Alpha's Fated Flame

Omega for the Alphas: Fated Flames #1

by Mina Summers

An isolated omega unable to shift…maybe I’m just broken? Adrianna Desperate measures call for desperate times when I purposely put myself in harm’s way. The only reason I did that was to trigger my wolf to finally appear. But it was all destroyed when the big bad alpha with golden glowing eyes came charging in to save me…

Kayden I needed to find a mate, any mate at this point. My pack needs to secure their future with heirs and I’m not getting any younger. Then I see her that one fateful night attacked… an omega hidden in plain sight? I can’t help but protect her. I have no idea why she has a death wish, but I’m determined to find out. Alpha’s Fated Flame is a fast-paced, reverse harem romance story that will keep you sitting on the edge of your seat. Guaranteed HEA with all the steam you’re looking for. Each book can be read as a standalone , sharing the same world. ♥ Fated Mates ♥Heat Scorching ( possessive growly alphas, knotting) ♥ Pregnancy & Birth? Yes ♥ POV? Multiple ♥No MM

Genres: Omegaverse, Romance, Fantasy, Why Choose, Paranormal, Werewolves, Shapeshifters

233 pages, Paperback

Published August 24, 2023

Reviews

[Cathryn · Rating 1 out of 5]

Do not read this god awful book, I died of cringe. All of the characters were awful, and had no substance. The only way to redeem this book is for all of the characters to die a horrible death. I’ve read better fan fiction than this. Truly terrible.

[Angelina · Rating 1 out of 5]

This book sucked from beginning to end. From the elementary writing, the wattpad plot, to the crap of character exploration and world development. Read the whole book and still can’t tell you the difference between all the alphas.

[april ♡ probably reading smut - safety reviews · Rating 4 out of 5]

4/5

TROPES:
~omegaverse (shifters)
~age gap
~fated mates
~instalove
~forced proximity

Adrianna is unable to shift and feels like a burden to her family. One night after trying to force a shift, a man named Kayden comes to her rescue. They're attracted to each other but she escapes. Soon they meet again, where the truth comes out about Adrianna. She's unsure about what's going on, but these strange men soothe her. Kayden and his other pack alphas take her and convince her she's exactly where she's supposed to be.

This was a cute, relatively quick read. I love omegaverse and fated mates. This story has a little twist on the standard fated mates trope, which I enjoyed. Four stars!

SAFETY:
Ages: 21h, 38H, unknown ages for other H's
Virgin/celibate: virgin heroine
OM/OW drama: none
Cheating/sharing: none
Triggers: talk of pregnancy
Kinks: double penetration, anal
HEA?: yes!

[Alex · Rating 2 out of 5]

Definitely giving Wattpad. But I needed a pallet cleaner

[Marilyne · Rating 1 out of 5]

Straight to jail.

[Toni Sparks · Rating 2 out of 5]

The concept was there, and the story could have been a good one, but the entire thing lacked substance. This is what I imagine the short notes on a novel look like before the real story and details get written in.

Unfortunately, the book just felt like the buns in a big mac. Tasty? Sure. Because bread. But it needed more of everything, more time, more interaction, more conflict, and solutions. From one chapter to the next, she was against then 100% in, and nothing had actually changed. And whatever resistance, prideful, silent argument was happening with Kayden was manipulative (not in the fun way) and lacked any communication. Even fighting out loud would have created more character development and helped the story along.

[Tessa B · Rating 1 out of 5]

This is the worst a/b/o I ever read seriously I read better fanfics than this. Save your time and money Read something else!

[Sofia Völkerling · Rating 1 out of 5]

This was a low point.

[nayezi · Rating 1 out of 5]

Honestly, the cover should have been enough of a warning.

[Chris · Rating 3 out of 5]

Adrianna's story was easy to read. I don't read #Omegaverce stories often. It was a fast-paced book. There was a little drama, but nothing serious and overall ok.

[M.L.A. · Rating 1 out of 5]

I lost 90% of my life because of this book. Goodluck yall!

[Alex Bbb · Rating 2 out of 5]

Giving wattpad

[Tristin Booth · Rating 2 out of 5]

this moves so quickly and I feel like you miss so much between the characters development and their feelings

[hea booktubes]

DNF 82% heavily skimming towards the end. Sex and a little running away to get tortured. This girl is dumb.

[Liska]

2/5

[Katja · Rating 2 out of 5]

I did not like this book. I wanted to because in the beginning it seemed like my cup of tea but... but no. The plot is messy, everything is all over the place and certain moments didn't make any sense. I did finish it though, because I hoped it would get better, but it didn't.

