Not getting better…
I LOVED the first Ironsides Academy book. I was soooo stoked to read book two. Now I almost wish I hadn’t *sigh*
**SPOILERS**
I’m a huge fan of Jane Washington, and her books. I was so excited to start this series, and I’m happy to say that book one did not disappoint! It was a fabulous introduction to a dystopian (think hunger games) world where it’s a dog eat dog world! We’re introduced to our FMC, Isobel, who is a Sigma by designation. Sigmas are considered to be worthless in the power and “gifts” department. Isobel is beginning her 5 year stint at Ironside Academy, a school that Alphas and Betas go to that is literally one big reality television show. Isobel is the only Sigma and she is being forced to participate by her Alpha father, who had once won the “competition” at Ironside Academy and had gone on to live the “high life” all the while abusing his wife and daughter. She just wants to survive her time at Ironside, she doesn’t care about the 5 year competition at the school that if you win you become an “Icon” and live in luxury for the rest of your days (while the rest of the world lives in poverty). She thinks she’ll be able to fly under the radar and at least she’ll be away from her abusive father. But alas, it’s not meant to be. She “garners” the attention of the Alphas of Ironside Academy, all of whom are on the “Icon track,” they’re all playing the “game” to win the competition, each one for a different reason, but most of them because it’ll elevate their life and the lives of their family members. Only one of the Alphas really takes a shine to her, Theo, (she helps him and cares for him genuinely) the rest are suspicious, nasty, cruel, and basically they suck at being potential harem members. But of course, it ends up that Isobel is the mate, the “tether” of all 10 Alphas at Ironside. The book ends with them all agreeing (because of course the 10 Alphas are in this “boys club,” that makes them best friends, brothers, who have one another’s backs) NOT TO TELL Isobel that they’re her mates and leave her in the dark, even though prolonged absence of her mate, her “anchor” will make her very sick.
**SPOILERS**
I couldn’t delve into book two fast enough. Unfortunately I was really disappointed with this book. There were a myriad of issues with “Tourner.” The most prevalent issue…the guys, her MATES were all portrayed as pretty awful human beings in book one, but you’re left with hope that they’ll open their stupid eyes and get closer to Isobel. But by the end of book two, you literally only have 2 out of the 10 guys admitting to even liking her in a “romantic” way…and oh, one of those guys just so happens to have a boyfriend we never heard about back home (but hey, he’s still her mate). The boyfriend is introduced at THE VERY END of book two, after the reader has JUST begun to warm up to suitor number 2, Killian. Now it turns out that Killian is this awful “fraud” who has been portrayed as giving Isobel major “mixed signals,” and actively getting close to her all the while he has a committed boyfriend back home, huh? It makes the reader really dislike him, and we only just warmed up to him. I believed his friendship and romantic interest was real…only to have that illusion ripped away when I learned he had a boyfriend. Doesn’t bother me that he’s, gay, or bisexual…it bothers me that he never told Isobel, has been Pursuing her, and is her MATE, but isn’t telling her he’s her mate, and actually actively telling her that he has no interest in her, but still flirts outrageously with her. It means that he’s apparently stringing his boyfriend along by telling him she means nothing to him, while also playing with Isobel feelings. Yuck.
So we have one guy who has a fake girlfriend, and another that has a boyfriend, and the other 8 guys are either ignoring her, or being cruel, and heartless towards her (even knowing she’s their mate, and could die without their connection to her). I’ve read plenty of enemies to friends books, and I enjoy them if the characters are fleshed out well, and they’re at least mildly sympathetic (if they’re going to be total a-holes to the FMC). None of these guys are likable, and that’s a real problem. Even the “nice” guys turn out to have an agenda and are just using Isobel and toying with her feelings. Isobel DIES for them (one of them, but they’re all linked) and they are still complete a-holes ALL THROUGH BOOK TWO!! And not only are they not likable, but more than a few are downright hostile, and outright cruel or written as totally disinterested in Isobel completely!! With how book one progressed, and book two started, I expected a lot more “headway” into turning Isobel’s 10 harem members into members you’d actually like to be in her harem and don’t actively despise. Book two sees the “same old Isobel,” meek and “broken,” with barely a spine to her. Again, I liked her character is book one, but thought in book two we would see a little “growth” in her character. I was hoping that along with developing more mate bonds we’d get more “character” out of her. But book two is even lacking any artistic endeavors i.e. you don’t even really get a chance to see any of Isobel in her element, the arts, because you’re too busy reading about how much these guys hate her and despise the bond *sigh* It becomes rather exhausting.
Then you have the end…the end of book two is terrible. Yes, yes, you get a major plot twist that ends with a huge cliffhanger…but it’s awful. Isobel is attacked, has her bonds cut out of her, and is left to die by someone she trusted, and their accomplice (who just so happens to be intimately connected to one of Isobel’s harem members). The issue here; it just isn’t believable. It’s actually an annoying head scratcher. The harem rushes to “save” her. They’re desperate to put her bond ropes back inside of her to connect her to them again…why? The reader has spent so much time reading about 8 guys who actively work against their mate, going so far as out right hate her, it just doesn’t read as believable that they’re all so anguished over the thought of “losing her.” Heck, a few of them had even mentioned “offing her,” when they realized she was tethered to them…sooooo after reading two books about how they hate her, we’re just suddenly supposed to accept that they’re ALL so despondent and worried about losing the bond. Clearly we’re being set up for book three…
Will Isobel survive *eye roll* and if she does, will she still be tethered to the Alphas? I think we can all guess what happens, and it isn’t the demise of the female main character, or her men.
**addendum**
Thank you for pointing out that in Plier the author writes about Aron and Killian having “broken things off,” with one another. But still the way he’s introduced back into the main thread of the plot at the very end makes Killian really less likable IMO. Again, this is just my opinion. But I truly didn’t feel a REAL connection between any of the guys, save Theo and Isobel