I first became familiar with The Other Wes Moore, and though I remained interested in reading that book, I came to this one first, as it has been selected as a summer read for students I will be teaching at my new school assignment.
The premise of both Wes Moore texts - his original and this young adult adaptation - is that there were (at least) two Wes Moore living in Baltimore. The author eventually graduated from Johns Hopkins University, earned a Rhodes Scholarship, got married, and earned all of the traditional measures of success. The other Wes Moore ended up in jail, where he is serving a life sentence for murder. In this adaptation, Moore wrestles with how and what caused their paths to diverge, when in so many respects, there were a number of similarities in terms of how and where they were raised.
I thoroughly enjoyed Wes Moore's take on the thin, tenuous line that sometimes separates our fate from someone else's, and I appreciate that he asks and doesn't necessarily reconcile some tough questions about how our choices, our environments, and our expectations shape those destinies.
While I thoroughly enjoyed this book, written with so much heart, there were two things that frittered away at me:
1) I felt that very little time (only the last few chapters) focused on the other Wes Moore, so he ended up feeling like an afterthought, when the original text was called The Other Wes Moore. Perhaps because of the shift in audience, there were modifications in purpose and thus the editing cut out some of his story? I guess I'd need to read the other one to make that determination.
2) I felt that the transition between his initial days at Valley Forge to being a successful cadet felt abrupt, like we did not really get to clearly see that evolution, which I doubt happened overnight. Again, this may have been an issue of cutting/editing, given the difference in audience, but I wanted to see more of that growth in development, as it clearly did play a role in Wes' maturation.
What I did love was that Wes acknowledged the impact of the support he received, and toward the end, I found great value in his disagreement with the other Wes Moore, who said he believed that others' expectations of/for him shaped his future. Author Wes Moore said that he felt this statement served as an evasion of responsibility, and that gave me food for thought, and ultimately, I appreciated what he had to say about taking accountability for yourself and your decisions.