl” by the Brothers Grimm into a medieval tale of adventure, loss, and love.
She lost everything to the scheme of an evil servant.
But she might just gain what she’s always wanted . . . if she makes it in time.
The impossible was happening. She, Magdalen of Mallin, was to marry the Duke of Wolfberg. Magdalen had dreamed about receiving a proposal ever since she met the duke two years ago. Such a marriage was the only way she could save her people from starvation. But why would a handsome, wealthy duke want to marry her, a poor baron’s daughter? It seemed too good to be true.
On the journey to Wolfberg Castle, Magdalen’s servant forces her to trade places and become her servant, threatening not only Magdalen’s life, but the lives of those she holds dear. Stripped of her identity and title in Wolfberg, where no one knows her, Magdalen is sentenced to tend geese while she watches her former handmaiden gain all Magdalen had ever dreamed of.
When a handsome shepherd befriends her, Magdalen begins to suspect he carries secrets of his own. Together, Magdalen and the shepherd uncover a sinister plot against Wolfberg and the duke. But with no resources, will they be able to find the answers, the hiding places, and the forces they need in time to save both Mallin and Wolfberg?
She lost everything to the scheme of an evil servant.
But she might just gain what she’s always wanted . . . if she makes it in time.
The impossible was happening. She, Magdalen of Mallin, was to marry the Duke of Wolfberg. Magdalen had dreamed about receiving a proposal ever since she met the duke two years ago. Such a marriage was the only way she could save her people from starvation. But why would a handsome, wealthy duke want to marry her, a poor baron’s daughter? It seemed too good to be true.
On the journey to Wolfberg Castle, Magdalen’s servant forces her to trade places and become her servant, threatening not only Magdalen’s life, but the lives of those she holds dear. Stripped of her identity and title in Wolfberg, where no one knows her, Magdalen is sentenced to tend geese while she watches her former handmaiden gain all Magdalen had ever dreamed of.
When a handsome shepherd befriends her, Magdalen begins to suspect he carries secrets of his own. Together, Magdalen and the shepherd uncover a sinister plot against Wolfberg and the duke. But with no resources, will they be able to find the answers, the hiding places, and the forces they need in time to save both Mallin and Wolfberg?
336 pages, Paperback
First published May 9, 2017
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About the author
Melanie Dickerson
40 books6,669 followersMelanie Dickerson is the New York Times bestselling author of happily-ever-after romance. She believes in love, laughter, afternoon tea, and the power of story.
With a million books sold and numerous awards, including two Christy Awards, two Golden Quills, a National Readers Choice Award, Christian Retailing’s Best, and Book Buyers’ Best Awards, her books have hit #1 in her category on the New York Times bestseller list.
When she’s not writing, Melanie can be found watching Pride and Prejudice for the hundredth time, cozying up to her handsome hero husband, or shaking her head at her slightly unhinged Jack Russell terrier. She lives in the beautiful foothills of the Appalachians near Huntsville, Alabama.
With a million books sold and numerous awards, including two Christy Awards, two Golden Quills, a National Readers Choice Award, Christian Retailing’s Best, and Book Buyers’ Best Awards, her books have hit #1 in her category on the New York Times bestseller list.
When she’s not writing, Melanie can be found watching Pride and Prejudice for the hundredth time, cozying up to her handsome hero husband, or shaking her head at her slightly unhinged Jack Russell terrier. She lives in the beautiful foothills of the Appalachians near Huntsville, Alabama.
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August 19, 2017
I said I wasn't going to read any more of Dickerson's fairy tales; at least, I'm pretty sure I did. However, this book is a retelling of the Goose Girl fairy tale! I had to read it! How is a girl to resist that?
Unfortunately...I should have found a way. The story was pleasant enough to finish but quite shallow. The characters fall in love by pining over appearances. They repeat, and repeat, and repeat the same things and lines over and over to themselves and to each other.
Overall, the book was pleasant but left me with no strong emotions, just a general annoyance at perfect characters and simplified Christianity.
Yet at the same time, I still kind of want to read the book that preceded this one?
Unfortunately...I should have found a way. The story was pleasant enough to finish but quite shallow. The characters fall in love by pining over appearances. They repeat, and repeat, and repeat the same things and lines over and over to themselves and to each other.
Overall, the book was pleasant but left me with no strong emotions, just a general annoyance at perfect characters and simplified Christianity.
Yet at the same time, I still kind of want to read the book that preceded this one?
November 18, 2017
*clutches heart and collapses to the floor*
February 9, 2017
I Received this ARC from Thomas Nelson Fiction via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
And trust me, this review will be brutally honest.
Now, I hate writing scathing reviews almost as much as I like reading them but I’ve learned that in life, sometimes you gotta do what you gotta do. I didn’t find The Noble Servant to my liking and I feel like I have to justify my reasoning, seeing as there are many positive reviews for this book.
First of all, I think I may have started reading it on the wrong foot and with completely skewed expectations. You see, I didn’t really know the author and so thought I was getting a book like Shannon Hale’s The Goose Girl. I mean come on, look at the cover.
However, as I read through the first chapter, I felt a little cheated. It wasn’t awful but it wasn’t what I was expecting. Instead of this:
I got this:
I can’t even find the right words to convey my disappointment, seeing as The Goose Girl is one of my favorite books and this one didn’t even come close to it. But, being the mature person that I am, I reeled in my despair and decided to give Melanie Dickerson a fair trial. I even checked out two of her other books, The Captive Maiden and The Beautiful Pretender. I liked the latter the best out all three because of the interesting premise but it still wasn't the epitome of a great story.
I tried.
I really, really tried but I could not get into this book.
The characters were all flat, the plot was all flat, and the writing was all flat and I don’t just mean flat because they were all squished in between the pages of a 300-page book. No, no, NO!
I liked Magdalen in The Beautiful Pretender but in this book, she seemed to have lost that vital whatever it was that made her an interesting character in the other book. Maybe it was too muchscreen page time, I don’t know. She was contradictory in the worst sense of the word. See, she wants to help her people but she doesn’t seem to have a problem looking down on servants and animals. I kept hoping Magdalen would be like Ani from The Goose Girl who had a horse, whom she adored, and who actually connected to the geese and befriended the servants, instead of look down upon them, but that never happened with Magdalen. It felt like the author couldn't decided who Magdalen was. Either she's a nice person or not, because sometimes Melanie Dickerson tried hard to make her pitiable and compassionate and then I turned the page only to find Magdalen thinking about hanging people and stabbing people in their sleep. And don’t get me wrong, I don’t mind when the characters have a little blackness in their heart but it just wasn’t executed properly in this book.
Then there was Steffan. Oh Steffan. I wanted to like him, very much, but alas, it was not meant to be. He fell into the same trap as Magdalen and that was annoying, self-contradictory behavior of I’m innocent and Off with their heads and I wuv her but I kant mavvy her. Boohoo, is that all you care about?
Also, neither of the protagonists acted like well-educated individuals. The readers were just told that they were.
Other characters were very simple caricatures of villains and servants. I didn’t care for any of them, except maybe Lenhart. I wanted to say I wish there was more of him in the book but I’m afraid that would just ruin him just as it ruined Magdalen.
Ok, as for the plot. I think it was a good idea, a great one actually but I wished it was executed better. Like, why were the villains so obviously evil and stupid? Hazen and Elrich, I’m looking at you. I can’t tell you what they did because I don’t want to be spoilering my review but it was so far out of the realm of believable that I couldn’t find any cares to give for the protagonists. Like come on, there are so many loopholes in the villains’ master plans that I’m surprised they got as far as they did.
Maybe that’s why the story felt like it was dragging. The villains were so clearly bad at their jobs that the author had to keep coming up with boring and lazy ways to stop the characters from achieving their goals.
And finally, we come to the writing. It was simplistic and read like a book for children. The descriptions were vague, as in I couldn’t imagine the world the story was taking place in. And the dialogue was redundant and halting and sometimes it didn’t even seem to matter to the story. Also there were too many German words without translation. Now, I like the inclusion of another language, but please be kind enough to translate it, instead of making the readers guess at it and interrupting the flow of the story.
