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He’s filthy rich. Dangerous. Hot.

I’m untouched and pure. And I’ve been sent to kill him.

I creep into his bedroom late at night, knife in hand. The moonlight reveals the beauty of the mafia kingpin’s face, and I hesitate.

Mistake.

Now he’s captured me, and I’m at his mercy. He says he’ll let me go if I beg him to take me…

I can’t.

Partly from pride, but also… I don’t want to leave. I want to be his.

Captive Desires is a sweet and steamy age gap instalove romance featuring a naughty heroine who falls for the one man forbidden to a possessive Scottish billionaire.

This story was previously available in Dirty Billionaires, is short and spicy, and has a Happily Ever After romantic ending.

46 pages, Kindle Edition

Published August 17, 2023

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Evie Rose

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If you stop at sane, you miss all the best stuff.

Evie Rose writes gleefully improbable bitesized instalove romances, with heroes who are all-in obsessed for their heroines.

She loves possessive alpha heroes, age gap, tons of spice, forced proximity, pining, and swoony romantic bits. She's the darker alter-ego of bestselling author Eve Pendle.

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Profile Image for Matthew Cross.
422 reviews39 followers
August 20, 2024
fantastic short read , cleo , a beautiful assassin and Ian a mafia boss , when cleo breaks in to ians home to do her job she realises that she knows him from a while back , when shes thinking how different he looks , shes caught ... and a spicy night ensues

at the end you get to download a free extended epilogue , i loved every moment of that too
Profile Image for Janet.
5,177 reviews64 followers
August 24, 2023
Ian Abernathy is a rich Scottish Mafia boss. Cleo Whitlock is an assassin sent to kill him. She creeps into his bedroom late at night, knife in hand. The moonlight reveals the beauty of the mafia kingpin’s face, and I hesitate as he's the man she had a dance with at a masquerade ball. Now he’s captured her.
A quick steamy instalove romance. Ian fell for Cleo whilst they shared a dance six months ago, now she’s here in his castle. I read this captivating romance in a sitting, I liked both Ian & Cleo & loved their second chance, age difference romance
My review is for a special copy I voluntarily read
Profile Image for Fiatgal.
1,007 reviews
March 3, 2024
Clearly, I'm in the minority here, but I thought this story was filled with so many clichés. I've read other Evie Rose books which I enjoyed, but this one, not so much.
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1,039 reviews17 followers
September 20, 2023
Wonderfully written story about a young assassin and an older Scottish mafia kingpin being brought together for a second time so he could get her and keep her with him forever.
The two met at a masquerade ball, they couldn’t tell each other their names since it wasn’t allowed. They danced and talked until she got a call and had to leave, he tried to follow her but she was too fast. They both thought of the other.
Six months have gone by since the masquerade ball. Her father put her on a job to take out a Scottish mafia kingpin. He winds up capturing her will she was trying to cut his throat so he tied her up. They talk as they talk he tells her ‘if she begs for him he will let her go’ but deep down she doesn’t want that. She winds up giving him oral sex and he gives her oral sex but while he’s giving her oral sex she’s to try to get free before her first orgasm and if not she’s to be his captive, she doesn’t so she’s his captive. They sleep together, her snuggling into him.
It took him four months to find out her name after the masquerade ball was over. He found her and he found out that she was an assassin working for another mafia. He wants to make her his wife, it appeals to him that she’s from his world so she won’t be scared off if he told her how many men he had killed. He’s not going to let her go, she’s his and he’s hers.
He notices she’s awake and they talk as they talk his hand slips down to abdomen, he tells her what she wants to know, they talk for a moment about her trying to kill him. He has never seen anyone as lovely as her. They talk about what to do since she’s his captive. He wants to be her first and only. He carries her to his wardrobe, he wraps her in one of his shirts and as she buttoning and rolling up the sleeves he gets dressed. They go down to the kitchen so he can feed her. Once they get to their second coffee he starts talking about the plan, she starts begging him to take her and afterwards he tells her that she’s free but before anything happens he informs her if he catches her again that he will own her, they talk for a moment, he starts taking off his clothes before she runs. He knows where she’s going and after ten seconds he follows her and at the end he catches her in his bedroom.
They land on the bed and he flips her over as she tries to escape. She hits him a couple of times before he gets her under control. All he can think about is that she’s his. He talks to her for a moment before tearing the shirt she has on open and takes it off of her with her help. They kiss as he settles in between her legs and he thinks about things that could have gone differently before he had sex with her taking her virginity. They start talking as if they're having sex, every word he says at the end he thrusts that much deeper into her. They talk more, not long after she orgasm and not that long after he has his release. They talk about the plan also how to get her father to let them marry but then she informs him about not proposing to her yet after she says that he proposes to her, they talk more before she tells him that she loves him and they kiss.
Four years later he’s making breakfast, he is making porridge acting like he doesn’t know that she’s trying to sneak up to him. The first one to give a kiss wins. He chops a banana to put in the pan before bending down to kiss her head right before she grabs his thigh and kisses his knee. The little girl is in all black and she tells her daddy that she won but he informs her that he did, then scoops her up to put her in her chair for breakfast, he prepares the porridge and gives it to her as her mom comes in. They talk for a moment before talking a little about business. He talks to their daughter about cartoons after breakfast.
He has his wife and daughter, the life that they made together is all that could have ever wanted.
The characters are spectacular, it’s easy to read, and a real page turner. A spicy, steamy romantic happily ever after short story.

