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This hilarious illustrated novel about the chaos of the creative process follows middle schooler Eliot Quigly as he endeavors to create the best superhero comic ever—with unforgettably epic hiccups along the way!  

Eliot Quigly is sure of one thing and one thing He is sitting on the greatest superhero comic idea of all time. Combine radioactive onion rings with a run-of-the-mill kid and you get the Mighty Onion, a crime-fighting superhero who gains extraordinary powers whenever he eats onions. It’s genius! 
 
Eliot can’t wait to get his brilliant idea out into the world, but there’s only one he’s terrible at drawing. Eliot is about to throw in the towel when he lucks upon the perfect illustrator—classmate Pamela Jones, who begrudgingly agrees to help.  
 
With his ambition and her artistic talent, there’s no stopping this dynamic comic-creating duo. But partnership is a tricky road, and creative differences arise quickly. Will Eliot and Pam stick together long enough to make this vision a reality? 
 
Using a mix of comics pages, journal entries, handwritten letters, and more, author-illustrator Mark Crilley explores the triumphs and tribulations of the creative process—and teamwork—in a series opener that’s unlike any you’ve seen before!

240 pages, Hardcover

Published April 2, 2024

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Mark Crilley

117 books372 followers
Mark Crilley is an American comic book creator and children's book author/illustrator. He is the creator of Miki Falls, Akiko, and Brody's Ghost. He is also noted for his instructional videos for drawing in the manga-style. Crilley distributes drawing advice to artists via YouTube videos and his DeviantArt account. In August 2010, he starred in some how to draw videos for Funimation on demand. Mark Crilley's wife is Miki Crilley who he named Miki Falls after. The two have a daughter, Mio, and a son, Matthew.
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Profile Image for Victoria Sanchez.
Author 1 book33 followers
November 6, 2023
Okay, I've only read one chapter but that chapter is surprisingly funny. Will update once I get the full ARC.
Thank you to Hachette for this chapter.
Profile Image for Alexandria Williams.
870 reviews74 followers
April 12, 2024
This hilarious illustrated novel about the chaos of the creative process follows middle schooler Eliot Quigly as he endeavors to create the best superhero comic ever—with unforgettably epic hiccups along the way!

📖: The Mighty Onion
🖊️: @markcrilleyreal

My kids and I loved this book so much! The illustrations are bright and fun.

I liked how the book shows us Eliot’s journal entries, the whole process of him creating the comic book, the fan letters, and then the six comic issues. Together it was crafted and written beautifully.

I laughed when a problem occurred and he was back to creating the comic on his own. That comic issue was hilarious of him just watching tv.

Looking for a fun book to enjoy with your kids? Or even read for homeschool? I highly recommend this book!!🔥

Thank you @tbrbeyondtours for allowing me to join this tour! As always, my review is my opinion and thoughts.
Profile Image for Lisa Lemelin.
48 reviews1 follower
August 1, 2024
Coming up with a superhero for a comic idea you have isn’t so easy.
read to find out how Eliot quigley navigates the obstacles he faces when trying to make the mighty onion successful
Profile Image for Ava F.
92 reviews6 followers
April 1, 2024
This book is so good, such a fun read. Written in several different styles like graphic novel/comic book, diary, notes and letters it’s just so awesome! I really love how all the different styles flow together so well and how Eliot comes up with the idea for the Mighty Onion! I mean a radioactive onion ring? Who would’ve thought! I can’t wait for more!
1,015 reviews2 followers
September 27, 2024
That eternal question has finally been answered: what happens when you eat a radioactive onion ring?

Eliot Quigley has a great idea for a new superhero called the Mighty Onion. Thanks to an encounter with nuclear powered onion rings, anytime the fledgling new hero eats onions, he becomes a superhero. With his new creation, Eliot can write the script. It's the artwork that doesn't quite match his skill set.

In need of an artist, Eliot sets his laser-like focus on Pamela Jones. Pamela is the best artist in his class. Her style is the perfect match. Only she doesn't want to become Eliot's partner. Let's be honest here. Eliot's a little weird... and a bit annoying.

When Eliot and Pamela's literature teacher offers them extra credit to work together on the project, the Mighty Onion finally makes their way into print. However, cracks in the foundation of the two comic book creators relationship will begin to show when the fan reaction to the new hero is all on Pamela. True, she made some changes to Eliot's script without consulting him. Yet, they were all clever ideas that made the Mighty Onion so popular with Eliot's classmates. Now the Mighty Onion faces his greatest foe, cancellation, as Elliot and Pamela have decided to end their partnership!