In the end, I didn’t care for the book nor for Magdalen and Steffan. The only reason it got two stars from me and not one is because of the premise. It was really, really good, but unfortunately, everything else couldn’t hold up the weight of all that potential. And there was potential.
And trust me, this review will be brutally honest.
Now, I hate writing scathing reviews almost as much as I like reading them but I’ve learned that in life, sometimes you gotta do what you gotta do. I didn’t find The Noble Servant to my liking and I feel like I have to justify my reasoning, seeing as there are many positive reviews for this book.
First of all, I think I may have started reading it on the wrong foot and with completely skewed expectations. You see, I didn’t really know the author and so thought I was getting a book like Shannon Hale’s The Goose Girl. I mean come on, look at the cover.
However, as I read through the first chapter, I felt a little cheated. It wasn’t awful but it wasn’t what I was expecting. Instead of this:
I got this:
I can’t even find the right words to convey my disappointment, seeing as The Goose Girl is one of my favorite books and this one didn’t even come close to it. But, being the mature person that I am, I reeled in my despair and decided to give Melanie Dickerson a fair trial. I even checked out two of her other books, The Captive Maiden and The Beautiful Pretender. I liked the latter the best out all three because of the interesting premise but it still wasn't the epitome of a great story.
I tried.
I really, really tried but I could not get into this book.
The characters were all flat, the plot was all flat, and the writing was all flat and I don’t just mean flat because they were all squished in between the pages of a 300-page book. No, no, NO!
I liked Magdalen in The Beautiful Pretender but in this book, she seemed to have lost that vital whatever it was that made her an interesting character in the other book. Maybe it was too much
Then there was Steffan. Oh Steffan. I wanted to like him, very much, but alas, it was not meant to be. He fell into the same trap as Magdalen and that was annoying, self-contradictory behavior of I’m innocent and Off with their heads and I wuv her but I kant mavvy her. Boohoo, is that all you care about?
Also, neither of the protagonists acted like well-educated individuals. The readers were just told that they were.
Other characters were very simple caricatures of villains and servants. I didn’t care for any of them, except maybe Lenhart. I wanted to say I wish there was more of him in the book but I’m afraid that would just ruin him just as it ruined Magdalen.
Ok, as for the plot. I think it was a good idea, a great one actually but I wished it was executed better. Like, why were the villains so obviously evil and stupid? Hazen and Elrich, I’m looking at you. I can’t tell you what they did because I don’t want to be spoilering my review but it was so far out of the realm of believable that I couldn’t find any cares to give for the protagonists. Like come on, there are so many loopholes in the villains’ master plans that I’m surprised they got as far as they did.
Maybe that’s why the story felt like it was dragging. The villains were so clearly bad at their jobs that the author had to keep coming up with boring and lazy ways to stop the characters from achieving their goals.
And finally, we come to the writing. It was simplistic and read like a book for children. The descriptions were vague, as in I couldn’t imagine the world the story was taking place in. And the dialogue was redundant and halting and sometimes it didn’t even seem to matter to the story. Also there were too many German words without translation. Now, I like the inclusion of another language, but please be kind enough to translate it, instead of making the readers guess at it and interrupting the flow of the story.
In the end, I didn’t care for the book nor for Magdalen and Steffan. The only reason it got two stars from me and not one is because of the premise. It was really, really good, but unfortunately, everything else couldn’t hold up the weight of all that potential. And there was potential.
February 7, 2017
I actually really enjoyed this one! I think this may be the best MD book I've read so far.
May 15, 2017
*sigh*
About this book:
“She lost everything to an evil conspiracy . . . but that loss may just give her all she ever wanted.
Since meeting Steffan, the Duke of Wolfberg, at Thornbeck Castle, Lady Magdalen has not been able to stop thinking about him. She knows—as a penniless lady with little to offer in terms of a dowry—she has no real hope of marrying such a highly titled man, so it comes as a great surprise when she receives a letter from him, asking for her hand in marriage.
But all is not what it seems at Wolfberg Castle. Steffan has been evicted by his scheming uncle, and his cousin has taken over the title of duke. Left for dead, Steffan is able to escape, and disguised as a shepherd, hopes to gain entry to the castle to claim the items that will prove he is the true Duke of Wolfberg.
Journeying to the castle, Magdalen has no idea what awaits her, but she certainly did not expect her loyal maidservant to turn on her. Forcing Magdalen to trade places with her, the servant plans to marry the duke and force Magdalen to tend the geese.
Without their respective titles—and the privileges that came with them—Steffan and Magdalen are reunited in the shepherd’s field. Together they conspire to get back their rightful titles. But they must hurry . . . or else they risk losing it all to the uncle’s evil plan.”
Series: Book #3 in the “Thornbeck” series. Review of #1 Here! and #2 Here!
Spiritual Content- Scriptures are mentioned, quoted, & prayed; Many Prayers & crossing; A confession; Talks about God; ‘H’s are capital when referring to God; Many mentions of God & Jesus; Many mentions of prayers, praying, & crossing; Mentions of talks about God & faith; Mentions of Bible reading & studying; Mentions of those & events in the Bible; Mentions of churches, cathedrals, convents, nuns, priests, & confessions; Mentions of sins & forgiveness; A few mentions of Heaven & angels; A few mentions of blessings & being blessed; A couple mentions of miracle & passion plays at Easter; A couple mentions of Christians; A couple mentions of saints; A mention of the pope;
*Note: A couple mentions of superstitions; A mention of heathens.
Negative Content- Minor cussing including: two ‘stupid’s; Some eye rolling; Quite a lot of fighting, hitting, swords, blood/bleeding, & killing/murdering (self-defense) (up to semi-detailed); Being held at knife point & threaten (up to semi-detailed); Pain, being bit, beatings, blacking out, blood/bleeding, & injuries (up to semi-detailed); Being freaked out in small spaces & imagining the worse (up to semi-detailed); Many mentions of fighting, violence, nearly being killed, being struck, beatings, being strangled, knifes/swords, being threaten, pain, blood/bleeding, & injuries (up to semi-detailed); Mentions of assassins, killing/killings, murders, attacking, & blood (barely-above-not-detailed); Mentions of executions, hangings, & torture; Mentions of deaths, bodies, & those starving to death (barely-above-not-detailed); Mentions of drinking, wine, poisons & poisoning someone; Mentions of nightmares of animals & a man attacking a girl or her geese (barely-above-not-detailed); Mentions of hunting animals preying on geese; Mentions of a young child being stuck in a well, screaming & very scared (up to semi-detailed); Mentions of thieves & stealing; Mentions of hatred & threats; Mentions of lies, lying, & liars; Mentions of gossip; Mentions of jealousy; Mentions of a lady having to use the bathroom outdoors; A few mentions of a father beating his son; A couple mentions of the thought of stabbing/killing someone in their sleep; A couple mentions of boys throwing rocks at a dog; A couple mentions of throwing up.
Sexual Content- an almost kiss, four cheek kisses, two not-detailed kisses, five barely-above-not-detailed kisses, two semi-detailed kisses; Wondering about/Wanting to kissing someone (five times, barely-above-not-detailed); Touches, Holding/Embraces, Smelling, & Flutters (barely-above-not-detailed); Remembering touches (barely-above-not-detailed); Noticing & Staring; Mentions of being tempted to kiss, kissing & kisses; Mentions of seeing & hearing a couple kissing (twice, no details); Mentions of touches; Mentions of having to share a room with the opposite gender (nothing happens); Mentions of falling in love & not marrying for love; A few mentions of men staring at Magdalen & winking; A few mentions of blushes; A couple mentions of a man having “a little fun” with a woman & doing unspeakable things (it doesn’t happen); A couple mentions of an apprentice who has bedded half of the maidservants; A couple mentions of unwanted advances; A couple mentions of flirting; A couple mentions of jealousy; A mention of men pursuing women & carousing; A mention of a hand kiss; Love, falling in love & the emotions;
*Note: Mentions of a mother & baby that died in childbirth; A mention of kicking someone in his groin.
-(Lady) Magdalen of Mallin, age 19
-Steffan of Wolfberg, age 21
P.O.V. switches between them & Hazen (4x)
Set in 1365 {Medieval}
313 pages
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Pre Teens- One Star
New Teens- Two Stars
Early High School Teens- Three Stars
Older High School Teens- Four Stars
My personal Rating- Four Stars
*sigh* It’s over already? Oh, what a perfect ending.
