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The Alpha King's Curse : Part One

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It started with a curse.

For five years, Jackson ‘Jax’ King has known exactly when he will die. With nothing to lose, he earned his reputation as the most ruthless Alpha King. Though his enemies are circling, there is one thing he must do before he save his bloodline. But even the Moon Goddess has cursed him because she has given him a half-blood as his only hope. Layla Carlisle. A disrespectful, greedy, wolf-less human.

Layla seizes the chance to save her sister from a life on the streets, but at what cost? From the moment she agrees to be a surrogate, her world is turned upside down. Why did Jax choose her when he and his strange friends can’t stand her? Can she fulfil her end of the bargain when it means abandoning her child, just like her mother did?

As Layla spends more time in Jax's bed, she realises nothing is as it seems. Who is Jackson King, and why does he know more about her mother than she does?Thrown into a world of werewolf politics and dark desires, can Layla and Jax survive the dangerous terrain to unravel the truth behind the curse and the fate of Jax's bloodline?

480 pages, Kindle Edition

Published August 16, 2023

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Profile Image for Toni FGMAMTC.
2,098 reviews26 followers
March 23, 2024
4.75 stars

I think there are supposed to be three separate books, but I read this on the Readict app. It had everything together so I'm going to give my review of everything. On the app you can read the book for free. You have to watch adds between chapters. It may not have always been edited amazingly, but I could not put it down. This is the first time in a while that I couldn't go to bed at night because I couldn't stop reading. It is a werewolf romance, but it has so much of everything. There are so many ups and downs. Sometimes I was so nervous I could hard stand to keep reading even though I also couldn't stop. The couple has such a hard time just having their romance. They have to fight for their lives sometimes and something is always happening to jeopardize their HEA. It was a wild ride but one which I could not get off. This is definitely one of the best books I've read on one of those free apps. Most stories on free apps I end up stopping after a couple of chapters because they're just silly. Most of the 242 chapters in this completely kept my attention.
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160 reviews4 followers
August 7, 2024
Existe una frase favorita para los defensores de películas y esa es “es una película para apagar el cerebro” y bueno...

No recuerdo este año leer un libro en donde existan cambiaformas/hombres lobo o sus parecidos y tengamos a parejas predestinadas que involucran a mestizos o humanos siendo parejas de estos, lo que me lleva a preguntarme si todos los que he leído alguna vez tienen a personajes tan supremacistas que da asco.

Y es que joder con lo incómodo y denigrante que se siente la existencia de un romance entre una mestiza y un hombre lobo (vamos a dejarle ese nombre) en este libro. El como la morrita protagonista entra a esta comunidad y se termina relacionando con un tipo que ni siquiera la ve como un ser que merezca ser tratado con respeto es horrible, muchas veces la ve, habla y piensa de ella como algo menos que mierda atorada en si zapato es feo. Creo que este tipo asqueroso es lo más cerca que he leído (como interés romántico) a un supremacista ⚪, racista, xenófobo... Y es que como mujer morena de México simplemente no puedo ni entender como la prota puede siquiera sentirse bien con esas personas.

Punto aparte el libro está escrito sobre una premisa poco pensada y situaciones tontas (por no decir menos). La más clara es justo la idea de un hombre lobo teniendo un hijo con una mestiza y esperar que todo sea perfecto sin cuestionar a una sociedad supremacista que por más que sea el hijo de su rey y el que tenga poder (por su linaje) de mandar sobre los demás alphas no enfrentará ninguna consecuencia por las acciones del prota y por justo de quién es su madre. Y es que justo en la última parte del libro es donde vemos al pendejo (nuestro protagonista) cuestionarse todas las estúpidas decisiones que toma.

El libro si está mega construído sobre esas situaciones, al principio del libro estuvo una situación que ahora no recuerdo con la protagonista en donde pensé “Amiga que pendej* eres” pero me puse a pensar y realmente no era una construcción de que el personaje sea tonto tomando la decisión sino más bien de que la historia estaba puesta para que no exista una opción lógica y por tanto el personaje no tenía nada que hacer. El personaje no es estupido, simplemente no existe un camino no tonto.

