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To the Advantage of Both
‘To the Advantage of Both’ is a romantic Regency Pride and Prejudice variation that features all well-known characters and situations as well as new appearances and unexpected twists of the plot.
(see author's note below!)
The story begins a week before the Netherfield ball, after Elizabeth and Jane have spent several days at Netherfield, Mr Collins and Mr Wickham have arrived on the scene, and Darcy has already fallen in love with Elizabeth. She, on the other hand, is ignorant of Darcy’s admiration and partial to the charming Mr Wickham and the misfortunes he has suffered.
While taking one of her usual solitary walks between Meryton and Netherfield, Elizabeth meets a gentleman who seems lost, and she directs him to Netherfield — his stated destination. The unexpected guest is Admiral Thomas Andrew Pembroke, who is Lady Matlock’s brother as well as an old friend of the Darcys.
The admiral is outspoken — more used to battles than to diplomacy. He is a great friend and protector of Darcy but also his severest critic. He is a good judge of character and sees worthiness even where fortune and connections are lacking; therefore he immediately approves of Elizabeth and Jane and befriends Mr Bennet.
Several visits to Longbourn help Darcy to improve his opinion of the Bennets and to regard Elizabeth not just as a woman he admires from afar but as someone who might be his match in every way.
Elizabeth is also offered the opportunity to observe Darcy in a new light, to see more of his true nature, especially when he offers his assistance in a situation that reveals his kind heart.
During the Netherfield ball, some distressing circumstances occur, leading to gossip that could affect their names and reputations.
Elizabeth and Darcy must make a decision that will affect their lives forever. While they are not on equal ground in terms of wealth, family connections, or feelings for each other, their decision is mutual — an agreement made with honesty and commitment on both sides to make the best of what they have been dealt.
Admiral Pembroke is a supportive and affectionate friend to both, but he has his own past — a painful one, full of regrets and sorrow — a past closely connected to the Darcys.
When that past is brought into the present by malicious interference, Darcy will find himself in danger of losing everything he has ever known, loved, and cherished his entire life.
With Elizabeth by his side, they both will need all the strength of their minds and characters to build their lives together, while struggling to accept the consequences of others’ actions.
Although their marriage begins as an arranged one, necessitated by outside intervention, it will soon be filled with care, respect, and friendship growing into true, deep, ardent love, which is very much to the advantage of both.
Author’s Chapter 28 contains a romantic and rather steamy description of the marriage consummation, but this part can be skipped by readers who prefer it without altering the quality of the story.
(see author's note below!)
The story begins a week before the Netherfield ball, after Elizabeth and Jane have spent several days at Netherfield, Mr Collins and Mr Wickham have arrived on the scene, and Darcy has already fallen in love with Elizabeth. She, on the other hand, is ignorant of Darcy’s admiration and partial to the charming Mr Wickham and the misfortunes he has suffered.
While taking one of her usual solitary walks between Meryton and Netherfield, Elizabeth meets a gentleman who seems lost, and she directs him to Netherfield — his stated destination. The unexpected guest is Admiral Thomas Andrew Pembroke, who is Lady Matlock’s brother as well as an old friend of the Darcys.
The admiral is outspoken — more used to battles than to diplomacy. He is a great friend and protector of Darcy but also his severest critic. He is a good judge of character and sees worthiness even where fortune and connections are lacking; therefore he immediately approves of Elizabeth and Jane and befriends Mr Bennet.
Several visits to Longbourn help Darcy to improve his opinion of the Bennets and to regard Elizabeth not just as a woman he admires from afar but as someone who might be his match in every way.
Elizabeth is also offered the opportunity to observe Darcy in a new light, to see more of his true nature, especially when he offers his assistance in a situation that reveals his kind heart.
During the Netherfield ball, some distressing circumstances occur, leading to gossip that could affect their names and reputations.
Elizabeth and Darcy must make a decision that will affect their lives forever. While they are not on equal ground in terms of wealth, family connections, or feelings for each other, their decision is mutual — an agreement made with honesty and commitment on both sides to make the best of what they have been dealt.
Admiral Pembroke is a supportive and affectionate friend to both, but he has his own past — a painful one, full of regrets and sorrow — a past closely connected to the Darcys.
When that past is brought into the present by malicious interference, Darcy will find himself in danger of losing everything he has ever known, loved, and cherished his entire life.
With Elizabeth by his side, they both will need all the strength of their minds and characters to build their lives together, while struggling to accept the consequences of others’ actions.
Although their marriage begins as an arranged one, necessitated by outside intervention, it will soon be filled with care, respect, and friendship growing into true, deep, ardent love, which is very much to the advantage of both.
Author’s Chapter 28 contains a romantic and rather steamy description of the marriage consummation, but this part can be skipped by readers who prefer it without altering the quality of the story.
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Published August 14, 2023
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August 1, 2023
Elizabeth encounters a stranger.
In Lory Lilian's latest novel, Elizabeth unexpectedly meets and aids Admiral Pembroke, a friendly stranger who has lost his way to Netherfield. As he is acquainted with Darcy and Bingley, he decides to delay his return to London and takes the opportunity to get to know the Bennet family better. A brother to Lady Matlock, he has known Darcy all his life.
There’s a touch of matchmaking, a bit of a scandal caused by malicious gossip, and a secret that impacts the plot late in the story. There is a compromise of sorts, resulting in what might be considered a forced marriage, but not quite. One might even call it an arranged marriage, and still again, not quite.
