I received an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
The author asked if ratings below 3 stars could wait until after the book is live. However, after reading this book, I really feel it's not fair to any potential readers to hide any negatives. Besides, one person's negatives might be another person's positives.
The good:
This is a very easy, quick read.
I wish I had more "goods" to list, but it really ends there. The premise of the story has good bones, but it really needs a personal trainer because it's incredibly out of shape.
The bad (I'll keep this as gentle as I can while still being honest):
The FMC is unrelatable in every sense of the word: a walking contradiction and a childish, immature, superficial brat who wouldn't know true inner strength or love if it bit her in the ass.
The love interest(s)/romance is thin, childish and rushed.
The author really needs to do research on: malnutrition, fighting with daggers and whippings (yes, /that/ kind).
The author really needs to practice "show don't tell" and feed the readers 10x more information and descriptions than what is here.
The book feels like speed-running a video game - and that's not a compliment.
The FMCs romantic nickname is incredibly cringe.
The plot "twists" are either cliché AF or so weak as twists they might as well be plot holes.
The "sacrifices" instill nothing in the reader, as the story is so rushed and thin that you really can't bring yourself to truly care about any of the characters.
I have no problems with Fated Mates, but one human girl getting TWO in one story is just so badly YA that it's worse than a regular love triangle.
This is described as a Beauty and the Beast re-telling, but it reads like one of those poorly animated (and even more poorly written) cartoon movies that are just trying to ride the monetary coat-tails of larger, successful films.
This story has a lot of potential, it really does, but it needs more time, energy and creativity. It's a solid first try, but definitely not publishing ready.
Tl;dr this reads like it should be on Wattpad