Pfew..It’s so complicated to rate and review this book.. I’ll try to make it a constructive criticism and not a rant.
I have to start by saying I almost DNF it a couple of times but for whatever reason I really really wanted to read this book because it has such good bones and such interesting premise. The setting is Japan, the characters are Japanese, the atmosphere of the book is awesome and the murders/mystery was very intriguing so it should have been a hit but sadly it wasn’t. First of all the writing is amateurish. It’s blunt, the dialogues and the thought process are too simple and sometimes crass. For example:
“How’s your sex life, chief?” he asked. “There hasn’t been one in three years,” Teruo admitted. “There are spider webs down there.” He waved in the general direction of his groin.
Umm, ew.. That’s an old joke, I know , but it comes out as crass put in a romance book and in a conversation between the 2 MCs.
So, I was intrigued by the book and very annoyed by the writing.
My second complaint is one I always mention when reviewing books : slow burn, people, SLOWFUCKINGBURN!!!!! I wonder why an author doesn’t investigate to get an idea about how a successful mystery book’s couple come together? Always, the most successful murder/mysteries series have the romance and the steam built slooooowly.. I mean, give them a freaking friendship before giving them boners!! Teruo and Shinji have seen each other twice in a work capacity at crimes scenes and each has baggage and yet they “have a thing” for each other at about 17% in the book, completed with boners at inappropriate times and places, erotic dreams and an almost handjob at work , in the bathroom!! After 3 days!!!!! Why???? Why wouldn’t the author let them become slowly friends , let them know each other and be attracted to each other naturally without all this aggressive sexual vibe she set upon them??? She had time, this is the first book so it could have ended with a tentative I like you/I like you too and a kiss and leave the second book to build a solid and realistic relationship. I know, I’m ranting already, I can’t avoid it lol.
I have to add that, though the sex between Teruo and Shinji was HOT 🔥🔥 I didn’t appreciate that they were always thinking about fucking (though the book isn’t porny, thank God, the number of sex scenes is reasonable).
I do think these guys are cute together.They were tender and sweet to each other and I liked them together.At first I was fascinated by Teruo.. He gave off that aloof solitary wolf vibe but you know..insta lust ruined everything. And with all his smoking and his aloofness reminded me of Yosuke, the boss and MC from the Japanese romantic gay movie “No touching at all”
Shinji was a bit bland and forgettable, unfortunately.
The mystery was well done, I kind of suspected who did it though I wasn’t sure so that was pretty ok.
In conclusion, the writing needs improving (it needs the use of more literary devices to lose the bluntness) , the murder/mystery was good and not too convoluted (I personally prefer it like this) , the pnr bits were underdeveloped but I liked them and the romance needed a slower pace .
Oh, the cover is beautiful. Very eye catching.
So, If you like mysteries and don’t mind the insta lust and the simple writing, go ahead. It’s a pretty enjoyable book.