The plot and writing are good, with pleasing character portrayals. Wickham is his nasty self, but dealt with effectively. I enjoyed the portrayals of Mr. Bennet and Bingley, and our dear couple manages to pleasingly find their way.
There were a couple of editing errors that stood out. For example, the Admiral is referred to as an army man instead of a navy man. Also, Darcy’s housekeeper’s name suddenly changes from Mrs. Clifford to Mrs. Thomason.
Proud to say I’ve read every book this author has published and I’m happy to recommend this one too.
Mature content between a married couple.
EDIT: The reference to Mrs. Thomason as noted above in this review appears to be now corrected. That name no longer comes up when I do a search in the Kindle version.
In Lory Lilian's latest novel, Elizabeth unexpectedly meets and aids Admiral Pembroke, a friendly stranger who has lost his way to Netherfield. As he is acquainted with Darcy and Bingley, he decides to delay his return to London and takes the opportunity to get to know the Bennet family better. A brother to Lady Matlock, he has known Darcy all his life.
There’s a touch of matchmaking, a bit of a scandal caused by malicious gossip, and a secret that impacts the plot late in the story. There is a compromise of sorts, resulting in what might be considered a forced marriage, but not quite. One might even call it an arranged marriage, and still again, not quite.
The plot and writing are good, with pleasing character portrayals. Wickham is his nasty self, but dealt with effectively. I enjoyed the portrayals of Mr. Bennet and Bingley, and our dear couple manages to pleasingly find their way.
There were a couple of editing errors that stood out. For example, the Admiral is referred to as an army man instead of a navy man. Also, Darcy’s housekeeper’s name suddenly changes from Mrs. Clifford to Mrs. Thomason.
Proud to say I’ve read every book this author has published and I’m happy to recommend this one too.
Mature content between a married couple.
EDIT: The reference to Mrs. Thomason as noted above in this review appears to be now corrected. That name no longer comes up when I do a search in the Kindle version.
August 7, 2023
I have not read a story in which Darcy's family has not only an admiral for a relation but also one in which Darcy's father had a secret, which is quite disturbing, to say the least. Only the admiral knows about this secret and it is one which affected his own life.
The author's story description is longer than most and IMHO, very complete. Although she does not mention that Wickham and two of his cohorts bring about the cause of the forced marriage. While Lady Catherine finds herself totally cut off by Darcy when she spews her venom.
Although the admiral is older and retired from the navy I was cheering for him to also find happiness in some manner. He does but I doubt you could guess it.
I did enjoy this story and have read 20 stories by this author.
The author's story description is longer than most and IMHO, very complete. Although she does not mention that Wickham and two of his cohorts bring about the cause of the forced marriage. While Lady Catherine finds herself totally cut off by Darcy when she spews her venom.
Although the admiral is older and retired from the navy I was cheering for him to also find happiness in some manner. He does but I doubt you could guess it.
I did enjoy this story and have read 20 stories by this author.
January 27, 2024
the rules of the ‘tonne’ are many
But largely they are unwritten rules. This pride and prejudice is not a simple romance. Every family has its quirks and unspoken secrets. Thus everyone has his place in the hierarchy of society.
But the underbelly of society is no one is perfect and the imperfections must be covered up. Secrets must remain secret and yet some secrets are the currency of blackmail.
This story is about a pride and prejudice which is darn near impossible to obtain. But as life events scrub away the naïveté of the characters of the story people have to decide where they stand. Will they act to support the tonne rules or will they attempt to live a more real life.
Lizzy and Darcy may have found their HEA, but at what cost.
A great story with a few added characters. Doing the right thing and saving some puppies leads to many, many secrets being uncovered. This is a book is a book I will reread again.
But largely they are unwritten rules. This pride and prejudice is not a simple romance. Every family has its quirks and unspoken secrets. Thus everyone has his place in the hierarchy of society.
But the underbelly of society is no one is perfect and the imperfections must be covered up. Secrets must remain secret and yet some secrets are the currency of blackmail.
This story is about a pride and prejudice which is darn near impossible to obtain. But as life events scrub away the naïveté of the characters of the story people have to decide where they stand. Will they act to support the tonne rules or will they attempt to live a more real life.
Lizzy and Darcy may have found their HEA, but at what cost.
A great story with a few added characters. Doing the right thing and saving some puppies leads to many, many secrets being uncovered. This is a book is a book I will reread again.
August 11, 2023
I bought this book on the day it was released.
This variation is written by Lory Lilian, a Romanian author who loves Pride and Prejudice and writes JAFF.
Might contain things that are considered spoilers.
This variation includes many things that I like about reading JAFF.
It was a new character, Admiral Pembroke, who is related to Darcy through the Fitwilliam branch of the family. This character says loudly the things I wanted to be said when I read Pride and Prejudice for the first time.
It contains puppies (they are adorable).
It contains a marriage-forced scenario that takes place when ODC are in a good place in their journey to love each other.
The involvement of our villains is exactly in the right dose.
Thank you, Lilian, for writing. I'm glad that I'm reading your books.
This variation is written by Lory Lilian, a Romanian author who loves Pride and Prejudice and writes JAFF.
Might contain things that are considered spoilers.
This variation includes many things that I like about reading JAFF.
It was a new character, Admiral Pembroke, who is related to Darcy through the Fitwilliam branch of the family. This character says loudly the things I wanted to be said when I read Pride and Prejudice for the first time.
It contains puppies (they are adorable).
It contains a marriage-forced scenario that takes place when ODC are in a good place in their journey to love each other.
The involvement of our villains is exactly in the right dose.
Thank you, Lilian, for writing. I'm glad that I'm reading your books.
