3.75 Stars
Pirates, sirens, and sapphic romance.... Where has this book been?? And why didn't I know about it?! I mean, really, what more does a fantasy need?
Let's get the why-wasn't-it-4/5-stars out of the way. I ended the book with way too many questions. A few are fine, especially with fantasy, and with a sequel on the way. But...this was a lot of questions. Like, I'm a little confused, even after talking it out with a friend. One of these questions borders on a plot hole, but I am holding out hope the sequel answers some things.
There are two specific things I must point out. First, Loren watches this crew get put together, and while something is obviously off in this situation, it isn't until they have set sail and she watches the general lack of order, no specific assignments, and ensuing chaos on the first day that she is suspicious. She is a seasoned pirate, has an agenda of her own, and knows this captain better than anyone on board. So why did it take until they set sail for her to question the true purpose of this mission? To be clear, this is a minor thing, maybe she just didn't focus on the thought until they set sail, because she was more worried about getting in, blending in, and not being recognized. But it just made me pause.
And one scene I just cannot stop thinking about. So both Loren and Sybine are hiding their identities, right? Due to the fact that they are women and women aren't allowed on the voyage (and Loren has to hide her real identity because of her past with Drakkon). But eventually, as they grow closer, they come clean with each other, eventually sharing their true names. I thought that was sweet and trusting and I liked that they had this shared secret. Until in one scene, when Loren says Sybine's real name in front of another pirate, and no one reacts. She is supposed to be Sebastien aboard this ship, but Loren says 'Sybine'...and nothing happens. That is very clearly a writer mistake, and kind of a huge one. This book revolves around their secret and why they are keeping their identities a secret (other than gender), and yet the author does the name flub. I'm just.... No, I can't let it go, sorry.
I have to share my favorite quote, though, because it is one of the only times I have ever highlighted anything in an ebook.
"There's a darkness in me, Sybine. Whatever light you bring out in me can't erase that. It will stain you."
"Then it stains me. I will wear it with pride."
Would that work on me. ....Yeah, it kinda would. What can I say?
The last third of the book really speeds things up. We go from pirates and hidden identities to demons and magic. The magic is hinted at, with Sybine having this inexplicable power over men and their minds (did she never question why she could do that?), but it goes to a whole other level. And that is a part of why I have so many questions. So I really hope the sequel clears some of that up.
Overall, I genuinely did enjoy this, and the sequel feels WAY too far away(4 months)! I loved the dynamic between the FMC's, and despite Sybine's lack of experience on a ship, she wasn't a damsel in distress. The end fight scene felt a little repetitive, but the ending wasn't unsatisfying. I definitely want more mermaid/siren stories, I can tell you that.