Being a loose retelling on The Goose Girl (a story I wasn’t familiar with) and The Princess & the Pauper, I could see the elements of both worked into this plot.
This was such another great Melanie Dickerson novel! I feel like I say it again every book she comes out with, but this might be one of my favorites! However, I would say this is probably my favorite of out this trilogy.
Just like all of Miss Melanie’s past books, the main girl is incredible, relatable, loveable, & inspirational for readers on her faith. Magdalen didn’t hate Agnes even after everything that happened, asking God to help her forgive and even mentions that she doesn’t want Agnes killed for she might repent someday. Steffan did kill a few men out of self-defense or protection for Magdalen, but I honestly don’t think it was gruesome or icky in the mentions due to the way it was written.
Even though it had more of a serious undertone, there were many times I giggled out loud at Steffan or comments he made. There also was a part where I literally yelled out, “They’re just like Mandie & Joe!” {Mandie series by Lois Gladys Leppard} (pg. 234)
But that ending took the cake and I loved seeing Avelina again! Awww! :)
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*BFCG may (Read the review to see) recommend this book by this author. It does not mean I recommend all the books by this author.
*I received this book for free from the Publisher (Thomas Nelson) for this honest review.
April 9, 2017
I love the story of The Goose Girl and didn't realize that was what this book was about. I'd previously read and listened to (multiple times) "The Goose Girl" by Shannon Hale and absolutely loved it! This was a fun retelling by another favorite author and it did not disappoint! This one is more of a Christian fiction than Hale's retelling but I loved how it was done.
I'll post my full review when it gets closer to the release date! I can't wait for Melanie Dickerson fans to read it.
----------Full Review-----------
This is a sort of Prince and the Pauper type story...except the switch between nobility and servant is not a mutual exchange. Deceit and lies run rampant throughout this story as certain characters wish to be raised in status and the only way they know how is to achieve it through cunning lies and force.
Steffan, the Duke, has been away at school. He is the only remaining member of his immediate family. His uncle has stepped in to help care for his castle and people while he is away but his sinister designs are put into action and Steffan will soon find himself in the center of it all, trying to save his people and himself. Then when he realizes who else is in danger, he must work extra hard to save her as well.
Magdalen is not as noble born as Steffan but has dreamed that he might remember her and their sweet night of dancing and talking together years ago. That he just might desire to marry her, but the likelihood of that happening is slim to none. So imagine Magdalen's surprise when she receives a missive from Steffan asking(maybe demanding is a better word here) that she come immediately and be married to him. Magdalen cannot believe her dreams could come true and her mother is beside herself and rushes Magdalen out the door and on her three day journey to her new home, village and husband.
Both Steffan and Magdalen encounter terror on their journeys back to Steffan's home and find themselves needing to disguise who they are. Magdalen's maid servant, Agnes, dresses as Magdalen and tells her if she tries to tell anyone the truth they will kill her and her friend. Steffan escapes from two servants trying to kill him. Both Steffan and Magdalen find themselves relegated to the servants position and in need to convince somebody of the truth of who they are and to overthrow the evil usurper Hazen, Steffan's uncle.
Help and strength come from some surprising sources throughout the story. Steffan and Magdalen find each other, in disguise, and work together to free his people and themselves.
Danger, intrigue, geese, cows, hidden rooms, mines, unlikely friends, kisses, God, cunning wits, peril, beautiful dresses, rags, towers, protection, love, marriage, stolen items and much much more is all contained within this gem of a book. I loved it! If you haven't read the story of the Goose Girl, now is your chance! It was sweet with some very fast paced moments, some tender moments, some moments of forgiveness and some of unrepentance. There were several characters that I thought I liked them only to be deceived and others I had a change of heart for the better about.
I love Melanie's books and I love how she connects her characters to God. If you enjoy Christian fiction, especially Fairy tales and medieval tales, I highly recommend reading her books.
Content: Clean, some fighting and a couple deaths but nothing graphic. Characters talk about God and pray several times asking for his help and guidance.
I received an ARC from the Publisher, Thomas Nelson, via NetGalley. All thoughts and opinions in the review are my own.
Happy Reading!!!
I'll post my full review when it gets closer to the release date! I can't wait for Melanie Dickerson fans to read it.
----------Full Review-----------
This is a sort of Prince and the Pauper type story...except the switch between nobility and servant is not a mutual exchange. Deceit and lies run rampant throughout this story as certain characters wish to be raised in status and the only way they know how is to achieve it through cunning lies and force.
Steffan, the Duke, has been away at school. He is the only remaining member of his immediate family. His uncle has stepped in to help care for his castle and people while he is away but his sinister designs are put into action and Steffan will soon find himself in the center of it all, trying to save his people and himself. Then when he realizes who else is in danger, he must work extra hard to save her as well.
Magdalen is not as noble born as Steffan but has dreamed that he might remember her and their sweet night of dancing and talking together years ago. That he just might desire to marry her, but the likelihood of that happening is slim to none. So imagine Magdalen's surprise when she receives a missive from Steffan asking(maybe demanding is a better word here) that she come immediately and be married to him. Magdalen cannot believe her dreams could come true and her mother is beside herself and rushes Magdalen out the door and on her three day journey to her new home, village and husband.
Both Steffan and Magdalen encounter terror on their journeys back to Steffan's home and find themselves needing to disguise who they are. Magdalen's maid servant, Agnes, dresses as Magdalen and tells her if she tries to tell anyone the truth they will kill her and her friend. Steffan escapes from two servants trying to kill him. Both Steffan and Magdalen find themselves relegated to the servants position and in need to convince somebody of the truth of who they are and to overthrow the evil usurper Hazen, Steffan's uncle.
Help and strength come from some surprising sources throughout the story. Steffan and Magdalen find each other, in disguise, and work together to free his people and themselves.
Danger, intrigue, geese, cows, hidden rooms, mines, unlikely friends, kisses, God, cunning wits, peril, beautiful dresses, rags, towers, protection, love, marriage, stolen items and much much more is all contained within this gem of a book. I loved it! If you haven't read the story of the Goose Girl, now is your chance! It was sweet with some very fast paced moments, some tender moments, some moments of forgiveness and some of unrepentance. There were several characters that I thought I liked them only to be deceived and others I had a change of heart for the better about.
I love Melanie's books and I love how she connects her characters to God. If you enjoy Christian fiction, especially Fairy tales and medieval tales, I highly recommend reading her books.
Content: Clean, some fighting and a couple deaths but nothing graphic. Characters talk about God and pray several times asking for his help and guidance.
I received an ARC from the Publisher, Thomas Nelson, via NetGalley. All thoughts and opinions in the review are my own.
Happy Reading!!!
October 11, 2017
The Noble Servant #3 A Medieval Fairy Tale by Melanie Dickerson
We step back in time of 1365, Barony of Mallin, the Holy Roman Empire replete with fair maidens, dashing lords—often wielding swords, ancient castles, danger, intrigue and...geese.
Hopes and dreams don’t go as planned for Duke of Wolfberg or for Magdalen of Mallin as those who plot against them put their evil plans in motion. The author certainly captures good versus evil within the characters very well. Both Steffan and Magdalen find themselves in rather difficult circumstances and must find a way to find resolutions soon.
Even though Magdalen and Steffan are of nobility they both sacrifice for their communities and those they love. As a result of their challenges they certainly learned what is truly important in life along with their strong faith and prayers, which carried them through those challenges. I understand this is a variation of the fairy tale Little Goose Girl, which I am not familiar with, but found the story interesting and especially enjoy the faith aspect woven within the story-line.
~I received a copy of this book from the author (no monetary gain were exchanged), this is my honest review~
We step back in time of 1365, Barony of Mallin, the Holy Roman Empire replete with fair maidens, dashing lords—often wielding swords, ancient castles, danger, intrigue and...geese.
Hopes and dreams don’t go as planned for Duke of Wolfberg or for Magdalen of Mallin as those who plot against them put their evil plans in motion. The author certainly captures good versus evil within the characters very well. Both Steffan and Magdalen find themselves in rather difficult circumstances and must find a way to find resolutions soon.