August 3, 2023
I enjoyed this book even though the the title and vague description make it sound like Darcy and Elizabeth will get together a lot earlier.
I loved the original character of Admiral Pembroke and in my imaginary epilogue he marries Mrs Annesley. I wanted a love story for him.
There were some editing problems including a name change for the London housekeeper and modern language including ‘on the same page’.
I loved the original character of Admiral Pembroke and in my imaginary epilogue he marries Mrs Annesley. I wanted a love story for him.
There were some editing problems including a name change for the London housekeeper and modern language including ‘on the same page’.
October 4, 2023
Sigh….
So beautiful and rewarding. What a wonderful story involving a scenario often used to get our dear couple-ODC to get together earlier than canon (no Hunsford, no Pemberley visit with the Gardiners.). Yes, a compromise, yet so uniquely and sweetly done, involving puppies in need of rescue. Who wouldn’t fall in love with that?
Lory Lillian writes really interesting new characters and Admiral Pembrooke is thus far my favorite. I wanted him as my godfather, hey!, I wanted to marry him myself. Woo! He shared equal Hero status here with Darcy, IMHO.
Bingley has more courage and self confidence in this story. Wickham is as disgusting as he could get. Nice comeuppance there. Collins leaves Longbourn in a huff. In all these situations Admiral Pembrooke has an influence, as well as in Lizzy’s change of heart and Darcy’s opening his mind and heart to Lizzy’s family. He has Darcy’s back though, he’s like a more mature, experienced and wise Colonel Fitzwilliam for Darcy.
I loved the story. At around 85%, when ODC is happily looking forward to their wedding I expected another Wickham evil escape and kidnapping shoe to drop. That didn’t happen thankfully. Lady Catherine makes a very short appearance (demented!) yes, short but Oh My Goodness the fall-out from that appearance is really gut-wrenching and shocking. Poor Darcy. I can’t spoil it. Must be read.
The HEA is romantic and rewarding, sigh…. I wanted the story to go on and on. How about a sequel Ms. Lillian?? You know. Like To the Advantage of All. ??
Highly recommended. This goes on my reread shelf. And I really do wish for a sequel but also the audio version.
So beautiful and rewarding. What a wonderful story involving a scenario often used to get our dear couple-ODC to get together earlier than canon (no Hunsford, no Pemberley visit with the Gardiners.). Yes, a compromise, yet so uniquely and sweetly done, involving puppies in need of rescue. Who wouldn’t fall in love with that?
Lory Lillian writes really interesting new characters and Admiral Pembrooke is thus far my favorite. I wanted him as my godfather, hey!, I wanted to marry him myself. Woo! He shared equal Hero status here with Darcy, IMHO.
Bingley has more courage and self confidence in this story. Wickham is as disgusting as he could get. Nice comeuppance there. Collins leaves Longbourn in a huff. In all these situations Admiral Pembrooke has an influence, as well as in Lizzy’s change of heart and Darcy’s opening his mind and heart to Lizzy’s family. He has Darcy’s back though, he’s like a more mature, experienced and wise Colonel Fitzwilliam for Darcy.
I loved the story. At around 85%, when ODC is happily looking forward to their wedding I expected another Wickham evil escape and kidnapping shoe to drop. That didn’t happen thankfully. Lady Catherine makes a very short appearance (demented!) yes, short but Oh My Goodness the fall-out from that appearance is really gut-wrenching and shocking. Poor Darcy. I can’t spoil it. Must be read.
The HEA is romantic and rewarding, sigh…. I wanted the story to go on and on. How about a sequel Ms. Lillian?? You know. Like To the Advantage of All. ??
Highly recommended. This goes on my reread shelf. And I really do wish for a sequel but also the audio version.
August 7, 2023
Pride an Prejudice with an older wise relative of Fitzwilliam Darcy. The Admiral does an excellent job of asking Darcy and Bingley questions about their thoughts and feelings. He also happens to be a fan of Elizabeth Bennet.
More emotionally intelligent characters brings about great conversation and a wonderful happily ever after.
More emotionally intelligent characters brings about great conversation and a wonderful happily ever after.
July 30, 2023
Beautiful
An absolutely poignant and beautifully written variation inspired by Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by the talented Lory Lillian. I enjoyed it very much.
An absolutely poignant and beautifully written variation inspired by Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by the talented Lory Lillian. I enjoyed it very much.
August 27, 2023
One of Lilian's gentler novels, this book takes advantage of a new character, a relative of Darcy's, to push the couple towards love earlier. That plus other plot situations allow for the FMS to have a successful outcome. Overall a light and pleasing read, well edited.
I write technical reviews, and you won't find a synopsis here, nor much in the way of subjective analysis. Instead, I pick the book apart using the core issues that could irritate the reader if done poorly and cause them to drop a star.
- The plot had a good story arc that was complete, though the ending was rather abrupt.
- Good flow throughout, even though there were some "telling" sections of narrative.
- Low angst for the most part.
- Point of view was third person multiple, using the two protagonists in a partially deep POV but mostly "telling" mode. Some filter words appeared, consistent with "telling" mode. The author should be "showing" more. Some spoon feeding of emotions was seen.
- Language was Regency with minimal diversions. Non-Regency words (two) and Americanisms (two) were well below the norm for a JAFF book, making the reader able to continue with the era feel more consistently as they read.
- Some words were over-used, e.g., "tiresome" and "miscreant."
- Punctuation issues: a zero for an "o"; an extra period mid-sentence; use of the modern British convention of no punctuation for Mr. and Mrs. (in the Regency the period was used); a missing question mark, and three unnecessary commas.