[A.B. Shepherd · Rating 3 out of 5]

There's no depth to this book. It's all surface. But it's a quick easy read.

[Ash · Rating 1 out of 5]

Shallow so damn shallow. This book was like reading a book outline that was run through an AI writing program and then mistakenly published without any additional review. Juvenile at best.

TikTok strikes again 0/10 not again.

[Lari · Rating 2 out of 5]

2/5 ⭐️
I just wished that there would have been a deeper connection…

[Christy deSade · Rating 1 out of 5]

The errors in the description should have been enough of an indicator, but I decided to give the book (and author) a chance. It was a waste of time. The author used incorrect words like "hazzard" when she meant "haggard" and "leaning" when she meant "leaving", etc. throughout the entire book. She made random statements about characters' opinions because she couldn't figure out how to incorporate them into the storyline. The author used some really sexist phrases, for no real reason... like, why was it "their male strength was like steel to me"? Why wasn't it, as weird as the phrasing would still be, "their strength was like steel"? Aside from the mechanics, the author had issues with the story as well, as it was lacking character development and world building. I'm honestly mad at myself for not trusting the 3 star rating and wasting my time.

[Jayda 🎱🐆🍷 · Rating 1 out of 5]

Ahhh there was no plot what did I just read. This belongs to wattpad. It was so rushed. 226 pages ?

[Claudia · Rating 1 out of 5]

Awful. Don't waste your time. Detailed UGHs in the spoilers!
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* all the male wolves smell her omega scent
* her 2 female friends are wolves too, why don't they smell what she is!?
* I did not like all the situations without consent. Everything was abrupt and too fast and IMO not fair to Adrianna
* also, she is 21, first heat, first time and no protection. She is not thinking clearly and they would just breed her, no thought on her future or wishes and dreams. And the audacity of them to label this all as her choice. She didn't choose a thing! They just took her and bulldozed her. Ugh!
* but she also had no backbone whatsoever, no lashing out and standing her ground. Annoying.
* the writing style actually feels like AI. Abrupt, staccato kind of sentences. No emotion in their and ridiculous stereotypical phrases...
* also when she runs to her friend and her reaction!? So over the top and unnatural.
* but that girl is so naive and kinda stupid, taking a strange car, a credit card etc... so easily traceable 🤦‍♀️
* the plot got weirder and weirder and sooooo cringeworthy
* the guys are so stupid, overbearing and obnoxious. Their assumptions and reasoning to typically male. I could have punched their faces in a row for hours. Such idiots.
* they don't know what happened to her, they don't know her at all and what she is going through and directly thinking of punishing her for her actions. Ugh!
* during the time she is healing from her near death torture these guys have fantasies that should be monitored by a psychologist. She's got a huge trauma, bonding fantasies would be the most awful thing to do to her. How can someone write that!?!?! OMG!!!
* as usual they never talk things out straight forward and keep their feelings to themselves. If they are so fast in everything, especially Sex, then Sheesh!!!! Start talking about what you want and what you don't!!! Ugh!
* and how anticlimactic was the way she claimed them!? Seriously!!! This was so dumb.
* and the bunny thing!?!?! Weird!!!!! Rather seems like some manipulative way to groom her into motherhood she doesn't want. Another huge UGH!
* the ice cream shop scene: disgusting!!!!! That poor shop owner
* as if the previous Sex scenes were dumb enough the book has chapters upon chapters on each guy claiming her at a "special" location. The stuff they do after she went through that torture is just mind boggling awful. No woman could handle that just a week after almost dying or even the experience of kidnapping and torture. Making this into porn has no taste whatsoever! If you want porn, leave out such crippling scenarios!
* I mean, when Lucien finally rapports why he's got that scar and then they just continue to have Sex.... its like they are no real people. You don't spring that story upon someone and then bang...
* the same with the contraception. Sheeeesh! they are so dumb...

[Maritalia · Rating 1 out of 5]

I will say this as kindly as I could "Nobody in this book is in love they are just horny."
fmc forgave her parents and her best friend waaaay too easily I mean why tf is hiding her being an omega is advantageous to her when she literally lives in the same world as them at least educate her and Jess's actions are unforgivable she ignored you for jealousy when you needed help most and because of that you almost got killed which btw was kinda dumb how can a human be stronger than a literally smart wolf they are dangerous as animals how if they are conscious and smart anyways the Mmcs suck, one is a controling freak the other is a womanizer at first and the last just talk like someone dumb which is surprising considering his character is supposed to be a bookoholic lastly lucien seemed like the only one who seemed to have a bit of a personality and genuineness in him though he was mostly horny too. However and the most important point is that they didn't get her consent at first☠️

