Series Round Up
LOVED! Seriously read these books!!:
The Pool Boy (#2)
The Architect (#3)
The Frat Boy (#4)
Did Not Like/Meh:
The Doctor (#1) - although there are a couple really hot scenes
The Good Girl (#5) - not worth reading; skip
I am usually the biggest advocate for this series because I think the smut is some of the best smut I've ever read (and I've read a lot), and each story still has an engaging plot, but this one wasn't for me. Tbh, this one made me uncomfortable. This is the first time in my entire smut-reading career where the term "good girl" was giving me the ick. Good girl was said 46 times in this book, and bad girl was said 17 times...it was too much. There are some spoilers ahead but I can't hold back.
I understand you're supposed to be able to feel the age gap here (although, it's only 4 years, so barely an "age gap" in my opinion), but the female main character, Sydney, was written to seem a bit too immature. She was 20-years-old throughout this story, but I felt like I was reading about a 14-year-old. I get that she's a "good girl" (if you forget, this book reminds you that she's a good girl about 5,686,737 times), but she mostly just seemed like she just graduated junior high. All of the spicy scenes had her mommy and daddy issues built into them in a way that made me feel gross. Like, the main characters would go out of their way to have sexy encounters where her parents might catch her because then she'd be a "bad girl." Idk, man. For me, the possibility of my parents potentially catching me getting fingered in front of a mirror is not my kink, but hey, to each their own, I guess. It was also really weird when they planted condom wrappers in Sydney's parents car car so that her parents would find them.
Truthfully, I feel like the 'brother's best friend' trope is really overdone in general, or maybe I've just read this trope too much, but I don't really get excited about it. It has to be done really well for me to love it, and this one was just an average scenario that had a FMC who was the real villain of the story. The 3rd act conflict is almost always the same in brother's best friend tropes (oh no! the brother found out!). *sighs*
...I just had a hard time connecting with this or caring about the supposed "taboo" with the brother's best friend trope. On a personal level, I am a single woman in my late-20s, and I have 2 older brothers. If I liked one of my brother's best friends, it would be like...what's the big deal...they're both adults...
Anyways, I was rolling my eyes a lot throughout this book. Sydney was bland as white rice. She was definitely a pick-me girl, in my opinion. Her ~amazing culinary skills~ were giving me 'Feyre painting vibes' (cringe). I was kinda lolling about her cooking because she made basically 2 dishes for Preston throughout this book, and they were virtually the same thing: some form of carb with shellfish (lobster raviolli and shrimp risotto). As someone who is allergic to shellfish, I was like eek gross...show some range in your cooking, girl. lol
Also, if I had to read about how Sydney was a "good girl" one more time, I was going to throw my kindle. I feel like this book fools you into thinking it's all about a praise kink, but it's not. It's about the FMC being extremely immature, very sheltered, a bit boring with no backbone, and inexperienced. I am sure there are readers who can relate to her, but for me, I just couldn't relate. The 3rd act breakup was 100000% Sydney's fault...like seriously, it was only Sydney's fault. She shouldn't have sent that text to Preston when she knew he was with Colin, and then she shouldn't have gotten mad at Preston for saying she shouldn't have sent that text. Her horrible inner monologue endlessly prattling on about what Preston must be feeling during the confrontation with Colin in his apartment made me want to scream. Sydney literally launched an "i love you" at Preston in the worst possible way and then immediately broke up with him for needing a damn minute to think. I'm actually getting mad all over again just typing this. The author tried to make Sydney look better again in the next chapter by having Cassidy be like "she's trying to help you by not making you choose between her or Colin." Sorry Cassygirl...it's too little too late; I've seen how crazy and childish Sydney is, and I hate her. Sydney, a glorified child, was the villain of this story. She was so fucking childish that she made Preston (who has been a completely immature jackass for the first 4 books of this series) look like a mature man.
Speaking of Cassidy, there was a little too much of Cassidy in this. The Doctor was the only other book in this series that I'm like, meh, about (although I like The Doctor more than this shit), and I was annoyed at how much Cassidy/Doctor Dad were in this. It makes sense why they were in the story since she's Preston's ex and he's Preston's dad, but that didn't make me any happier about it. Whenever Preston would be upset about his situation with Sydney, Cassidy and Doctor Dad kept being like, "this is what you did to us" or made it about themselves/refer back to the beginning of their taboo relationship, and I was like NO ONE FUCKING CARES ANYMORE! THIS IS NOT YOUR BOOK! SHUT UP! But that's probs an overreaction on my part LOL
Another big issue that I had with this book was that it was repetitive. I swear the same thing happened in every chapter. Preston would pick Sydney up, one of them would say "I have something for you" and give the other person a gift wrapped in black paper, and then they'd have sex. The sex was pretty repetitive because how kinky are you going to get when the FMC is a virgin...I skimmed most of the smut, which was a shame because I think Nikki Sloane did such an amazing job writing the smut for the first 4 books of this series. After such heavy steam in the last few books, this book felt vanilla (or maybe just boring bc both of the MCs were sub-par).
Finally, Preston. After reading the first 4 books of this series where Preston was always written as an asshole, selfish character, I just couldn't bring myself to care about Preston. I know that this book is his redemption arc, and I didn't necessarily dislike him, but I just don't really give a fuck about him. He's so boring to me, and I wasn't into his sex scenes. Side note, I think Preston is such a douchebag name for a man LOL (no offense towards any particular Preston). He's just not book boyfriend material for me, and I couldn't see him being sexy.
Unfortunately, I'm disappointed in this. My opinion - skip this book, but read the rest of the series.