- The story included three sentence fragments that should have been attached to the previous sentence as they weren't artistic-type fragments.
- Non-Regency issues included the use of the word "dishes" for "courses." It's unlikely that Mr. Darcy would have thrown another log on the fire; the fireplace would probably have been coal burning in the Regency. It's bad ton to stay for more than 20 minutes when making a morning call.
- The development of the romance tied well to canon and was realistic in its pace. Story tools used for this were unique.
- Characterization was spot on, and I enjoyed the new lead character of Admiral Pembroke.
- The cover is pretty, but it doesn't say that much. However, I do think that it would stand out somewhat based on its attractiveness, and that's what the author wants from their cover. It's well-balanced and the fonts are just barely the right size to see on thumbnail on Amazon. A black shadow on the white font might have helped it to pop more--I'm no graphic artist, but I've seen it done.
IMHO, Lory has a lovely sweet romance here that leads up to the forced marriage, and it should be marketed more as such. However, FMS sells, and I understand her thought process. In any case, this book is both well-written and well-edited, making it a good read for any JAFF lover. I recommend it for a day when you'd like something that's not too heavy but nevertheless is entertaining from one end to the other.
Disclaimer: I'm a JAFF author, and some might suggest that this review is a conflict of interest. However, I was a reader first, and my reviews are honest and impartial. I write them for the benefit of both the reader and the author.
I write technical reviews, and you won't find a synopsis here, nor much in the way of subjective analysis. Instead, I pick the book apart using the core issues that could irritate the reader if done poorly and cause them to drop a star.
- The plot had a good story arc that was complete, though the ending was rather abrupt.
- Good flow throughout, even though there were some "telling" sections of narrative.
- Low angst for the most part.
- Point of view was third person multiple, using the two protagonists in a partially deep POV but mostly "telling" mode. Some filter words appeared, consistent with "telling" mode. The author should be "showing" more. Some spoon feeding of emotions was seen.
- Language was Regency with minimal diversions. Non-Regency words (two) and Americanisms (two) were well below the norm for a JAFF book, making the reader able to continue with the era feel more consistently as they read.
- Some words were over-used, e.g., "tiresome" and "miscreant."
- Punctuation issues: a zero for an "o"; an extra period mid-sentence; use of the modern British convention of no punctuation for Mr. and Mrs. (in the Regency the period was used); a missing question mark, and three unnecessary commas.
- The story included three sentence fragments that should have been attached to the previous sentence as they weren't artistic-type fragments.
- Non-Regency issues included the use of the word "dishes" for "courses." It's unlikely that Mr. Darcy would have thrown another log on the fire; the fireplace would probably have been coal burning in the Regency. It's bad ton to stay for more than 20 minutes when making a morning call.
- The development of the romance tied well to canon and was realistic in its pace. Story tools used for this were unique.
- Characterization was spot on, and I enjoyed the new lead character of Admiral Pembroke.
- The cover is pretty, but it doesn't say that much. However, I do think that it would stand out somewhat based on its attractiveness, and that's what the author wants from their cover. It's well-balanced and the fonts are just barely the right size to see on thumbnail on Amazon. A black shadow on the white font might have helped it to pop more--I'm no graphic artist, but I've seen it done.
IMHO, Lory has a lovely sweet romance here that leads up to the forced marriage, and it should be marketed more as such. However, FMS sells, and I understand her thought process. In any case, this book is both well-written and well-edited, making it a good read for any JAFF lover. I recommend it for a day when you'd like something that's not too heavy but nevertheless is entertaining from one end to the other.
Disclaimer: I'm a JAFF author, and some might suggest that this review is a conflict of interest. However, I was a reader first, and my reviews are honest and impartial. I write them for the benefit of both the reader and the author.
August 11, 2023
To the Advantage of Both
I really liked the addition of Admiral Pembroke to the Darcy’s family tree through the Fitzwilliam side of the family. Added the needed flair at Netherfield and was able to put Caroline Bingley in her place simply by taking her to task for her outrageous behavior and attitude. But I really enjoyed his interaction with Darcy and pushing him in the right direction. I also enjoyed the way the author handled Wickham. With the admiral’s intervention, Wickham was finally given a choice even he couldn’t refuse. Unfortunately before he was stopped, his remarks about Darcy and Elizabeth’s relationship puts Elizabeth in a compromising situation. Darcy already in love with Elizabeth, proposes. At first she refuses his offer, but after speaking with her father, reconsiders the proposal and accepts. Lady Catherine de Bourgh arrives and throws everyone into a tizzy especially Darcy when she blurts out an indiscretion about his father. Elizabeth’s response to her tantrum is priceless and Darcy sends her away never to cross paths at least in this variation. After spending part of the season in London, the Darcys travel to Pemberley to enjoy their HEA. Darcy’s father’s indiscretion leaves Darcy stunned, but with Elizabeth and the admiral’s help, he accepts that he cannot change what happened and is resigned to accept his half-sister. Good story.
