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First published March 24, 2014
“Still standing in the same spot, tracking her, Mr. Rourke smiled, his perception all-knowing, as if he’d been assured she’d turn back to him.”
“She had fire in her waiting to be stoked. This he could tell. He also suspected that submitting to him, to his dominance, would appeal to her.”
“Delicious. I want to remember this forever. Your innocent flavor as it is now… before I take you. So I may never forget how perfect you were in this moment.”
Based on the synopsis and the 4+ star Goodreads rating, I had such high hopes for this story, but by the halfway point I just couldn’t go on.What I liked:
The idea of the story. The compelled marriage theme set in a historical erotic romance with a D/s relationship sounded sublime!What I didn’t like:
Again, the idea of the story, because while I knew where Ms. Miller wanted the story to go, it was taking too long to get there.The bottom line:
The dialog really put me off. The hero and heroine repeatedly using each others’ names during sex scenes, and I do mean repeatedly.
The hero telling the heroine to do something, then frequently telling her “you know you want to…” felt awkward. It wasn't sensual to me, instead it sounded like the hero didn't think the heroine could think for herself.
I never felt the passion being described, instead, I felt like I was reading a script.
Since I DNF’d this story at the halfway mark, I don’t feel right about giving it a Goodreads rating because it might have picked up had I continued reading, who knows?
As I mentioned before, this is a highly rated book, so it's possible that my less than enthusiastic opinion of the story is just a "me" thing. If it sounds like something you'd enjoy, I encourage you to give it a try.
For those wondering, if I had to rate the portion I did read, I would give it 2 stars.