The Mighty Onion is a mix of different media. The main plot unfolds in the pages of Eliot's journal, complete with Eliot's artwork scribbles. The comic book is presented in a sequential art style. Dialogue between Eliot and Pamela is presented as notes passed back and forth in class. There are also rough drafts, fan letters and other elements seen as scrap paper that present as parts of the prose story.

I really enjoyed this 2024 hybrid graphic novel. Mark Crilley uses a variety of art styles as we see the Mighty Onion's adventures illustrated by a number of artists who work on the book. The dialogue is perfect for what you'd expect to hear from kids. Thankfully, without all the slang that even Gen Z kids don't really understand what they're talking about.

The book ends with a 'To Be Continued.' I'm hoping we will see more of the Mighty Onion's escapades. Parents and guardians will love this book as it's extremely wholesome. The book teaches some important lessons about teamwork, friendship and self-worth. Except for some super-heroics in the comic sections of the book, there shouldn't be anything that parents and guardians object to and even those elements are exaggerated for comedic effect!

If the young reader in your life has ever expressed interest in the comic book industry or just to make one for fun at home, you need to get them this book. It will reveal some of the perils and challenges of working alone or with a group. It also reveals both some of the hurtful and helpful self talk that writers and artists struggle with while creating their works of art. While not a technical guide about making your own comics, this book uncovers a lot of the psychology and collaborative challenges that books like How to Draw Comics the Marvel Way just doesn't spend any time talking about!
1,595 reviews26 followers
February 21, 2024
What worked:
The story goes through the creative process of writing/drawing a comic book. The book is formatted to share the steps Eliot goes through from generating ideas to the “published” final product. The artwork depicts different types of paper as his concepts get more serious. The pictures show he begins writing on a notepad, then notebook paper, until he is finally able to purchase some quality drawing paper. Eliot realizes his weakness is drawing so he enlists the help of a classmate, Pam. Their interactions are shown on torn pieces of paper as they pass notes during class. Each completed episode of The Mighty Onion is presented as a comic strip spread over multiple pages.
The majority of the conflict takes place within Eliot’s character as he strives to make his comic about the Mighty Onion a smash hit. His character lacks humility and he thinks all of his ideas are the best. He ignores any criticism and is infuriated when Pam tries to change a couple of things without telling him. Pam’s artwork is a huge step up from Eliot’s attempts at drawing but he never shares a compliment or a thank you to her. Pam is well aware of this fact and Eliot’s inability to notice social cues makes the problem even larger.
The plot includes a touch of humor which must be expected in a story about a Mighty Onion. How many scientists would take radioactive onions and toss them out the window? Eliot’s warped sense of reality will have readers shaking their heads as he makes the situation with Pam worse and worse. The creative process in his mind will show that he has even poorer ideas about the Mighty Onion than the ideas that make it into the comic. The Mighty Onion is eventually paired with Guinea Pig Girl as she flies around in her Guinea Copter. The light-hearted narrative will keep readers amused and entertained.
What didn’t work as well:
The strangeness of The Mighty Onion may not excite some readers but the real story centers on the relationship between Eliot and Pam. The varied format of the narrative through notes, comics, and journals is not normal in most novels but it presents it in an interesting way.
The final verdict:
I was not immediately eager to read a book about a radioactive onion but Eliot’s transformation into a more compassionate person is quite interesting. The unique presentation adds an innovative twist to story-telling and should appeal to most middle-grade readers. Overall, this book is a pleasure to read and I recommend you give it a shot.
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308 reviews1 follower
April 2, 2024
Review from my little sister, Laly:

Eliot is determined to create a comic book someday. He has plenty of great ideas, but one problem is he can't draw. So, Eliot finds a fantastic artist to bring his new comic idea, The Mighty Onion, to life. Fortunately, he meets Pam, a talented artist who reluctantly agrees to draw a chapter for him after a lot of begging. Soon, they became partners, and their comic became a big hit at their school. However, things start going downhill when Pam stops following the script that Eliot wrote for her, and all the fan mail they receive is mainly directed to Pam and not Eliot. Their creative differences come to the surface, and their partnership quickly begins to crumble.

