This was my first book from Max Monroe duo and I am not impressed at all...
2,5 stars but not 3.
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The book is about the love story of an interracial couple and it begins in a very sweet way. I liked it up until their first date. The way he pursued her until she said yes to a date was good and I really had fun. But then, their first date came and it was awkward (in a studio painting pictures because she loves art). It ended with a kiss. Then, their second date was even worse because as they decided it was going to end in bed, he took her to a Mc Donald's and a car wash. !!?? And when they had their first sex, the couple lost all their charm for me. There was nothing wrong, gross or bad about it and I don't know how I can put it into words because it is just a feeling. I didn't like it. Maybe the easiest way to put it is to say that I thought he was bad at it :)))) And I didn't like any time they were in bed afterwards. You know, some writers write these scenes very successfully and some can't. The ones in this book are not written successfully in my opinion; or at least they are not written in a way I like.
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What comes next is the so-called plot twist. It is based on her skin color - her Afro-American roots. I just found this plot-twist annoying. It reminded me that there may still be racist people in the world - so very frustrating!
The media and some fans of the hero (he is a famous football player) upset her, the hero's parents upset her. They didn't look at her or talk to her when they first met her - that was so unacceptable. Some news reports pointed out that she wasn't his usual type. Some fans wrote awful things in his social media accounts. I got really annoyed about it. Why would anyone make this a plot twist?
And if you ask me, the hero didn't act the way I expected when his parents and the media upset her. He said he loved her no matter what but that wasn't enough for me. I needed to see that those awful people were given a good lesson about racism! Nope, they all got away with it...
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As far as safety goes, there is no cheating, no OW/OM drama so it is safe.
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The book is long and too wordy (328 pages). It is written in dual point of view and the heroine's chapters are better because she has a fun way of telling things. She is indeed a sweetheart! On the other hand, the hero is not my type of hero - he is too passive in most cases.
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All in all, the book was sometimes sweet, sometimes boring and sometimes annoying for me. In general, it didn't work for me. That's why I am not going to continue the series as I have a feeling that I won't like anything written by this duo.
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Oh I forgot... I hated the dedication... Maybe it's just me but I hated it. It sounds so very superficial to me!
You know how it goes with dedications. You scan to the page, only to find that the book is once again not dedicated to you. Not this time, (insert your name here).
Because we are the best of friends/are absolutely crazy about each other/haven’t seen each other in a long, long time/are in some way related/have only shared a fleeting, longing glance/have the funniest conversations/have never actually met but already know we’ll love each other… You’re funny/funny/funny/funny… Yeah, we only really like funny people.
And this sexy, long, thick …book is for you.
(You thought we were gonna say cock, didn’t you?)
Um, I think I should have trusted my instinct and never started this book after this dedication. I felt I wasn't gonna like the tone of the book.
"Sexy, long thick book for me!"
Pffft, is this supposed to be funny or something?
I hate it when writers define their books themselves instead of leaving it to us. Please, let me decide if it is sexy or not. And I am answering: It wasn't sexy at all!