I really liked the addition of Admiral Pembroke to the Darcy’s family tree through the Fitzwilliam side of the family. Added the needed flair at Netherfield and was able to put Caroline Bingley in her place simply by taking her to task for her outrageous behavior and attitude. But I really enjoyed his interaction with Darcy and pushing him in the right direction. I also enjoyed the way the author handled Wickham. With the admiral’s intervention, Wickham was finally given a choice even he couldn’t refuse. Unfortunately before he was stopped, his remarks about Darcy and Elizabeth’s relationship puts Elizabeth in a compromising situation. Darcy already in love with Elizabeth, proposes. At first she refuses his offer, but after speaking with her father, reconsiders the proposal and accepts. Lady Catherine de Bourgh arrives and throws everyone into a tizzy especially Darcy when she blurts out an indiscretion about his father. Elizabeth’s response to her tantrum is priceless and Darcy sends her away never to cross paths at least in this variation. After spending part of the season in London, the Darcys travel to Pemberley to enjoy their HEA. Darcy’s father’s indiscretion leaves Darcy stunned, but with Elizabeth and the admiral’s help, he accepts that he cannot change what happened and is resigned to accept his half-sister. Good story.
August 17, 2023
A good variation of the Bennett/Darcy saga
A very enjoyable read, which I finished with only a few criticisms:
First, I dislike the roping in of unknown characters, especially those who should have been a part of the original. Don't get me wrong, I liked the Admiral but, WtH did he come from? The puppies were cute, but a rather obvious inclusion to smooth the Fitzwilliam/Elizabeth personality conflict. I still enjoyed the tale.
My basic request is that the next PaP Variation author try something totally variant: have Elizabeth and
Darcy fall wildly in love immediately and then, take on all the criticism and gossip together, as partners. There's plenty of room for character change and development in that plot.
A very enjoyable read, which I finished with only a few criticisms:
First, I dislike the roping in of unknown characters, especially those who should have been a part of the original. Don't get me wrong, I liked the Admiral but, WtH did he come from? The puppies were cute, but a rather obvious inclusion to smooth the Fitzwilliam/Elizabeth personality conflict. I still enjoyed the tale.
My basic request is that the next PaP Variation author try something totally variant: have Elizabeth and
Darcy fall wildly in love immediately and then, take on all the criticism and gossip together, as partners. There's plenty of room for character change and development in that plot.
August 1, 2023
I found the blurb to be a poor representation of this story - of which only the last 10% took place after the Darcy’s “forced” marriage (which I would not classify it as). Nonetheless, this was a pleasant tale with some interesting sub plots and a nice developing relationship for Elizabeth and Darcy.
August 4, 2023
Thank you, Lory Lilian.
September 19, 2023
Wonderful
The book introduces us to Admiral Thomas Pembroke, who is brother to Darcy's aunt the Countess of Matlock. He and Darcy are close, and he visits Netherfield. The circumstances of his arrival involve Elizabeth, and predisposes him to admire her, much to the annoyance of Caroline Bingley and Mrs Hurst. Darcy, as per usual, already admires Elizabeth but is fighting his strong attraction to her, since he considers her unsuitable. As the book summary indicates, it all begins after Jane and Elizabeth's stay at Netherfield while Jane was ill. Mr Collins has arrived at Longbourn and has set his sights on Elizabeth for a wife.
Apparently an admiral was quite the important figure in this era. Just his title inspires awe at both Netherfield and Longbourn, and his opinion is given much weight. Admiral Pembroke is a strong character, forthright and at times even irreverent, someone who isn't afraid to offer his views on any subject. His inclusion in the P&P universe is superb, as he has the wherewithal to put some annoying people in their place, and he uses his influence to steer Darcy and Bingley in the right directions in regards to the Bennett sisters. The admiral is pretty much the star of the show here.
The usual villains appear, and are dealt with handily with the admiral's help. The romance is lovely. This is a swoon worthy Darcy. However, Elizabeth is just a little bit too weak-kneed for me. I would have liked her to be a bit less breathless and nervous. The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly for a satisfying way to pass some time.
The book introduces us to Admiral Thomas Pembroke, who is brother to Darcy's aunt the Countess of Matlock. He and Darcy are close, and he visits Netherfield. The circumstances of his arrival involve Elizabeth, and predisposes him to admire her, much to the annoyance of Caroline Bingley and Mrs Hurst. Darcy, as per usual, already admires Elizabeth but is fighting his strong attraction to her, since he considers her unsuitable. As the book summary indicates, it all begins after Jane and Elizabeth's stay at Netherfield while Jane was ill. Mr Collins has arrived at Longbourn and has set his sights on Elizabeth for a wife.
Apparently an admiral was quite the important figure in this era. Just his title inspires awe at both Netherfield and Longbourn, and his opinion is given much weight. Admiral Pembroke is a strong character, forthright and at times even irreverent, someone who isn't afraid to offer his views on any subject. His inclusion in the P&P universe is superb, as he has the wherewithal to put some annoying people in their place, and he uses his influence to steer Darcy and Bingley in the right directions in regards to the Bennett sisters. The admiral is pretty much the star of the show here.
The usual villains appear, and are dealt with handily with the admiral's help. The romance is lovely. This is a swoon worthy Darcy. However, Elizabeth is just a little bit too weak-kneed for me. I would have liked her to be a bit less breathless and nervous. The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly for a satisfying way to pass some time.
July 30, 2023
How are Lory Lilian blurbs always so useless? "It is a long and complex novel, featuring well-known characters and situations as well as new appearances and unexpected twists of the plot, creating unique circumstances in which relationships will still evolve." You could write this about just about any P&P variation without reading it. They all feature well-known characters and strive to introduce twists of the plot for ODC to evolve their relationship in new circumstances. Blurbs should tell you how the book is different from other variations, not how it's similar to the rest of them.
