Charm City is a fun, straightforward romance. Carson’s the devoted manager of struggling bar, aptly named Second Chances — she’s found a home, community, and stability here, and doesn’t want anything to change. Enter Taylor, the event manager throwing a week of Valentine’s Day events in a last ditch attempt to reverse the bar’s fortunes. And while these two women initially clash, the chemistry between them is irresistible.
The dynamic between Carson and Taylor is compelling. Fittingly, the desire between them is the best realised part of the book. But the plot is entirely predictable. Without giving any spoilers, it’s very easy to guess what will happen and why — which makes the story drag in places, and lowers the stakes.
Also, I was perplexed by McCallan’s word choice in one particular sentence: “Her blood rushed sp*st*cally through her body…” In the UK at least, this term is recognised as an offensive slur against disabled people. It does nothing to enhance the story, and there are plenty of words the author could have just as easily used instead. There’s so much controversy attached to the idea of sensitivity readers, but they serve a very practical purpose…
Otherwise, Charm City is a fine story. Light and sweet like candy floss. Not particularly memorable, but enjoyable all the same.