Thank you NetGalley for allowing me to read this book in advance as an electronic arc (which I then finished on Amazon once the book released).
I’m rating this book as a 3/3.5 stars as I go back and forth on either rating. I enjoyed reading it, the twists and turns the story took, the characters, how the story kept you guessing what would happen next, the suspense the story took on in certain parts too, it was all well done for a first book from this author. At times I just wanted a little bit more from the story. This review, as marked, will have spoilers, nothing too too detailed, but still, spoilers, so continue to read at your own risk. This is also a lengthy review so I apologize for the wall of text that follows.
The characters were well-written and I enjoyed reading them, even when they annoyed me or disgusted me. Mac was an easy character for me to be disgusted by the more I read; the descriptions used in his POV’s made it really easy for me to hate him and be disgusted by him. Mac’s reveal in the middle of the story really drove home my hatred of him and my disgust towards him. “He had also hoped, stupidly in retrospect, that she [Emily] might identify with such a flawed person and love him all the more for being just as broken as she is. When he catches up with her, he’ll try again, prove that she can trust him now, and demonstrate once and for all that the lies are over.” The way that Mac views Emily, how he’s chronically lying to her and trying to manipulate her (and successfully has been manipulating her for a while now) just really made me hate him; he’s written as this almost broken character, and you almost want to sympathize with him, but his actions, what he’s done to Emily and how he’s lied to her, how he viewed her, just makes it so easy for me to hate him.
Emily as a character got annoying for me sometimes as well. Her drive to be good, to be different from what she is got frustrating sometimes to read. Like when (SPOILERS) her and Seymour get their hands on Zahra’s
laptop and she refuses to look into what’s on it even when that laptop could provide so much information that Emily is searching for, that her and Seymour have risked their lives to try and find, stressing, repeatedly, that she’ll be turning herself in the following day. It also annoyed me a bit that even by page 280, Emily was still naive, still willing to blindly trust the NSA even when Mac previously betrayed her and lied to her. Even by the end of the book, Emily still fights with herself if what she’s doing is good or bad, and while that shouldn’t be something that annoys me, since Emily has questioned it from the beginning, it’s frustrating to keep reading the same thoughts of the main character at the end of the story despite having gone through so much; the extra frustrating factor is that in the “epilogue,” only a month has passed and suddenly Emily comes to terms with her actions and is okay with it. The sudden jump from constantly questioning her actions and motives to being okay and at peace with them was jarring. Despite going through so much, it bothered me that Emily didn’t really change as the story progressed, until suddenly she did; it just seemed like a stagnant character progression and then suddenly she’s made all of the growth in the span of a one month time-skip. I do like that Emily isn’t described as like this wild beauty that most sci-fi female characters are described as. I love that she’s a POC and that she’s really just an average person, it makes it easier to relate to her. And I do enjoy that Emily has her flaws. While her character annoyed me on and off throughout the story, I enjoyed that she battles with herself, that she knows she’s not this perfect character and that she makes lots of mistakes throughout the book. I just wish that her character growth happened at a better pace and that the growth didn’t suddenly happen off-page.
Story-wise, I thought the story and plot was intriguing and interesting, and probably closer to possibly happening in our current time than most of us realize which added to the suspense/thriller aspect of the story. I thoroughly enjoyed that all the tech talk and computer talk was toned down and “dumbed” down so that it was easy to follow along and understand what exactly they were talking about in terms of hacking and whatnot, I really appreciated that as a reader with limited tech knowledge. There were twists and turns throughout the book that I wasn’t expecting, especially near the beginning/third of the way through. (MAJOR SPOILERS) The reveal of Zahra working with the NSA and with Mac was such a nice twist, one I definitely wasn’t expecting at all and the reveal of Director Chip and that plot line in the end was a nice twist as well; there were layers to the lies of the NSA with Emily and the pacing of each reveal was overall good. However, I was disappointed that we had this big reveal about Zahra being dead and then nothing really coming from it that left a bit of a sour taste in my mouth; we learn who did it and having APRIL be the one to do so was great, but it’s brushed over as so many other things are being revealed to Emily at the same time that it just falls flat. For the longest time Zahra is our main villain and her death should have been bigger and more impactful on Emily and I’m disappointed that it wasn’t, and that Emily isn’t more shocked or impacted by the fact that something she created in APRIL grew to be capable of killing Zahra in the first place.
There was a part that caught me off guard completely and actually left me feeling a little angry while reading it. There’s a scene where Emily is being interrogated by Pryce and it leads into a sexual assault scene; nothing graphic and it doesn’t go far, but it happens and it didn’t need to. It came completely out of nowhere, there was nothing similar to it in the rest of the book at all aside from a very minor scene towards the end as everything is coming to a front. Personally, I didn’t feel like it needed to be included or added at all. The scene is dark already, the addition of sexual assault and near rape of Emily didn’t need to be added, further physical torture of Emily could have happened in its place given the context of the scene and still ended with the same outcome. It felt forced and just completely unnecessary.
I will note that there’s quite a bit of punctuation errors that surprised me throughout the book. A lot of character speech missing the “” at the beginning and end, even when a character has stopped speaking and a new one begins, that made it slightly hard to follow along with what’s happening at times and had me going back and rereading once or twice to properly grasp what was happening and who was saying what. There’s even some grammar mistakes that threw me off too. I know it’s a debut novel, but if I had to nitpick I’m a little surprised that this wasn’t more thoroughly looked over before being published. Overall, I did enjoy the story, it was good, definitely a sci-fi thriller/mystery. Outside of the nitpicking of grammar and punctuation errors, and despite the fact that a lot of my review points out negative aspects of this story, Zero Day Ghost was an enjoyable read for me, that kept me hooked the further the story progressed, and had me enjoying the thrilling sci-fi mystery of a bot who got a little too powerful for her own good in the end. Scott Olson definitely seems to have set this up for a possible sequel, but if not, Zero Day Ghost is an enjoyable book all on its own.