Ratings: ⭐️/5 🫑/🌶5
Kingdom of Forgotten Curses is book one of the Stolen Royalty Series by Autumn Kaufer. I received this book as an ARC and I was so looking forward to it, however, I was thoroughly disappointed with my lack of involvement with this book. Kingdom of Forgotten Curses is a Beauty and the Beast retelling if the beast were a vampyre. I did enjoy that twist on the classic tale, however for me the writing was a little too fast-paced and was set up pretty much exactly the same as the original. I was thrown off by the snappiness of the banter and the pacing of the conversations and interactions between the characters. In my opinion, there was no clear transition from one setting to the next, and with how frequently the MMC teleported, I was getting very twisted and confused in my understanding of what was going on. It was so all over the place, I was really struggling, and that was only about 30% into the book.
As for character development, with the story being told in third person and being more conversational than insightful, I felt a real disconnect with the characters. I feel like I didn’t know the characters at their core, or understood who they are as individuals. Being told in third person and having as much conversationalism as it did, I feel like there wasn’t a whole lot of omniscient information that we were getting to know, and that disconnects the reader from establishing a connection with the MC. In turn, how are we able to truly see character development if all we’re getting out of the story in terms of their character and personality is the basics? There is no way to understand why Bells keeps rejecting the beast, or why she feels like she is undeserving of love, because we don’t know her at her core to understand why she processes her past the way she does. I didn’t understand until over halfway through the book why she was refusing to love the beast until I put two and two together, and it still felt like she was just making excuses because I didn’t understand and connect with her character. I felt like I was hearing the story and watching it more than feeling it and living it. She was telling the story more than showing the story, and there was too much back and forth to become invested in the characters in my opinion.
For the overall book, it was a little cheesy in my opinion. For starters, I really didn’t like how Bells was holding on to things over halfway into the book that the beginning of the book barely scratched over. The things she was getting upset over in her reasoning to reject Dracke were things she had never even mentioned being upset over or anything. I felt like she was literally making things up to be upset with him at a certain point. During another scene in the book, she literally acts like she is dying and Dracke, the beast, comes to her side to save her. Out of all the things it could be, this girl started her period. Around a vampyre. Who continues to give her the talk of “periods are nothing to be ashamed of” and “trust me, I’m not interested in that blood, you have nothing to worry about with my bloodthirst in this situation” (btw this is not word for word from the book, just summed up of how I took this conversation). As for spice, since we all know I don’t read books without it, I was really excited for the spice here. And I was let down. You can tell this book attempted to be spicy, but it was so haphazard in it’s telling and so all over the place, I couldn’t differentiate between what was true spice and what was Bellamina’s imagination. She and Dracke have some sort of blood bond (another thing I don’t fully understand) and they are able to sense each others fantasies in a way. Because of this Bells has frequent fantasies about Dracke, even though she swears she doesn’t care for him and ends up rejecting him over and over, and it is hard to tell these fantasies from the real thing when it does happen. I ended up DNF’ing this book around 74% of the way in. I really wanted to love it, and this is nothing against the author, but this one just wasn’t my cup of tea. Let me know yall’s thoughts on this one.