3.5 Stars
So, "The Boss" by James Caine was my first foray into the world of Book Sirens and my introduction to this author's work. I approached this read with an open mind, unsure about the quality and editing I'd come across. Overall, I found it to be a fairly satisfying experience, but there were a few quirks that held me back from giving it a higher rating.
As is common with many indie books, I encountered some editing issues that detracted from the overall experience. Typos and inconsistencies, such as "grad school" mistakenly written instead of "grade school," and the occasional misspelling of character names, like "even" instead of "Evan," stood out.
The character development left something to be desired, and this was something I noticed as well. Some characters, particularly Nicole and Alice, felt as though they were driven more by the plot's needs than by their own well-defined motivations. This lack of depth in character portrayal could use some improvement.
One intriguing point I picked up on was the book's portrayal of women, and I agree that some readers, especially women, might take issue with how certain female characters are depicted. The actions and decisions of Nicole and Alice might not align with contemporary expectations for strong women, and this might be attributed to the book's male authorship. However, it didn't significantly affect my personal enjoyment of the story.
On a more positive note, I found the plot to be quite promising. The tension built steadily, keeping me engaged and eager to see how it would unfold. The narrative contained some unexpected twists, which added depth to the story. It was unfortunate, though, that one of the major plot twists, involving Nicole's past as Alice's husband's ex-fiancée, was revealed in the blurb, which could be viewed as a marketing oversight. Additionally, some plot points, like the police's puzzling inability to identify a body, required further explanation for clarity.
I also felt that there was untapped potential in exploring Alice's past, which could have added richness to her character and the overall narrative. The book hinted at her past, but I thought it could have been integrated more fully into the story.
Lastly, the choice of the acronym LPSLBS for the company felt somewhat inadvisable, as it could easily evoke associations with something else, which might have a negative impact on the book's marketing appeal.
In summary, "The Boss" provided me with a fairly enjoyable reading experience, complete with a tense storyline and unexpected twists. However, the presence of editing issues, character development concerns, and certain plot choices suggests room for improvement. It's a quick and engaging read, but there's potential for enhancement in various aspects. I want to extend my gratitude to the author, James Caine, and Book Sirens for providing me with a digital copy of the book in exchange for my honest review. I would rate it at 3.5 stars.