24 apr 15, 1st from barnard for me...has this interesting line on the first page...or lines:
"the man nodded. he was used to all kinds of permutations and variations. in fact, he often reckoned the decline of the stable family had been wonderful for his business."
that and allow millions of illegal aliens to phone home and tell their friends, come on in, the water is fine. i'm a builder, too...like "the man" who nodded...and yeah, i can see that. that...and zoning laws that disallow more than one unrelated to a bedroom...boom boom boom boom...as the blues singer winged it. or was it, ho ho ho ho!
santa clause...either or.
onward upward
26 apr 15
update, finished. good story. assuming you read the description, the story fulfills what is said about it. a mystery. tragedy. we learn who did what to whom. i imagine it is the fatal flaw of the genre that stories such as this fall prey to the accusation they were plotted beforehand...reason for the 3-stars...call it 3.85 if you want...still an enjoyable read, tragedy as noted, completely believable. but in the telling of the bones, the story also neglects to delve too deeply into the tragedy of the lives of the others in the story...can't help but know that this story would have been much longer...and probably most likely even better, had it done so.
first from barnard, noted above, and i'd read more if i happen across more. onward upward.