I enjoyed this book, but not as much as Caribbean Payback, the prequel novella.
It reads like a Hollywood movie, but not an action movie. It does have action moments, but they are mostly saved up for the climax. The bulk of the story is political intrigue which is, essentially, powerful people talking about the things going on and discussing or thinking about their intended plans.
I prefer to ‘see’ the actual things going on, rather than have the characters tell me about them, the same way I’d rather watch a video clip of a major event than hear a news anchorman read about it from his script. The action-oriented style of storytelling comes to the fore eventually, but it takes some patience to get there.
I understand the techno-thriller genre is typically built around this structural style, but the masters find a way to make the high-level talk-heavy parts engrossing and even nail-biting. This...isn’t quite there. Close, but not quite compelling enough.
Addressing the realism: To me, this is a mixed bag. The overall skin of accuracy feels authentic. But there are some small things that don’t ring true. The overall realistic style makes those isolated portions seem glaring. Its like watching a movie that is so good you forget you’re watching a movie until you hit a sequence of poorly done CGI and go “Oh yeah. That’s unfortunate. Oh well,” and carry on, but with difficulty getting comfortable again.
The battle scenes: I must admit that the arrangement of combatants made me a little bit squeamish. Having worked alongside American military on joint exercises, with friends who are and were veterans of the US military, reading an account of fighting between our countries, even in a fictional future, isn’t a pleasant feeling. Even in fiction. I suppose after the premise of the US military and citizens tearing into themselves in a Civil War, it should lose a fair bit of sting. Still, depicting US and Canada’s boldest killing each other tugged at the emotions. So, fair warning to any potential readers with friends on both sides of the border. War is hell, and soldiers must dehumanize the enemy, but when the enemy is like family, it’s not pleasant.
The villains in the book were very well done. There’s no moustache-twirling evil-to-the-core types. Everyone has their own motivations and it’s clear that even the villains are justified as heroes in their own minds. As readers, we just happen to be in the narrative position of having our interests aligned with the protagonists. In that respect, it all comes to a quite satisfying conclusion.