This story was a perfect example of "could have been and wasn't."
The first thing that will surprise readers is that the style is not the trademark Katherine Arden of Winternight. It's a different style, syncopated and with sentences as if chopped up by hatchet, which can be fatiguing and impedes the smooth flow of the narrative. Characters speak as if midway through they lost the thread of their thoughts or are suddenly gagged by an invisible hand, giving rise to dialogue that is often half-hearted or ends abruptly, leaving the reader to guess what is being talked about.
The second thing to note is that, although the protagonist is a woman as they usually are in books by this author, and a strong, determined, and strong-willed woman at that, she is not an engaging or sympathetic character. On the contrary, Laura is tremendously bland and difficult to empathise with. Which is very strange, because she has, in theory, all the ingredients to be an engaging character. She has, in theory, the same ingredients as Vasilisa Petrovna in Winternight, and yet she is neither interesting nor likeable like her. Moreover, she is so annoyingly bland and her initial chapters are so slow and uneventful that it makes one despair of finishing them to move on to her brother's chapters, which is where the interesting parts and facts and action are, as well as the interesting characters.
His brother, Wilfred Iven, seems to be an homage to Wilfred Owen, the British poet who perished in World War I. The boy is supposed to have fallen in combat, as Laura is given to understand, but in reality he has been buried in a pillbox during the Passchendaele offensive of 1917, and groping in the dark he finds out that he is not alone: a wounded German soldier is with him. A strong bond forms between Freddie and Hans, born out of the need to survive in No Man's Land, a bond that will develop into something more. Both men have a lot to lose regardless of who finds them first once they break out of the pillbox, either could end up before the firing squad for espionage or desertion, depending on which side they stumble on first.
And who they stumble upon first is a quirky violinist that owns a hotel that appears and disappears at will in the Forbidden Zone near the front. Who he is, no one will ever say explicitly in this book, but it's not hard to guess right off the bat. Some will say he is intriguing and the most interesting character, but those who have read Bulgakov, like me, probably won't see it that way. Although at first it seems like it's going to cause a lot of twisty-turny plotting, in the end Faland ends up being a faded photocopy of Woland, minus the cat, an unfunny clone of Woland who seduces Freddie in exchange for paying with stories for what he wants. (Seriously, you could have called him Woland and it would have been less obvious than calling him Faland, how predictable!).
I'm going to be frank: the plot is an absolute mess. Arden could have created a terrific plot with just Freddie, Hans, and Faland, getting rid of Laura and her coterie of vapid women and inconsequential men, and the story would have been a thousand times better. In her notes, Arden says that she was inspired by the fact that many survivors of World War I talk about those times in apocalyptic terms, as if the world is ending, which is why she framed the plot in apocalyptic terms too, naming chapters with direct quotes from the biblical Book of Revelation (a.k.a. Apocalypse), and that she wanted to answer the question of what the Devil would do in a world worse than Hell. Judging from the results, the answer she found is: the Devil is in the business of stealing souls. In other words, the same as always, with methods perhaps more modern, but he's up to the same tricks as always.
And that is not a good answer for me. What Arden doesn’t say is that the belief that the world ended in 1914 is not a "Christian" belief as is presented here but a belief of the sect now known as Jehovah's Witnesses, who went by another name at that time and who preached that the end of the world began in 1914 with the expulsion of Satan from heaven (à la John Milton), and that the war and pestilence and suffering experienced in 1914-1918 were fulfillment of the prophecies in Revelation, and furthermore they believed that the generation of 1914 would not die out before the world was over and a new world would appear. Now they have changed their belief, they always do, but that belief is fringe and has never been official doctrine in mainstream Christianity. If Arden wanted to use this belief, it would have been better to focus on Freddie remembering and mentally processing those beliefs from his mother (in one passage, they mention the “Watchtower” magazine, which the Jehovah's Witnesses publish, so it goes without saying that the Ivens' mother is from that sect) whilst on the frontlines experiencing all the horror his cultish mother believed the endtimes to be, and Faland being a shell-shock hallucination instead of a real person.
Yes, it would definitely have been much, much better if the story did not include Laura and her coterie, showing instead Hell through Freddie and Hans suffering the brutality and senseless slaughter of Passchendaele, depending exclusively on themselves and each other to survive this Hell, depending on Hans’s wits and Freddie’s ingenuity to best Faland at his own game, without the need of a boring sister to rescue him. It would have been better if Faland and the ghosts were a product of Freddie's mind giving in to war psychosis, a product of stress, shock, wounds, malnutrition, and thirst. It would thus be much better and more realistic for Freddie to end up as a husk of himself at the end, to blame the war precisely for his mental state instead of resorting to a facile explanation of "the Devil took pieces of my soul." It would have been better for Laura not to go to the front and so conveniently find the needle in the haystack and best Faland because he makes things easy for her. If she had to stay in the story, it would have been much more work but realistic for her to struggle to find her brother on the hugely spread-out Western Front amongst millions of soldiers and medical personnel.
But it wasn’t to be. We got boring Laura saving the day by having things served on a platter to her by everyone. The Parkeys give her clues about her brother first and then a house and money for her dream life, Pim and Mary make it possible for her to return to the front contra regulations, Faland makes it easy for her to rescue her brother and Hans as a collateral, Jones makes it easy for her to get them all out of Europe with forged papers. All is so easy, so neat, so clean and bloodless after all that horror. And Freddie never has to face the shell-shock and the realities of what he has had to do for Hans, not process the reality of his sexuality and his feelings for an enemy. They all just accept that Faland exists, that the Devil is a real person, and not think about it ever again or muse over the implications for their faith (or lack thereof) of actually having proof that the Devil exists and is here on Earth (what does that make of God, for example?), thus adding lacking theology to messy plot and heightening the deep disappointment I feel in this new installment by the same author that gave me one of my all-time favourie trilogies.
I received an ARC through NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.