Even though Magdalen and Steffan are of nobility they both sacrifice for their communities and those they love. As a result of their challenges they certainly learned what is truly important in life along with their strong faith and prayers, which carried them through those challenges. I understand this is a variation of the fairy tale Little Goose Girl, which I am not familiar with, but found the story interesting and especially enjoy the faith aspect woven within the story-line.
~I received a copy of this book from the author (no monetary gain were exchanged), this is my honest review~
October 17, 2017
Endearing characters, sweet scenes and great plot twists!
This was mainly a Goose Girl Retelling with a parallel story of the Prince and the Pauper through Stefan, the Duke of Wolfberg. I loved how each had their own story line and when they came together they had to build their relationship, getting to know one another. I personally enjoyed the pace of the book and thought it was reflective to the story of the Goose Girl and appreciated how this relationship had time to grow. True to Melanie's writing, there was amazing side characters with their own character arcs which I truly adored in this book!
Another great book done by a wonderful author.
This was mainly a Goose Girl Retelling with a parallel story of the Prince and the Pauper through Stefan, the Duke of Wolfberg. I loved how each had their own story line and when they came together they had to build their relationship, getting to know one another. I personally enjoyed the pace of the book and thought it was reflective to the story of the Goose Girl and appreciated how this relationship had time to grow. True to Melanie's writing, there was amazing side characters with their own character arcs which I truly adored in this book!
Another great book done by a wonderful author.
May 29, 2018
The noble servant 3.5⭐️
It was a really easy read and quite cute as all are of Melanie Dickersons novels.
It was a really easy read and quite cute as all are of Melanie Dickersons novels.
July 11, 2018
I am giving this book 3.5 stars because I liked it just a little less than the first two books in this series (I gave The Huntress of Thornbeck 5 stars, and The Beautiful Pretender 4 stars), but I did not dislike it. It was a light, enjoyable story.
Quite frankly, neither the Goose Girl fairytale, nor the Prince and the Pauper fairytale have ever been my favorites. They can be fun, but by nature of being so straight forward (how many different ways can one have one’s identity stolen or trade places with someone?), are pretty predictable, and I just feel like it’s hard to do a truly unique twist on them. Melanie Dickerson did give it a good shot, though. I thought it was interesting to have both tales being retold at the same time, and she did up the ante in several areas with a truly despicable villain (seriously though, I’d ask how he sleeps at night, but his answer would probably be, “On my side, with the window cracked.” :p Yeah, not a lot of remorse for his actions.), a lost portrait that needed to be found, and the question of why the villain wanted what he wanted. But, in spite of this, I just didn’t get as much enjoyment from this one as the first two books.
As for the main characters, though not my favorites of this series, I did still generally like them. We met Magdalen in the previous book. She was a very sweet girl with good character, and was a genuine friend to Avelina, so I was happy to learn that she was getting her own story in this book. Having learned more about her, I still like her even if I don’t relate to her as much as some of Dickerson’s other heroines. It took a lot of inner strength and character for her to keep from hating those who mistreated her so badly and eventually be able to forgive them.
Steffan was a good hero as well, acting bravely and selflessly in the defense of himself and others who could not protect themselves. I actually liked him better at the end of the book than the beginning, though. He was never a bad guy, but he did start out not wanting to marry for love because of how his father mourned to death when his beloved wife died, forgetting he had two children who still needed him, and Steffan feared experiencing such pain himself. Therefore, it was good to see him eventually realize that he could love someone deeply, even sacrificially, without behaving the way his father did.
The spiritual content was good as well, with lots of focus (as usual in Dickerson’s books) on trusting God in all areas and the characters prayed to Him for help many times and credited Him for their eventual success.
The romance was okay. Again, not my favorite of Dickerson’s novels, at least in part because the hero and heroine involved were not my favorites either. Honestly, I’m having trouble pin-pointing any other reason that it didn’t quite do it for me. It was sweet enough Magdalen and Steffan respected each other throughout, and eventually truly loved each other for each other’s good character, not just physical attraction (though that was present to a point, too). It just didn’t make me so happy that I wanted to hug the book at the end or anything.
Probably the only thing that truly "bothered" me about this book was that the editors and Dickerson should have been more vigilant about repetitive lines and re-stating information the reader already knows. Not all of Dickersons's books have had this, so not sure what happened here, it just got to a point of being noticeable and something I feel should have been fixed before publication.
All of this is the reason why I have given this book the rating of 3.5. It wasn’t bad at all, it just wasn’t a favorite and was my least favorite of this three-book, Medieval Fairy Tale series.
Content Advisory:
I’m going to be very lazy today ;P and link you to Lindsey’s (from Books for Christian Girls) review because she has also read this book and did a far more thorough job than I could of listing all possible content concerns: https://www.goodreads.com/review/show... Lindsey is great, y’all. 😊
Quite frankly, neither the Goose Girl fairytale, nor the Prince and the Pauper fairytale have ever been my favorites. They can be fun, but by nature of being so straight forward (how many different ways can one have one’s identity stolen or trade places with someone?), are pretty predictable, and I just feel like it’s hard to do a truly unique twist on them. Melanie Dickerson did give it a good shot, though. I thought it was interesting to have both tales being retold at the same time, and she did up the ante in several areas with a truly despicable villain (seriously though, I’d ask how he sleeps at night, but his answer would probably be, “On my side, with the window cracked.” :p Yeah, not a lot of remorse for his actions.), a lost portrait that needed to be found, and the question of why the villain wanted what he wanted. But, in spite of this, I just didn’t get as much enjoyment from this one as the first two books.
As for the main characters, though not my favorites of this series, I did still generally like them. We met Magdalen in the previous book. She was a very sweet girl with good character, and was a genuine friend to Avelina, so I was happy to learn that she was getting her own story in this book. Having learned more about her, I still like her even if I don’t relate to her as much as some of Dickerson’s other heroines. It took a lot of inner strength and character for her to keep from hating those who mistreated her so badly and eventually be able to forgive them.
Steffan was a good hero as well, acting bravely and selflessly in the defense of himself and others who could not protect themselves. I actually liked him better at the end of the book than the beginning, though. He was never a bad guy, but he did start out not wanting to marry for love because of how his father mourned to death when his beloved wife died, forgetting he had two children who still needed him, and Steffan feared experiencing such pain himself. Therefore, it was good to see him eventually realize that he could love someone deeply, even sacrificially, without behaving the way his father did.
The spiritual content was good as well, with lots of focus (as usual in Dickerson’s books) on trusting God in all areas and the characters prayed to Him for help many times and credited Him for their eventual success.
The romance was okay. Again, not my favorite of Dickerson’s novels, at least in part because the hero and heroine involved were not my favorites either. Honestly, I’m having trouble pin-pointing any other reason that it didn’t quite do it for me. It was sweet enough Magdalen and Steffan respected each other throughout, and eventually truly loved each other for each other’s good character, not just physical attraction (though that was present to a point, too). It just didn’t make me so happy that I wanted to hug the book at the end or anything.
Probably the only thing that truly "bothered" me about this book was that the editors and Dickerson should have been more vigilant about repetitive lines and re-stating information the reader already knows. Not all of Dickersons's books have had this, so not sure what happened here, it just got to a point of being noticeable and something I feel should have been fixed before publication.
All of this is the reason why I have given this book the rating of 3.5. It wasn’t bad at all, it just wasn’t a favorite and was my least favorite of this three-book, Medieval Fairy Tale series.
Content Advisory:
I’m going to be very lazy today ;P and link you to Lindsey’s (from Books for Christian Girls) review because she has also read this book and did a far more thorough job than I could of listing all possible content concerns: https://www.goodreads.com/review/show... Lindsey is great, y’all. 😊
October 3, 2020
While I’m in the process of revising my own fairy tale retelling of The Goose Girl, I couldn’t resist reading Melanie Dickerson’s own adaptation and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I thought it was clever how rather than the plot focusing on just one character being usurped, both main characters find themselves pushed from their rightful place and must rely on one another in order to regain their position.