Posteriormente también existen situaciones que juntan el personajes tontos con caminos tontos de la historia. (1) Layla tiene un intento de escape al principio en en bosque que sabe es peligroso y es un ok tienes lo entiendo, pero justo después vuelve a tener otro después de ella misma decirnos que ya vio cosas extrañas, que tendría que planearlo bien, que no tiene recursos, que tiene que hablar con su hermana y aún así la historia la lleva a escapar otra vez ????? (2) Se supone que el pendejo toma decisiones importantes para su manada y va a morir por tanto tiene que asegurar el lugar para que críen a su hijo, pero llega el momento y le vale madres todos ellos y el que lo odien sin pensar un momento en el futuro de su hijo, solo para que al final ya se haga el sufrido y comience a ver el peligro ???? Igual desde un principio el personaje se ve no es tan inteligente tomando decisiones, pero aún así el que deje de lado el supuesto futuro de su hijo...

Por último que es algo que se divide entre opiniones personales y cosas de la historia... El ser incubadora.
En cuanto a mi opinión, no influye en mi calificación del libro. Este libro realmente deja de lado la forma romántica (al menos al principio) en que se habla del embarazo subrogado y deja ver la forma denigrante en que se usa a una mujer y se aprovecha de su situación, en este caso su seguridad personal y su situación económica. En un principio lo sentí como Layla siendo solo un objeto de carga para gestar que no tenía derecho a sentir y ni siquiera a su cuerpo. Horrible.
Pasando a la historia, se menciona como Layla no lo quiere llevarlo a cabo porque su madre la abandonó y ella no quiere hacerle eso a un hijo que va a gestar (entendiéndose que en un principio no iban a ser sus óvulos), pero se ve orillada por toda su situación y eso es ok entiendo al personaje, sin embargo por muchos momentos solo pasa a ser un “no quiero dejar aquí a mi hijo” sintiéndose la importancia como no querer dejar una prenda de vestir en un lugar y no a su hijo. Le resta importancia a lo que ella cree y solo se toma em serio cuando la historia así lo quiere.
No me agrado eso porque al menos del lado de Layla la maternidad es algo que pesa demasiado por su historia y el que abandonar a su hijo realmente cause un problema en ella solo cuando la historia lo quiere y no nos muestre su dilema y la importancia de este en sus decisiones en todo momento es contradictorio de lo que plantea desde un principio.

Y por último (que recuerdo), existen momentos algo contradictorios que se sienten se iban agregando conforme avanzaba la historia, por ejemplo se menciona que la madre de Layla las abandono y que no hubo más contacto ni nunca supieron nada y eso creo un vacío en ella, pero más adelante menciona que pues veía/tenía “alucinaciones” con su madre que la hacían sentir cercana... Es como mmm raro que se dejen caer cosas pequeñas que no están ahí.

Oh y el libro es en exceso extenso, si le ando quitando 200 páginas porque mucho de lo visto o no aporta o no se pudo manejar de manera distinta... En general se siente que se pudo hacer un mejor trabajo construyendo todo el mundo, sus personajes, historia y mitología.
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24 reviews
March 16, 2024
Good storyline

I enjoyed the story. I would have given it more stars if someone had done a thorough job proofreading it. There were several times I had to stop and re-read passages due to the poor job of the proofreaders. That makes it less enjoyable IMHO.
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63 reviews
March 13, 2024
Longest book ever

So long.

Nothing happens, there's no revelations, nothing. There's no point for the miscommunication between the alpha and beta. Like why isnt the alpha telling the beta anything? This book is just so disappointing.
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9 reviews1 follower
September 20, 2024
The Alpha Kings Curse Part 1 (one)

I absolutely love this series. This is my second time reading it. I found it on another app and did not want to spend more money on it when I found it on here I knew I could read it a second time. The other app had many many spelling and grammar mistakes but on here there is nothing out of place. I wish I found it on here first where I could spend a small amount of money compared to what I had to spend to read it through another app. I really love the fact that on here I can bookmark and I can highlight words or even whole sentences.