The book was truly exceptional, and the storyline was epic! Nevertheless, the other books the same author wrote left a long-lasting impact on me. Specifically, Mark Crilley's how-to-draw anime book was a game-changer for me. I have been drawing since I was a kid, but that book has wholly transformed my drawing skills. My artwork has improved significantly, improving with each passing day.

The book is written in a journal style from Elliot's perspective. I loved how you could see Elliot's drawing throughout the journal because who doesn't draw in their journal? It was funny seeing how bad he was at drawing. The book also shows the chapters of the mighty onion that Pam drew, and those drawings were beautiful, especially after comparing them to Elliot's.

I enjoyed reading about the superhero the Mighty Onion because he is a remarkable character with onion powers! The Mighty Onion was an exceptional character, and I loved how the author portrayed him. The book also had another hero, the guinea pig girl, who was equally impressive. The characters were all fantastic, and the storyline perfectly blended emotions. The book was heart-warming yet heartbreaking. I highly recommend this book to anyone who breathes.

Happy Reading, Laly ❤️ 📚🧅

Thank you, @tbrbeyondtours, @littlebrownyoungreaders, and @markcrilleyreal, for sending me a copy of this book. I am leaving this review voluntarily.
Profile Image for Joshua Glasgow.
484 reviews9 followers
March 11, 2026
Read this with my 5-year-old. I enjoyed it quite a bit. Almost tempted to go 5 stars, but the central plot is a little generic, in my view: protagonist Elliot has an idea for a comic book ("The Mighty Onion") and recruits a classmate, Pam, to do the illustrations since he isn't a strong artist. As the comic book gains popularity, Elliot gets a big head, causing tension in the relationship. The partnership disintegrates and Elliot tries to go it his own way but eventually has a change of heart and the relationship is salvaged. Spoilers I guess, but I mean, is it spoilers, really? Can't you see the story beats a million miles away? Not to say it isn't effective or affecting - maybe I'm too sensitive, but I'll admit it did make me teary-eyed at least once - but that doesn't subtract from the fact that the broad story feels like it's been done before, even if not in this exact outfit.

The outfit, though, is pretty remarkable. The book is set up as a series of journal entries and other assorted writings in spiral notebooks, on notepads, on napkins, on scraps of paper. The pages actually appear to be those things. My son at times was touching the pages to see if he could peel off a sticky note pasted on the spiral notebook paper, or to see if stickers on one of the pages were real. That makes the whole thing feel a lot more tactile and dynamic. Even beyond that, the artwork within the book appears in many different styles - Elliot's, Pam's, a third kid named... Dirk, I think? - and each is cool in its own way. The characters are also fairly well-rounded and there is a light humor underlying the entire thing which keeps it feeling fresh and light.

Goodreads has this listed as "The Mighty Onion #1" but it doesn't appear that any sequels have been published as of the time I'm writing this review. If or when one is, I would definitely be interested in checking it out. This first book was solid and I'm eager to see more in the same vein.
Profile Image for Melissa (Nissa_the.bookworm).
1,204 reviews94 followers
March 21, 2024
𝐑𝐄𝐀𝐃 𝐓𝐇𝐈𝐒 𝐈𝐅 𝐘𝐎𝐔
✍🏻 ever wanted to create a comic book
💥 have ever fought with a friend
🧅 enjoy onions (like, a lot)
💨 want a quick, fun read

• 𝐖𝐇𝐀𝐓 𝐈𝐓’𝐒 𝐀𝐁𝐎𝐔𝐓

Eliot Quigly is sure of one thing and one thing only: He is sitting on the greatest superhero comic idea of all time. Combine radioactive onion rings with a run-of-the-mill kid and you get the Mighty Onion, a crime-fighting superhero who gains extraordinary powers whenever he eats onions. It’s genius! 
 
Eliot can’t wait to get his brilliant idea out into the world, but there’s only one problem: he’s terrible at drawing. Eliot is about to throw in the towel when he lucks upon the perfect illustrator—classmate Pamela Jones, who begrudgingly agrees to help.  
 
With his ambition and her artistic talent, there’s no stopping this dynamic comic-creating duo. But partnership is a tricky road, and creative differences arise quickly. Will Eliot and Pam stick together long enough to make this vision a reality?