I loved Magdalen, the Lady of Mallin, and thought she was a fantastic heroine with her sweet disposition and her kind and beautiful heart. She also possessed strong faith and reliance on God, demonstrated Christlike love and forgiveness, and had an admirable determination to maintain hope despite her circumstances and push through difficult things. Her faith carried her through her challenges without complaint and her perseverance allowed her to never give up. She was such an inspirational character. Steffan, the Duke of Wolfburg, was a heroic and noble man. He possessed a cynical attitude towards love at the beginning and made some selfish decisions, but he also had a good heart and I loved the growth he experienced throughout the story and the humility he gained as he learned what was truly important in life.
Steffan and Magdalen's relationship had a wonderful development—from their initial sweet meeting years before the story began, to their both finding themselves in a predicament, to their developing friendship and learning to trust and rely on one another as they both helped each other and made one another stronger, to genuine love and affection. I loved how Steffan opened his heart to allow himself to overcome his fears of falling in love in order to accept his deepening feelings for Magdalen. Despite having been hurt by Steffan’s initial rejections, Magdalen was so sweet and understanding of him, and their romance was extremely tender.
The romance plot was supplemented by the double usurping, which included some light mystery and intrigue. I liked how Magdalen and Steffan worked together to help one another search for a solution out of their dilemma. I loved how at the end there was redemption for Agnes and Alexander and thought their subtle secondary romance was a cute subplot. I adored the scenes when Magdalen serves as a goose girl, as well as the setting of a medieval castle surrounded by meadows and the sea. The strong faith theme was also inspirational and woven naturally throughout the story.
Overall, I thought The Noble Servant was a lovely retelling of the classic Goose Girl, both unique, faith-inspiring, and adorable, with wonderful characters who all experience fantastic growth alongside an interesting plot and a cute, slow-burning romance. I really enjoyed it and am eager to read more of Melanie Dickerson’s fairy tale adaptations.
I loved Magdalen, the Lady of Mallin, and thought she was a fantastic heroine with her sweet disposition and her kind and beautiful heart. She also possessed strong faith and reliance on God, demonstrated Christlike love and forgiveness, and had an admirable determination to maintain hope despite her circumstances and push through difficult things. Her faith carried her through her challenges without complaint and her perseverance allowed her to never give up. She was such an inspirational character. Steffan, the Duke of Wolfburg, was a heroic and noble man. He possessed a cynical attitude towards love at the beginning and made some selfish decisions, but he also had a good heart and I loved the growth he experienced throughout the story and the humility he gained as he learned what was truly important in life.
Steffan and Magdalen's relationship had a wonderful development—from their initial sweet meeting years before the story began, to their both finding themselves in a predicament, to their developing friendship and learning to trust and rely on one another as they both helped each other and made one another stronger, to genuine love and affection. I loved how Steffan opened his heart to allow himself to overcome his fears of falling in love in order to accept his deepening feelings for Magdalen. Despite having been hurt by Steffan’s initial rejections, Magdalen was so sweet and understanding of him, and their romance was extremely tender.
The romance plot was supplemented by the double usurping, which included some light mystery and intrigue. I liked how Magdalen and Steffan worked together to help one another search for a solution out of their dilemma. I loved how at the end there was redemption for Agnes and Alexander and thought their subtle secondary romance was a cute subplot. I adored the scenes when Magdalen serves as a goose girl, as well as the setting of a medieval castle surrounded by meadows and the sea. The strong faith theme was also inspirational and woven naturally throughout the story.
Overall, I thought The Noble Servant was a lovely retelling of the classic Goose Girl, both unique, faith-inspiring, and adorable, with wonderful characters who all experience fantastic growth alongside an interesting plot and a cute, slow-burning romance. I really enjoyed it and am eager to read more of Melanie Dickerson’s fairy tale adaptations.
June 22, 2017
Melanie Dickerson does it again! Another extremely enjoyable novel from a talented author. :)
I always enjoy Melanie Dickerson’s fairytale novels, and this one was especially enjoyable for some reason! :) It’s the final book in the trilogy which began with The Huntress of Thornbeck Forest and The Beautiful Pretender, and it tells the story of Magdalen, the friend of the heroine in The Beautiful Pretender, which I was very excited about. However, each of the books stands alone (aside from a few references/characters who reappear, which isn’t so important), so if you haven’t read the first two, you can definitely jump in on this one! :)
The Noble Servant is a retelling of The Goose Girl (with nods to The Prince and the Pauper as well), which is not a fairytale I’m as familiar with as some, although I know the general idea of the servant taking the place of her lady and forcing the heroine to become a servant tending to geese. I enjoyed the retelling aspect but likely didn’t pick up on as much of it as I might have if it was a different fairytale. But far from making it less enjoyable because of that, I actually enjoyed it immensely because I had no idea what was going to happen!
I really liked our heroine, Lady Magdalen of Mallin, who was very sweet but capable; and I especially liked the hero, Steffan, Duke of Wolfburg, who was kind but heroic and noble, and had some great lines. They are both nobles who find themselves in servant roles outside Steffan’s castle, and there is a plot by Steffan’s uncle and all sorts of intriguing things. I loved how they both ended up servants for awhile, which was interesting to read about. My favorite thing about the story was probably Magdalen and Steffan. They were super cute together, too. ;) I loved their dialog! Some of their discussions and times with the sheep and geese were my favorite parts of the novel. ^_^
I especially loved how Steffan really disliked the geese. XD You have a Goose Girl retelling, and the hero doesn’t like the geese the heroine is around because he’s scared of them. It. was. the. best. XD Steffan’s comments about the birds were my favorite. :D
As always, I enjoyed the medieval German setting (Steffan had even been away studying in Prague! I loved that!), with the smattering of German words, and the castle and the woods and fields, and even a sight of the sea. It was overall lovely and a great setting and time-period. Also, I want to eat those stuffed rolls with bacon, potato, and sauerkraut in them—they made me so hungry. XD
It was exciting at times, and absorbing all throughout, and had a few surprise twists which I did not see coming! Especially with a few of the side characters surprising me. So that was neat. :) Something about it felt a little different than Melanie Dickerson’s previous books, I felt, but not in a bad way. It was just... kind of new. :) While still being slightly similar in a good and familiar way.
Like I said, I wasn’t ever sure what would happen next, and the writing was extremely well done, and kept me turning pages all throughout the book, eager to find out how our sweet heroine and dashing hero would get out of their predicaments, with God’s help, and maybe find a little love along the way. ;) I couldn’t stop reading and was captivated until the final page.
I can’t think of anything specific that I disliked. Occasionally it gets very slightly exasperating how long it takes the hero and heroine to actually let on that they like each other and get over their worries about not being worthy etc., but that seems to be a classic romance theme, so oh well. :P And it didn’t annoy me as much as sometimes.
Overall, it was a very enjoyable story, which I quite liked. ^_^ I’d say that young adults and adults alike would enjoy this charming, sweet romance in medieval Germany, with a dash of retellings and Christianity, mistaken identities, lovable characters, and fun dialog about geese. :D
I received this book free from the publisher through the BookLook Bloggers book review bloggers program. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own.
FAVORITE QUOTE
(Review originally posted on The Road of a Writer: https://deborahocarroll.wordpress.com...)
I always enjoy Melanie Dickerson’s fairytale novels, and this one was especially enjoyable for some reason! :) It’s the final book in the trilogy which began with The Huntress of Thornbeck Forest and The Beautiful Pretender, and it tells the story of Magdalen, the friend of the heroine in The Beautiful Pretender, which I was very excited about. However, each of the books stands alone (aside from a few references/characters who reappear, which isn’t so important), so if you haven’t read the first two, you can definitely jump in on this one! :)
The Noble Servant is a retelling of The Goose Girl (with nods to The Prince and the Pauper as well), which is not a fairytale I’m as familiar with as some, although I know the general idea of the servant taking the place of her lady and forcing the heroine to become a servant tending to geese. I enjoyed the retelling aspect but likely didn’t pick up on as much of it as I might have if it was a different fairytale. But far from making it less enjoyable because of that, I actually enjoyed it immensely because I had no idea what was going to happen!
