The Wrong Alpha: New Adventure

by Beth Jackson

“I'd loved this guy for year...........told him all my secrets.......grown with him.....……shared my first kiss with him..........…messed around with him..........o................….thank the goddess!!!.....…thank the goddess we never went further assuming we were mates!”Delilah can’t wait for her boyfriend to turn 17, for him to meet his Alpha wolf, and finally sense his fated mate. Having been childhood sweethearts, she has long been predicted as his fated mate by everyone in their pack. But when fate takes an unexpected turn, Delilah finds herself on a painful path she never anticipated. Will Delilah be able to overcome this bitter twist of fate and find true love?

Genres: Paranormal

291 pages, Kindle Edition

Published August 28, 2023

Reviews

[Madison Hutsell · Rating 3 out of 5]

still horrible grammar lol

I love the characters , the plot is decent. No smut. But dang the grammar is horrendous and a lot of the details are repeating from just a few pages back.

[Paper+Cocoa · Rating 4 out of 5]

Spelling and grammar issues (multiple), but I agree with what another reader stated --the characters --I like'em.

Lilah...
Just as I had in book 1, I find myself flip flopping between liking her character one minute, to being frustrated with her the next. And though I've never found a middle ground between the two, I've never actually found myself disliking her.

She's shy... perhaps a bit introverted, but she wasn't short on friendly's (is that a word? i'm just going to make it one for now since she really only had one friend, but others were nice to her) or, at the very least, acquaintances prior to the whole Logan and Anya 💩 show. I'm glad she had Indie by her side through all of those years.


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Even after Indie rains down on her about not respecting the mate that the Goddess had hand selected for her...
And Manuel, bless his beautiful heart.
Even after his heartfelt (and it was ♥️felt), plea, taking her hands in his, and down on his knees in front of Lilah, expressing his feelings in regards to finding "your" mate, she still continued to verbally hurt Knox by repeatedly reminding him (and I'm taking REPEATEDLY) that she doesn't want a mate.

And the way she kept referring to Knox as a 🍆 in her head.
Yeah, yeah. I know she was being sarcastic at times, but he was genuinely being kind or trying to make her smile, or light heartedly joking with her --and never in a disrespectful way.

That's when she became frustrating to me.

But all in all, love the story itself and am looking forward to seeing Logan and especially that horrid freaking Anya get what's coming to them.

[Donna Williams · Rating 4 out of 5]

Enjoyable

I found this story on fb on one of those pay by chapter apps 😩 liked story but not price tag then found it on Amazon. This book is chapter 33-84. Gets a bit slow halfway through but picks up again. Looking forward to book 3.

[EMMA]

an enjoyable read, had a few triggers but overall a good read