• 𝐌𝐘 𝐓𝐇𝐎𝐔𝐆𝐇𝐓𝐒

I never say no to a graphic novel, and this one was unputdownable! I loved the different style of drawings (all done by the writer/artist himself) and how well done the story was. Pam and Eliot are really unique characters. I wish that I had Pam’s voice back when I was a kid. She knew when to say no and how to articulate it well. Eliot was a bit full of himself, but he really redeems himself at the end. I loved seeing the comics the two of them created together. And Pam’s short comics were hilarious. I recommend this one to everyone who enjoys graphic novels and especially to preteens!
Profile Image for Mark Schlatter.
1,253 reviews15 followers
April 11, 2024
My problem with reviewing works by Crilley is that I *adored* his Akiko comics series and most everything afterwards has paled in comparison (often because the later works haven't had the gonzo creativity I liked so much in Akiko).

So, what that in mind, this is okay to good. It's strongly mining stuff like Diary of a Wimpy Kid (in that much of the book consists of pages handwritten by our protagonist) while using - of all things - a battle between a comics writer and comics artist (think Stan Lee and Jack Kirby) as the main plot. Eliot is the school-age writer and creator of the Mighty Onion, while Pam is the unpaid artist who likes to change the story. As a plot, it works, although Eliot exhibits way too many ego trips to drive the conflict.

There's also the problem that the Crilley art is sparser that I expected (with all the text pages). Some of the design work is still great on those pages (such as silly logos in the letterhead), but I was hoping for a book of comics pages, not half a book.
Profile Image for Maggie.
414 reviews
February 27, 2024
This was such a cute book! I'm a big fan of kid's graphic novels, as they're always light-hearted and fun, and "The Mighty Onion" was no exception!

While the book features superheroes, most of the plot centers around our characters and their on-and-off friendship. Eliot writes the stories while Pam draws the pictures, but they run into a lot of creative differences that cause conflict in their relationship.

My favorite thing about this graphic novel was its use of mixed-media; different kinds of paper are shown to be used by different characters, things get "taped in", there are food wrappers and sticky notes from Eliot's mom... it's delightful.

Highly recommended for kids 8-12 who love comics and graphic novels!

I received an ARC from the publisher- all opinions are honest, and my own.
Profile Image for Critter.
1,216 reviews44 followers
March 6, 2024
I would like to thank the publisher for providing me with an ARC.

I honestly didn't know what I was expecting from this book, but I ended up loving this book. The Mighty Onion is very different from what I'd normally read. The story is funny, emotional, and a bit weird at times. However, the weird aspects only enhance the enjoyability of the story. Crilley did a fantastic job telling the story. I loved the unique way that journalling, comics, and various notes were pulled together into the narrative. Despite only having the story told through notes and journaling, the story delivers a big emotional impact. I loved how developed the characters were. Eliot did most of the growing, but I also loved that Pam got to develop too. Both of these characters were fantastically fleshed out and I couldn't help but love both of them. I couldn't recommend this book enough.
Profile Image for Michael.
3,437 reviews
July 12, 2024
I've been reading Mark's work since AKIKO, and THE MIGHTY ONION is my favorite thing he's done since that time. He borrows just a twinge from Captain Underpants (kids making a comic book superhero), but makes an emotionally engaging story about the (co-)creator growing up and learning to collaborate. And the comics they make are really fun too. And Mark gets to show off a tremendous range of his illustrative prowess, from the protagonist's doodles to his artist's manga-inspired goodness, from notes passed in class to carefully rendered "photos" of fast food wrappers and crumpled sheets. Lovely, lovely work. I couldn't put it down and immediately slipped it onto my son's desk to share it with my kids.
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63 reviews9 followers
March 7, 2024
I received an ARC from a giveaway. I did not read the book, however my daughter did. She is a reluctant, emergying reader, whom has grown to love graphic novels. She read the book in 4 hours without prompting! This is her review.

The Mighty Onion was funny and exciting. She loved the characters and how they interacted. Her favorite parts were the formatting and explanation of notes. Even though there was more reading than her other graphic novels, she loved the note book style pages the most. The pictures were simple but detailed so they didn't distract her. She is so upset that the next one won't be out for. for. ever.

Any book that encourages reluctant readers is a 5 star from me!
Profile Image for Meg Hall.
223 reviews12 followers
April 4, 2024
The Mighty Onion is the funny and sweet story of Eliot who has big dreams to write and design his own comic book but finds he needs the help of someone who can draw better than he can.