As for the story itself I really love this story and I love the fact that the author describes things in such great detail it feels almost like you are reliving someone’s memory rather than a fictional story. I think that the love forming between Jackson and Layla is amazing and the mating bond even tho it has not been cemented yet is intense and beautiful. Dylan is like most typical betas thinking they can get away with almost anything because they feel protecting their Luna or Alpha in this case is their top priority so they feel their actions are justified. He may be Jackson’s best friend but that does not mean anything compared to a human best friend. Once someone’s mate was sensed the best friend takes a back seat to it all. Even tho Dylan does not yet know that Layla is Jackson’s mate I was very surprised he did not even entertain the thought of the possibility that Layla could have been Jackson’s mate, but that is only because like most werewolves they feel they are superior to humans, and because Layla’s scent is masked because of her hidden red wolf genes as Jackson has been summarizing himself none would have guessed in the werewolves world that she could ever be Jackson’s mate because when they smell her she only smells human. As for the witch she is cunning and smart but so far Jackson because of Layla has been able to beat most of the stuff that was tried in him. As for the point on the fact that Layla was almost rapped she is still traumatized by that and will forever be traumatized by such an act. I feel she does heal from it and will continue to do so for the rest of her life. As for werewolves they have this beautiful ability to almost forget about it when in close proximity to one’s mate which I think is very lucky to be able to do such a thing because humans don’t have that ability. I was so happy that Jackson managed to get to her right before that happened. As for the fact that Layla was frozen still right before it happened she did actually try to fight it off but Incase everyone has forgotten the fact that she wasn’t hit in the head and made her slightly concussed and being that she is a half blood so she is not as strong as a werewolf she could fight like a Hurricane, and try as you may to no avail does not mean she is a weakling it just means she lost the battle because the strength between them was overpowering her will to fight. She did kick one of them in the balls and tried to run but with a concussion. The brute strength between not just one of them but three of them was too much on her so by the time Monica’s father got to unbutton his pants she was way too out of it and dizzy from what was happening to fight any longer. I was so freaking happy when Jackson got to her on time.
5 reviews
September 9, 2024
The story is great although I feel like ive read something similar before. But would have been a higher rating but two things held it back. The editing is non existent- so many mistakes. And the length of the story-took forever to get to the point. Truly found myself skipping just to get past the wasted words. Overall, good story -terrible execution. Very immature writing style. I saw the ending coming and think it could easily have ended after book 2, in fact was natural place for ending but it was like the author couldn’t let go. So bottom line- don’t buy but read it if you can do so for free. And for the author, great start but invest in an editor.
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72 reviews2 followers
August 15, 2024
What can I say? This was a sweet and beautiful read, it reminds me of those good and interesting books I usually read on wattpad in the early days before wattpad went downhill. I had to search for the author's page to know if she was once on wattpad, that's how freaking good I found the book. I couldn't put it now because I'm a sucker for this kind of tension, trills and suspense. I came across it and I don't regret diving into it. Layla and Jackson literally rocked my world and I can't wait to see Layla's domination.
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50 reviews2 followers
April 2, 2024
Giving this story 4.80 starts ⭐️.
It was a long story it felt like there was more to some parts . An emotional roller coaster with the characters but over all well writing had all the feels . I really like reading this story. Don’t know if this story has turn into a noble or multiple , it should be … I would buy them all ooh and the audible id it ever came out that way. But for now I’m glad i found it on Readict and had a change to read it .. 😃
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12 reviews
July 18, 2024
Love this series

I absolutely love this book and can not wait to read the sequels. It kept me for the most part on the edge of my seat as the twist and turns and plot thickened. I like how there is a very clear arch, so at least it all is coming together and makes sense even though you never know what is lurking around the corner of the author's brilliant imagination ♡
I definitely will read more from this author
Profile Image for Meghan.
3,413 reviews8 followers
July 10, 2024
What’s in a curse

A quick read. Stops at a key point not a cliffhanger but just stops before book two. Lots of world building but also some big gaps in what and why of the world and curse. The chemistry is clear and the lore of the red wolf has me intrigued. Ready to jump into the next books.
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76 reviews1 follower
August 6, 2024
My mouth literally dropped open!

