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The Vortex: An Apocalyptic Thriller
Even in Los Angeles, there are no coincidences.
As the sun sets for the last time, an unstoppable force approaches—the catastrophic fury of a category five hurricane. Weeks of relentless rain culminate in nature's most potent disaster, threatening to reveal hidden imperfections, unrealized dreams, and unspoken truths.
Lenny Smalls, good natured and God-fearing ex-Ranger, hides from a past littered with failure in a refuge carved under the feet of the rich and famous.
Ron Jones, self-declared master of the universe, revels in power he did not earn to indulge his whims no matter the cost while his adoring wife Abby holds their family together through the force of her iron will.
Casey Tamanaka, fame-obsessed dynamo, seeks meaning from the life she has chosen while she pleases Ron and searches for Lenny.
As the maelstrom looms over them all, the vortex reveals the deep assignment that connects them… because there are no coincidences .
Looking for an engaging and thought-provoking end times series with Christian morals? This storm thriller features a religious plot, realistic characters, and a bit of mystery as the story barrels toward its gripping climax.
As the sun sets for the last time, an unstoppable force approaches—the catastrophic fury of a category five hurricane. Weeks of relentless rain culminate in nature's most potent disaster, threatening to reveal hidden imperfections, unrealized dreams, and unspoken truths.
Lenny Smalls, good natured and God-fearing ex-Ranger, hides from a past littered with failure in a refuge carved under the feet of the rich and famous.
Ron Jones, self-declared master of the universe, revels in power he did not earn to indulge his whims no matter the cost while his adoring wife Abby holds their family together through the force of her iron will.
Casey Tamanaka, fame-obsessed dynamo, seeks meaning from the life she has chosen while she pleases Ron and searches for Lenny.
As the maelstrom looms over them all, the vortex reveals the deep assignment that connects them… because there are no coincidences .
Looking for an engaging and thought-provoking end times series with Christian morals? This storm thriller features a religious plot, realistic characters, and a bit of mystery as the story barrels toward its gripping climax.
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Published October 10, 2023
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December 29, 2023
Fast paced and action packed, this story follows multiple characters as a tropical storm approaches the area they live in, and then becomes a hurricane, threatening the safety of them all. The characters were well developed and although there were multiple story lines, they all flowed together very nicely. The author also did a fantastic job of creating descriptive scenes, that made me feel like I was there as the story was unfolding.
Although there is a main character, Lenny, who has a strong relationship with God and a heart full of faith, I would not recommend this for Christian fiction readers. There is a lot of cussing from the beginning of the book until the end, graphic sex scenes, adultery, and a lot of crude and harsh dialogue. Because I only read Christian fiction, I had a hard time getting through this one because everyone except Lenny and sweet Georgia was so worldly, as were their story lines.
Thank you to the publisher and NetGalley for a complimentary copy of this book. Opinions expressed in this review are my own.
Although there is a main character, Lenny, who has a strong relationship with God and a heart full of faith, I would not recommend this for Christian fiction readers. There is a lot of cussing from the beginning of the book until the end, graphic sex scenes, adultery, and a lot of crude and harsh dialogue. Because I only read Christian fiction, I had a hard time getting through this one because everyone except Lenny and sweet Georgia was so worldly, as were their story lines.
Thank you to the publisher and NetGalley for a complimentary copy of this book. Opinions expressed in this review are my own.
October 10, 2023
I enjoyed Ian's first novel in "The End Is Here" series, finding it a solid tale with Christian overtones that weren't heavy handed. Although for me the first few chapters were a bit slow, they were needed to introduce the key characters, ones which I found myself drawn to in the chapters thereafter.
For the most part, I enjoyed Ian's writing style, his storytelling ability, and only found a few places that I thought lagged a bit -- but overall, its worth the 5 stars I rated it. Good work Ian! I'll be waiting for the next installment with interest.
For the most part, I enjoyed Ian's writing style, his storytelling ability, and only found a few places that I thought lagged a bit -- but overall, its worth the 5 stars I rated it. Good work Ian! I'll be waiting for the next installment with interest.
November 7, 2023
Ian takes his time building strong characters and it’s well worth it! This is not just the beginning of an apocalyptic story (which can stand on its own), but a deep look into humanity in all its glory and tattered dirty secrets. This story builds like the hurricane, wrecking havoc and bringing redemption. Moral undertones that aren’t preachy with “closed door” adult themes (thank you!) that only add to the story without detracting from it. Once the characters and setting are built, the story starts picking up along with the winds and is a fast read. I look forward to book 2.