I really liked our heroine, Lady Magdalen of Mallin, who was very sweet but capable; and I especially liked the hero, Steffan, Duke of Wolfburg, who was kind but heroic and noble, and had some great lines. They are both nobles who find themselves in servant roles outside Steffan’s castle, and there is a plot by Steffan’s uncle and all sorts of intriguing things. I loved how they both ended up servants for awhile, which was interesting to read about. My favorite thing about the story was probably Magdalen and Steffan. They were super cute together, too. ;) I loved their dialog! Some of their discussions and times with the sheep and geese were my favorite parts of the novel. ^_^
I especially loved how Steffan really disliked the geese. XD You have a Goose Girl retelling, and the hero doesn’t like the geese the heroine is around because he’s scared of them. It. was. the. best. XD Steffan’s comments about the birds were my favorite. :D
As always, I enjoyed the medieval German setting (Steffan had even been away studying in Prague! I loved that!), with the smattering of German words, and the castle and the woods and fields, and even a sight of the sea. It was overall lovely and a great setting and time-period. Also, I want to eat those stuffed rolls with bacon, potato, and sauerkraut in them—they made me so hungry. XD
It was exciting at times, and absorbing all throughout, and had a few surprise twists which I did not see coming! Especially with a few of the side characters surprising me. So that was neat. :) Something about it felt a little different than Melanie Dickerson’s previous books, I felt, but not in a bad way. It was just... kind of new. :) While still being slightly similar in a good and familiar way.
Like I said, I wasn’t ever sure what would happen next, and the writing was extremely well done, and kept me turning pages all throughout the book, eager to find out how our sweet heroine and dashing hero would get out of their predicaments, with God’s help, and maybe find a little love along the way. ;) I couldn’t stop reading and was captivated until the final page.
I can’t think of anything specific that I disliked. Occasionally it gets very slightly exasperating how long it takes the hero and heroine to actually let on that they like each other and get over their worries about not being worthy etc., but that seems to be a classic romance theme, so oh well. :P And it didn’t annoy me as much as sometimes.
Overall, it was a very enjoyable story, which I quite liked. ^_^ I’d say that young adults and adults alike would enjoy this charming, sweet romance in medieval Germany, with a dash of retellings and Christianity, mistaken identities, lovable characters, and fun dialog about geese. :D
I received this book free from the publisher through the BookLook Bloggers book review bloggers program. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own.
FAVORITE QUOTE
“Evil birds. What are they doing among my sheep?” He raised his arms. “Shoo, you cruel little beasties.”
(Review originally posted on The Road of a Writer: https://deborahocarroll.wordpress.com...)
May 21, 2018
I won a copy from a giveaway. The author or the people running the giveaway did not pay me for a review and all the thoughts here are my own honest opinion.
This was a fun book in the series! Magdalen was a great character in the second book in the series, so it was wonderful having to read from her point of view. So here is what I thought about this book.
The Cover:
Though I thought that this cover is beautiful with the blue dress, yellow skies, and green and white ground, and the geese! I would have still liked something that matched the other books better.
The Book:
This is a retelling of The Goose Girl and The Prince and the Pauper. After taking a quick look at both tales, I found out that they are both pretty close to each other. The Goose Girl having girls, and The Prince and the Pauper having boys. The Noble Servant does a good job in portraying both of these tales.
Magdalen definitely was the noble servant! She was so kind and despite doing things lower than her station she hardly ever complained. If only she saw that more, than comparing what Avelina did or what she told Avelina to do. *Sigh*.
This book seemed to have a lot going on. I mean, she was in the fields with the geese, but things were still happening. Bad things, good things, and even things that made me laugh.
I also love the character Lenhart. He was mute and had so much heart. One of the things I don't like in Melanie's books is the lack of side characters or lack of their roles. Unfortunately this character was rarely seen in the story. I would have loved to have seen Lenhart and Magdalen together more and to get to know more about him.
Here's a Few Things I Didn't Like:
I think there might have been some information missing. I mean like little things. Once, a character was in the room, then the same character was talking behind the closed door, and I am still trying to figure out how the character got out there. The book never said. There might have been a few other places like this in the book.
Like always, the romance annoyed me. Yes, Magdalen wanted to find true love. I'm fine with that. Steffan didn't want to marry Magdalen. I'm fine with that too. But then why were they still falling for each other?
And then Magdalen was like
Content In Book:
1. Some violence. Mostly fighting or trying to hurt someone, or threatening to hurt someone.
2. Mentions of abuse, causing a character to become mute. Another character had said things in the past to lower the main character's self esteem.
Who Would I Recommend The Book To:
Historical fiction fans. Fairytale retelling's fans. The Goose Girl and The Prince and the Pauper fans. Romance fans, (there is a lot to love =)). And people who read the other two books in the series (The Huntress of Thornbeck Forest and The Beautiful Pretender).
This was a fun book in the series! Magdalen was a great character in the second book in the series, so it was wonderful having to read from her point of view. So here is what I thought about this book.
The Cover:
Though I thought that this cover is beautiful with the blue dress, yellow skies, and green and white ground, and the geese! I would have still liked something that matched the other books better.
The Book:
This is a retelling of The Goose Girl and The Prince and the Pauper. After taking a quick look at both tales, I found out that they are both pretty close to each other. The Goose Girl having girls, and The Prince and the Pauper having boys. The Noble Servant does a good job in portraying both of these tales.
Magdalen definitely was the noble servant! She was so kind and despite doing things lower than her station she hardly ever complained. If only she saw that more, than comparing what Avelina did or what she told Avelina to do. *Sigh*.
This book seemed to have a lot going on. I mean, she was in the fields with the geese, but things were still happening. Bad things, good things, and even things that made me laugh.
I also love the character Lenhart. He was mute and had so much heart. One of the things I don't like in Melanie's books is the lack of side characters or lack of their roles. Unfortunately this character was rarely seen in the story. I would have loved to have seen Lenhart and Magdalen together more and to get to know more about him.
Here's a Few Things I Didn't Like:
I think there might have been some information missing. I mean like little things. Once, a character was in the room, then the same character was talking behind the closed door, and I am still trying to figure out how the character got out there. The book never said. There might have been a few other places like this in the book.
Like always, the romance annoyed me. Yes, Magdalen wanted to find true love. I'm fine with that. Steffan didn't want to marry Magdalen. I'm fine with that too. But then why were they still falling for each other?
And then Magdalen was like
Content In Book:
1. Some violence. Mostly fighting or trying to hurt someone, or threatening to hurt someone.
2. Mentions of abuse, causing a character to become mute. Another character had said things in the past to lower the main character's self esteem.
Who Would I Recommend The Book To:
Historical fiction fans. Fairytale retelling's fans. The Goose Girl and The Prince and the Pauper fans. Romance fans, (there is a lot to love =)). And people who read the other two books in the series (The Huntress of Thornbeck Forest and The Beautiful Pretender).
October 1, 2017
She lost everything to an evil conspiracy . . . but that loss may just give her all she ever wanted.
First I would like to thank NetGalley and the publisher Thomas Nelson for giving me a copy of this book.
3.5 stars. The Noble Servant is the third book in the Medieval Fairy Tale series. I haven't read the first two yet, but this works fine as a stand-alone. The story begins with Lady Magdalen traveling to marry the Duke of Wolfberg in an arranged marriage. Magdalen had met the Duke once two years before and developed a bit of a crush on him, so she is happy about the arrangement, as she is penniless and wasn't expecting anyone to want to marry her without a dowry. However, things do not go as planned while on the way and Magdalen is forced to switch places with her maidservant who steals her identity. Little do they both know that more deception is afoot at the Duke's castle.
This is a retelling of The Goose Girl, a Fairy Tale I am not all that familiar with so I can't say how true to that story this is. I did enjoy reading when she was tending the geese and when she met Steffan who just happened to be tending the sheep. I thought it was a little ridiculous that they didn't just tell each other who they were, especially after a certain point. Of course just like most of these historical romances, there are some misunderstandings and characters who don't tell each other how they really feel because they think the other person doesn't feel the same way. It got a little old after a while, and while nothing new, it was a sweet romance and I still enjoyed the book
This is also Christian fiction and I knew that going into the book. I felt it got a bit heavy handed with the scripture quoting and praying. Don't get me wrong, I don't mind those things in general, but as I've said in other reviews, I usually just prefer them to be added to the story in a more subtle way. I think the thing about it that bothered me a bit was that the religious aspect of the book felt too modern and evangelical for the time period and medieval setting in the way it was presented. This kind of pulled me out of the story a couple of times.