Anyway, what the book is really about? The setting is while the Bingleys are still at Netherfield. There is an original character added to the party, Admiral Thomas Pembroke. He was a friend of Darcy's father, and he is not shy about expressing his opinions. Among other things, he has opinions about marrying for love or without it, and as he is someone that Darcy respects it influences his thinking. Wickham attends the Netherfield ball and starts some rumours about Darcy and Elizabeth that give Darcy a reason to stop struggling with his feelings and start proposing. Elizabeth is not easy to convince but yet it doesn't take him very long to do so.
I gave this story five stars mostly because the admiral is a great character with a complete story arc. I don't want to spoil it but apart from matchmaking between E&D he also has his own life story that becomes more relevant in the last part of the book.
Steam level: Marital intimacies.
Anyway, what the book is really about? The setting is while the Bingleys are still at Netherfield. There is an original character added to the party, Admiral Thomas Pembroke. He was a friend of Darcy's father, and he is not shy about expressing his opinions. Among other things, he has opinions about marrying for love or without it, and as he is someone that Darcy respects it influences his thinking. Wickham attends the Netherfield ball and starts some rumours about Darcy and Elizabeth that give Darcy a reason to stop struggling with his feelings and start proposing. Elizabeth is not easy to convince but yet it doesn't take him very long to do so.
I gave this story five stars mostly because the admiral is a great character with a complete story arc. I don't want to spoil it but apart from matchmaking between E&D he also has his own life story that becomes more relevant in the last part of the book.
Steam level: Marital intimacies.
December 22, 2023
Endearing story how Mr. Darcy awakens to love for Elizabeth Bennet early than Canon
Although many parts could have been done away with so as to make this variation shorter and all the more sweeter (for many of us readers pressed for time, that is), this is an enjoyable and endearing story not so far from P&P Canon. The Pride and prejudice are definitely there, especially on the part of Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet. However, they are dispelled, earlier than Canon, by the help of a new character/friend to the Darcy/Fitzwilliam family, Admiral Pembroke, and a disheveled Elizabeth while rescuing two puppies. The knowledge of an old family scandal/secret helps Mr. Darcy rethink his ideas of the strictures of society and what is expected of him.
As for Elizabeth Bennet’s part, it is early in the story when she sees a softer and kinder side of Fitzwilliam Darcy, who she previously despised due to his infamous declarations of her lack of beauty at the Meryton Assembly. Her discussions with Admiral Pembroke and further reflections of Darcy made her rethink and reconsider her rejection of the latter’s marriage proposal, done due to a probable scandal due to rumors circulated by none other than Wickham and other militia officers.
Even if their relationship was marred with uncertainties in the beginning, their love and affection for each other blossomed as they both resolved to make their marriage work and as they spend more time with each other.
A sweet and heartwarming fare
Although many parts could have been done away with so as to make this variation shorter and all the more sweeter (for many of us readers pressed for time, that is), this is an enjoyable and endearing story not so far from P&P Canon. The Pride and prejudice are definitely there, especially on the part of Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet. However, they are dispelled, earlier than Canon, by the help of a new character/friend to the Darcy/Fitzwilliam family, Admiral Pembroke, and a disheveled Elizabeth while rescuing two puppies. The knowledge of an old family scandal/secret helps Mr. Darcy rethink his ideas of the strictures of society and what is expected of him.
As for Elizabeth Bennet’s part, it is early in the story when she sees a softer and kinder side of Fitzwilliam Darcy, who she previously despised due to his infamous declarations of her lack of beauty at the Meryton Assembly. Her discussions with Admiral Pembroke and further reflections of Darcy made her rethink and reconsider her rejection of the latter’s marriage proposal, done due to a probable scandal due to rumors circulated by none other than Wickham and other militia officers.
Even if their relationship was marred with uncertainties in the beginning, their love and affection for each other blossomed as they both resolved to make their marriage work and as they spend more time with each other.
A sweet and heartwarming fare
July 14, 2024
I enjoyed this book very much, and although the release date was June of 2024, it was also released at an earlier date.
Not having read the prior version, but I can honestly say, this one is fabulous!
This book breaks from canon a few weeks prior to the Netherfiel ball, when Elizabeth makes the accidental acquaintance of Admiral Pembroke, Mr. Darcy's uncle. With Admiral Pembroke's admiration of the Bennets, Elizabeth and Darcy are thrown into each other's company, allowing them a better understanding of the other. But, during the Netherfield Ball, events occur to force the two to make some serious decisions, with the guidance of Admiral Pembroke and Mr. Bennet.
I loved it so much, and here's why:
First, the characters, old and new. Darcy is swoon-worthy in this one, as Elizabeth is delightful. Admiral Pembroke steals the show, however, with his wit, his charm, and his steadfastness. Everyone should have an uncle like him.
Next, was the plot and the subplot. One had me spellbound, and the other I did not see coming! Shockingly entertaining!
And, last, I think this is some of the best work I have read from this writer. Very well done.
Not having read the prior version, but I can honestly say, this one is fabulous!
This book breaks from canon a few weeks prior to the Netherfiel ball, when Elizabeth makes the accidental acquaintance of Admiral Pembroke, Mr. Darcy's uncle. With Admiral Pembroke's admiration of the Bennets, Elizabeth and Darcy are thrown into each other's company, allowing them a better understanding of the other. But, during the Netherfield Ball, events occur to force the two to make some serious decisions, with the guidance of Admiral Pembroke and Mr. Bennet.
I loved it so much, and here's why:
First, the characters, old and new. Darcy is swoon-worthy in this one, as Elizabeth is delightful. Admiral Pembroke steals the show, however, with his wit, his charm, and his steadfastness. Everyone should have an uncle like him.
Next, was the plot and the subplot. One had me spellbound, and the other I did not see coming! Shockingly entertaining!