I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Profile Image for Sue.
445 reviews2 followers
September 29, 2025
Captive Desires by Evie Rose is a short, spicy romance that dives headfirst into a world of danger, passion, and intense attraction. The story follows Cleo Whitlock, an assassin sent on a mission to kill Ian Abernathy, a filthy rich and dangerous mafia kingpin. Under the cover of night, Cleo sneaks into his bedroom with a knife in hand, only to be caught off guard by his captivating presence.

What unfolds is a captivating dance of power and desire. Ian, with his possessive Scottish billionaire charm, quickly captures Cleo and offers her a tantalizing choice—beg him to take her, and he’ll set her free. Pride and deeper feelings hold Cleo back, as she finds herself drawn to him in ways she didn’t expect. The romance between them burns hot, with Ian’s intense protectiveness and Cleo’s fiery spirit creating a magnetic pull that neither can resist.

The story’s romance is both sweet and steamy, highlighting a passionate connection that blossoms quickly but feels sincere. The age gap and instalove elements add a layer of forbidden excitement, with Ian’s dominance balanced by moments of tenderness. Cleo’s transformation from hesitant assassin to willing partner showcases the powerful effect love can have in the most unexpected circumstances.

Captive Desires is a compact, intense read perfect for fans of quick, passionate romances with strong, possessive heroes and heroines who find themselves irresistibly drawn to the very danger they were meant to avoid. It wraps up with a satisfying happily ever after, making it a delightful escape into a world of thrilling romance and high stakes.
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874 reviews28 followers
September 1, 2023
When Cleo is tasked with assassinating a mafia boss she doesn’t expect it to be the mysterious man she recently met at an event and has been fantasising about since but that’s exactly what happens. Now she has a decision to make - do her job and continue the lonely life she’s lived as part of her family or pick the man of her dreams Ian.

One of the things I really enjoyed in this short read was the heavy use of Scottish dialect for Ian’s character. It helped not only visualise his voice when he was talking to Cleo (especially the praise) but also imagine his inner monologues as being Scottish too even though they weren’t necessarily written with the dialect. The characterisation of both Cleo and Ian was well done and they fit well together, whilst not massively in-depth about who they were and their pasts it gave enough to understand the lives they live and the world they are from.

For a short read it had plenty of steam and spice - with a virgin fmc, some primal fun, older man, the threat of captivity. It was hot and I definitely recommend it as a quick read.
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2,369 reviews18 followers
September 4, 2023
I thoroughly enjoyed this short book. It may have seemed to have the taste of the traditional mafia storyline initially, but I found the twists to be refreshing and give it a flavor all of its own. With so many out there, that's not such an easy task.

Ian was so much the typical Don figure in how he approached matters. I chucked several times at his processes and how they actually materialized. Cleo was a strong female lead. She had a traditionally male role, yet was excelling above everyone. Because of her rearing, happiness never really factored into her life picture. All that changed the night of the gala.

As the story unfolds, you learn why things were done in certain ways. It was a rather pleasing way to be drawn through the story, and I find myself searching for more of Rose's work in order to continue the experience.

I definarely recommend this book without reservation. I did receive an ARC and hope this voluntary review helps in your search for your next title. Happy Reading 📚
Profile Image for Dominique.
339 reviews7 followers
September 9, 2023
Tropes:

~Mafia
~Assassin/Target
~ Age Gap
~Instalove
~Possessive Billionaire MMC

Summary:

Cleo is assigned the task to assassinate the mafia boss, Ian. However, it doesn’t go as she planned- she gets captured as she hesitated during her task. Cleo finds herself in the hands of Ian, who says he will let her go, but only if she begs him to take her. Cleo struggles with this due to not only her pride, but because she wants to stay with Ian.

Review:

Evie Rose is quickly becoming one of my favorite authors. This is the third book that I have read by her, and I loved it just as much as the other two. It is a quick read, with tons of spice thrown in. Cleo and Ian have such good chemistry. I really enjoyed how Cleo was sent to kill Ian, and how their story played out.