I will probably read the other two books in this series as they are nice to read when I just want something light.
Review also posted at Writings of a Reader
First I would like to thank NetGalley and the publisher Thomas Nelson for giving me a copy of this book.
3.5 stars. The Noble Servant is the third book in the Medieval Fairy Tale series. I haven't read the first two yet, but this works fine as a stand-alone. The story begins with Lady Magdalen traveling to marry the Duke of Wolfberg in an arranged marriage. Magdalen had met the Duke once two years before and developed a bit of a crush on him, so she is happy about the arrangement, as she is penniless and wasn't expecting anyone to want to marry her without a dowry. However, things do not go as planned while on the way and Magdalen is forced to switch places with her maidservant who steals her identity. Little do they both know that more deception is afoot at the Duke's castle.
This is a retelling of The Goose Girl, a Fairy Tale I am not all that familiar with so I can't say how true to that story this is. I did enjoy reading when she was tending the geese and when she met Steffan who just happened to be tending the sheep. I thought it was a little ridiculous that they didn't just tell each other who they were, especially after a certain point. Of course just like most of these historical romances, there are some misunderstandings and characters who don't tell each other how they really feel because they think the other person doesn't feel the same way. It got a little old after a while, and while nothing new, it was a sweet romance and I still enjoyed the book
This is also Christian fiction and I knew that going into the book. I felt it got a bit heavy handed with the scripture quoting and praying. Don't get me wrong, I don't mind those things in general, but as I've said in other reviews, I usually just prefer them to be added to the story in a more subtle way. I think the thing about it that bothered me a bit was that the religious aspect of the book felt too modern and evangelical for the time period and medieval setting in the way it was presented. This kind of pulled me out of the story a couple of times.
I will probably read the other two books in this series as they are nice to read when I just want something light.
Review also posted at Writings of a Reader
March 28, 2017
I cannot say enough good things about The Noble Servant. It is a book that draws you in and you just enjoy the characters so much.
Lady Magdalen lives at home with her sisters and her mother. Magdalen's mother treats her poorly and insists she marry well so that she can bring economic relief to her community. Magdalen is surprised to receive a proposal of marriage from the Duke of Wolfberg. They danced two years ago but she had not heard from him since then. As she heads to his castle, her servants betray her and make her switch places with them. Her servant is now considered to be Lady Magdalen and Magdalen becomes a servant in charge of the geese.
Steffan is the Duke of Wolfberg. He has been away at school for two years. During that time, his evil uncle has taken over the castle and is using his son to pose as the Duke of Wolfberg. Steffan's only way of proving who he is lies in the castle walls. He poses as a servant so that he can gain access to the kingdom. When Steffan meets Magdalen he immediately knows who she is. She suspects him to be the Duke but she is unsure. When Steffan and Magdalen form a friendship and work together to reveal their true identities he gets dangerous for them. They are unsure who they can trust and learn they can only rely on each other.
The Noble Servant is so well written and tender. You have to love the two main characters and their integrity. Both are noble servants. The ending of the book is just so good.
Lady Magdalen lives at home with her sisters and her mother. Magdalen's mother treats her poorly and insists she marry well so that she can bring economic relief to her community. Magdalen is surprised to receive a proposal of marriage from the Duke of Wolfberg. They danced two years ago but she had not heard from him since then. As she heads to his castle, her servants betray her and make her switch places with them. Her servant is now considered to be Lady Magdalen and Magdalen becomes a servant in charge of the geese.
Steffan is the Duke of Wolfberg. He has been away at school for two years. During that time, his evil uncle has taken over the castle and is using his son to pose as the Duke of Wolfberg. Steffan's only way of proving who he is lies in the castle walls. He poses as a servant so that he can gain access to the kingdom. When Steffan meets Magdalen he immediately knows who she is. She suspects him to be the Duke but she is unsure. When Steffan and Magdalen form a friendship and work together to reveal their true identities he gets dangerous for them. They are unsure who they can trust and learn they can only rely on each other.
The Noble Servant is so well written and tender. You have to love the two main characters and their integrity. Both are noble servants. The ending of the book is just so good.
March 9, 2017
The Noble Servant by Melanie Dickerson
This story grabs the reader immediately and pulls them straight into the medieval era and Magdalen's life. Dickerson possesses magic in her fingertips because she weaves such a spellbinding tale that the reader cannot put it down! Magdalen's character drew me in with her sweet disposition and her kind and beautiful heart. I had no idea how she would resolve her situation but I knew she would persevere somehow because she never gave up. Her kindness towards others and her faith in God made for a heroine that all women would want to be like. My heart was pumping with adrenaline for all of the precarious situations she and Steffan found themselves in! And man was Steffan handsome, he would make any girl swoon with his good looks and chivalrous personality! Dickerson has done it again with The Noble Servant! She transported me to another time and place to where I forgot my world completely and became entrenched in Magdalen's! Bravo for a beautifully written Christian medieval tale! Five stars and I cannot wait for whatever Dickerson writes next! I received a copy of this via Netgalley and I was under no obligation to review it.
May 18, 2017
I enjoyed this book. It was a good, sweet read that was easy to pick up and put down while reading over breakfast while not making me late for work.
I was looking forward to this book ever since I read The Beautiful Pretender, which is my favorite Melanie Dickerson book outside of her Regency ones, and I was looking forward to this even more when I realized it was a Goose Girl retelling.
This book delivered...mostly. Magdalen and Steffan made a cute couple, and there were a few harrowing moments in the book. But something felt a bit missing in the book. I can't quite put my finger on it. Maybe because, outside of 1 week that Magdalen spent as a goose girl, this barely followed the Goose Girl fairy tale at all. Not that I minded some changes (I'm rather glad no horses died in this version of the fairy tale), but I was still looking for more. *shrugs*
It was still enjoyable and it was nice to revisit a few characters from the previous books there at the end.
I was looking forward to this book ever since I read The Beautiful Pretender, which is my favorite Melanie Dickerson book outside of her Regency ones, and I was looking forward to this even more when I realized it was a Goose Girl retelling.
This book delivered...mostly. Magdalen and Steffan made a cute couple, and there were a few harrowing moments in the book. But something felt a bit missing in the book. I can't quite put my finger on it. Maybe because, outside of 1 week that Magdalen spent as a goose girl, this barely followed the Goose Girl fairy tale at all. Not that I minded some changes (I'm rather glad no horses died in this version of the fairy tale), but I was still looking for more. *shrugs*
It was still enjoyable and it was nice to revisit a few characters from the previous books there at the end.
March 16, 2017
This book is a sweet step back in time to medieval Germany. Magdalen has been forced from her rightful position by a servant and now works as a goose girl. The duke has also lost his position. Together they must try to save their positions so they can save their countries. The plot has threads of danger, romance, and intrigue. It was a sweet story, and one I enjoyed. It is also a retelling of a Grimm tale I wasn't familiar with. Perfect for teen readers and those who enjoy a great story.
June 21, 2017
*4.5 stars*
I really enjoyed this book, but I don't think it's my favorite Melanie Dickerson book. It felt more like her Hagenheim series than the Medieval Fairy Tale. And even though I love the cover, it matches the Hagenheim series more as well.
But other than that I didn't really have any other problems with it :)
I loved Magdalen, she's so loyal to her friends, and kindhearted.
I loved Steffan, he's amazing, and I loved his character growth <3
I loved Lenhart, he was so sweet <3 <3
Now Agnes,
Overall I really enjoyed it :-D
Just wish it matched more with the series it is in.
I received a copy of this book for free. I was not required to post a positive review and the views and opinions expressed are my own.
I really enjoyed this book, but I don't think it's my favorite Melanie Dickerson book. It felt more like her Hagenheim series than the Medieval Fairy Tale. And even though I love the cover, it matches the Hagenheim series more as well.
But other than that I didn't really have any other problems with it :)
I loved Magdalen, she's so loyal to her friends, and kindhearted.