The writing may not always be the best and there is some editing issues that were missed, but the storyline is great. I really enjoyed the plot as it is different than other wolf stories I have read. When I got to the end, my mouth dropped open realizing where the story stopped. Cliff hanger! Great job!
3 reviews
September 14, 2024
dragged out

These stories are usually dragged out for money on the apps but jeez, 3 part series with the same timeline, characters etc??
I really like to read and get excited when a novel is 500 pages but it’s so drawn out!! 3 chapters about the same scene trying to explain everyone’s feelings?!?!
1 review
July 6, 2024
Awesome Read

I had lost my love of reading after getting my degree online bc there was so much reading. My brain would short circuit when I tried. But this book got my attention and locked me in. I loved every second of it!
37 reviews
July 19, 2024
Arresting

The book got your attention but the repetition kills the suspension plus the ongoing grammatical errors and incorrect pronouns .

Otherwise a good book . Not sure it warrants 3 books to tell the full story .
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33 reviews
August 14, 2024
I LOVED this book! ❤️

This was a page turning, edge of your seat thrilling, nail fumbling drama! It was everything I wanted! Unpredictable, the unromantic romance if that’s a thing. I can’t wait to see what happens in the next book!
1 review
August 19, 2024
The Alpha King’s Curse (Part One) The Bloodline Series Book 1

Great read, action and romance. Good storyline. Lots of spelling errors in the book though. Doesn’t take away from anything though. On to part 2!
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728 reviews42 followers
March 13, 2024
THIS WAS A VERY WELL WRITTEN STORY. I ENJOYED THE FACT THAT THERE WEREN'T ANY UNANSWERED QUESTIONS AT THE END OF THE BOOK
5 reviews
March 13, 2024
Great book

Lost 3 days reading the 3 books in this series. Would recommend to anyone who likes werewolf romance, although I did want to strangle Layla at some points haha
8 reviews
March 15, 2024
Amazing!!!

This book is so amazing amazing the story is well written and a perfect mixture of action, suspense and romance. I highly recommend it.
2 reviews
June 18, 2024
Absolute knockout story!

I just completed book one and I’m going straight into book too can’t wait to read all three loving the story God with a cliffhanger I hate those lol!
484 reviews4 followers
July 23, 2024
Book 1 of 3

Love this new author I found. I hope you join Kindle unlimited. Love the characters and the storylines. Get the books and leave your reviews.
1 review
July 29, 2024
addictive

The moment I read the first few chapters I knew I was addicted this book is awesome!!
I love it
2 reviews
August 4, 2024
Addictive book!!

You’ll want to keep this book to the end and then you’re glad there’s another book to follow.
Yeah! So happy!
2 reviews
August 10, 2024
Loved it!

I love a good Alpha love. I can’t wait to read the next part of the series. Highly recommend to all.
1 review
September 8, 2024
amazing

This book kept me on my toes I couldn’t stop reading because I need to know what was gone happen
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108 reviews
November 6, 2024
loved it !

Great story line and twists. Some great smut. Nothing too dark or extravagant. Over all great read and I look forward to the next one !
1 review
March 11, 2025
Captivating

The storyline can drag you in and keep you reading. The development in the story is easy to predict, but it still keeps you interested.
Profile Image for Catherine Inman.
7 reviews
March 13, 2025
FASCINATING STORYLINE

I am really enjoying this series. It is different from many other werewolf series. Looking forward to the next one!
20 reviews
May 21, 2025
Good book, but guys why was it dragged out, best bit was the end. I gave it 5* because I really enjoy the author
1 review
August 28, 2025
Wow! Hot, hot hot.

I've really enjoyed this Alpha King and Layla's story. I can feel she's going to change into her wolf. It will be interesting to see what happens.
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