*I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest and voluntary review.
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332 reviews17 followers
October 10, 2023
🔥 HOT, but wish it was longer

• Plot 📖📖📖 /5
• Characters: 🫂🫂🫂🫂
• Drama/Angst: 😰😰
• Steam: 🔥🔥🔥
• POV: dual
• HEA? ✔️
• Would I re-read? ✔️
• Epilogue? ✔️4 years later

This was a really quick read, but good! I really liked the FMC & MMC. He was super alpha, spoke with a Scottish brogue and cared a great deal. The FMC was bad*ss but a bit soft underneath.

I enjoyed their unusual and dark connection, I just wish we could have read between the masquerade and their reconnection, especially on his side. So much was alluded too, but not enough details.

Loved the steamy scenes, they were fantastic. Recommend if you want to read a steamy shirt with great characters.

I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review. The opinions above are 100% my own & 100% genuine!
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442 reviews19 followers
September 9, 2023
I am very glad a came across this author! I have loved each of her book I have read. This one was really good and whilst it wasn't my favourite from this author it was a very good read. I think this was because i was expecting more from the female... her being a hitman but her character was very soft and easy swayed. In saying that I think i also wanted more of an alpha moment with the male. He did have his in control moments but with him being in charge of his family group I wasn't expecting him to be well... as soft as he was. I say this but honestly I think this is just personal preference for me as I liked a good alpha-hole. But I would happily devour another of this authors books as she does know how to write some good heated tension and I love that in my stories!!.
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1,523 reviews
September 11, 2023
Cleo is an assassin sent to kill a man from another larger mafia group that her father is unhappy with. When Cleo breaks into his house and is just about to slice his neck she realizes that she knows him. He is the man she met a year ago at a masked ball. They shared a dance and she talked his ear off. She didn’t realize they were the same person because this guy did not have a beard. As she was about to strike Ian opened his eye and caught Cleo and told her she was his captive. Weirdly interesting story of an assassin who falls in love with her intended victim. As they struggle Ian admits that he searched for her but did not know her name. Two people who meet and fall in love and then reconnect in unusual circumstances.
March 25, 2024
I loved the take on a traditional mafia romance, it was really cute. Cleo is 19 years old and instead of being a traditional mafia princess who is locked away and kept out of the family business, she is her father's best assassin. He sends her to kill a rival mafia leader, Ian Abernathy but when she sneaks into his castle, she recognizes him as the masked man she fell in love with at a mafia gathering six months ago. Cleo freezes in her task which gives Ian the chance to disarm her and from there it is a game of chase and sensual submission. Ian has been looking for his girl since the party and he will never let her go. Cute epilogue a few years out with them happily married and a daughter added to their family. I recommend this as a nice little read between larger books
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660 reviews6 followers
August 31, 2023
The series name truly does the book justice: Filthy Scottish Kingpins. Ian was truly filthy, and I loved him. I loved the naughtiness of the whole thing, and I loved how instantly these two must have fallen for each other in one evening (where they didn't even show each other their faces). I really enjoyed the epilogue and can't wait for the next book in this series.

Would recommend it to people who love insta-love/insta-lust mafia romance (although, the book mostly focused on the smut rather than their backgrounds) with hot men and hotter women.

Thanks to Booksprout for a copy.
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1,905 reviews58 followers
June 9, 2024
A short, forty-page insta featuring a young woman assassin sent by her father to take out a rival mafia guy. Turns out it was a man she had a Cinderella-like encounter with at a masquerade previously. Besides that premise there is no "mafia" trope activity, just a single evening + HEA epilogue encounter. I wanted to read the "Eager Housewife" novella listed as number two in this series so thought I should read number one first, but there is no relation besides the "occupation" of the heroes, which has as much importance to each story as if they were a weatherman or any other job.
Profile Image for Gloria Pastorino.
Author 82 books58 followers
August 22, 2023
Short, sweet and hot. If you want to spend a very enjoyable hour, this novella is for you. A dashing mafia billionaire who’s head over heels in love with a young and sweet assassin (can assassins be sweet? Apparently yes!), steamy interactions and a guaranteed HEA: what else could you want? More stories like this!
I voluntarily read and reviewed an advanced copy of this book. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
Profile Image for Michelle Frater.
1,686 reviews18 followers
August 24, 2023
Really short, but oh so good! I loved this wickedly steamy story, which I devoured in less than an hour. Talk about hot! Yes, we’ve had female assassins before, but Cleo is amazingly sweet and innocent for a killer, while Ian is…OMG! His dominant streak is evident from the start and as soon as he gets his hands on Cleo, it’s game on. I haven’t read such a good short story in a while, so don’t miss out!
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Profile Image for Sassy Angel.
2,887 reviews
September 13, 2023
This was a quick but great story. I loved every second of it. I only wish it was longer because I enjoyed the interactions between Ian and Cleo. Cleo is sent to kill the Scottish Kingpin not knowing that it is the same guy from months. Ian has been looking for the lady from the party months ago. What happens when she discovers who he is? Will they have a future together?

