The overall book is average with a lot of smaller offenses that really bothered me. If you don't read many books, skip this one. If you do read a lot of books, up to you, but there are better Nicole Snow books out there.
Almost Pretend is a grumpy x sunshine, marriage of convenience romance about a children's illustrator and the ceo trying to save his family's children publishing agency. I've read a few other Nicole Snow books and they are extremely similar to this book. It's the same beats over and over. The few twists and turns weren't surprising. Personally, when I read a romance novel, I get annoyed when I can figure out up coming plot twists before the characters because it lowers their intellect in my eyes. I wanted to scream YOU'RE AUNT IS A LESBIAN! COME ON, YVETTE LITERALLY WORKS ON A CHICKEN FARM!
The two love interests didn't have a lot of chemistry. I am lax when it comes to pet names, but the repeated use of wretch and brat really turned me off from the MMC. Those are words I typically associate with misogynistic men who are trying to assert dominance, but are just women haters. Other than inner monologue/thoughts about how crazy Elle makes him, I didn't get the vibe that August actually loved Elle. Just that she was there and wasn't his dead crazy ex-wife. I found him to be rude and hurtful in a way I personally couldn't get past. I've read a lot of "alpha-hole" stories and this was a poor execution of it.
There were some spelling/grammar errors that will hopefully be caught before final release.
Some other red flags I came across - I didn't love how alcoholism was treated in this book. It feels like the characters actions were showing one thing, but then the author would slip in lines of dialogue to make sure the reader knew that they had the "correct" view on alcoholism. And the line about Marissa asking her mother - who she was estranged from for 12 years - to be her AA sponsor so "she wouldn't let Marissa slip away like her father did." Yeah, no. I am not an expert on AA, but having someone so close to you, who you haven't spoken to in over a decade, and has also gone through the trauma of losing a mutual loved one from alcoholism, doesn't seem like a good or healthy idea. I would suggest changing the line to be more along the lines of Yvette helping Marissa get to meetings and taking care of her, not being her sponsor.
Thank you to Montlake, Nicole Snow, and Netgalley for providing me with this free eArc in exchange for an honest review.