[Abigail · Rating 1 out of 5]

⭐️⭐️ stars. I mean, it had some cute moments igues. Maar tbh niet veel. Ik was opzoek naar een omegaverse boek en kwam deze tegen en dacht waarom niet. Maar honestly dit boek was basically spice en inieminie stukje daadwerkelijk een storyline. Dus dat was jammer.
Hoe meer ik er over nadenk is het eigenlijk meer 1,5 ⭐️. Ga hem toch maar afronden naar beneden iguess... Would not recommend.. Als er meer een storyline was had het echt beter kunnen zijn geweest (oh en als het beter was geschreven 😅🙈). Like de FMC maakt iets heel traumatisch mee, maar we zien totaal niet hoe ze daar mee dealt. Ze rust gewoon een paar weken in bed en is daarna weer helemaal prima. Alsof het mentaal niks heftigs was?!? I dont get it… So yeah, would not recommend en zou ook niet zo snel nog iets van deze auteur oppakken..

[Julia · Rating 5 out of 5]

Alpha’s Fated Flame by Mina Summers Review.

❗️Spoilers ahead❗️

Adrianna has spent her life wishing for her wolf to show. Year after year it’s always the same and she’s starting to think that she is just a human. Big surprise to her, she’s an Omega..

When her friends convince her to attend a werewolf festival against her parents wishes, her name gets entered into a draw for unmated Omegas to be claimed by an Alpha pack. Then she is chosen by the top pack.

She is reluctant at first but the warms up to her Alpha suitors. After some tragic scenes for our little Omega, she finally gets the pack and family she always wanted.

For the record. Lucien is *chefs kiss* I love him and he must be protected at all costs. What happened to him was awful and made me so sad!

Triggers and tropes: K!dnapping, T0rture, Br33ding, Pregnancy and Birth (end of book), RH, Fated Mates.

5/5 Stars!

[Lauren · Rating 2 out of 5]

This book was super fast paced. I’m not even really sure I fully understood everything going on in it. The dialogue felt forced, the characters were odd.

The FMCs character to me made no sense. I don’t understand how she went so long being isolated from an entire pack, when clearly they knew she existed because she had friends and her family was still around them. She was accepting of her situation, yet not accepting of it? I’m not really sure…The way her friend reacted to her also felt uncharacteristic.

There was a lot of spicy scenes but they were not good so just for that alone in term of peppers I’d give it 🌶️🌶️🌶️. It was like the author just tried to put as much sex in the book as possible and didn’t really care about the way it was written.

[Andrea · Rating 3 out of 5]

I have mixed feelings about this book. The storyline was very interesting and as an introduction into omegaverse novels I was excited to explore a new genre. However I felt this story lacked depth. The characters were very surface level and the character building was non existent. However the story was very fast paced which I enjoyed yet it would have been more beneficial and given the story better flow if it didn’t jump from one extreme to the next. Details seemed to have been skimmed over and emotions changed within minutes. The spice on this one was pretty mind for a why choose but the new language made it interesting.

Overall it wasn’t a horrible book but it isn’t one I would go out of my way to recommend nor would I read it again.

[Mayhanna Haslam · Rating 4 out of 5]

It’s a very short book and I definitely think it could be brought out longer but for a shorter story it was cute and good nothing like other dark romances in the sense that there was nothing dark about this. The main character gets everything she ver wanted and doesn’t really face a challenge she also has very little character development. I liked the male characters and how the story went on it’s very sweet. It does get cringy and feels very much like puppy dog love. Very much something from wattpad. I wish there was a bit more conflict but the spice was great 5/5 with a lot of scenes including more then one guy.

[Nicole Deanne Veracruz · Rating 5 out of 5]

Adrianna was a werewolf that had never been able to shift. Her parents had lied to her about what she was. Leaving her completely ignorant and in danger because of her lack of knowledge. I understand they felt like they were protecting her but they did more damage. Lucien became one of her Alpha mates. My heart broke for him because he believed that he was unlovable and unworthy. Luckily Adrianna showed him just how worthy and how lovable he was.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.

[justapasserby · Rating 3 out of 5]

I actually like the story, it doesn't have heavy problems like the usual books that I read, which is something that I like.

But, there are few problems in this book that I definitely dont like. Firstly, in my opinion their relationships are definitely wasn't explored much as well as their characters personality. Secondly, I don't like the fact the she easily forgave her family who lied to her her whole life saying that it's for her protection when it's not. Lastly, the story is just way too fast for my liking.