I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Profile Image for Oriana Reads.
4,298 reviews37 followers
September 22, 2023
Cleo Whitlock is an assassin for her fathers crime business. Her latest mark is the Scottish mafia boss Ian Abernathy. But when she leans over him to fullfil her job, she sees who her next mark is.... the man she lusted and thought about for the last six months. Ian has his woman where he wants her and now he won't let her leave 😍 Instalove, age gap, OTT sweet, romantic. Steamy, dark and safe with a sweet HEA and no drama😍😍😍😍
Profile Image for Eva.
745 reviews5 followers
March 4, 2024
This is the second erotic short story I've read by Evie Rose. It is important that you evaluate each story on its own merits (Otherwise you start to draw parallels to the other books and then you notice similar things that also appeared in the other books. That would reduce the rating.You shouldn't take everything seriously either. It's a fantasy.).
In this story a murderous Cinderella falls into the clutches of her mysterious masquerade dance partner. And he knows exactly what he wants...
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636 reviews6 followers
August 24, 2023
Super short and steamy, OTT, insta love romance. She's an assassin sent to kill the mafia kingpin, but..plot twist...hes the same guy she met months ago and can't get off her mind. As I said it is a shorter book but still a great read.

I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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224 reviews
August 25, 2023
ooooo, me likeee!!!! I absolutely Loved Cleo, omg, her mouth! I just want to be her bff so bad. And that he just loved her the way she was as well was just perfect. I loved every one of their scenes. This was such a fun fast read after a long day.

I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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1,891 reviews2 followers
August 26, 2023
So good! Loving all of Evie Rose books. They are quick and spicy but still have a story.
Cleo - h - is from a mafia family and is an assassin
Ian - H - is a mafia boss (diff mafia and family than Cleo)
Cleo is sent to kill Ian, but quickly learns that they have met before and she definitely does not want to kill him after all.
12k reviews75 followers
August 31, 2023
The author has given us a fast-paced older man/younger woman story that pulls us into the lives of Ian, Target, and Cleo, Assassin. The story keeps us turning the pages with an instant connection with no names shared, a manipulation and steam.

I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
88 reviews
September 1, 2023
This is my kind of dark smut! No non-con, no horrible mistreatment of the heroine. Just a delicious game of give-and-take. He’s shamelessly obsessive, and she’s innocent but tough. Both of them are dangerous people who know exactly what they want and happily tease each other to get it. Bring on the naughty sex appeal!

I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
2,228 reviews
September 5, 2023
This may be a short little story but it certainly packs a lot in. Spicy hot and steamy scenes follow after Cleo thinks she is sneaking into Ian's castle to assassinate him. Little does she know he had been searching for her since first seeing her some months before. A beautiful quick short read.

I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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2,170 reviews133 followers
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October 16, 2023
If you want a super-short age-gap breeder romance, then this is it. I didn't really feel much chemistry between the two leads, and so the spicy scenes didn't really do anything for me. Maybe if this had been expanded into a longer book, I would have enjoyed the two characters better. All the same, the writing was good and maybe one day I'll try another book from this author.
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1,183 reviews4 followers
October 17, 2023
Fun sexy quick read

This is a fun sexy quick read about assassin Chloe and her mark. After creeping into his castle bedroom, she realises that she doesn't want to kill the handsome Bratvia Scot. Also he looks quite familiar to someone she met at a masquerade ball a few months ago. Hot read.
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658 reviews3 followers
November 4, 2023
Surprisingly fun

Cleo and Ian are a hoot together.
She gets caught trying to kill him and then the fun begins.
I like that this is not the first meeting and they did not ignore the "elephant in the room".
I enjoyed the epilogue.
Based on this book, I would read more by this author.
444 reviews
August 24, 2024
can’t give less than 1 star

Not sure what this was. I’m just glad I got this book free as part of a stuff your kindle event. I would have been dismayed if I had bought this. Evie Rose is one of my fave authors but really not sure what was going on when she wrote this. It’s confusing, lost, nonsensical. Just not up to her usual standard.
Profile Image for Alida Hart.
149 reviews4 followers
February 13, 2025
Super spicy

Her dad sends her to end the problems coming from a Scottish mafia and with her being an assassin she thinks that she has only one avenue to complete her mission. Her kingpin shows her that there is another way to complete her mission that also gives both of them exactly what they need. Lots of spice, instalove, and an HEA.
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