July 2, 2024
I usually try to read the plot summaries before starting a book that has overly religious tones so I can avoid it, but missed it on this one. I was actually rather surprised to find it was classed as Christian apocalyptic fiction since it had so much in the way of cursing, violence and sex acts. My biggest issue is that almost all of the characters were one-dimensional and some of the most odious, self-absorbed people you would ever meet. Lenny was the best of the lot, though obviously the religiously-infused hero and Georgia was sad and poignant. Frank and John would have been fine had they had bigger roles. Most of it read like a soap-opera including the rainbows and unicorns ending. There were also a lot of editing issues, especially many sections that should have started with quotation marks since a person was speaking.
September 14, 2023
If anyone were to ask me "What kind of books do you like?" I would respond with "Well-written ones." Sure, as far as genres go, I have a predilection for horror and science-fiction and fantasy, but when I think back over the past decade of reading all my books, many of the ones that stand out the most are pleasant surprises in mystery, in "literature", in children's books, and so on.
What they have in common is that they're well-written. And they're well-written in pretty specific ways: Giants in the Earth is actually somewhat rough up front before it settles in to tell its story of hardy Norwegian immigrants suffering through Nebraska winters; The Secret Garden is highly-polished and charming from start to finish; I don't remember the characters (apart from Marple) or the plot from A Caribbean Mystery, but I remember being wholly impressed by "lesser Christie".
Strong characters, good plotting, entertaining prose is the trifecta, and this book has all three.
There's also a little something extra going on, too, which was a pleasant surprise.
Our two principle characters are a homeless vet running from his past and the crazy lady he's protecting for some unknown reason. They cross paths with an ambitious young reporter and her grizzled cameraman, a smug anchorman and his put upon wife and at-risk son, dangerous street criminals, criminally incompetent bureaucrats and on and on.
Our vet is the story's hero. Even in his somewhat fallen state, his steadfast faith directs him to do the right thing, to protect the week, to help those in need even if they generally live rich, comfortable lives.
And it's raining.
If you live in L.A., the rain is so infrequent that when it finally comes in the form of unending desert storms, it can feel metaphorically biblical. And so it does here, as the water keeps rising and people struggle to find high ground.
But as the water rises, it starts to feel Biblical-with-a-capital-B and even the most recalcitrant atheist or devoted pagan living in Los Angeles has to feel a little nervous at the thought of this place being Judged.
I mean, I have no idea how it's going to play out, but the gradually increasing sense of Greater Forces At Work make for a very satisfying climax, which I'd go into detail on except it would be too spoiler. Better if you read for yourself.
The book resolves so well, you can just imagine the rain stops and everyone goes about their lives, mostly better for the experience (except the ones who are dead), but I'm definitely looking forward to the rain getting worse in book two, and seeing how the adventure unfolds.
So get on to book 2, Ian!
What they have in common is that they're well-written. And they're well-written in pretty specific ways: Giants in the Earth is actually somewhat rough up front before it settles in to tell its story of hardy Norwegian immigrants suffering through Nebraska winters; The Secret Garden is highly-polished and charming from start to finish; I don't remember the characters (apart from Marple) or the plot from A Caribbean Mystery, but I remember being wholly impressed by "lesser Christie".
Strong characters, good plotting, entertaining prose is the trifecta, and this book has all three.
There's also a little something extra going on, too, which was a pleasant surprise.
Our two principle characters are a homeless vet running from his past and the crazy lady he's protecting for some unknown reason. They cross paths with an ambitious young reporter and her grizzled cameraman, a smug anchorman and his put upon wife and at-risk son, dangerous street criminals, criminally incompetent bureaucrats and on and on.
Our vet is the story's hero. Even in his somewhat fallen state, his steadfast faith directs him to do the right thing, to protect the week, to help those in need even if they generally live rich, comfortable lives.
And it's raining.
If you live in L.A., the rain is so infrequent that when it finally comes in the form of unending desert storms, it can feel metaphorically biblical. And so it does here, as the water keeps rising and people struggle to find high ground.
But as the water rises, it starts to feel Biblical-with-a-capital-B and even the most recalcitrant atheist or devoted pagan living in Los Angeles has to feel a little nervous at the thought of this place being Judged.