I loved Steffan, he's amazing, and I loved his character growth <3
I loved Lenhart, he was so sweet <3 <3
Now Agnes,
Overall I really enjoyed it :-D
Just wish it matched more with the series it is in.
I received a copy of this book for free. I was not required to post a positive review and the views and opinions expressed are my own.
October 21, 2020
This was an enjoyable read with all the fairytale feels & a fun plot✨. I was really excited to read about Magdalen’s story after the previous book in the series. Sadly, I felt like Magdalen’s character changed a bit from the previous book though; She didn’t seem quite as sweet & meek to me. I thought her harshness on the hero at times was out of character.
All that to say, she & the duke were a super cute couple & I was excited to see them finally get together but it seemed like I had to wait forever😩!! I’ve really enjoyed all of the Melanie Dickerson books I’ve read but they tend to get bogged down in action in the second half of the books & the relationship aspect slows down. I wish there would be more romance sprinkled in.💕 Kudos for the amazing cover 💗
All that to say, she & the duke were a super cute couple & I was excited to see them finally get together but it seemed like I had to wait forever😩!! I’ve really enjoyed all of the Melanie Dickerson books I’ve read but they tend to get bogged down in action in the second half of the books & the relationship aspect slows down. I wish there would be more romance sprinkled in.💕 Kudos for the amazing cover 💗
June 17, 2017
What is it about fairy tales retold that I love? Melanie Dickerson's characters are real men and women with life challenging problems that resonate with good versus evil situations. This story of the goose girl captures the imagination and brings the reader into a fragile world where deception has the possibility to rearrange lives and to delineate social lines.
July 15, 2025
I enjoyed this!
Thou some parts went fast while some went slow in my opinion.
Thou some parts went fast while some went slow in my opinion.
May 10, 2021
This story was such a delight! I rather enjoyed the Goose Girl retelling. The hidden identities, mystery, and adventure of it all were quite fun. The leads were complex, as was the plot, but the supporting cast could have used a bit more development. Overall, this one was a charmer.
Content: Catholicism, swearing by “all that is merciful and holy”
Content: Catholicism, swearing by “all that is merciful and holy”
July 17, 2020
4 stars
Second read, 2020
read this site my sister and enjoyed it more than I did the first time. It's weird how moods and times of life can so vastly changenhow we view books! I love Magdalenas character and following along her journey was exciting.
3.5
A continuation to Melanie Dickerson's Medieval FairyTale Series, "The Noble Servant" tells us the tale of Lady Magdalen whom we met in "The Beautiful Pretender". While reading TBP, I was looking forward to reading Lady Magdalen's tale, and so as soon as this came available for review, I grabbed a copy. :)
I found the middle and end of the book the most engaging, though perhaps a little predictable. Still, I enjoyed the book and am sure fans of Melanie Dickerson will enjoy it as well.
I did have some...concerns with this one, but for the most part I enjoyed it. It could be a little slow/long at times, but Lady Magdalen was a sweet character, and Stephen was a good one too.
The author does a good job with the setting and making you feel like you're in the time period, and I do really like that.
There was a bit of violent description in this one, a case right in the first chapter that I didn't care for and wouldn't advise my 14 year sister to read. I'm not one for scenes of violence described so...thoroughly. I understand the circumstances and necessity of the scene, just don't think it needs to be so gruesomely described in YA books.
Also, there is a strong Catholic theme throughout the book, which I know some love and some don't, so I want to make sure that I mention that. It isn't just a "Christian" world view that every religion or belief system can relate to, it is strongly Catholic with penance and working for salvation.
Second read, 2020
read this site my sister and enjoyed it more than I did the first time. It's weird how moods and times of life can so vastly changenhow we view books! I love Magdalenas character and following along her journey was exciting.
3.5
A continuation to Melanie Dickerson's Medieval FairyTale Series, "The Noble Servant" tells us the tale of Lady Magdalen whom we met in "The Beautiful Pretender". While reading TBP, I was looking forward to reading Lady Magdalen's tale, and so as soon as this came available for review, I grabbed a copy. :)
I found the middle and end of the book the most engaging, though perhaps a little predictable. Still, I enjoyed the book and am sure fans of Melanie Dickerson will enjoy it as well.
I did have some...concerns with this one, but for the most part I enjoyed it. It could be a little slow/long at times, but Lady Magdalen was a sweet character, and Stephen was a good one too.
The author does a good job with the setting and making you feel like you're in the time period, and I do really like that.
There was a bit of violent description in this one, a case right in the first chapter that I didn't care for and wouldn't advise my 14 year sister to read. I'm not one for scenes of violence described so...thoroughly. I understand the circumstances and necessity of the scene, just don't think it needs to be so gruesomely described in YA books.
Also, there is a strong Catholic theme throughout the book, which I know some love and some don't, so I want to make sure that I mention that. It isn't just a "Christian" world view that every religion or belief system can relate to, it is strongly Catholic with penance and working for salvation.
May 29, 2017
The Noble Servant was an entertaining fairy tale with a light romance and some villains who were up to no good! This wasn’t my favorite of the author’s novels that I’ve read, however, I did enjoy it and found it to be a rather easy and fast read for me. I also appreciated that it was a clean story and definitely appropriate for teen readers, as well.
I liked the two main characters, Magdalen and Steffan, and enjoyed watching them work to overcome not only those who were plotting against them, but also ideas and attitudes that were the result of past painful experiences. Overall, I enjoyed this sweet story.
I received a complimentary copy of this book. All opinions are my own.
You can read this review on my blog:
https://brittreadsfiction.wordpress.c...
I liked the two main characters, Magdalen and Steffan, and enjoyed watching them work to overcome not only those who were plotting against them, but also ideas and attitudes that were the result of past painful experiences. Overall, I enjoyed this sweet story.
I received a complimentary copy of this book. All opinions are my own.
You can read this review on my blog:
https://brittreadsfiction.wordpress.c...
February 3, 2025
This is a really cute book!! I liked it because it is so different from Melanie Dickerson's other books and the love story is adorable lol!!!
Everybody should read this book!!
Unless, I mean, if you're allergic to cute romances, that is.
⭐⭐⭐⭐
Everybody should read this book!!
Unless, I mean, if you're allergic to cute romances, that is.
⭐⭐⭐⭐
June 6, 2017
Lady Magdalen is a woman with a good heart. She agrees to travel for days to marry a man that she met at an event two years ago. The book is set in Medieval times, so this is no small feat. She means to marry him to help her people from the escape the poverty they are experiencing, since the copper mines no longer produce.
She is faced with treachery right from the beginning. The funny thing is that this book is full of treachery. Few are who or what they seem.
Steffan is the Duke returning home after a two year absence. He has not idea that his Uncle asked Magdalen to marry him. He is returning home on false pretenses, only to find that treachery awaits him.
This book is full of plot twists. It is engaging and fun to read. I love medieval times. There is something about it that appeals to me, probably because it is so different from the life we have during the present day. I loved the setting, and I love the story of the Goose Girl. This book is a twist on the fairy tale. The characters are well written, and the book felt true to the time period.
There are many great things to recommend this book. It is clean with a tiny bit of kissing. Scriptures are quoted, but it is by no means preachy.
Source: I requested a copy from Netgalley to review. All thoughts and opinions expressed are my own.
She is faced with treachery right from the beginning. The funny thing is that this book is full of treachery. Few are who or what they seem.
Steffan is the Duke returning home after a two year absence. He has not idea that his Uncle asked Magdalen to marry him. He is returning home on false pretenses, only to find that treachery awaits him.
This book is full of plot twists. It is engaging and fun to read. I love medieval times. There is something about it that appeals to me, probably because it is so different from the life we have during the present day. I loved the setting, and I love the story of the Goose Girl. This book is a twist on the fairy tale. The characters are well written, and the book felt true to the time period.
There are many great things to recommend this book. It is clean with a tiny bit of kissing. Scriptures are quoted, but it is by no means preachy.
Source: I requested a copy from Netgalley to review. All thoughts and opinions expressed are my own.
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April 13, 2019
Loved this story from one of my all-time favorite authors. This was an exciting tale with fantastic characters and a storyline that kept me intruiged throughout. There was a great mystery element as well that was an added bonus. Melanie is a can’t miss author for me and this story is a perfect example as to why.
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