And, last, I think this is some of the best work I have read from this writer. Very well done.
February 8, 2025
Premise: An "outsider comes to Meryton and fixes things" tale. The outsider this time is an Admiral with connections to Darcy. He quickly has Bingley shaping up, Darcy rethinking his attitude, and Elizabeth realizing there's some discrepancies in her perception of Darcy. And he throws both Caroline Bingley and Mr Collins off their game. But then scandalous rumors threaten ODC and it becomes a forced (only slightly) marriage story! Also Darcy learns some startling secrets about his parents' marriage.
What I liked: An outsider story can be a lot of fun because there's a character who just says what the reader is thinking.
Characterization: I'm not sure I buy Lady Catherine just spilling the family tea like that, no matter how angry she is.
Spice level: Medium. An open door but mostly euphemistic wedding consummation scene.
Any non-canon parings: Nope.
Other notes or issues: The tone is sometimes at odds with the plot. Quite long for a story that spans basically a few weeks.
What I liked: An outsider story can be a lot of fun because there's a character who just says what the reader is thinking.
Characterization: I'm not sure I buy Lady Catherine just spilling the family tea like that, no matter how angry she is.
Spice level: Medium. An open door but mostly euphemistic wedding consummation scene.
Any non-canon parings: Nope.
Other notes or issues: The tone is sometimes at odds with the plot. Quite long for a story that spans basically a few weeks.
August 23, 2023
Another great story from Lowry Lillian!
This would actually have been 5 stars except for a couple of plot points I found disappointing. Without too much of a spoiler, I didn’t care for the way Darcy’s relationship with the admiral was left. There were individuals whose stories were introduced and then relegated to obscurity with Charlotte, Collins, Caroline and the Hursts being examples. Other readers will likely disagree, but that is my reaction as I read the book. I may feel differently after reading it again at a later date.
Overall I enjoyed the book, criticisms aside. It is well written and edited with only a few instances of extra words within a sentence.
Recommended to Austen fans as a different path for ODC influenced and guided by a new character never before seen.
This would actually have been 5 stars except for a couple of plot points I found disappointing. Without too much of a spoiler, I didn’t care for the way Darcy’s relationship with the admiral was left. There were individuals whose stories were introduced and then relegated to obscurity with Charlotte, Collins, Caroline and the Hursts being examples. Other readers will likely disagree, but that is my reaction as I read the book. I may feel differently after reading it again at a later date.
Overall I enjoyed the book, criticisms aside. It is well written and edited with only a few instances of extra words within a sentence.
Recommended to Austen fans as a different path for ODC influenced and guided by a new character never before seen.
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September 13, 2023While I didn't mind some aspects of this book, I felt like it was far too long for the story it contained. There were quite a few plot points that added nothing to the story except length (the revelation about Darcy's father, Mr Bennet's ill health). I was expecting these points to be significant, but they died out.
I'm not sure how I feel about Admiral Pembroke. At first I liked his character, but by the end, he felt a little bit too convenient, managing affairs to his satisfaction. He was a bit like a reverse Lady Catherine in some ways, except you don't notice it, because he supports ODC.
I did like the development of Lizzy and Darcy's relationship, although I felt like the "scandal" of the gossip leading to his proposal was paper thin.
I'm not sure how I feel about Admiral Pembroke. At first I liked his character, but by the end, he felt a little bit too convenient, managing affairs to his satisfaction. He was a bit like a reverse Lady Catherine in some ways, except you don't notice it, because he supports ODC.
I did like the development of Lizzy and Darcy's relationship, although I felt like the "scandal" of the gossip leading to his proposal was paper thin.
November 20, 2023
Fitzwilliam Darcy is fascinated by Charles Bingley's neighbor, Miss Elizabeth, in particular.
Miss Elizabeth Bennet meets a person lost in the woods, looking for Netherfield, one Admiral Thomas Andrew Pembroke . The " Admiral" is a friend and a relation the brother of his Aunt , by marriage , Lady Matlock. He immediately notices, when in company, with Darcy and Miss Elizabeth , the gentleman's attraction to the remarkable young woman. This story sees Mr. Bingley asserting himself , where his sisters are concerned and Mr. Bennet becoming a more sociable gentleman. I'm sure you'll find the addition of the "Admiral " and his sage advice adds a certain something to an enjoyable story.
Miss Elizabeth Bennet meets a person lost in the woods, looking for Netherfield, one Admiral Thomas Andrew Pembroke . The " Admiral" is a friend and a relation the brother of his Aunt , by marriage , Lady Matlock. He immediately notices, when in company, with Darcy and Miss Elizabeth , the gentleman's attraction to the remarkable young woman. This story sees Mr. Bingley asserting himself , where his sisters are concerned and Mr. Bennet becoming a more sociable gentleman. I'm sure you'll find the addition of the "Admiral " and his sage advice adds a certain something to an enjoyable story.
August 12, 2023
2.5 stars
KU read
Low-angst stories can be compelling; this, sadly, was not. I’m confused about Darcy and Pembroke’s falling out; I missed something important when I was trying to fall asleep, but I don’t care enough to find it. The Miss Julia subplot added nothing but pages to the story, as does Mr Bennet’s health. Two of the miscreants at the heart of the gossip merely have to apologize? If that’s the case, then the scandal didn’t require a hasty marriage.
Darcy and Elizabeth are unremarkable. Unfortunately, this is a Darcy of the creepy subspecies: “She had learnt as quickly and diligently as she had learnt everything else.” Eww.