Eliot comes up with the idea of a superhero called The Mighty Onion 😂. Brilliant in my opinion. Eliot is so excited about his idea and his writing that he forgets that the drawing is just as important as the writing in a comic. He learns some valuable things about teamwork, partnership, friendship and gratitude throughout his journey. I love how the book shows these important lessons in a funny and lighthearted way that all kids can appreciate. The drawings and book style is fantastic and so fun to read. Super kid friendly, adult approved, you can't go wrong with this book!
Profile Image for Debra.
1,902 reviews
July 28, 2024
This story is about Elliot who loves to write stories and read comics, but his drawing skills are less than stellar. Told in notebooks, notes from torn paper, and sticky notes before the comics start, this book is about the creative process and social skills. I may tell my students this one is about that saying, "Teamwork makes the dream work." Teachers who teach the process of writing and librarians who teach the need for teamwork will both be happy with this one!

Though Akiko and Poog will forever be my favorite characters from Mark Crilley, I was overjoyed to see this book at my public library. I will be adding it to our school collections, for sure!
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4,821 reviews
September 2, 2024
4 stars (I really liked it)

In the beginning I thought the book was kind of weird but it grew on me as it continued. The book is full of mixed media in that some parts are pages of Eliot's notebook, some are notes between him and Pam, some are fortune cookies or other things he finds, etc. The main story is that Eliot is trying to make a comic but he isn't great at drawing so he needs someone to help in. Then he finds Pam.

Eliot gives me vibes of Greg from Diary of a Wimpy Kid, just slightly more likable. He struggles with seeing things from other people's POV but ends up learning his lesson in the end.
Profile Image for Kim Wilch.
Author 6 books83 followers
April 6, 2024
This. Book. Is. Hilarious. I adored the multi-format of the book! There is no way it couldn’t keep you turning the pages while laughing along the way. With the perfect blend of inspiration and snarkyness, the story delivers everything you could hope for in a graphic novel. And I love me some graphic novels. The pages are fresh and feisty. The illustrations are bold and bright. It’s a hit. 
Profile Image for Amanda.
110 reviews1 follower
June 10, 2025
Purchased this book randomly at a consignment shop for my 8-year old. We read it together and had so much fun with it. It’s witty, fun, and clever. I’ve already pre-ordered the sequel so hopefully the purchase can support the author this time around 😊

Note: Outside of a few words/phrases, my son was reading this on his own, but we chose to read it together. But it’s readable for 8+.
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1,532 reviews1 follower
January 4, 2024
It is a different kind of graphic novel, and honestly I liked it because this is another side of the story telling and how the author/illustrator came up with their ideas and stories. The story is ok but I enjoyed the other parts in the book! I highly recommend it!!!
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2,221 reviews2 followers
September 29, 2024
A fun graphic novel about how collaboration works. Eliot wants to be a comic book writer but realizes he needs an artist’s help. He pairs with Pam and doesn’t like it when she has her own ideas. Eventually leads to split because of his behavior. They do eventually collaborate again.

Fun!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Profile Image for Brian Clopper.
Author 90 books41 followers
April 17, 2024
Excellent read to show students how to employ teamwork and brainstorming!
Profile Image for Cassandra Krump.
75 reviews1 follower
August 31, 2024
This was a Goodreads giveaway!

Loved the illustrations, the comedy, the slang like writing with great character and the plot! This was a great juvenile read!
172 reviews
September 27, 2024
Good for lovers of Wimpy Kid. Eliot learns about teamwork and creativity.
1,643 reviews10 followers
December 10, 2024
This is very charming and surprisingly funny. I loved seeing the different styles of drawing from the different kid artists.
Author 1 book3 followers
February 12, 2025
4.5 stars. Love the takeaway message about compromise and collaboration leading to an even better product than either student could create on their own. Valuable lesson for all ages!
Profile Image for Nick Salenga.
416 reviews3 followers
June 26, 2025
This is a great book about boy’s journey to make his dream of creating superhero comic book reality.
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519 reviews7 followers
April 7, 2024
The Mighty Onion by Mark Crilley

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Elliot Quigley is a middle schooler who thinks he has written a hit superhero comic. Since he can’t draw, he gets his classmate, Pam, to help. Problems arise because he thinks his ideas are the only ones that work and doesn’t like it when she changes things.

A fun graphic novel for preteens. The drawings were amazing and I love the storyline. I also like that this had a mix of comics and journal entries, which made it an easy read. Highly recommend.
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