I mean, I have no idea how it's going to play out, but the gradually increasing sense of Greater Forces At Work make for a very satisfying climax, which I'd go into detail on except it would be too spoiler. Better if you read for yourself.
The book resolves so well, you can just imagine the rain stops and everyone goes about their lives, mostly better for the experience (except the ones who are dead), but I'm definitely looking forward to the rain getting worse in book two, and seeing how the adventure unfolds.
So get on to book 2, Ian!
February 14, 2024
is this book an apocalyptical story? Yes and no, let me explain, does something happen that disrupts how the world works? Yes, does it end the world? Only for those who die, this for me, was much more a speculative fiction, with character grow, than anything else… just the idea I had before hand wasn't the most correct to begin with.
Other thing is that as far as Christian fiction goes, this one has lots of dirty language, sexual situations, well basically its not morally sound… yeah I know those situations happen in real life, but still… the most Christian thing here was Lenny, he was absolutely virtuous to a fault. Its a good story, but for me promises more than what it delivered, and that is fine, is still a good thriller, just maybe I cant say that is for all.
Fans of thriller stories will probably like this book, people who aren't religious will get mad at Lenny because he is the first to say God’s bless, but at the same time I cant say that religious people will like this book, because in here do not expect for people repenting or asking for forgiveness, most people that do wrong in here will still think they are right, yeah Cam I am talking to you… like I said most people in here are not nice… I still enjoyed it, felt shorter than what really is.
Thank you Netgalley and BooksGoSocial, for the free ARC and this is my honest opinion.
Other thing is that as far as Christian fiction goes, this one has lots of dirty language, sexual situations, well basically its not morally sound… yeah I know those situations happen in real life, but still… the most Christian thing here was Lenny, he was absolutely virtuous to a fault. Its a good story, but for me promises more than what it delivered, and that is fine, is still a good thriller, just maybe I cant say that is for all.
Fans of thriller stories will probably like this book, people who aren't religious will get mad at Lenny because he is the first to say God’s bless, but at the same time I cant say that religious people will like this book, because in here do not expect for people repenting or asking for forgiveness, most people that do wrong in here will still think they are right, yeah Cam I am talking to you… like I said most people in here are not nice… I still enjoyed it, felt shorter than what really is.
Thank you Netgalley and BooksGoSocial, for the free ARC and this is my honest opinion.
October 22, 2023
Amazing storytelling!
I was expecting some kind of scifi apocalyptic tale, and instead fell in love with Lenny, our down-on-his-luck but resourceful, golden-hearted military veteran.
Mr. Feldman carries an eclectic cast of characters. Most of them well-rounded with interesting relationships, choices, flaws. Over the course of the novel, the individual, woven pieces are threaded together with well-placed strands - drawn tighter bit by bit.
One could argue that Ron is his own vortex. Having made his choices, setting the inevitable into motion. Swirling, catastrophic winds that draw his family, Lenny, and a complement of characters into his narcissistic maelstrom.
A fascinating tale at face value, the deeper levels of meaning, tied more closely to the surface with Lenny’s professions of faith, is the stuff of truly good literary fiction. Saying I immensely enjoyed this is still not capturing how excited I am to have stumbled on and into this novel.
Read this. Pester him for book 2. I know I will be. ❤️
I was expecting some kind of scifi apocalyptic tale, and instead fell in love with Lenny, our down-on-his-luck but resourceful, golden-hearted military veteran.
Mr. Feldman carries an eclectic cast of characters. Most of them well-rounded with interesting relationships, choices, flaws. Over the course of the novel, the individual, woven pieces are threaded together with well-placed strands - drawn tighter bit by bit.
One could argue that Ron is his own vortex. Having made his choices, setting the inevitable into motion. Swirling, catastrophic winds that draw his family, Lenny, and a complement of characters into his narcissistic maelstrom.
A fascinating tale at face value, the deeper levels of meaning, tied more closely to the surface with Lenny’s professions of faith, is the stuff of truly good literary fiction. Saying I immensely enjoyed this is still not capturing how excited I am to have stumbled on and into this novel.
Read this. Pester him for book 2. I know I will be. ❤️
December 9, 2023
I want to preface this review in saying that only completed 60% of the book and will not be reading any further.