KU read
Low-angst stories can be compelling; this, sadly, was not. I’m confused about Darcy and Pembroke’s falling out; I missed something important when I was trying to fall asleep, but I don’t care enough to find it. The Miss Julia subplot added nothing but pages to the story, as does Mr Bennet’s health. Two of the miscreants at the heart of the gossip merely have to apologize? If that’s the case, then the scandal didn’t require a hasty marriage.
Darcy and Elizabeth are unremarkable. Unfortunately, this is a Darcy of the creepy subspecies: “She had learnt as quickly and diligently as she had learnt everything else.” Eww.
September 20, 2023
An interesting variation
Lord Lilian disrupts the trajectory of the canon by introducing a new character, whose wise guidance helps Darcy ameliorate his haughty behaviour and so build a tentative foundation for friendship. There was a strong sense of place, the characters are well written and the dialogue is clever.
I appreciate the author giving due warning of a steamy sex scene in one chapter. She wrote that for those who preferred closed doors, the chapter could be skipped without losing anything substantive. But if it’s not integral to the plot, then to me, it seems gratuitous.
Lord Lilian disrupts the trajectory of the canon by introducing a new character, whose wise guidance helps Darcy ameliorate his haughty behaviour and so build a tentative foundation for friendship. There was a strong sense of place, the characters are well written and the dialogue is clever.
I appreciate the author giving due warning of a steamy sex scene in one chapter. She wrote that for those who preferred closed doors, the chapter could be skipped without losing anything substantive. But if it’s not integral to the plot, then to me, it seems gratuitous.
August 8, 2023
A different take on the classic version.
A new relative for Mr Darcy is introduced to us through his getting lost walking to Netherfield with his injured horse. It's an Admiral who is Lady Matlock brother and was best friends of George Darcy. He's an interesting and very outspoken individual who actually gets everyone in the area thinking and changing their outlook on life and societal pressure.
I enjoyed this different twist that quickly changed the attitude of almost everyone especially Elizabeth and Darcy.
A new relative for Mr Darcy is introduced to us through his getting lost walking to Netherfield with his injured horse. It's an Admiral who is Lady Matlock brother and was best friends of George Darcy. He's an interesting and very outspoken individual who actually gets everyone in the area thinking and changing their outlook on life and societal pressure.
I enjoyed this different twist that quickly changed the attitude of almost everyone especially Elizabeth and Darcy.
September 5, 2023
A Surprise & Surrender I did not expect
I could not put this story aside. I kept promising myself I would stop at the next chapter. 3 chapters later.
This had some angst but I enjoyed the courtship.
I did rate it high because it dealt with having to grow up and see the truth. It also showed that facing the truth and accepting there are things you cannot change need not make you bitter.
I recommend this sweet story and you can skip the chapter recommended and still have a good, sweet, romantic read.
I could not put this story aside. I kept promising myself I would stop at the next chapter. 3 chapters later.
This had some angst but I enjoyed the courtship.
I did rate it high because it dealt with having to grow up and see the truth. It also showed that facing the truth and accepting there are things you cannot change need not make you bitter.
I recommend this sweet story and you can skip the chapter recommended and still have a good, sweet, romantic read.
September 23, 2023
The Admiral for the win
The addition of a new character in Admiral Pembroke is a character character. I liked him so much, I almost wished Elizabeth could marry him. What he brings to the story with his ideas about marriage and partnership really turns around Darcy and even Bingley. He is also great for putting Caroline in her place. The story is a fun twist to the original without rewriting the whole story. The friendship that blossoms is sweet and Darcy is very gentle. The intimate scene can be skipped for any reader uncomfortable with it.
The addition of a new character in Admiral Pembroke is a character character. I liked him so much, I almost wished Elizabeth could marry him. What he brings to the story with his ideas about marriage and partnership really turns around Darcy and even Bingley. He is also great for putting Caroline in her place. The story is a fun twist to the original without rewriting the whole story. The friendship that blossoms is sweet and Darcy is very gentle. The intimate scene can be skipped for any reader uncomfortable with it.
August 4, 2023
An Admiral changes everything
With the addition of a non-canon character, Admiral Pembroke, who is Darcy's uncle, we see a very different path for our favorite characters just 2 weeks before the Netherfield ball. Darcy and Bingley get lots of good advice, Lizzy and Darcy get into trouble but learn to understand each other, and Wickham plots. Nice, romantic moments and several surprises in the plot.
With the addition of a non-canon character, Admiral Pembroke, who is Darcy's uncle, we see a very different path for our favorite characters just 2 weeks before the Netherfield ball. Darcy and Bingley get lots of good advice, Lizzy and Darcy get into trouble but learn to understand each other, and Wickham plots. Nice, romantic moments and several surprises in the plot.
August 5, 2023
Absolutely wonderful book; altogether lovely. Loved the addition of a new character, Admiral Pembroke, who did not scruple to tell people what they needed to hear. Thoroughly enjoyed every minute I spent reading this one, as there was relatively little angst, the love story very sweet, and all the villains got their just desserts.
August 17, 2023
Nice story
- No angst
- Darcy and Elizabeth were good together.
- Admiral Pembroke was a favorite of mine. **SPOILER** However, I could not understand Pembroke's decision toward the end, considering who Laura truly looks like. I would think that story wouldn't fly once people saw the resemblance to the Darcy men.
- No angst
- Darcy and Elizabeth were good together.
- Admiral Pembroke was a favorite of mine. **SPOILER** However, I could not understand Pembroke's decision toward the end, considering who Laura truly looks like. I would think that story wouldn't fly once people saw the resemblance to the Darcy men.
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