Having just discovered JoAnn Ross and looking forward to a delicious romantic southern trilogy I went into this one with high hopes. And yet again I was disappointed on the execution.
I don't know what it is, because the pieces are all there in her stories (at least in the two I've read so far.) A bayou setting, a Cajun man who is a former town hellraiser turned DEA agent turned drunk whose restoring the antebellum home his mother used to work in and the town princess lived in. The same town princess he had a hot and sweaty summer with and then had to disappear from because her Judge father gave him an ultimatum. Now however many years later everyone is back on the bayou stage.
And in the beginning of the book you feel the potential. Jack is sitting out on the gallery of said rundown antebellum home working on a bottle of whiskey that ain't working on him, surrounded by old ghosts and you're just thinking, "This story is gonna be good." The imagery of that first scene just clinched what had the makings of a Sandra Brown type story with a sexy, complicated Southern hero. I was looking forward to the electric love story, the flashbacks, the regrets, the desire, the redemption. But after all his badass talk of not wanting Danielle back in his life, once he sees her he starts putting the tired moves on her. Just like that. No yearning. No build-up. It was like they'd just met in a bar. Where was the pained history? Where was the heat? All the delicious ingredients of a reunion story.
Jack disappointed me. As did Danielle.
Everything just happens too easily. And the character's actions don't make a lot of sense to me. There has to be MORE to these people, but they begin to feel like cardboard cut outs of their own potential. The Judge is forgiven in the blink of an eye for some pretty heinous actions all in the name of Lets-Be-a-Family! Her son is conveniently away for the big turns of events including the unveiling of her dirty secret, which is tied up with such a big bow it's almost frustrating.
Will I work on the second? Yes, because I checked out all three books, and I'm hoping that something in Finn's story will redeem this series for me.