Boring and shallow
Characters were boring, scenes that could’ve been done in 1 page were 2 pages long. Entire paragraphs about nothing really. The FMC was childish, a drama queen and seemed to get mad anytime the MMC did anything, to the point of irrationality. Nothing steamy or romance related, a third of the way in and there are hardly any scenes between the two main characters, let alone romantic/sex scenes. There’s more about the brothers than the main characters. That’s a problem because the brothers were introduced with little context or delineation of their characters. Therefore, I really had no idea who was whom, and I pictured the same generic man for each brother. We needed more introductory info about these characters if 5 men all of similar age are introduced in literally three same scene (hair color, eye color, age, hairstyle type, etc).