The character "Natalie" is a selfish little daddy's girl. I have found so many problems and inaccuracies while only reading the first few pages of this book.
For example, Natalie doesn't know the difference between a burka and a hookah. Another instance is that the girl's father didn't even have a word to describe the Punjabi dress or (salwar) except for, and I quote "how can you possibly lose a woman in a lime-green Harem costume?". Why is another culture's modest dress being sexualized?
Oh not to mention that Pakistan is somehow considered as a Middle Eastern country in this book *Clap clap*
The storyline without the religious discussion/condemnation was actually ok. But what really frustrated me is that the writer was trying so hard to make Islam sound so bad and horrible by associating the bad characters as Muslims. I know it is a Christian novel, but you don't have to trash other people's religion just so your religion sound so nice. Also, according to your novel, I have found that there are some similarities between how a Muslim should act and how a Christian should act .. Examples include not cursing, not lying, not drinking, not sleeping around with others outside of marriage.
In the end, I would like to say that people should not always associate religion with culture because these are two different things. For example, a man beating his wife could happen anywhere in the world, and this is not something which is exclusive to a certain religion.