I just finished this book and AAAH I'm screaming! It's been a while since I felt THIS connected to the characters of a book, and my goodness it felt great all throughout the story. I bombarded Miller with my thoughts on Instagram while I was reading, but for the sake of sharing my thoughts with any Goodreads user who's wondering whether or not to buy and read this book, here's my full spoiler-free review (using a structure I'd like to call Random Thoughts With Vil.
I'd give this book like a 4.9/5 stars. The story, the characters and the writing were all great (which we'll talk more about in a second), buth the 0.1 points deduction comes from the issues with tense that popped up here and there. The book is written in first person past tense, but occasionally, a sentence of the prose used present tense in a way that didn't feel exactly correct.
Moving on from that, because otherwise, the writing was showstopping. I.R. Miller nailed the deep POV and character voice. There wasn't a dull moment in the writing, because every sentence felt like it truly came straight from Quincey's head (save for the chapters written from the ghosts' perspectives). Quincey's sarcastic as hell, and that shines through in both her dialogue and prose, making the entire book very entertaining and immersive to read. Whenever I read, I was no longer on my bed, in my desk chair or in a chair at school; I was there, in the mansion with Quincey.
Done with the writing, let's talk about the characters! GAH! The characters!
Quincey: Quincey was so relatable, both in a "haha mood" way and in a "holy moly, I feel called out" way. I really think she may be one of the characters I've related the most to... ever. Her internal conflict was so well established (and once again, relatable), and it stayed consistent throughout her entire development. I can't wait to see how she grows in the sequel.
Minerva: THIS IS HOW YOU WRITE A STRONG AND STANDOFFISH FEMALE CHARACTER WELL! Minerva's feisty, blunt and aggressive, but because of her moments of emotion, weakness and humanity, she was so much more than a standard Strong Female Character cut-out.
Constance: Ultimate mom friend. I loved her so much. She was so soft, sweet and nurturing, and her backstory and internal conflict explained why so well. Everyone needs a friend like Constance.
Ray: This ball of energy became my favorite as soon as he was calmed and could join the family. Ray's a teenager who's not afraid to be an immature teenager, which is SO REFRESHING to see in a book like this. Teenagers in books often act way too mature for their age, but this didn't happen once with Ray (nor with any of the others, really), and it made him so funny, sweet and precious!
Lyle: Miller must have gotten a blueprint of my type of book boyfriend; Lyle's blond with blue eyes, he's charming and funny but has a soft and sweet side, and he plays some guitar. The perfect man, I will hear no objections. Right off the get-go, Lyle proved his potential as a favorite character and a book boyfriend, and it only got better as the story went on. Also, his protectiveness over Quincey was so adorable and sweet. It's so good to see a love interest who's protective but not possessive and controlling (there's way too many of those). Lyle never stopped Quincey from doing anything she wanted to do, but constantly wanted the best for her and her safety.
Mary: THIS LITTLE CUTIE! Mary was only in the story for the last hundred pages, but she's already so cute and well-written. Mary's supposed to be an unexpectedly intelligent nine-year-old, and she's written exactly as such! The way she acts and rationalizes shows that she clearly is a little kid, but she's still so well-spoken and wise in that lovable little kid way.
Elias: I often find that anxious-nervous-wreck characters are just written as pools of whininess that are incapable of doing anything, but you better bet Elias was NOT like that. Yes, he's a nervous and anxious man, but he still DOES STUFF. He wasn't the annoying "oh no, weak little me can't do this" sterotype, but was more like... "Oh, you wanna do this? You- you sure? Okay, okay, okay... Yeah, yeah I'll help."
Wick: Fantastically introduced, fantastically executed antagonist. He always felt threatening, but never felt overpowered. He felt so realistic as well! I never felt like he was just evil without reason, which is a massive turn-off for me. From the moment he started speaking, you could tell there was more to him, and the more time he spent on the page, the more the feeling of "there's so much more to him, isn't there?" grew. Then the twist at the end came, and it made so much sense!
On the topic of characters, I'll just say real quick that they all had fantastic, realistic, immersive and consistent personalities. No one felt like a cardboard cut-out stereotype. They all had life (badum-tish, funny joke, 'cause they're ghosts), they all had internal conflict, and they all felt like people.
In a similar vein, let's talk about the dialogue because YES! It's not often you find dialogue as natural and well-written as this. The characters in this book didn't speak like robots, one-liner machines or like flowery poetry in human form. They spoke like humans. Their personalities glowed every time they opened their mouths, and it always felt so natural—even in longer monologues!
Now let's talk about Lyle and Quincey for a moment, because gah, they're so cute. Nowadays people are so addicted to fast-moving romances, they skip past every little step on the way and view kisses and sex as the ONLY way to write romance and chemistry between characters. Miller so clearly understands that there's so much more to love than that. Lyle and Quincey didn't do much more than flirt and hold hands in this book, yet their chemistry and romantic tension is so clear. Amazingly written romance.
I really loved how the plot was structured. Quincey tackled "calming" one ghost at a time, and it was so nice to go along with her on the journey. The book follows as she completes her task one ghost at a time by finding them, learning and practicing to calm them, and then calming them. Each of the times was different enough from the last to not get repetitive, and it was so fun to explore the mansion with her. It was also amazing to see the found family grow. Tensions and stakes rose naturally as the plot progressed, until the big climax + plot twist hit, and it was GREAT! Throughout the book, I had my suspicions of what the twist would be, and I thought I had it predicted, but then it came and it was not at all what I had predicted, but it made so much sense! Way more sense than my previous prediction did. It did exactly what a twist should do; it made me say "I should've seen that coming!"
The ending felt so earned and nice, it had me smiling my head off. It wrapped up this story extremely well while also setting up the sequel (which I cannot frickin' wait for).
Finally, I wanna briefly touch on something Miller and I chatted a bit about on Instagram: how this book handles neurodiversity and mental health issues. Quincey has anxiety and ADHD, but it's never painted up as something horrible and daunting that's "wrong" with her. Her ADHD isn't an obstacle she has to overcome; it's simply something she lives with, and it's mentioned here and there. She has an on-screen anxiety attack, and mentions her anxiety from time to time, but she's never judged for it or treated like she's fragile or sick. Lyle has dyslexia, but the only one who views that negatively is Lyle himself (due to backstory reasons). When Quincey finds out, she's neither judgmental or offput by it. Wonderful handling of mental health and neurodiversity.
For all of this, I simply must award Soul Savior a five-star rating. It's joining the club of my favorite books.