Blurb And Cover
Let me preface by saying that I don’t think the blurb and book are a match… it’s spun from an angle that’s not really there because he never lessens her need for vengeance and she never catches that he has an agenda until he makes a move that forces his hand to either directly lie or tell her the scoop. Anyway, it’s not a blurb that I think paints an accurate picture of this book.
The cover, however, is 🥰 🔥
Moving on…
Premise
He’s a contractor for the mob. She’s scorned, angry, lonely, and singularly focused on vengeance. They find themselves looking for answers to two different questions from the same source. Again, I wouldn’t call this “cat and mouse” so much as both must keep their truths and agendas close to their vests. Sexual attraction leads, questions follow, and feelings threaten to turn both their agendas on their heads. Lust and feelings converge, but trust will be the yield sign that steers whether they’ll both get what they want.
Characters
Her…
I glance at him, and he’s right there staring back at me, strumming my pussy with his caged emotions.
Apparently, the mix of adrenaline and whiskey has made me reckless. I’m a panty slip away from taking this guy home. This devilishly sexy man with his shadowy intrigue and penetrating eyes. My heart palpitates. My sternum itches. I want to drag him to my apartment by his dick. I would strip him. Devour him.
“Oh, goodie.” I release a derisive chuckle. “Is this where I’m supposed to swoon?”
Let’s just call the FMC a bit sexually aggressive. It was refreshing to see a female character completely at ease with her body and desires.
She’s strong. A fighter. But, she’s also intelligent about her strengths and weaknesses. Again, refreshing to see an FMC that’s neither damsel nor 24/7 Rambo.
That’s not to say her character wasn’t without flaws. Her inner monologues were a tad bit too repetitive and long. Her switches were flipped too easily. Her character profile of guilt vs revenge was a little too whitewashed - I get not wanting blood to infect the innocent survivors, but men of that particular nature don’t have innocent survivors… they leave behind victims, not loved ones.
Him
I frown. Is this some weird female fuckery? How the hell do I show her without words or the sex she claims this is about? Decker was right. I’m the dumbest asshole when it comes to women.
Possessive. Dirty. Antihero. Villain with a white shirt. He checks all the boxes. He comes off as authentic, believable. His inner thoughts are a little lacking in getting us from contractor to smitten kitten. There’s a lack of depth here that keeps him in the 3-star character category. I wanted more roots in his character tree, but the author just focused on the pretty blooms at the end of the branches. As a result, I never connected with him.
Decker
Side character with cool lines…
I f’ing love the snarky dark humor that occasionally pokes its head out …
Decker raises a brow as his gaze drops to Hunter’s stomach. “You two are motherfucking crazy. I feel like I’ve just witnessed a satanic mating ritual.”
Problem is that he’s just that - a punchline. Like the MMC, his character didn’t really have a lot of depth.
Storyline
Flow is good. I wasn’t bored. I wasn’t certain about all the ‘hows’ this would play out. Writing itself is clean… no big errors, jumps, or nonsense devices. I felt satisfied that the author presented her story points, brought them to a head, and neatly resolved them.
My complaint comes in the last 20%. I like the scene that brings the vengeance to a head, but not the aftermath of that scene. Torian spent the entire book painted one way to end like a cartoon version of his role, complete with “chuckling.” The sweep here was lazy, unbelievable, and completely against the grain of everything prior to the scene.
The end-cute was cute - a HFN situation that brings the reader back full circle.
Dark? Ehhhh… there is a guy that gets slapped around and drugged by the FMC before he dies. Another vengeance kill because he killed the FMC’s family. The MMC skirts the truth of his profession as a contractor. But, dark in the sense that most mafia books are dark? No.
* Edited to mention this wasn’t advertised as a dark book, but I mention it because some reviews reference how horribly dark and violent the FMC is. As a comparison to other mafia niches and vengeance niches, this is mild.
Same with the sex. Erotica… sure, it’s graphic enough. Rough? Uhm, not really on my scale, but then I’ve read some shit that makes 50 Shades look like a Saved By The Bell episode. It’s not exactly vanilla, but this is not the kinky fuckery of a “dark” book.
This book is what I like to call Navy Blue, meaning there isn’t any clutching of pearls nor is it light and fluffy throughout.
With a different outcome for the climax (no pun intended) in the storyline and more MMC depth, this could’ve been a 4-5 star read. As is, 2.5-3 stars. Worth the read, but not something that will go in your favorite book bucket.