Having said that, this book has a lot going for it. The premise is unique-I’ve not read of another apocalyptic book where rain is the focus like this one. The writing was well done and kept my interest. The characters were well developed and I was invested in them.
The parts that caused the DNF were the sexual references that were, in my opinion, too repetitive and more descriptive than I felt comfortable with in reading a Christian Fiction book. Due to my own persaonl convictions, I reached a point where I didn’t feel ok completing the book, and I share this as a trigger warning for others who may share the same type of convictions.
I received an ARC in exchange for my honest review.
Having said that, this book has a lot going for it. The premise is unique-I’ve not read of another apocalyptic book where rain is the focus like this one. The writing was well done and kept my interest. The characters were well developed and I was invested in them.
The parts that caused the DNF were the sexual references that were, in my opinion, too repetitive and more descriptive than I felt comfortable with in reading a Christian Fiction book. Due to my own persaonl convictions, I reached a point where I didn’t feel ok completing the book, and I share this as a trigger warning for others who may share the same type of convictions.
I received an ARC in exchange for my honest review.
February 18, 2024
The book delivers a gripping narrative set against the backdrop of a looming natural disaster, weaving together the lives of disparate characters whose fates become intertwined amidst the chaos. I appreciate how the author skillfully explores themes of redemption, faith, and human connection, grounding the story in Christian morals while delving into the complexities of human nature. Lenny, Ron, and Casey emerge as compelling protagonists, each grappling with their own demons and seeking redemption in the face of impending catastrophe. With its blend of suspense, moral introspection, and atmospheric storytelling, The Vortex offers a captivating read that will keep readers on the edge of their seats until the very end.
October 15, 2023
I enjoyed the Vortex. The characters were well fleshed out with crisscrossing story arcs that were entertaining. I found each major character showed a characteristic, emotion, or belief that mirrored and expanded on familiar themes and was given a well thought out treatment. Each major character claimed a strong response, whether negative or positive. None of them were boring. Their actions drove the story forward.
These characters, set against a looming disaster that arrived as predicted, make for a fun read. The end of the story tied up some arcs with a sense of closure, but left room to advance to the next book.
I am looking forward to the next book.
These characters, set against a looming disaster that arrived as predicted, make for a fun read. The end of the story tied up some arcs with a sense of closure, but left room to advance to the next book.
I am looking forward to the next book.
September 27, 2023
After the storms that hit LA recently, one might think that the author is prescient, but "The Vortex" shows us how things could get much worse. The novel follows several very different characters through devastating events that expose our vulnerability to both the forces of nature and the limitations of our institutions. It kept my interest throughout and, although not perfect, I would give it a solid 4.5 out of 5 if I had that option. This is the first book of a series, and I look forward to the next challenge Feldman shows us.
October 30, 2024
Simply wonderful
It was hard putting this book down. Spellbinding story with characters that were interesting and memorable. Recommend this book but you will have trouble putting it down before the ending l!
It was hard putting this book down. Spellbinding story with characters that were interesting and memorable. Recommend this book but you will have trouble putting it down before the ending l!
September 18, 2024
I was underwhelmed. I didn't really like any of the characters. I will not be reading the remaining books in this series.
August 11, 2024
Good story, bad language
The story was good. Action, caring, good over evil. Sadly, like many stories that are listed as Christian, the language is anything but. Although the swearing is what some would consider mild, it is still swearing and has no place in a Christian book.
The story was good. Action, caring, good over evil. Sadly, like many stories that are listed as Christian, the language is anything but. Although the swearing is what some would consider mild, it is still swearing and has no place in a Christian book.
December 21, 2023
Not at all what I expected. This was recommended as an apocalyptic story. What I got was a character study of one-dimensional people and a story where the sun literally came out at the end.
Not sure what specifically made this Christian lit unless it's the inclusion of a Christian character; but it was YA storyline at best.
Thanks to Netgalley for the opportunity to review.
Not sure what specifically made this Christian lit unless it's the inclusion of a Christian character; but it was YA storyline at best.
Thanks to Netgalley for the opportunity to review.
March 24, 2024
This story is about multiple characters trying to survive a tropical storm turned hurricane. It was fast paced and the multiple characters storyline flowed together nicely. I don't know why it is labeled Christian fiction though because, although there was one godly character, there was so many inappropriate and graphic scenes along with tons of swearing. I only read Christian fiction which is why I could not finish the book.
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